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Thank you each n everyone of u 4 supporting me in this journey.This SS is ending here.Plz give a detailed comment on the last part.Plz do write ur favourite character,favourite scene,favourite jodi n why u liked them.


Sajda...tera sajda I'll worship you Part 5

Krithika's engagement party...

Rishab saw Chahat and got mesmerised in her beauty.


Aankhon ki gustakhiyan maaf hon
Ho.. aankhon ki gustakhiyan maaf hon
Ik tuk tumhein dekhti hain
Jo baat kehna chaahe zubaan
Tumse yeh woh kehti hai




He walked towards her without taking his eyes off her.


Realizing that he is lost in her she blushed.

Aankhon ki sharm-o-haya maaf hon
Tumhein dekh ke jhukti hain
Uthi aankhein jo baat na keh sakeen
Jhuki aankhein woh kehti hain
Aankhon ki, aankhon ki gustakhiyan maaf hon



Before he reached near her she pretended to be ignoring him and walked away.
Rishab:Oh no...


Chahat giggled seeing his condition.

Kajal ka ik til
Tumhaare labon pe laga loon
Haan chanda aur suraj ki
Nazron se tumko bacha loon



Rishab walked after her.He held her hair.She turned back smiling.


O.. palkon ki chilman mein
Aao main tumko chhupa loon
Khyaalon ki yeh shokhiyaan maaf hon




Slowly he came towards her.

Hardam tumhein sochti hain
Jab hosh mein hota hai jahan



They shared a romantic eye lock.

Madahosh yeh karti hain
Aankhon ki sharm-o-haya maaf hon



He whispered in her ear:You look very beautiful Princess.
She closed her eyes feeling his breath on her ear.


Yeh zindagi aapki hi amaanat rahegi
Dil mein sada aapki hi muhabbat rahegi



She opened her eyes slowly.
He walked away smiling.Chahat smiled sweetly.

In saanson ko aapki hi zaroorat rahegi
Haan is dil ki nadaaniyan maaf hon(HDDCS).




Preeta was restless not seeing Karan around.
Preeta:Why did'nt Karan arrive yet?
Suddenly Karan entered.Preeta was so happy that she ran towards him to hug him.
Suddenly she came back to senses and controlled herself from hugging him.
Preeta:How are you Karan?
Karan:I am fine Preeta.How are you?
Preeta's face blossomed.


Rom rom tera naam pukaare
Ek huye din rain hamaare



She thought:For the first time you asked me how I am.I am very happy Karan.
Preeta:I am also fine Karan.


Hum se hum hi chhin gaye
Jab se dekhe nain tihaare

Karan thought:I know that you are surprised about me talking softly to you.But before this party gets over you are going to get one more surprise..the biggest surprise.

Sajda..(My name is Khan).

Suddenly Chahat came:Preeta...
Preeta:Chahat..this is my husband Karan Luthra.
Chahat:Nice to meet you Karan.
Karan:Even I am happy to meet you Bhabhi.

Chahat was surprised.
Karan:Rishab bhai told me everything on the phone.I am really happy for both of you.
Chahat blushed.

Ruchika could not believe her eyes seeing Arjun at the party.
Ruchika:Arjun..here?

Rakhi,Mahesh and dadi came.
Rakhi:We only invited him here.


Ruchika could not believe it.
Mahesh:Arjun came to meet us.He told us everything.So we invited him for the party.

Ruchika was stunned.
Dadi:You both need to talk and sort out everything.

Arjun went near Ruchika.
They both were very emotional.

Tu safar mera
Hai tu hi meri manzil
Tere bina guzara
Ae dil hai mushkil


Ruchika:Aru...please forgive me.Don't be angry with me.

Tu mera khuda
Tu hi duaa mein shaamil
Tere bina guzara
Ae dil hai mushkil


Arjun:Rucha..in childhood too we used to fight a lot.But could I be angry with you for a long time?
Your Aru has not changed at all.Still i can't be angry with you for a long time as I love you a lot Rucha.


Mujhe aazmaati hai teri kami
Meri har kami ko hai tu laazmi
Junoon hai mera
Banoon main tere qaabil
Tere bina guzaara
Ae Dil Hai Mushkil


They shared an emotional sweet eye lock.

Yeh rooh bhi meri
Yeh jism bhi mera
Utna mera nahi
Jitna hua tera


Ruchika:I was really proud Aru.You opened my eyes by breaking my arrogance.Thanks for coming back to my life.I need you Aru.I want you always.Please don't leave me.
Arjun:I will never leave you Rucha.Because you are my life.


Tune diya hai jo
Woh dard hi sahi
Tujhse mila hai toh
Inaam hai mera


They held each other's hand and smiled romantically.

Mera aasmaan dhoondhe teri zameen
Meri har kami ko hai tu laazmi

Zameen pe na sahi
Toh aasmaan mein aa mil
Tere bina guzara
Ae dil hai mushkil(ADHM).





Mahesh:Where is the boy Ranbir?
Everyone including Krithika turned around.
Suddenly the spotlight fell on Ranbir.They were surprised.
Ranbir:Hey everyone..have you ever fallen in love?
Everyone replied:Yes.
Ranbir:I have also fallen in love.But only with one person.
Ranbir pointed his finger towards Krithika.She got excited.
Ranbir gave her a flying kiss.


She showed him a puppy face while receiving it.

Ranbir started dancing around Krithika.Everyone enjoyed it.

(Yeah baby when you see me coming

Yeah
Yeah you better run for cover
Yeah
Yeah coz you know when I find you
Yeah
Yeah I'm gonna be your lover) 2
Tujhse log kahenge,
Na kar pyar mujhe
Main tho lakh bura hoon,
neend chura loon, hosh uda doon
Mein tho baho mein le ke
Raah bhula doon, bath bana doon
Chahe jahaan dil ko chupa
Baathon hi baathon mein,
do mulakaton mein le loon
Baachna ae haseeno,
Lo mein aa gaya
Hey baachna ae haseeno lo mein aa gaya
Husn ka aashiq husn ka dushman
Apni ada hai yaaron se juda

Ranbir started dancing with Krithika.
Heyyy
Baachna ae haseeno lo mein aa gaya
Hey baachna ae haseeno lo mein aa gaya
Haiii haiii haaiii haiii
(Yeah baby when you see me coming
Yeah
Yeah you better run for cover
Yeah
Yeah coz you know when I find you
Yeah
Yeah I'm gonna be your lover) 2
Heyy
Tujko mein zaamane ke aage main
chedunga na chodoonga
Aankhein churayegi bhi tho milaunga
Ja ja kya bahane banayegi
Dekhuga dil phenkunga
Jootey mootey wade suna ke
Fasaunga
Husn ka aashiq husn ka dushman
Apni ada hai yaaron se juda

Sameer and Shrishti too danced.

Baachna ae haseeno,
Lo mein aa gaya
Hey baachna ae haseeno lo mein aa gaya
Husn ka aashiq husn ka dushman
Apni ada hai yaaron se juda

(Yeah baby when you see me coming
Yeah
Yeah you better run for cover
Yeah
Yeah coz you know when I find you
Yeah
Yeah I'm gonna be your lover) 2
: Bachna Ae Haseeno
Krithika came near Ranbir with juice.
Krithika:You must be tired after a fast dance number.Drink this.
She made him drink it.

After a few sips he said:You too drink it as you too danced.
He made her drink the juice from his glass.She was shy.
She saw some juice drops on his face and wiped them with her hand.Ranbir was lost in her.She blushed.



Ranbir and Krithika exchanged rings.
Ranbir:Krithika...are you reminded of something seeing these rings?
She blushed.

Flash back...

Ranbir gave a box to Krithika and opened it before her.It was a beautiful finger ring.She was surprised.
Ranbir:Did you like it?
Krithika:Of course yes.It's so pretty.But I never expected such a beautiful gift from you.
Ranbir smiled:May I make you wear this?

She blushed:Yes.
Ranbir:I will make you wear it only if you permit me to make you wear rings through out your life.
Krithika was confused:Means?
Ranbir:I love you Krithika.Will you marry me?
Krithika was surprised and happy:Yes Ranbir.
Ranbir was so happy that he slipped the ring onto her finger.

Present...

Krithika:How can i forget your beautiful proposal?
Ranbir:Even I can't forget that moment as it made me realize that how much you love me.
Krithika blushed.

Karan went near Rishab.
Karan:Rishab bhai..don't waste time.You propose to Chahat bhabhi.
Rishab smiled.

Rishab went near Chahat and pulled her hand.She stared at him in disbelief.
Rishab:I want to tell you something Chahat.
Chahat:Say...
Rishab:Unknowingly I gave you a lot of pain.I apologize again and again.Please forgive me.

Chahat became emotional and held his hand.
Chahat:Rishab...what is the need of all this?
Rishab:It's needed Chahat.Even if I apologize thousand times what i did to you cannot be forgiven.
Chahat's eyes became teary:Please stop it Rishab.It hurts me.
Rishab:I am sorry Chahat.
Chahat:If you want to tell me this I don't want to hear anything.
Rishab:I want to tell you another thing too.People say that love happens only once.I disagree with it.Because I have fallen in love again...with you.Again I fell in love with you Chahat.

Chahat smiled.

Yeh meri kahan sunti hain
Yeh pal pal jo hoti hain bekal sanam
To sapne naye bunti hain



Rishab extended his hand towards her:Will you be my wife?

Chahat held his hand smiling:Yes,I will marry you.


Hmm.. aankhon ki, aankhon ki
Gustakhiyan maaf hon
Sharm-o-haya maaf hon



In excitement Preeta held Karan's hand.Karan smiled.

Suddenly she realized what she did and took off her hand from him.
Preeta:Sorry.
Karan just smiled.


They shared a romantic eye lock.

Aankhon ki gustakhiyan maaf hon
Ho.. aankhon ki gustakhiyan maaf hon
Ik tuk tumhein dekhti hain
Jo baat kehna chaahe zubaan
Tumse yeh woh kehti hai
(HDDCS)



Everyone clapped their hands.They became shy.

Preeta:You are very lucky Chahat.Only lucky people get love from the person they love.
Suddenly Karan held her hand from behind.


Preeta was stunned.
Karan:You are also lucky Preeta.
Preeta stared at him in disbelief.


Teri kaali akhiyon se jind meri jaage
Dhadkan se tej daudoon, sapno se aage
Ab jaan lut jaaye, yeh jahan chhoot jaaye
Sang pyaar rahe, main rahoon na rahoon..



Karan:I misunderstood you a lot Preeta.Because of my misunderstanding and ego I hurt you a lot.I am really sorry.
Preeta could'nt believe that Karan apologized to her.


Sajda tera sajda
Din rain karoon, naahi chain karoon
Sajda tera sajda
Main to vaari karoon, meri jaan likh doon



Preeta:No need to be guilty Karan.It's your memory loss which erased all our beautiful moments from your heart.
Karan:You are very nice Preeta.Your good loving nature turned my stone heart into a soft heart.

Ab jaan lut jaaye, yeh jahan chhoot jaaye
Sang pyaar rahe, main rahoon na rahoon..
Sajda tera sajda [Karoon main tera sajda]



Karan:My arrogance made me tell you that I will never love you.But you had faith that one day I will love you.I failed and you won Preeta.But I am not at all sad.In fact I am extremely happy that I have failed for the first time in my life before your love.Your belief in love won Preeta.I have started loving you.
Preeta could not believe her ears.

Din rain karoon, naahi chain karoon
Sajda tera sajda [Karoon main tera sajda]
Main to vaari karoon, meri jaan likh doon



Karan:Yes Preeta..I love you.
Preeta smiled emotionally.

Raanjhana.. nainon ke teer chal gaye
Saajana.. saanson se dil sil gaye
Palkon mein chhupa loon, tera sajda karoon
Seene mein sama loon, ho din rain karoon



Karan knelt down before her holding her hand.
Karan:Preeta...do you love me the same way you used to love me before?

Preeta said emotionally:What kind of a question is this Karan?My love for you is endless.I will keep loving you till the end.

Palakon mein chhupa loon, seene mein sama loon
Tere ang rang rang mera bole
Ho.. ab jaan lut jaaye, yeh jahan chhoot jaaye
Sang pyaar rahe, main rahoon na rahoon



Karan smiled:A loving woman like you is my luck Preeta.
She smiled.


Sajda tera sajda [Karoon main tera sajda]
Din rain karoon, naahi chain karoon
Sajda tera sajda [Karoon main tera sajda]
Main to vaari karoon, meri jaan likh doon



Karan:I am sad that i don't remember any beautiful moment of our life.Can you please help me to recreate those beautiful moments again with more love and beauty?
Preeta nodded smiling.

Veliya.. kya hua jo dil kho gaya
Mahiya.. ishq mein Khuda mil gaya
Zara aankh se pila de, tera sajda karoon
Zara khwaab saja de, o din rain karoon



Karan:Will you marry me again my baby doll Preeta?
Preeta was surprised:Yes,I will marry you thousand times Karan.

Zara aankh se pila de, zara khwaab saja de
Mere honthon se mann tera bole
Ho.. ab jaan lut jaaye, yeh jahan chhoot jaaye
Sang pyaar rahe, main rahoon na rahoon



Karan got up happily and cupped her face in his hands.

Sajda tera sajda [Karoon main tera sajda]
Din rain karoon, naahi chain karoon
Sajda tera sajda [Karoon main tera sajda]
Main to vaari karoon, meri jaan likh doon



They joined their foreheads together with a romantic smile.


O.. teri kaali akhiyon se jind meri jaage
Dhadkan se tej daudoon, sapno se aage
Ab jaan lut jaaye, yeh jahan chhoot jaaye
Sang pyaar rahe, main rahoon na rahoon..
Sajda tera sajda
Din rain karoon, naahi chain karoon
Sajda tera sajda
Main to vaari karoon, meri jaan likh doon
Aa...
(My name is Khan).





Everyone clapped their hands.
Mahesh:Guess we will have to conduct the wedding of all our children on the same day.
Rakhi:Yes Maheshji.
Shrishti:Please conduct our wedding too please.
Sameer:Why Shrishti?Are you in your senses.Don't make a fool of yourself.We are already married.

Shrishti:So what?Shorty..I love you so much that I want to have a fairy tale wedding with you again.

Maine pucha ye dil se
Main kyu hoon jahan mein
Ek dhahkan boli tere liye



A sweet smile appeared on Sameer's face.

Maine yaadein tarashi
Aur khwaab bana di
Nayi duniya basa di tere liye



They shared a romantic eye lock blushing.

Tere liye.. tere liye
Tere liye.. tere liye(Fitoor).



Dadi:Ok ok.We will conduct your remarriage too.

Sameer and Shrishti smiled:Thank you.

Ruchika held Arjun's hand and told them:Please consider us too.

Rakhi:You both are kids.First complete education.Then we will think of wedding.
Ruchika and Arjun were shy.
Mahesh:We have already talked to Arjun's parents and we have decided to conduct your engagement.
Ruchika and Arjun were very happy.
Ruchika:So sweet of you all.
Ruchika hugged Mahesh and Rakhi.
Dadi:Mahesh..call Panditji and fix a day for the engagement of Arjun and Roo and the grand wedding of Luthra new generation.
Mahesh:Yes..now itself.
Everyone smiled happily.

They played music.

All the couples danced romantically.

Yeh kya hua
Kuch pata na chala
Kyun haadsa ban gaya silsila
Tukdo mein tum the
Tukdo mein main bhi
Tukde bane toh hum bane
Yeh dil zindagi se
Khafa ho chala tha

Jisey phir se jeene ke
bahaane tum bane

Tanha safar ke mushkil dagar mein
Tum humsafar jo mil gaye
Hai zakhm saare sil gaye
Bikhre pade thhe bezaar lamhe
Kaanton ke jaise har jagah
Woh phool ban ke khil gaye
Sadko pe kitni shaamein guzari
Wohi raat hote aashiyane tum bane
Yeh kya hua
Kuch pata na chala(Broken).


After some weeks...

Ruchika and Arjun got engaged.



Finally the big fat wedding day of Luthra siblings occured.
Rishab-Chahat,


Karan-Preeta,


Krithika-Ranbir,


Sameer-Shrishti

got married happily.
While watching the wedding Arjun and Ruchika imagined their wedding with each other.


Arjun and Ruchika looked at each other.
Arjun:What are you thinking?
Ruchika blushed:I was dreaming of our wedding.And you?

Arjun blushed:I was also dreaming of our wedding.

They smiled romantically.

The End

Edited by jasminerahul - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#52
Last part...
Nice ending..
Every couple is happy..

Chahat n Rishab r again together..

Sameer n Sriht r definitely made for each other...
They r the cutest..
Ruchika n Arjun resolve their issues ..

I m very happy for Preeran as Karan finally realizes that he can't live without Preeta...
It's not important whether his memory is restored or not..
They r soulmates for eternity..

My favourite character is Chahat..
Her selflessness wins my heart..

My favourite jodi is,of course,Karan n Preeta..
Their love story is the most happening here..

My favourite scene is Arjun's confesion where he tells Rucha that he's his ARU...
Edited by pakpearl - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#53
Awesome di
And pictures also so beautiful 😳

Thank you for pm 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
#54
thanks for the pm!

fab update! all ends well!

great end!
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#55
Awesome update.. I want to more but it's ok..Happy ending😛😛
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#56
Interesting update👏
The last part was beautiful👏
Every couple's moment was beautiful😳
My favourite couple were Preeran & Rishabh- Chahat
Loved their secenes
Will miss the story
Edited by katheriene - 6 years ago
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#57
every part is so beautiful... 👏
loved the whole story...
last part😭
bt now eagerly waiting for ur nxt story 😊
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This FF was so beautiful with four five couples having different emotions, feelings and aspirations. Starting from Rishab Chahat was inseparable and touchy. Their love defeated most dangerous battle of life with courage. Hatts off to them

Second of course Preeta Karan had everything love, sacrifice and immense trust for each other. His memory did not have to come back for love to win. His guilt of hurting Preeta was touchy and proposing was just beautiful My favorite from all couples

Sameer Shrishti full entertainment package; combination of innocent and drama queen. Very cutest of all

Ranbir Kritika story was no less than fairy tale. Loved them. Ruchika Arjun very romantic I would say junior Preeran would not be wrong. Quite passionate as well pain, tears, love and emotions.

Enjoyed this story very much.
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My favorite was of course Preeran story, something entirely different, losing memory and then love hate relationship
Character I would say Chahaat : she was very strong and selfless I would say who remained strong in such crucial phase

Scene is most of all are Arjun Roo; specially the confession 😉
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Superb ending dear👏!!!! Really sorry dear for late... Aww Rishabh proposed Chahat😳... He apologized her... Chahat n Rishabh's eyelock❤️... Preeta got surprised seeing Karan's concern for her... Ruchika n Arjun... Ruchika became happy seeing Arjun... Arjun said her that he is still her childhood friend who never can be distant with her... Aww😛❤️... Karan proposed Preeta... He wants to recreate their romantic moments n marriage😳... Preeta's trust in love won❤️... KriBir ring exchane... Romantic juice sharing!!! Their flashback... Rakhi n Mahesh decided to conduct all their children's marriage a same day... Shrishti want to marry Sameer again... ShrishMeer wedding... Roo asks them what about she n Arjun😆... All says her to concentrate on studies🤣😉...
Ruchika n Arjun got engaged😳... PreeRan, KriBir, ShrishMeer n RishHat got married❤️... Roo n Arjun imagined their marriage😉😛... Loved it to the core dear❤️... As I'm a die hard fan of TanShi...my most fav jodi is KriBir... But along with them I loved PreeRan n ShrishMeer jodi too😳... Fav characters r Chahat, Rishabh n Preeta... Because all d three have a strong trust on love...even though d situations were againt their love... Fav scenes all KriBir n PreeRan scenes n I loved ShrishMeer nokjhok too... Eagerly waiting for new stories Jazzy... Thanks for the PM...

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