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Part 14

Both Karan and Preeta were lost in each other and were sharing an eyelock when suddenly they heard some loud noise! Turning they found Shrishti, Sameer and Aarav with Party bombs in their hands! Preeta smiled while Karan frowned seeing Aarav.

Shrishti: Finally! Finally! Finally! Karan sir ne Preeta di ko propose kar diya!

Sameer: Haan Shrishti! Yeh to Breaking News hai! Come ek doosre ko pinch karte hain! I feel I am dreaming! (puts hand on his face showing as if dreaming)

Karan pinches him hard making him scream!

Sameer: Aaah! Bhai kya kar rahe ho?

Karan: Sacchai se saamna! Kyon sirf Shrishti hi tujhe sacchai ka saamna karvaa sakti hai? Aha! Teri dream girl hai na!

Shrishti blushes while Preeta hides her laugh. Aarav understands the reason of Karan's anger.

Aarav: Areey! Bas bhi karo Karan! Sach mein thodi na main Preeta se pyaar karta hun! Vo to bas ek plan... (bits his tounge as he realizes what he said)

Karan becomes shocked as well as angry while Preeta, Shrishti, Sameer and Aarav lowered their eyes in guilt!

Karan: Accha! To yeh ek plan tha!

Preeta: Karan woh...

Karan: Bas Preeta!

Preeta becomes shocked and tears form in her eyes thinking her relationship with Karan to get over!

Karan: Tumhe kuch kehne ki zaroorat nahi hai! Main jaanta hun tum mujhe hurt karne ka soch bhi nahi sakti! Maine tumhe kabhi jaan boojh ke Aarav ke paas jaate huye nahi dekha! I know you love me aur pyaar mein koi kisiko intentionally hurt nahi kar sakta!

Preeta smiles with tears and Karan wipes them off! Then he turns towards Shrishmeer and Aarav in anger!

Karan: I'm sure yeh inka hi plan hoga, right?

Aarav: Mera! Mera kaise ho sakta hai main to Delhi mein tha mujhe is baat ki khabar tak nahi thi! Inse poocho! (says in order to escape and points towards Shrishmeer)

Karan shifts his eyes from Aarav to Sameer in order to get an answer.

Sameer: Bhai... Apko lagta hai aapka pyaara sa maasoom sa bhai jisne aaj tak cockroach ko marne tak ke liye sharyantra nahi racha aapke khilaaf itna bada sharyantra rachega? Yeh sab to is.. Iska plan tha! (points towards Shrishti)

Shrishti glares at him and then steps on his foot making him scream!

Sameer: Aaah!

Karan: Aha! Sharyantra! Bada hindi jhaad raha hai!

Sameer smiles uncomfortably!

Shrishti: Karan sir! Haan... Vo... Yeh mera hi plan tha! (closes her eyes thinking Karan to burst upon her)

But instead of bursting with anger Karan bursts into laughter!

Karan: I knew yeh meri jhalli fan ka hi plan ho sakta hai! Oye lambu tere dimaag mein aise plan aate kahan se hain?

Sameer: Bhai!!! Lambu sirf main bol sakta hun! Aap jhalli fan bolo na! (pouts making everyone laugh and Shrishti blush)

Karan: Theek hai mere bhai! Vaise Shrishti to be serious, Thank you very much! Tumhare isi plan ki vajah se aaj mujhe apne pyaar ka ehsas hua hai!

Looks towards Preeta. She smiles...

Sameer and Aarav: Hum bhi to plan ka hissa the!

Shrishti: Accha! Ab plan ka hissa the! Pehle to saara ilzaam mujh par daal diya! Matlabi kahi ke!

All laugh!

Shrishti: Vaise aap sabne di ka muh dekha tha? Kitna darr gayi thi! I'm sure yeh soch rahi thi ki Karan sir inse ladai karenge!

Preeta (in mind): Isko kaise pata?

Shrishti: Kya soch rahe ho? Mujhe kaise pata? Behen hu aapki di! Aapki mann ki har baat jaanti hun!

Preeta gets shocked as well as embarrased! Shrishti hugs her!
All laugh and share a light and sweet moment after a long time!

Mumbai

Rishab brings coffee for Riya and both head towards the car after finishing it! They were going to reach the car when suddenly it starts raining! Rishab runs to the car but is shocked to see Riya not with him! He turns around and is mesmerized seeing Riya dancing in the rain like a small and innocent kid! He comes to her! Riya twirls and collides in his chest! She smiles unknowingly and forwards her hand! Rishab looks at her confused!

Riya: Rain dance?

Rishab is lost in his world and puts his hand!

Rishab: Sure!

Riya giggles and both are lost in their world dancing! Rishab twirls and picks her up while Riya is totally lost in his thoughts! They dance passionately without any music! Their trance is broken by the horn of a car and they realize their position and people watching them! Both rush to Rishab's car. Their remains an awkward silence while travelling!

Rishab (in mind): How can I be so lost? Itna effected to main kabhi pehle nahi hua! Not even with Preeta ji! What's wrong with me?

Riya (in mind): Oh god! Main Rishab ke itne kareeb kaise aa sakti hun? Main apne maqsad se bhatakti jaa rahi hun! Focus Roya focus! Jald hi tu apna plan execute kar sakegi!

Rishab leaves Riya and both bid adieu each other with a smile yelling each other that everything is normal between them to not make the other uncomfortable!

At night
Nasik

Karan and Preeta both are not able to sleep and remember each other! Finally both sleep with the thoughts of each other and a smile on their face!

Next Morning

All are making preparations as it is the wedding day! Preeta wears a beautiful lehenga making Karan mesmerized by her beauty! Preeta blushes! Karan comes near her and speaks in her ear!

Karan: Kya baat hai Preeta Arora! Blushing, haan? Tumhe pata hai tum kitni khoobsurat lag rahi ho? Aur tumhare iss blush ne tumhari khoobsurti par chaar chand laga diye hain!

Preeta blushes hard and starts to go away from him without saying anything when Karan holds her wrist!

Karan: Preeta Arora pyaar mein saare manners bhool gayin kya? Vaise to bahut manners par lecture deti ho! Jab koi compliment kare to Thank You bolte hain!

Preeta: Thank You!

Preeta runs from there while Karan smiles seeing her blush!

At night

The time for the marriage comes and Preeta comes bringing Priya! Karan signals her a perfect sign! Preeta smiles. The pandit ji start with the mantras and the couple are asked to take vows! Preeta and Karan mimics them seeing each other! Karan signals her saying tjat soon they will be in the mandap marrying each other! Preeta blushes very hard! Raj fills Priya's head partition with vermilion and ties mangalsutra around her neck! They take pheras and exchange garlands! Shrishmeer look at each other lovingly and get lost in a world where they were marrying instead of Priya and Raj! Priya and Raj take the blessings of the elders and hug their friends! The vidaai ritual of Priya takes place! Priya hugs Preeta!

Priya: Karan! Meri Preeta ka acche se dhyan rakhna! Ok?

Preeta: Tumhe kaise pata? Aarav!!!

Aarav hides behind Shrishti from Preeta's glare!

Aarav: Shrishti! Finally teri iss lambi height ka kuch toh faidaa hua! Mere chupne mein kaam aayi!

Shrishti glares at her!

Aarav: Tum dono behnon ne ghoor ke dekhne mein PHD kar rakhi bhai kya?

Shrishti: Di! Yeh lo! Maro isey!

Aarav: Bachao!!!

All laugh!

Preeta: Tu apna dhyaan rakhna aur agar koi bhi problem ho to mujhe inform karna! Bilkul jhijak mat karana! Samjhi!

Karan: We are always there for you! Raj dhyan rakhna!

Priya nods while Raj and Karan hug each other! Priya then hugs Shrishti and other friends while Raj hugs Sameer, Aarav and some other friends! Priya and Raj sit in the car and leave! Preeta and Karan push the car as a ritual of vidaai! Preeta had tears in her eyes seeing her friend go! Karan comes to her worried!

Karan: Tum ro rahi ho? Please mat ro! Yeh to khushi ki baat hai na!

Preeta: Haan! Aur main dukhi thodi na hun! Bas emotional ho gayi thi!

Karan wipes her tears!

Karan: Khushi ke ho ya dhukh ke dobara kabhi tumhari aankhon mein aansun nahi dikhne chahiye! Samjhin? Aur haan bags pack kar lo humein kal Mumbai ke liye nikalna hai!

Shrishmeer and Aarav too come there! Shrishti and Preeta have a shocked and confused face while Karan and Sameer look at them assuringly! They remember they had promised their mother to come back after the wedding while Aarav is sad on hearing her best friend's departure!

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First of all sorry senior ! I loved the progress. Will be waiting for next...
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Originally posted by: Muskanika

First of all sorry senior ! I loved the progress. Will be waiting for next...

It's okay junior and thanks! 😊
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It's okay senior and thanks! 😊

Badam (almonds) khao senior. I am Junior!
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Badam (almonds) khao senior. I am Junior!

Galti se type ho gaya! Edited! 😆
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Galti se type ho gaya! Edited! 😆

Guess what! I saw this typo just after I completed my surprise Imagine!
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Guess what! I saw this typo just after I completed my surprise Imagine!

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Part 15
Preeta and Shrishti are in the room packing their things for going back to Mumbai. However, both are lost in thinking about the reason of what happened.

Karan and Sameer too have the same feelings.

Both the couples also consider this trip as a very memorable one as it is where they got together and realised their love. They also think how they will tell their families about it.

On the other side, Aarav is happy for PreeRan but sad for his best friend's departure.

Next Morning
Everyone is busy in putting their bags in the car. Aarav comes there.
Aarav: Preeta! (comes running to her)

Preeta: Aarav! I will miss you! (hugs him)

Aarav: I will miss you too yaar! (hugs her back and then breaks the hug) And don't forget tum dono ke love story ke poora hone mein mera bahut bada haath hain! (tries to lighten the mood)

Karan: Arey woh hum kaise bhool sakte hain? Koi qasar jo nahi chodi tumne mujhe satane mein!

(All laugh and then suddenly become silent)

Aarav: Preeta! Tere jaane se pehle mein ek baar tujhse maafi maangna chahta hun! I was not there when you needed me the most! I'm a terrible friend! I'm sorry yaar! (gets tears in his eyes)

Preeta wipes them off!

Preeta: No Aarav! You are a wonderful friend! Tumhari life mein itna sab kuch hone ke baad bhi you came back! Just for me! I cannot have had a better friend than you! We will always remain best friends! Never consider that you left me! Fate made us bid adieu each other!

Aarav: As it is doing right now, isn't it? Preeta I know I can't change our destiny but I can request you right to meet me back again?

Preeta: Of course you can! I promise main nahi balki hum sab tumse aur aunty se milne Delhi aayenge!

Aarav: I will be waiting! Aur tab tak yeh bolne wala khamba mujhe saari news deta rahega!

Shrishti: Kya? Main... Aur bolne wala khamba!

Sameer: Ek minute yaar please isey khamba na bulao yaar!

Shrishti: I love you Sameer!

Sameer: I love you too tall pole!

(All laugh and Shrishti runs behind Sameer)

Shrishti: Sameer!

Sameer: Kya Shrishti? Tumhe tall pole bolne ka haq to sirf mera hai na!

Shrishti: Accha! (blushes)

Karan: Ok chalo ab chalte hain varna ghar pahunchne mein late ho jayega!

All bid adieu Aarav and others! Aarav too sits in his car and heads for Delhi!

Mumbai

Riya and Rishab both miss each other as the office is closed due to Sunday and they aren't able to see each other!

Riya's home

Riya: What is happening with me? (blushes) Rishab ki absence itna kyon pareshaan kar rahi hai mujhe?

On the other hand, Luthra Mansion

Rishab: Aisa toh kabhi nahi hua mere saath! Kabhi kisi ki presence aur absence ne mujhe itna nahi sataya! Toh phir yeh kya hai? Kya ho raha hai!? What are these new feelings?

Riya: Aisa lag raha hai ki agar ab main unhey nahi dekhungi toh jaan nikal jayegi! What is this? Is this called love?

Rishab: Kya... Kya sach mein I'm in love?

Riya: Uski vajah se sab peeche choot gaya! Mera maqsad, plan sab...! I... I love Rishab! I really do! Bas ab main Rishab ko sab sach bata dungi! Mera uski life mein aane ka maqsad aur phir kaise sab change ho gaya! I know woh zaroor samjhega! (gets very happy)

Haan aa.. o..

Main jaan ye vaar doon
Har jeet bhi haar doon
Keemat ho koi tujhe
Beinteha pyaar doon

Saari hadein maine meri
Ab maine tod di
Dekar mujhe pataa
Awaargi ban gaye

Haan hasi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaan
Meri zameen ban gaye

Haan aa.. o..

Kya khoob rab ne kiya
Bin maange itna diya
Warna hai milta kahaan
Hum kaafiron ko khuda (Repeat once)

Hasratein ab meri
Tumse hai jaa mili
Tum duaa ab meri
Aakhiri ban gaye

Haan hasi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaan
Meri zameen ban gaye

Oo.. aa..
Aa.. aa.. oo.. (Female version)

She heads for Luthra Mansion!

Rishab: I love Riya! OMG! Yahi toh hota hai na asli pyaar jo maine kabhi feel nahi kiya! Kisi ke liye sab had paar kar dena! Uske liye meri concern... Main pehle kaise nahi samjha? I love Riya! The one I know will never betray me or my trust! She is such a pure and innocent human being! (smiles widely)

Haan aa...

Haan hasi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaan
Meri zameen ban gaye

Haan hasi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaan
Meri zameen ban gaye

Haan hum badalne lage
Girne sambhalne lage
Jab se hai jaana tumhein
Teri ore chalne lage

Haan hum badalne lage
Girne sambhalne lage
Jab se hai jaana tumhein
Teri ore chalne lage

Har safar har jagah
Har kahin ban gaye
Maante thhe khuda
Aur haan wahi ban gaye

Haan hansi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaan
Meri zameen ban gaye

Haan hansi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaan
Meri zameen ban gaye

O..aa... (Male version)

Luthra Mansion

Car stops outside the house and PreeRan and Shrishmeer get out! Preeta and Shrishti are confused as to why they have been brought there.

Preeta: Karan! Tum hamein yahan kyon laye ho!? Humein to ghar jaakar maa se sach janna hai na?

Karan: Preeta! Tum andar to chalo! Sarla Aunty aur Dadi andar hi hain! Humne aaj subha hi unhe inform kar diya tha ki hum tum logon ke lekar aa rahe hain! Chalo!

What do you guys think? What's the reason? And what is Riya's motive? Keep reading to know!

So guys! I am sorry for the late update! But let me make it clear, I won't be updating any sooner! Pre-boards are near! Wish me all the best! And will try to give an update as soon as possible though! :-)

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Posted: 6 years ago
Nice update hiba!
All the best!!! 😊
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Originally posted by: Niraj19

Nice update hiba!

All the best!!! 😊

Thanks Niraj Bhai! 😛

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