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Part 11

Next morning

Luthra Office

Riya comes to the office and starts working in her cabin when someone knocks at her door.

Riya: Yes,come in!

The man comes in.

Riya: (does not looks up) Dekhiye agar aapko koi file check karvaani hai to I am sorry! I am very busy. Mujhe Rishab ka schedule banana hai. Time par nahi kiya to aaj to vo mera katl hi kardenge. (giggles while doing her work but does not looks up)

Man: Seriously? Am I that dangerous to do a murder?

Riya (gets shocked): Rishab! I mean aap! Yahan? Kaise?

Rishab: Kyon? Yeh to mera hi office hain na! To I guess I can roam in my office or can I not ma'am?

Riya: Ma'am! Me? (laughs) Aap bhi na! Of course you can! I meant ki aapko koi kaam tha?

Rishab: Haan vo main yeh janne aaya tha ki ab aapki tabiyat kaisi hai?

Riya: Very well! All credit goes to you! Aapka soup peete hi mera bukhaar gayab ho gaya! Thank you Rishab!

Rishab: Thank god! Aap mujhe Rishab bulaane to lagin! So can I say we are friends now?

Riya: Yes, of course!

Both shake hand.

Rishab: Vaise since we are friends now, you must have heard "Dosti mein no sorry no thank you!

Riya smiles while Rishab starts to leave but turns before going out of the cabin.

Rishab: Vaise Riya! Friends ek doosre ka murder nahi karte!

Riya (giggles): Rishab! Vo to maine yuhin kaha tha!

Rishab too laughs and leaves while Riya gets lost in his memories!

Nasik

All start preparing for haldi. Preeta ignores Karan while he tries to find chances to talk to her.

Preeta: Arey Payal! Vo haldi ka bowl kahan hai? Kabse dhoond rahi hun!

Payal: Preeta vo andar table par rakha hai.

Preeta: Accha! Main abhi lekar aati hun.

Payal: Preeta...

Preeta: Haan...

Payal: Akele mat jaa! Kuch gifts bhi vahan rakhe hain jo laane hain and tum vo nahi utha paogi. Kisiko apne saath le jaa!

Karan who was standing nearby listens their conversation.

Karan (in mind): Yeh accha mauka hai Preeta ke saath waqt bitaane ka! Usse baat bhi kar lunga aur usey mana bhi lunga!

Karan: Main chalta hu na.

Aarav: Arey Karan! Tum kahan jaoge? Main chala jaata hun na.

Preeta feels sad.

Preeta: Aarav! It's ok! Let Karan come!

Aarav: But Pree...

Preeta: It's ok Aarav! Aao Karan!

Karan gets happy seeing Preeta fighting for him!

Aarav (in mind): Yeh to plan ki band bajakar hi rahegi!

Shrishti: Dekha Sameer! Meri di kitni badhi dumbo hain! Itni baar samjhaya tha ki Karan sir se door rehna aur Aarav ke saath zyada se zyada samay bitaana par phir bhi! Sahi kehte hai Karan sir di is a dumbo!

Sameer: Mere hisaab se yeh problem to khandaani hai! I mean tum bhi to kitni badi dumbo ho!

Shrishti glares at him with blood shot eyes!

Shrishti: Oh hello badbudaar hawa ke jhokeee! Yeh problem to khandaani hai (mimics him)! Meri di Karan sir se itna pyaar karti hain ki unhe sad nahi dekh paayin! Samjhe? Mere hisaab se tumhaar bhi ek problem khandaani hai shorty!

Sameer: Konsi problem?

Shrishti: Der se pyaar realize karne ki! I mean dono bhai ek jaise! Tumne bhi der se realize kiya aur Karan sir bhi abhi tak pyaar realize nahi kar paaye! Hahaha!

Sameer gets sad.

Sameer (in mind): Tumhe sacchai kaise bataun Shrishti? Tumse yeh sach chupaana sau maut ke barabar hain! Par ek na ek din main tumhe sach zaroor bataunga!

Karan: Preeta! Ek baar meri baat to suno!

Preeta: Dekho Karan! Maine tumhe mere saath aane to diya but that doesn't mean I want to talk to you! Maine abhi bhi tumhe maaf nahi kiya hai!

Karan: But Preeta! Maine aisa kya kiya hai ki tum mujhse itni naraaz ho?

Preeta: Kya kiya hai? Karan tumne mujhse khud kaha tha na ki main tumhaari best friend hun? Then how can you ignore me so much? How can you expect ki tum mujhe itna ignore karo aur main gussa bhi nahi karungi?

Karan: Bas Preeta! Mana ki main tumhe ignore kar raha tha but then why are you over reacting so much? Bas karo na! Baat ko khatam karo!

Preeta: Really Karan! Agar tumhe koi ignore karta to tumhe bura nahi lagta?

Karan: Nahi, nahi lagta! Agar THE KARAN LUTHRA ko ignore kiya jaata to mujhe bura lagta but agar tum mujhe ignore karti to mujhe bilkul bura nahi lagta!

Preeta: Seriously? To tum mere paas kyon aaye ho? Main tumhe ignore kar rahi thi isliye na?

Karan (speechless): Aa..aa... Nahi! Vo to main bas jhagda khatam karne ki koshish kar raha tha varna...

Preeta: Varna kya?

Karan: Varna... Mom ko bura lagta! Mujhe koi shauk nahi hai tumse baat karne ka aur na hi tum koi khaas personality ho ki main tumhaare peeche peeche bhaagta rahun!

Preeta gets extremely hurt with Karan's words as well as attitude!

Preeta (gets tears in her eyes): Sahi kaha tumne main bilkul khaas nahi hun! Tum jao yahan se! Mujhe tumse baat nahi karni!

Karan realizes what he said and feels guilty! He sees Preeta in tears and comes close to console her but Preeta leaves!

Karan(in mind): Yaar main bhi na! Aarav ka gussa Preeta par nikal diya! Socha tha jhagdaa suljhaa dunga par maine to ulta isey aur uljhaa diya! Agar ek baar sorry bol deta to sab theek ho jaata! Par kya karun Preeta, pata nahi kyon tumhe uss Aarav ke saath dekh kar bahut takleef hoti hai! (gets tears in his eyes) Control nahi hota! Aur kal se vo gussa jo mere man mein tha tum par nikal gaya! Tum bahut khaas ho mere liye Preeta! Bahut khaas! Bahut dard hota hai jab tum mujhe ignore karti ho ya mujhse door rehti ho! Pata nahi kyon Preeta? Pata nahi kyon? I am sorry!

He heads to the direction where Preeta went only to find Preeta with Aarav consoling her! He gets angry as well as jealous!

Screen pauses on his face!

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Hey ms. Gayab all the time ! (Mr.India , no, no Ms.India) Chapter was nice but I want you to come BACK soon . Miss you Ms. Ragster ( ragging karne vali senior )
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Originally posted by: Muskanika

Hey ms. Gayab all the time ! (Mr.India , no, no Ms.India) Chapter was nice but I want you to come BACK soon . Miss you Ms. Ragster ( ragging karne vali senior )

Thanks junior!
Aww! Miss you too!
Will come back properly soon!😛
P.S. Ek baar mein itne saare new names!😆
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Interesting update

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Part 12

Karan sees Aarav with Preeta consoling her. Preeta hugs him while Aarav tries to console her. Karan seeing this gets angry and leaves.

Aarav: It's okay Pree!

Preeta: How is it okay Aarav? Aakhir kab Karan realize karega that he loves me? I'm now scared if he even loves me!

Aarav: No Pree! He surely loves you! Maine uske expressions dekhe hain jab main tumhare saath hota hun! He is just so jealous!

Preeta: But uski baton se to lag raha tha...

Aarav: Pree... Usney jo kaha apni jealousy ko chupaane ke liye kaha! I know aakhir main bhi is sab se guzar chukka hoon!

Preeta: What? Matlab tum kisi se...? And you didn't tell me? Very bad! I need all the details right now!

Aarav (blushes): Woh Pree! Chod na! I'll tell you later when time comes! Pehle teri love story pe to dhyan de len.

Preeta: Pakka?

Aarav: Pakka! Ab chal!

Both leave meanwhile Karan goes to a room and starts consuming alcohol remembering all the moments when Preeta was close to Aarav!

He shouts: NO!!! How could you do this to me Preeta? How could you? Tum kisi aur ko tumhe choone ka haq kaise de sakti ho jabki woh haq sirf mera hai! Meri Preeta ko choone ka haq sirf aur sirf mera hai aur kisi ka nahi! (gets tears in his eyes and then realizes something) Did I just call Preeta mine? (stands up) But woh meri kab bani? Why am I so angry if someone touches her? If she is more close to someone else than me? Am I jealous? No how can I? I mean how?(suddenly his eyes falls on someone standing infront of him)

Karan: Preeta...? Tum!

Preeta: Bas Karan! Aur kitna jhooth bologe khud se? Admit kyon nahi kar lete that you are jealous?

Karan: Main aur jealous? Dimaag kharab ho gaya hai tumhara Preeta Arora! Zyada attention kya dedi...

Preeta: Bas Karan! Stop it! Aur kab tak apne emotions ko gusse mein chupaate rahoge? Admit, you are jealous and you'll realize everything! ADMIT KARAN, ADMIT!

Her voice starts echoing in his ears. He gets irritated and shouts:

Karan: HAAN! I AM JEALOUS! NAHI DEKH SAKTA MAIN TUMHE KISI AUR KE SAATH KYONKI... KYONKI I LOVE YOU!

Preeta smiles, Karan closes his eyes and starts moving towards her with a broad smile.

Karan: I love you so much!

He opens his eyes only to find Preeta nowhere. He realizes he was dreaming.

Karan: I LOVE HER! YES! I LOVE PREETA! Main ussey apne pyaar ka izhaar kardunga!

Gets happy and remembers all his moments with her.

Sameer and Shrishti watch him from the window happily and Hi-5 each other!

Shrishti: Lo Sameer doosre bird ko bhi realize ho gaya ki vo pyaar mein hain!

Sameer: Haan! Ab in dono love birds ko milne se koi nahi rok sakta! Vaise manna padega your plan really worked!

Shrishti: Kaha tha na! Vaise main tumse ek baat puchun? Bura to nahi manoge?

Sameer: Nahi manunga... Poocho!

Shrishti: Tum mujhse kya chupa rahe ho?

Sameer becomes dumb after listening her question.

Sameer: Matlab? Main kuch samjha nahi?

Shrishti: Jhooth mat bolo Sameer! Main jaanti hun ki koi to aisi baat hai jo tum mujhse chupa rahe ho! Tumhari aankhon mein vo dard jo main tab se dekhti aa rahi hun jab se tumse mili hun! What is it Sameer?

He doesn't utter a word and then after sometime:

Sameer: I am sorry Shrishti! Main abhi tumhe kuch nahi bata sakta but sahi samay aane par main tumhe sab kuch bata dunga.

Shrishti: It's okay Sameer! I trust you. I will wait for that right moment.

Both share an assuring smile.

Meanwhile Karan decides to tell his feelings to Preeta in the evening.

Mumbai

Luthra Office

It is raining heavily and due to high tide alert everyone leaves for their homes excluding Rishab and Riya.

Rishab comes in Riya's cabin to check if she is there as he was leaving. He is shocked to find her working.

Rishab: Aap abhi tak gayi nahin?

Riya: Nahin woh thoda kaam bacha tha to socha ki kar ke jaun. Aur vaise aap bhi to nahi gaye?

Rishab: Main jaane hi waala tha but thought ek baar check kar lun if everyone has left?

Riya: Impressive! Aap sab ka bahut dhyan rakhte hain! (praises him as she gets impressed with this gesture of him)

Rishab: Thanks! But high tide alert hain aur ab bahaar nikalna bhi mana hai. I guess hume thode time tak yahin rehna hoga.

Riya: It's okay! Not a big deal! Main apna kaam kar leti hun! Maybe tab tak baarish kam ho jaaye ya ruk jaaye!

Rishab: Ok! Even I will work in my cabin then!

He turns to leave when suddenly there is a huge sound of lightning. Riya gets scared.

Riya: Rishab!

Rishab: Haan...

Riya: Aap apna kaam mere cabin mein kyon nahi kar lete?

Rishab: Kyon? Darr lag raha hai? (asks her teasingly)

Riya: Haan woh... Mujhe darr lagta hai! (says getting embarrassed)

Rishab: OMG! I cannot believe this doosron se ladne waali aur daraane wali khud darr rahi hai! (says teasingly and laughs loudly like a child)

Riya admires him and then speaks: Haan toh? Toh kya hua? Aap apni dost par kaise has sakte hain?

Rishab: Accha baba sorry! Main apni files aur laptop lekar aata hun atleast tab tak mat darna or do you need to accompany me? (asks teasingly)

Riya: Rishab!

He leaves laughing. Riya smiles at his childish and cute behaviour.

Nasik

Haldi venue

All leave after the tiring day except Preeta who was checking if everything was packed and then switches off all the lights to leave when she sees a gift. She wonders for whom it is and picks it up to find her name written on it!

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Part 13
Haldi venue
Preeta opens the gift stating her name and is shocked to find a beautiful saree in it. She finds a note and reads it:
"Ek beautiful si ladki ke liye beautiful si saree! Isey pehen ke backyard me milo sharp at 7:00 p.m.
-Tumhara K..."
Preeta is shocked to find the note.
Preeta: K? Matlab Karan! But yeh mujhse kyon milna chahta hai? Kahin yeh mujhse ladai to nahi karna chahta? Vaise hi subah itna suna diya, bata diya ki meri iski life mein koi importance nahi hai aur ab... Kahin yeh hamari dosti toh nahi todna chahta? Par iski meri life mein bahut importance hai! (gets tears in her eyes) Lekin ek minute! Agar yeh mujhse dosti hi todna chahta hai to phir yeh saari? Lagta hai alag tareeke se hamara rishta khatam karna chahta hai! Vaise bhi The Karan Luthra hai na! Aur ye beautiful... Jaanboojh ke meri tareef kar raha hai taaki baad mein dil tod sakey! Hey bhagvaan! Maine kya bura kiya tha kisi ka jo meri love story start hone se pehle hi khatam ho rahi hai??? Lekin jaana to padega na!
She leaves to get ready... It was 6:30 p.m. that time...
Luthra Office
Riya was tired of working wheras Rishab too was tired! Both while working were sharing smiles and looking at each other but after working for hours, both were asleep now! Rishab on the sofa with laptop on his lap and files here and there and the same with Riya who was on her chair, head on the table, laptop on the side and files here and there! Riya gets up first and sees Rishab! She admires him...
Riya (in mind): Pata nahi Rishab par aapko dekhkar kuch ho jaata hai! Ek umeed milti hai ki duniya mein aaj bhi acche log zinda hain... Vaise to main yahan ek maqsad se aayi thi par lagta hai main us maqsad se bhatak chuki hun! I feel I'm in...
Rishab gets up and sees Riya staring at him with a smile and confused look!
Rishab: Kya hua? Aap mujhe aise kyon dekh rahi hain? Mere chehre par kuch hai kya? (checks his face)
Riya: Nahi... Vo... Main... Umm...
Rishab: Kya? Nahi... Vo... Main... Umm...? Bataiye kya hua?
Riya: Vo main so gayi thi and I need a coffee! (makes an excuse and says rapidly)
Rishab: What? Coffee? Vaise mann to mera bhi hai! Wait a minute! Main lekar aata hun! I guess saamne waala stall khul gaya hoga saath mein main baarish ke haalat bhi dekhkar aa jaunga!
Riya: Ok!
Rishab leaves...
Riya (in mind): Riya... Tu bhi na! Agar unko pata chal jaata ki tu unhe dekh rahi hai to! Phew!
Backyard
Preeta was looking beautiful in the saree Karan gifted her and was shocked to find the backyard decorated beautifully .
Preeta: Karan? Kahan ho tum?
Karan comes from back staring at her as she looked beautiful even from back!
Karan: Main yahan hu!
Preeta turns with a confused look! Karan stares her with a smile getting mesmerized!
Preeta (in mind): Pehli baar kisiko koi rishta khatam karne ke liye itna khush dekh rahi hun! Lagta hai yeh bahut khush hai! Iss Shrishti ke plan ki vajah se Karan aur bhadak gaya hai aur isliye mujhse door hone par itna khush hai! Usey to main chodungi nahi! Uska plan mujh par hi backfire hogaya!
She watches Karan staring at him!
Preeta (in mind): Aakhri baar dekh raha hai na shayad isliye itna ghoor kar dekh raha hai!
(says aloud) Karan!
He comes out of his world!
Karan: Haan!
Preeta: Tumne mujhe yaha kyon bulaya?
Karan: Batata hun!
Takes her hand and starts dancing with her, music comes automatically!

Na jiya zindagi ek pal bhi
Tujhse hoke judaa sun zara
Bin tere mujhse naaraaz tha dil
Tu mila hai toh hai keh raha

Main toh tere rang mein
Rang chuka hoon
Bas tera ban chuka hoon
Mera mujhme kuch nahi sab tera

Main toh tere dhang mein
Dhal chuki hoon
Bas teri ban chuki hoon
Mera mujhme kuch nahi
Sab tera, sab tera..
Sab tera, sab tera..

Preeta (in mind): Yeh kaisa naya tareeka hai? Yeh karna kya chahta hai...?

Phir dil ke raaston pe
Teri aahat jo hui
Har dhadkan jashan mein hai
Yeh inaayat jo hui (x2)

Main toh tujhe milke jee uthi hoon
Teri dhadkan mein chhupi hoon
Mera mujhme kuch nahin
Sab tera, sab tera..
Sab tera, sab tera..


Preeta (in mind): Pehli baar itna romantic seperation dekha hai!
He twirls her and Preeta's back faces Karan! Hands in hands, both were close when Karan whispers in her ears...
Karan: Main tumse kuch kehna chahta hun!
Preeta: Par main kuch nahi sunna chahti!
Preeta tries to leave but Karan pulls her back! She again faces her back to him with hands in hands!
Karan: Aaj tumhe sunna hi padega...
Preeta(in mind): No...
Karan: I...
Preeta(in mind): Want to get rid of you!
Karan: Love...
Preeta(in mind): This decoration?
Karan: You...
Preeta gets shocked!
He twirls her and preeta falls in his arms both face to face!
Karan: Tum hi meri sab kuch ho! Tumhare bina main apni zindagi imagine bhi nahi kar sakta! I love you very much! Tum meri zindagi ho, meri maut ho, meri saans lene ki vajah... Sab kuch! Sab kuch bas tumhi ho! Mera sab kuch tum par hi shuru aur khatam hota hai! I can't stay without you and see you without someone else! Please mujhse door mat jao! Mera dil jalta hai tumhe kisi aur ke saath dekhkar! I love you Preeta! I love you!
Preeta gets tears in her eyes and she stands...
Preeta: Karan...
Karan looks at her hopefully in a fear she doesn't reject him! She hugs him tightly, Karan reciprocates!
Preeta: I Love You too Karan! Not from today but a lot time before!
Karan: To tumne mujhe bataya kyon nahi?
Preeta: Kyonki tum mujhe ignore kar rahe the aur Payal par zyaada dhyan de rahe the! Mujhe laga ki tum mujhse pyaar nahi karte! Aur tumhe paane ki meri khwaaish khwaaish hi reh jaayegi!
Karan: I'm sorry Preeta! I know maine galat kiya but tumhe pata hai na ki tumhe irritate karna meri favourite hobby hai isiliye...
Preeta hits him on shoulder and both laugh with tears of happiness!
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