FF-Hadsa THE END pg-63 *24.8.08* - Page 33

what a cute part sumit help her finding her class how sweet of sumit.

WOW!!!!EXCELLENT!!FABULOUS!!FANTASTIC Sonu...I read all the parts together and it is really really really GOOD..totally different ff..Really sad though 😕 Kumkum is going through such a hard time 😕 but atleast Sumit is there with her 😃 😳 ...Cannot wait till Anjali gets kicked out of their lives 😆 😆 ...really looking forward to reading your next part...
RATING:9/10...and this is because SuKk are not in love yet 😛 ...but you are doing an awesome job...keep it up 👍🏼

Originally posted by: *Resham*

Sonu,

It was nt heartfelt...it really cd have been filled up with lots of emotions..wh. went missing 😳

Yup di..my heart was not into it...thank you for ur guidance...😳

Originally posted by: nature

is it??... jaldi kahan hai.. itni der se toh roye jaa rahi hai bechari.. ab bas kar yaar 😛...

and abt d current part... i agree wid reshu.. gr8 effort 👏... bt cud've been better 😳...

Hmm di..thanku...ab improve karungi..😳

Originally posted by: verni

Gud part bachcha.... rate..... out of 10 :

Dekh u know main bohut seriously rate karti hun....

8/10 😊

ThankQ Vernoo di...i'll try to improve..

Originally posted by: Shafoo

what a cute part sumit help her finding her class how sweet of sumit.

Thanks Shafoo...😳

Originally posted by: SuKk_forever

WOW!!!!EXCELLENT!!FABULOUS!!FANTASTIC Sonu...I read all the parts together and it is really really really GOOD..totally different ff..Really sad though 😕 Kumkum is going through such a hard time 😕 but atleast Sumit is there with her 😃 😳 ...Cannot wait till Anjali gets kicked out of their lives 😆 😆 ...really looking forward to reading your next part...
RATING:9/10...and this is because SuKk are not in love yet 😛 ...but you are doing an awesome job...keep it up 👍🏼

Oh...!! thanku so much..nice to see u back..😊

The examination passes smoothly for Sumit and Anjali..
Out of the 200 questions, Sumit knows 170 out of them...while Anjali lags a bit behind..But still, they are quite busy in answering the questions..
On the other hand, Kumkum knows more than 185 of the Multiple Choice questions...and she's quite pleased about it....Despite feeling week, she has a smile on her face...
While answering the questions, Kumkum easily does the first 100 ...but soon, her temperature rises and a sort of confusion starts arising inside her head..She doesn't knw what is happening to her..She feels a bit light-headed...
Despite knowing the questions, she doesn't want to answer them..All she wants is to lie down, with her head on her parents lap, being pampered by her brother...She's in an imaginative world..

She still tries to fight her own condition, struggling to scribble on the computerized sheet to mark down the perfect answers along with their assertions....Her struggle continues till the169th answer, after which, she finally loses her conscience
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As soon as Sumit comes to know about her condition.....he rushes to her...😳
Finding her unconscious, he concernedly takes her iin arms trying to revive her...😳

His action is so instant that it makes him think, what he was doing after a few minutes....😳

Su:kk?..Kk...fever toh bahut high hai...chalo..hum ghar chalenge..ok?..

During the entire journey to their home, he kept glancing at her from time to time...His mind was filled with thoughts of whatever is happening in her life..

His eyes were moist..
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Kk:...Su..Sumit tum??...

She tries getting up, but he holds her back...

Su:..ssh...so jaa.abhi mat uth...tujhe high fever hai..

Kk:(weakly)...Wo..exam..?..college...wo question no 169..

Su:Kumkum...xam ho gaya...aur tera paper accha hua hai..tu exam ki tension mat le..theek hai?...hum ab ghar par hain...

Anjali is sitting with them...She is keeping wet cloth over her forehead...not because she's concerned about Sumit..but beacuse she wants to be in Sumit's good books...

Anjali:Kk..relax..abhi tujhe 104 fever hai..injection bhi abhi diya hai..bas 1-2 ghante mein sab theek ho jayega..

Sumit caresses her hair and she finally dozes off, holding his arm...

Su:Anjali...fever kam hua??...

A:Nahin sumit...koi faayda nahin...

S:Abhi maine Mrs. (Kirt)i Vera ko phone kiya tha...unhone injection change karne ko kahaa tha...ab iski bhi dose de dete hain..

Sumit injects her once again...Kumkum gets disturbed...and wakes up..

Su:I am sorry..sorry..so jao..hmm??..

Feeling weak, she ultimately falls into a restless sleep....

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A:Bye sumit...der ho gayi hai...nikalti hun...

Su:I am sorry anjali..main pizza ke liye nahin le gaya...

A:Nahin..nahin Sumit...its fine..wo mujhse zyaada zaruri hai na..

Su:What?...

A:I mean uski tabiyat...aise mein use akele bhi toh nahin choda jaa sakta hai...

Su:Hmm...thanks Anjali..sab kuch samajhne ke liye..

A:Oh..samajhna toh mujhe tha hi na...best of luck parson ke liye...

Su:Thanks..n same to you...

Sumit hugs her and she leaves....

Anjali:(in her mind)...Jo bhi ho Sumit.....main kumkum ko hamaare beech kahie nahin aane doongi....

sonu now i can see this anjali more she is like renuka fr me 😆 😆
good to see kk smile a bit but phir sa cryieng 😭

Hmm Sonu.... a gud one.... finally Sumit ko bhi kuch alag sa feel hone laga,... 😳 😳 This was what I was talking aboutttt 😳 😳

Gud part overall 👏 👏 👏

nice, nice, very nice
👏 👏
Sumit is starting to feel something..I like this a lot 😃 😃
sweety, I love how u write all these cute caring scenes, cant wait till the next part

so anjali finally cruella ban rahi hai.. 😆
vaise nice part dear.. 👏 👏
love the way sumit cares for kumkum.. 😳 😳
continue soon.. 😉