FF-Hadsa THE END pg-63 *24.8.08* - Page 32

Originally posted by: Shafoo

thts true poor kumkum har bar haddasa hota hai kab life good hoo giiiii for kumkum and sumitt is sooo nice person he careing person also

Sumit, indeed is very caring..lets c..wat happens next..😉

Originally posted by: nature

i just read 3 parts together... kya kaar sonu.. itna toh Kumkum TV mein bhi nahi roti 😆... bahut rula diya tune usse.. now make her smile, make her laugh... and let both sukk realise thr love for each other 😃 😃.. no more rona-dhona now plz...

btw fabb parts as usual 👏 👏...

One of the most interesting comments i have ever got..😆...par itni jaldi kyun didi?..😉

Originally posted by: preethi

mee too read 2 parts together both r just too good 👏 👏 👏
make kk smile a bit ok 😆
ya i am fr south india bt why u got that doubt?

Ok...as u wish..i got that idea frm ur hindi n style of pronunciation..for eg.-SumiTH and preTHI..😉

11:30 AM

Sumit is packing Kumkum's bag while she's sitting with her head on her study table...

Sumit:Kumkum..pen vagairah rakh diye hain...arrey..tujhe revision ke liye notes chahiye honge na?...main abhi apne room se lekar aata hun...

Kk:Nahin sumit..rehne do..main..nahin kar rahi revision...

He goes near her and lifts her face, feeling her forehead..

Su:Hmm..hai abhi 99...tujhe andar se feverish lag raha hoga na??

Kk:Nahin..theek hun...bas headache hai thoda..

Su:Kk..tu exam de payegi?..

Kk:Dena toh hoga hi..tu meri fikar mat kar..revision kar le ek baar...main painkiller le leti hun...

Su:Pehle neechey aakar breakfast kar le...

Kk:Wo pendant Anjali ka tha kya??

Su:(upset)...pata nahin kumkum...par iss waqt tum apne baarey mein socho...chalo neechey..
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In the car:

Kk:su?..kuch hua hai kya?..tum naaraz ho mujhsey?..

Su:Aisa kyun lag raha hai tumhe?..

Kk:subah se pareshaan lag rahe ho..

Su:Iski wajah tu nahin hai...

Kk:toh kya hai?..

Su:Kuch nahin..

Kk:kuch pooch sakti hun..sumthing personal?..

Su:tu kab se personal ur public mein difference karne lagi hai??...pooch..

Kk;Kal..tere room se awazein aa rahi thi...tu Anjali ko kyun daant raha tha?...kya hua hai tu dono ke beech..??...

Su:(sarcastically)...tu mere baare mein kuch pooch sakti hai....par Anjali is my fiance'...aur ye do logon ka relashionship hai...hum ek doosre ko samajhte hain..n we dont need any interruption...hamari jaasoosi ke badle agar tu aaram karti toh aaj itna fever nahin aata....

Kumkum remains silent, feling hurt...

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Sumit hands over Kumkum's bag and she moves away..

Anjali comes to Sumit and hugs him very tightly...sumit too hugs her back...He wipes her tears and takes her to a secluded corner..

After a 10-minutes chat, everything comes to normal between them..

Anjali:Toh aaj mujhe Pizza khilane le jaa rahe ho na exam ke baad...??

Sumit kisses her cheeks.."Haan..bilkul.."

Su:Par..anjali..abhi..kuch der pehle maine..kumkum se pata nahin gusse mein kya kya keh diya...

Anjali:Wo naaraz ho gayi?..

Su:Kahaan Anjali...naaraz ho to bhi theek hai..wo toh bas andar hi andar ghut ti rehti hai na...apni feeling apne andar samet leti hai...mujhe us se maafi maangani hogi..ek toh waise hi uski tabiyat kharaab hai...aur phir stress legi toh...

Anjali:Hmm..jao..

Anjali has a victorious glint in her eyes..

Kumkum is searching for her roll number on the notice board, to know her room no.A crowd is there and she's again sweaty and tired...Somehow, she manages to go near the list but a sudden push scares her..The students are getting impatient and there's a lot of pushing and pulling..

Feeling confused, she holds her head...when she feels a hand on her shoulder..

Su:Main dekhne jaa hi raha hun..tera bhi dekh lunga..itni bheed mein mat jaa..

He holds her hand firmly and takes her out of the crowd...

She waits near the stairs and Sumit comes within 10 minutes..

Su:Tera room no. 124...i think wo..2 floor par hoga..

Her eyes are moist and Sumit understands that she had been crying..

Kk:Thanks...best of luck..

Su:Kk..I am sorry...maine kya kya keh diya ...zyaada ho gaya na..gusse mein tha toh..

Kk:Please sorry keh ke mujhe sharminda mat karo sumit...ye baat tum bhi jaante ho aur main bhi...ki in haalaton mein tum mere liye bhagwaan se badhkar ho....aur tumhaari baat sahi bhi thi..i shouldn't be interrupting...its ok..

A drop of tear falls down her eyes..

Su:Tuje bura laga hai kk..aur lagega bhi..aisi baaton se..magar kumkum.main..pls ro mat...

Kk:Nahin sumit....i am not cying because tune aisa kahaa..its just my head is hurting..abhi davai li hai..i'll be fine..

Su:Chal..tere saath tera room dekh lete hain..

KK:Tu late toh nahin hoga na?..

Su:Naahin nahin..mera toh ye hi saamne wala room hai..chal...aa..

He takes her bag and water bottle from her hand and they walk to the room...He helps her with everything from finding the room to ensuring that she is seated comfortably...Finally..

Su:Bye..all the best..!!

Kk:ThankQ...same to you..

They hug each other..and Sumit leaves...

ha me first 😆
yaar now su and anjali r fine how come 😆
beechari kk do someting dont make her cry so much 😳

Good part...cd have been better wht I felt 😳

sweet part dear.. 😳
sukk ko all the best.. 😃
continue soon..

Originally posted by: preethi

ha me first 😆
yaar now su and anjali r fine how come 😆
beechari kk do someting dont make her cry so much 😳

Rone do na thodi der..😆

Originally posted by: *Resham*

Good part...cd have been better wht I felt 😳

Thanks do..for ur honest comments...but do point out the mistakes too..i mean what was lacking..😳

Originally posted by: jasmine chhabra

sweet part dear.. 😳
sukk ko all the best.. 😃
continue soon..

ThanQ jassuben

Sonu,

It was nt heartfelt...it really cd have been filled up with lots of emotions..wh. went missing 😳

Originally posted by: sumitwadhwa

One of the most interesting comments i have ever got..😆...par itni jaldi kyun didi?..😉

is it??... jaldi kahan hai.. itni der se toh roye jaa rahi hai bechari.. ab bas kar yaar 😛...

and abt d current part... i agree wid reshu.. gr8 effort 👏... bt cud've been better 😳...

well nice part sonu!!poor kk usmein khushiyan to aati hi nahin!!and su--anjali ka realtion is getting changed very jaldi jaldi. kabhi pyaar kabhi jahda. anyways continue soon and hope kk's exam go best. 😉

Gud part bachcha.... rate..... out of 10 :

Dekh u know main bohut seriously rate karti hun....

8/10 😊