FF-pyar pg149 *Romance..SIZZLING HOT..!!* - Page 73

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Posted: 17 years ago
Its Kumkum, crying and sobbing....Her face is swelled up and tears are running down her cheeks...

Kk-bas...meri medicines de do mujhe..phir pareshan nahin karungi...

Su-(sternly)tum theek ho...?

Kk-You don't need to bother...meri davaiyaan de do..please..

Su-andar aa kar le lo...

She enters the room and stands behind him, holding the wall...

Sumit hands over her medicines..and a glass of water...He's tensed to see her sobbing and crying and wants to hug her tightly...

She gulps down 3-4 medicines at a time...She has another round of tablets when she gets chocked...

Su-kya hua?..kk?..

He strokes her back and she gets better...

Kk-thankyou...

She starts to leave the room with her medicines...

Su-tum yahaan so sakti ho...main chala jaata hun neeche..

He's upset to see her crying....

Kk-uski zarurat nahin hai....tumhi ne kaha tha..isiliye..ab mujhe bhi iss treatment ko le kar tumhaara saath nahin chahiye..

Su-theek hai..jao...please bolt the door after you..

Sumit retires to bed and Kumkum, feeling hurt, leaves...
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Sumit leaves for office without even asking for Kumkum...

At 10, she is visited by Armaan...

He enters the room and finds her lying down and crying...

Armaan-di?...hi..!

She quickly wipes her tears and puts on a smile on her pale face..

Kk-hi..

Armaan-aapki tabiyat kaisi hai?...wo..aap aaye nahin hospital...meri abhi abhi shift over hui...to socha ki aapko dekh lun ek baar...

Kk-wo..Armaan meri afternoon shift thi...isiliye...

Armaan-aapki tabiyat kharab hai?....

Kk-thodi si...

Armaan-matlab zyaada kharab hai...raat ko pareshaani hui?..

Kk-hmm..raat ko..uneasiness zyaada thi...par medicines le lin..

Kk-Armaan..I am sorry...kal jo..sumit ne kiya...

Armaan-didi...rehne do..aapko kuch kehne ki zarurat nahin hai...

A tear trickled down her eyes...

Armaan-unhone aapko phir kuch kaha?..

They are interrupted by Sumit's voice...He's back to get some files...

su-madhav kaka..wo files...

He stops to see Armaan sitting with Kumkum, holding her hand....A feeling of unknown hatred enters his heart...

Su-phir aa gaye tum?..apni "patni" se milne?..Dr.Armaan Malik?.

Arman is uncomfortable at his comment....

Armaan-hi..bhaiyya...

Sumit-toh baat ho gayi Mrs.Kumkum Armaan...

Kk-Armaan....inse kaho ki ye abhi yahaan se bahar jayein aur darwaaza band kar do....

Armaan-nahin di...

Sumit is shocked too...

Kk-Armaan..do as I say...bahar nikaalo iss insaan ko...aur darwaaza lock karo...

Su-Behave yourself..

But, Kumkum gets up and pushes him out of the door...Armaan tries to stop her...

After locking the door, she breaks down into tears....Armaan hugs her...

Armaan-didi...?...nahin didi...

Kk-ye mera Sumit nahin hai...Armaaan..(crying)..ye sumit nahin tha...mera sumit aisa nahin hai...usne mujh par shaq kiya...sumit ne...

Armaan-didi?..aisa nahin hai..unhe dukh hua aapke iss faisle se...bas..

Kk-armaan...aaj tak mera har faisla uska bhi faisla hota tha....aur usne mujhe aaj tak kisi cheez ke liye mana nahin kiya...par aaj..

Armaan-didi...wo aapki tabiyat ko lekar pareshaan hain abhi...aur

Kk-pareshaan?...kal raat main yahaan soyi hun...ek baar bhi dekhne nahin aaya wo...subah jaane se pehle ek baar bhi nahin poocha ki meri tabiyat kaisi hai..aur..

She sobs and Armaan gives her water...

Armaan-didi..wo pyaar bhi toh bahut karte hain na aapse?...

Kk-par kya hamara rishta itna kamzor tha?..use mujh par bharosa nahin kiyaa....aur...Armaan..kiske liye jiyun main?....main marr jaoon toh hi behtar hoga...

Arman-no...aisa nahin kahoge aap...

Armaan hugs her...and tries to pacify her..

Armaan-didi...kuch waqt mein sab theek hoga...sumit bhaiyya aapse pyaar karte hain...

She keeps crying but soon, her sobs grow softer...Armaan moves away and finds her unconscious...!!!
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Kumkum opens her tired eyes and finds herself lying on the bed, snuggly wrapped in the warm blanket....Her eyes fall on a pink slip kept near her hand...She picks it up and it reads...

"Didi...

I am sorry to leave all of a sudden....Ghar se phone aaya tha..isiliye jaana pada...I've injected u and soon, u'll feel fine.Pls don't attempt to walk till one hour..

I've talked to Dr. Tina about it and she says that it was merely due to stress.So, you needn't worry...

Aur rahi baat bhaiyya ki, toh aap itna pareshaan mat ho...dekhna..shaam ko aayenge aur sorry bol kar aapko gale laga lenge...he loves u a lot...aur agar wo aapse treatment ki wajah se lad rahe hain toh ye lazmi hai.."

She's crying on and on...

Kk-Sumit...mujhe tumhaari zarurat hai..pls aisa mat karo mere saath...
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Kumkum is in the hospital,sitting with the kids in the hospital...

K1- Didi?...hum aaj kya khelenge?..

Kumkum is lost in her own thoughts...

K2-didi...bolo na...

Kumkum-huh?..haan..wo..kuch bhi...tum log khelo..aaj meri tabiyat kuch theek nahin hai..i'll watch u..

She sits at one corner of the room as all the children begin playing antakshari....

They are enjoying themselves while Kumkum is feeling weak and missing Sumit...

Kk-main jaanti hun mujhe aise behave nahin karna chahiye tha...par...mujhe tumhaari baaton se dhakka laga sumit...tumne socha bhi kaise ki...

She wipes her tears ...

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Sumit is in his office, feeling disturbed ...

Gaurav-(his assistant)...Sir..aur ye..Amsterdam mein conference hai..iske liye Mr.Sengupta ko bhej doon?...

Sumit-nahin..main hi jaaoonga...

Gaurav-aap?..aap toh kehte they ki aapko tours mein kam se kam invove karoon kyunki kumkum didi akeli...

Sumit-Gaurav...do as I say now...Please..aur kisi ko bhi andar mat aane dena ...jab tak main na kahun....

After Gaurav leaves, his eyes fall on Kumkum's framed photograph kept on his desk...He throws it away...

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: verni

Nahi sonu main uski baaton ki wajah se utni upset nahi jitni is baat se ki she used Armaan's name as her husband.....

Chahe Armaan uska real brother hi kyun na ho....... but this is wrong..... 😳 😳 😳

No Sumit is not wrong.... Sonu koi cheez life mein itni important nahi hoti ki aap is tarah..... no way I support Sumit.... sonu use bhi khushiyaan chahiye from his wife........ and orphanage jaana is not wrong.. usne Kumkum se chupaya so she does not feel bad not weak.... as a lady..

I support Sumit. 😳



I second u on that thought...but step into her shoes for a while...usne jab Pune tak ka safar tay kiya..uske baad she came 2 know abt the compulsion...So, she had no other option...

sumit ko bhi toh samajhna chahiye tha ki wo kabhi koi galat kaam nahin kar sakti hai....he knows her since childhood but he didnt trust her ..

Yaa...visiting orphanage isn't a bad thing either..but kk ko bura iss baat ka nahin laga...actually, wo khud se hi naaraz thi....ki uske kaaran sumit also has to crave for a kid..
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Posted: 17 years ago
No sonu........ main kabhi bhi Kumkum ka saath nahi de sakti..... 😳 😳

At least not for this.... And jaisa tumne Sumit ko shuru se dikhaya hai.... it's just he is hurt..... kyun hurt sirf Kumkum ho sakti hai..... haan she is weak and hormones and all... I agree..... but ek normal insaan bhi aisi baaton se disgusted feel karega..... Kyun Sumit hurt, disgusted, anger feel nahi kar sakta? Just bcoz he is a man..... Nooooooo

Sonu, I am a hard-core feminist..... par yahan Kumkum ko main sahi maan hi nahi sakti.... never.... 😳 😳

Your writing is quite debating for me.... bohut din baad achcha lag raha hai apna point of view itna strongly rakhna.... And I'll be with my stand.
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Posted: 17 years ago
The part was really guddd 👏 👏 👏
verni thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
We had enough debate.... tu mujhse yahoo pe mil okkk 😛 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
sonu thuna ya kya kiya 😭 😭 😭
i am to not with kk this time 😭 😭
sukk ki zagda kiya abb sort out the things
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Posted: 17 years ago
I too agree that KK is wrong this time......why every time Su only has 2 understand her & take care of her.... why can't she also understand him 4 a change.

Now Su will be very angry with her.......but please sort out this fight soon.........
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Posted: 17 years ago
hi.. 😊
oh god..itni ladai toh maine kabhi imagyn hee nahi kee thi yaar!! 😲
plz..sab kuch theek kardo... 😭 😭
jaldi jaldi... 😭 😭 😭
i knw kumkum is wrong but still she needs sumit support rite now 😊
continue soon.. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
@ Verni di-doubts cleared? 😳

@ Preeti Di-ok...as u wish.. 😆

@ Jassuben-hmm..kk needs sumit.. 😳

@ Priya di-yup...things will be better soon... 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
must say sonali u r giving jhatkaas now a dayz in ur both the ffs 😆
😆 bt m liking it..m liking it.. 😉 😆 😆

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