FF- Is Pyar Ko Kya Naam Dun*Updatd Pg122* - Page 70

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Posted: 17 years ago
Bachcha!!!! 😡 😡 itna achha romance chal raha tha beech main kyun rukwaa diya yaar?? 😛 that utensil even couldn't wait a bit longer! 😉 very nice part Verni....agle part main lots of romance ok!! 😳 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
jaldiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii..... 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
oye kaun batayega ki tune update kiya hai 😡 😡 😡 ...

vaise achha part tha 😳 👏...

main bhi kumkum se yehi poochhna chahti hoon ki kab tak voh apne jazbaat chhupayegi 😛 😆..
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Posted: 17 years ago
verni too good i am late in wishing 😆
bt very god one yaar zaaldi likh abb 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
@ sonu : bachha , am not angryyyy... sachchiiii 😳 😳

@ rahi : kya karun yaar.... aadat hai beech mein taang adane ki..... 😆 😆

@ jasmine : haan haan likhti hunnnn 😉

@ nids : arey bhool gayi thi re.... haan me too waiting 😉

@ nitz : koi baat nahi.... hmm will write soon... 😳

@ roku : hmm ma'am.... 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
Verni this is not good.............this weak u have updated only once...........continue soon........
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Posted: 17 years ago
Sorry priya and sonu.... I'll write soon.. kuch problem thi isliye...sorry. 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
take ur sweet time verni bt want super duper hot romantic scence and lambha wala to comm fr these days 😆 understood na jo may khar rahi hii 😆 😆 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
Ok..jab aapki "prob" door hogi n aap likhoge tabhie main apne 3 FF's update karungi..
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Posted: 17 years ago


Next day, Sumit is descending the stairs, when he sees Kumkum laying breakfast.

Su (thinks) : Agar maine Kumkum se kal ke baare mein koi baat ki… to.. and I think wo thodi embarrassed to hogi hi… 😳

He comes to her,

Su : Gudmorning.

Kk (without luking at him, being little conscious) : Gudmorning.

Su :Yeh kyat um taiyaar nahi hui… arey hume ghoomne jaana hai naa.. chalo pehle breakfast karle phir chalte hain… Okk.. 😊

Kumkum gives a fake smile and nods.

After having breakfast, they go out, and travel at different places, by the time, Kumkum, too, gets back to normal and enjoys the views and places. 😃 😛

Then they reach at a cliff, from where rope-way trolleys are hired to go to the other edge …

Su : Chalo isme chalte hain… isme se neeche valley bohut sundar lagti hai dekhne mein…. 😃

Kk : Kya??/ Isme…. 😕

Su : Aur kya….

Kk : Sumit… hum kisi aur transport se nahi chal sakte…. 😛 😆

Su : Kumkum… hume us point pe kuch nahi dekhna hai…. Saara mazaa to is trolley mein hi hai…. Aur tum isi mein nahi chalna chahti…. C'mon now….. 😛

Sumit enters the trolley….. and gives out his hand to her….

Su : Aao….

Kk : Nahi Sumit…. Mujhe darr lagta hai…. Plzz….. main nahi aaongiiiii… aap bhi mat jao…. 😕 😕

Su : Kumkum….. main hun naa…. Chalo aao……

Kk (shaking her head negatively) : nahi Sumit………plz….. main…. 😕 😕

The door of trolley was now being closed….

Su : Kumkum… stop it now….. chalo jaldi aao….. warna main chala jaonga…. 😡

Kk : Nahi…. Sumit…. Tum bhi mat jao…. Plzzzzz. Suno…. 😕

The door got closed and trolley started moving…. Kumkum luked at Sumit and felt that he was very disappointed and sad and gradually he was out of view now…

Kumkum was left there, she felt like crying, as she did not know anybody… The people around her luked at her as though mocking at her…. (she felt so) as she was afraid of entering the trolley. 😭

She moves away from there, now she thot how Sumit praised those ramp girls, then his disappointed face, then those people around her.

Kk : Sumit mere liye kitna karta hai…. Par main…. Main hamesha uski ummeed par khari nahi hotiii… I am so selfish. 😡

"No, u r not" 😳

She turned around… and found Sumit standing.

Kk : Sumit… tum to… 😛

Su : Hmm, trolley waapas bhi aati hain Kumkum…. Aur tum kya soch rahi ho….. ki tum selfish…. Kisne kaha tumse aisa…. Hmm…. 😳 😳

He comes near her, wipes her tears, and caresses her hair, or say, makes them proper….Kumkum keeps luking at him.. 😛 😳

Su : Aisa kuch nahi hai Kumkum…. Tum bohut achchi ho.. aur main yeh jaanta hun…. Chalo…. Ab chalein…. Kahin aur… 😳 😳

Kumkum holds his hand,

Kk : Mujhe….. mujhe trolley mein jaana hai….. 😳

Su (surprised) : Dekho Kumkum agar tum yeh isliye keh rahi ho ki mujhe bura na lage……. So don't worry am okk…. Mujhe bura nahi laga…. Aur tumhe to darr bhi lagta hai…. 😳 😳

Kk : Par tum ho naa…. Tumne kaha tha…. 😳 😉

Sumit is surprised to hear this,

Kk : Mujhe chalna hai….. chalo…. 😳

They go again, Sumit enters, Kumkum is still afraid, but when Sumit gives out his hand, so she finally holds it and enters. 😊

She is still holding his hand tightly. 😳

Su : Kumkum, aao naa…. Neeche dekhte hain.

Kk : Na baba….. main isme aa gayi.. bas…. Main neeche nahi dekhungiii.. 😆 😆

Su : Arey… jab yahan aa hi gayi… to dekho naa… achcha lagega…. 😛

He takes her near the window… she luks down slowly…. For some time she keeps luking down… then is frightened… so she turns at her place…. And holds Sumit arms. Closing her eyes…. 😳 😳 Sumit is standing infront of her…. And luking at her innocent beauty…. He comes closer to her and is abt to kiss her, but then moves away… 😳 😳

Su : Main is tarah… nahi…. Kumkum ko bura lag sakta hai…. 😳

They finally come out of it, and leave for home.

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Next day the weather wasn't that gud, so they didn't go out,

That evening,

Sumit was making fire, and Kumkum was sitting near it,

Then Sumit too sits on a chair and begins talking,

Su : Ab zyaada thand to nahi lag rahi naa? 😳

Kk : nahi… Maine aisi thand kabhi nahi dekhi…. Na Mumbai mein…. Na … 😳

She stops.

Su : Na??

Kk : Wo…. Main… main Punjab mein… 😳

Su : Ohh tum Punjab gayi thi kabhi….. haan wahan bhi itni thand nahi hoti.. 😛

They are quiet again.

Su : Achcha Kumkum… Tum kitne saal ki ho?

Kk : Sumit…. Aap ek ladki se uski umr pooch rahe hain? 😆 😉

Su : Haan…. Kyun mujhse badi ho? 😉 😆

Kk : Sumittt…. Main aapse.. 3 saal choti hun…. 😳

Su : Hmm…. To itne saalon mein tumhe kabhi kisi se pyaar nahi hua? 😉

Kumkum is surprised…. she doesn't answer.

Su : Kya hua batao naa?

Kumkum gets up and goes out in balcony….

Sumit follows her,

Su : Kya hua jawaab nahi diya? 😉

Kk : Sumit…. Agar yehi baatein karni hai to main jaa rahi hun apne room mein. 😳 😳

She says luking at him, he doesn't reply, but keeps luking at her, she feels as though he is reading her face….. so she leaves.

Su : Bohut mushkil hai Kumkum…. main khud ko zyaada din tumse door nahi rakh paonga… aur na tum khud ko mujhse … 😉

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