FF- Is Pyar Ko Kya Naam Dun*Updatd Pg122* - Page 47

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Posted: 17 years ago
Here's the update:

Next day, it's morning, Sumit comes down for breakfast. He sits and opens the newspaper. Then somebody serves him, he luks at the person, it was not Kumkum. 😕

Su : Tum? Kumkum kahan hai?

Girl : Jee wo to chali gayi.

Su (stands up) : Kya? Chali gayi????? Par kahan? 😕

Girl : Shoot pe.

Su : Achcha. (thinks) … Shaayad koi zaruri kaam hoga… main hi hamesha late ho jaata hun. 😳 😆

Sumit leaves without breakfast.

He goes out and sees the driver.

Su : Tum yahan? To phir Kumkum ko chodne kaun gaya hai? 😕

Dri : Jee, wo to taxi se gayi hain.

Su : What? 😕

Dri : Jee, maine kaha bhi par wo nahi maani aur chali gayi.

Su (thinks) : Kumkum aise kyun?... Hmm.. Shaayad use laga hoga ki agar wo driver le jaayegi to mujhe kud drive karna padega…. Kitna khyaal hai use mera. 😳 😳

He leaves for the shoot.

Sumit reaches there and sees Kumkum discussing something with the director. He goes and sits beside her. Kumkum did not even luk at him. He felt little awkward about her behaviour. 😕 😕

Dir : Sumit, I must say that Kumkum is too smart……. Ab dekho usne tumhari saari dates ki problems kitni aasani se solve kar di. 😛 😛

Sumit smiles, he is about to say something , when Kumkum speaks.

Kk : Sir, Yeh mera job hai. To itna to aata hi hai mujhe. 😳

Sumit is surprised at her answer, and hurt too. But he did not respond.

Dir : achcha theek hai Sumit, 10 more minutes and the shot will be ready. 😛

Sumit nods. The director leaves, Kumkum opens her laptop.

Su : Kumkum, tum itni jaldi kyun aa gayi? Abhi to shot bhi nahi ready hai. Mujhe laga main hi late ho gaya hun. 😛

Kk (working at her laptop) : Sumit, maine aapse tojaldi aane ko nahi kaha tha, mujhe kaam tha main aa gayi. 😕

Su : Yeah….. tumhe kaam tha. Par tum car se bhi to aa sakti thi. 😳

Kk (luking at him without expressions) : Sumit jahan tak mujhe yaad hai mere paas koi car nahi hai. 😕

Sumit is shocked to hear this. Kumkum returns to her work. Sumit is called for the shot. He luks at Kumkum again, and goes away.

When Sumit had gone, Kumkum luks at that side.

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Pr : What??? Kumkum ne yeh kaha…..

Su : Haan, Prachi mujhe to kuch samajh nahi aa raha…… Aakhir aisa kya ho gaya ki…. Ki Kumkum ko aise..

So : Sumit tu pareshaan mat ho…….. Hum dono hain naa….

Pr : Haan Sumit hum hain naa….. Tum bas yeh batao…. Ki kya Kumkum aur tumhare beech aisi koi baat hui …..I mean anything unusual. 😕

Su : I don't know……. Bas kuch dino se she is not herself. I mean kuch khinchi khinchi si rehti hai….

Pr : I think wo tumse kuch chupa rahi hai……. Par kya?

So : Prachi yeh bhi to ho sakta hai ki koi baat use pareshaan kar rahi ho……. Becoz she luves Sumit and I m damn sure of it. 😃 😃

Pr : Arey yeh to mujhe bhi pata hai that she luves Sumit……. Uski aankhon mein saaf saaf hai…. Sumit ho sakta wo khud ko tumhare laayak na samjhti ho…. U know…. 😳 😳

Su : Par wo aisa kyun Soc. rahi hai?... maine to kabhi bhi use aisa kuch ehsaas tak nahi hone diya.

So : Yaar tu nahi in ladkiyon ko…. Yeh kabhi bhi koi bhi baat ko lekar pareshaan ho sakti hain…. 😆 😆 😆

Pr : Very funny….. Tumne to ladkiyon pe PhD. ki hai naa? 😆 😆 Sumit seriously I think she is feeling odd for some such reason only……. 😳

Su : Par Prachi jab tak wo mujhse aisi koi baat nahi karti tab tak main usse kya kahun?

So : I know……. Tu ab waisa kar jaisa main kehta hun…..

Pr : Matlab?

So : Sumit jab maine Kumkum ki madad kit hi naa….. tujhe dadi keg am se bahar nikalne men….. tab Kumkum ne mujhse ek baat kahi thi…….. 😳

******** FlashBack*********

So : Par Kumkum Sumit ke saamne wahi cheezen dohra ke kya hoga?

Kk : Soumy, pata hai….. jab hum kisi cheez se pyaar karte hain naa….. to kabhi kabhi hum usi cheez se door bhaagte hain ki kahin kisi aur ko hamare dil ki baat na pata chale……. Par agar hum us insaan ke saamne wo cheezen laate rahen…. Aur use pata bhi na chalne de to uske dil ki baat zuban pea a jaayegi….. 😳 😉

*******FlashBack ends********

Su : Par main kuch samjha nahi….. 😆

So : Us waqt main bhi nahi samjha tha……. Par jab Kumkum ne tere saath wahi kiya……. Tab samajh aaya……. Tu chinta mat kar bas wo kar jo hum kehte hain. OKK….. But remember U'll have to be tough. 😳 😳

Sumit shrugs his shoulders.

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Next day, Kumkum goes to kitchen,

Kk : Urmi, tune naashte ki taiyaari kar di? Do main bana dun…

Ur : Par didi, Sir to chale gaye shoot pe. 😳

Kk : Chale gaye….. Subah 7 baje? 😕

Ur : Haan, naashta bhi kar gaye.

Kumkum is surprised.

Kk (thinks) : Shaayad unhe mera kal ka behaviour achcha nahi laga…. Par main yahi to chahti thi ki wo mere bina rehne lage….. to ab mujhe bura kyun lag raha hai? 😕

She too leaves.

At the shoot, Kumkum , reaches, and sees Sumit shooting. She goes and sits at a place.

Sumit comes after sometime.

Su : Gudmorning.

Kk (thinks) : Inka mood to theek lag raha hai? 😕

Su : Hey…. Kya hua?

Kk : nahi kuch nahi…. Aaj koi zaruri kaam tha? 😳

Su : Yup, aaj jaldi ki shoot thi…

Kk : Par aapne mujhe nahi bataya.

Su : tum bhool rahi ho ki roz raat ko tum mujhse agle din ke baare men confirm karti thi…. Aur kal tumne mujhse koi baat nahi ki. 😛 😳

Kk : Ohh…. I m sorry.

Su : it's okk.

Kk : aaj ke schedule mein aur koi change.

Su : nahi…. Ab raat mein kal ka confirm hoga.

Kumkum opens her laptop and starts working, Sumit leaves from there.

Kk : Yeh sab itna ajeeb kyun lag raha hai?....... Sumit ki yeh formality main kab tak bardaasht kar paongi?...Ya Rab… taakat de. 😭 😭

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It's 7:00 p.m. Sumit comes to Kumkum,

Su : Kumkum aaj ek party hai, hum dono ko bulaya hai. So chalogi?

Kk : Ermm ……. Mera jaana zaruri hai? 😕

Su : Nahi…. 😳

Kk (surprised to hear Sumit's answer) : To main nahi jaati.

Su : Lemme Complete. Yeh party Soumy ne throw ki hai….. ab tum decide kar lo ki tumhe jaana hai ya nahi? 😳

Kk (thinks for a while) : Theek hai.

Su : To I hope tumhe meri car se chalne mein koi problem nahi hogi….. I mean that ego problem. 😳

Kumkum is very hurt. She goes away from there.

When she goes ,

Su : Mujhse nahi hoga…. Main Kumkum ko bohut hurt kar raha hun. I can't. 😭

So : Sumit, jab to tootegi nahi, wo apne dil ki baat zuban tak nahi laa paayegi……. Aur aise wo bhi khush nahi rahegi….. samjhe tum. 😳 😳

Su : Par……

So : Trust me……. Kuch nahi hoga.

But Sumit is very hurt….
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Posted: 17 years ago
That was truly a fantastic part di..Just loved every sentence...Now continue the next part soon...
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Posted: 17 years ago
verni di..aapko aise compensational punishments roz milne chahiye...It was superb..i too think like Sumit..ye sab kab theek hoga??... 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
very nice Verni....bechara Sumit 😭 hope everything's sorted out soon & KK tells him the truth....
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Posted: 17 years ago
nice verni i liked su behaviour to kk 😛 .
me too late like su😆 😆.
abb agla part isa bhi lambhi samjhi 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
@ Rokaiya : thanks bachchaaa...will cont soon 😃 😃

@ Sonu : Ya ab to tu hi mujhe punishmesnt degi naa 😆 😆 😆

@ Rahi : actually rahi..... me to hope the same 😉 😉

@ Nitz : Ay hello.... main typewriter hun kya.....itna lamba part likha tab u want moreeee 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
Now it's become a routine to tell u every time that the part was superb, mindblowing....

But u r writeing after so many days & that too no romantic scenes betwee Sukk.........now please write something special in the party.........
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Posted: 17 years ago
@ Priya : Thanks Priya....... I will surely fulfill ur wish.... actually kuch naya track laane ke liye fillers to daalne padte hain naa 😳 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey verni nice part.hmmm continue soon but still u r to tell me in detail about interview and all! mein choodungi nahin 😉 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
Sumit was waiting for Kumkum, downstairs. Then he notices her coming, he turns and is mesmerized by her innocent beauty. 😳 😳 She wore a brown coloured saree and her hair were open. She slowly descends the stairs and comes and stands near him.

Kk : I m sorry, zyaada der lag gayi. 😳

Su (luking other side) : It's okk. Chalein?

Kumkum nods. They move to the party.

On reaching the party, Soumy comes and greets them.

Sumit and Soumy hug each other.

So : Hey Kumkum…. U r luking very beautiful. 😛

Kk (smiles) : Thanku. Ermm….. Soumy…. Yeh party kis liye hai? 😳 😕

So (smiles and luks at Sumit) : Tumhe abhi tak nahi pata? 😆 😆 😉

Kumkum shakes her head and luks at Sumit.

Kk : Kya hua? Kisliye hai yeh party? 😕

Till then she sees Prachi… who was wearing a blue coloured lehnga. She comes near them.

Kk : Wow Prachi, tu lehnge mein bohut achchi lag rahi hai. Kuch special? 😳

Prachi blushes and luks at Soumy and Sumit.

Kumkum again luks at them.

Kk : Kya baat hai? Tum log kya chupa rahe ho mujhse?

So : Main batata hun…… (He keeps his hand around Prachi's shoulder) aaj main aur Prachi officially engage hone jaa rahe hain. 😉 😛

Kk (shocked) : What?? Eng….. Engaged????(after a pause) Par achanak….????

So : Achanak…..???? yaar 2 saal achanak to nahi hota? 😆 😆

Kk : Do saal….. (she luks at Sumit) Aap jaante the… aur aapne mujhe batana bhi zaruri nahi samjha? 😕

Su : Kyun kya tum mujhe har baat batana zaruri samjhti ho? 😕

Kumkum is speechless….. she luks at Prachi and changes the topic.

Kk : Achcha Prachi tu mujhe apne parivaar se nahi milvaayegi? 😛

Pr : Sure….. Chal naa…. And am sorry…. Ki maine tujhe nahi bataya… 😳

Kk (smiles) : It's okk.

Kumkum and Prachi go.

In the party, Sumit keeps glancing at Kumkum. Soumy was with him. Till then Soumy goes and orders for some light songs…

The song plays…..

"Kehne ko jashn-e-bahara hai,
Ishq yeh dekh ke hairaan hai,
Phool se khushboo, khafa khafa,
Hai gulshan mein."

Sumit luks at Kumkum with pain.

"Chupa hai, koi,
Ranz fiza ki chilman mein,"

Kumkum's eyes fall on Sumit.

"Saare sehme nazare hain,"

Sumit luks other side, with moist eyes.

"Soye soye waqt ke dhaare hain,"

Kumkum luks down.

"Aur dil mein khoyi khoyi si baatein hain.

Hoooooooo"

"Kaise kahen kya hai sitam,
Sochte hain ab yeh hum,
Koi kaise kahe wo hain ya nahi hamare."

Kumkum is walking and Sumit is also walking parallel.

"Karte to hain saath safar,
Faasle hain fir bhi magar,
Jaise milte nahi kisi dariya ke do kinare."

Sumit and Kumkum luk at each other and turn the opposite side.

"Mil ke bhi hum milte nahi,
Khil ke bhi gul khilte nahi,
Sheeshe ki ek deewar hai jaise darmiyan."

Sumit wipes his tears.

"Saare sehme nazare hain,
Soye soye waqt ke dhaare hain,
Aur dil mein khoyi khoyi si baatein hain….. Hooooo"

Sumit remembers the time when Kumkum danced with him on " Mere rang mein rangne waali" and the time when, Kumkumtook care of him and when he showered luv on her in the mall.

"Humne jot ha nagma suna,
Dil net ha usko buna,
Yeh daastan hume waqt ne kaisi sunayiiiiii."

He luks at Kumkum, who was also standing sad.

"Hum jo agar hain gamgeen,
Wo bhi udhar khush to nahi,
Mulaqaaton mein jaise ghul si gayi tanhaiiiiii."

Saath hain phir bhi saath nahi,
Hum ko yeh gam raas nahi,
Aankhon mein hain baaharen dil mein qiza." 😳

Sumit moves out ….. and the song continues.

He goes outside the party place and stands in loneliness. Kumkum comes to him.

Kk : Kya hua Sumit? Aap achanak yahan kyun…..

Su (turns towards her in anger) : Tumhe kya?..... Main kuch bhi karun….. kahin bhi jaonnn…. Tum kaun hoti hai mujhse kuch bhi poochne waali…. Hunhhhh??? 😡 😡

Kk (shocked) : Sumit aap aise kyun bol ….

Sumit holds her by her arms…. Tightlyyyyy.

Su : Kya bol raha hun? Hunhhh….. kuch galat bola maine???? Jawaab doooo. 😡 😡

Kk ( in tears) : sumit mujhe dard ho raha hai. 😭 😭

Su : Main bhi patthar ka nahin hun….. (In tears) Mujhe bhi dard hota hai. 😭

Kk : Sumit…..

Su : nahin ……. Chuppppppp…….. aaj sirf main bolungaaaa….. 😡 😡 😡

Kk : Lekin….

Sumit pulls her closer. They were very close to each other. They keep luking at each other, tears rolling down their cheeks, they can feel each others' breath……. So close they were. 😳 😳 😳

Su : Kya hua hai Kumkum ? Batao mujhe?

Kumkum keeps crying , luking at him. 😭

Su : Please batao……. Kumkum kaho mujhse…. Sab kuch jo bhi kehna hai tumhe……. Please. 😭 😭 😳

Kk : Su….. Sumit….. main…. 😭 😭

Till then somebody calls Sumit.

They turn towards that side. Kumkum luks at Sumit and realizes what was she doing….. she runs away from there. 😭 😭

Su : Kumkum…..Kumkum listen to me…….

But she had gone.

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