FF- Is Pyar Ko Kya Naam Dun*Updatd Pg122* - Page 27

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Posted: 17 years ago
Oye rahi...tu Verni se Verniji pe kaise aa gayi??? 😉 😆 .....

chalo achcha hai that u started liking ffs ....thanks 😳 ....

luv u 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey Priya,

Thanku so much for your comments 😊 😊 .....Its gud to hear from u ppl when u adore any writer.....not only me ....anyone. 😳 😳

And I will try my best to update more often but these days I m too busy...My practicals are beginning and xams will be starting and also I'll be attending Interviews for college admissions..... 😳 😳 .....Still I'll try to update regularly.....but can't promise 😳 😳

I hope u understand. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey verni di..I'm Rokaiya and new in this ff.I've read the ff 4m first.It's gr8,awsome,mindblowing didi.Now i'm waiting 4 the next part. Continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
thanku Rokaiya.......will be posting soon 😳 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
At night, Sumit returns and after changing sita at the table for dinner. Kumkum seves him food and then she gives him "Halwa", Sumit had one spoon and luked at her.

Kumkum (a lil nervous) : Kya hua sir? Achcha nahi hai? 😕 😕

Sumit (shaking his head) : naa…..(after a pause) bohut achcha hai (and smiles) 😳 😳 😃

After having it, Sumit starts leaving, then Kumkum says,

Kk : sir, ek baat poochun?

Su (turns) : haan bolo.

Kk : wo…aap Mary aunty ko naam se kyun bulate hain?....mera matlab…wo aapse kaafi badi hain naa…to.. 😳 😳

Su : ermmm…..pata nahin,..I mean main hamesha se hi unhe aise hi bulata aaya hun….to yehi…..I mean maine kabhi is baare mein socha nahi. Kyun? 😕

Kk : Nahi, mujhe lagta hai ki shaayad agar aap unhe aunty kahenge to unhe achcha lagega, apnapan sa lagega. 😳 😳

Saying this , she leaves, Sumit is left thinking.

In the evening, Mary comes to Sumit,

Mary : Sumit Sir, main ab jaa rahi hun…

Kumkum was there, she hears and asks at once,

Kk : abhi, kyun aunty?.....itni jaldi.

Kumkum had been attached to her in these few days. Sumit luks at Kumkum and then at Mary,

Su : haan itni jaldi kyun? 😕

Mary : jaldi kahan sir, Kumkum bhi sab seekh gayi hai and jaana to hai hi. 😭 😭

Kumkum comes near her and hugs her, she was in tears. 😭 😭

Mary : No my child rote nahin (she kisses her forehead).

Sumit saw this and felt like going and wiping Kumkum's tears. 😳 😳

Su (thinks) : yeh main kya soch raha hun? 😆 😆

He goes to Mary,

Su : aate rehna, …….(after a pause) aunty. 😃 😃

Mary hears this and is very happy, she hugs him. Sumit , while hugging, luks at Kumkum, who was wiping her tears. 😉 😉

Then Mary leaves. After she had gone, sumit felt that Kumkum felt lonely, but he couldn't remain at home always, and he also hesitated a little in talking to her. 😳

One morning, Soumy comes, seeming quite tense.

Sumit : Hey kya hua?

So : arey yaar, meri didi aayi hui hain, ab wo aur ghar ke baaki log gay eek function mein, aur didi apne bachchon ko chod gayi mere liye. Ab mujhe shoot par jaana hai, zaruuri hai, to unhe bhi le jaa raha hun, though, I don't know how will I handle them? 😆 😆 😆

Sumit : C'mon yaar, bachche hain…..zyaada problem nahi hogi. 😉

So : bachche………tu unhe jaanta nahi, wo kya kya kar sakte hain, tujhe idea nahi hai. 😆 😆

Kumkum heard this, so she interferes,

Kk : ermmm, agar aap log bura na mane to main kuch kahun? 😳

Su : haan kaho naa…….

Kk : bachchon ko mere paas chod dijiye, main sambhal lungi. 😛 😛

Su : gud idea, waise bhi Kumkum bohut akela feel kar rahi hai, kam se kam aaj ke din to enjoy karegi. 😉 😳 😳

So : tum sambhal paogi unhe? 😕 😕

Kk : shaitaan hai naa?....tab to unhe mujhse behtar koi nahi sambhal sakta…main unse kam nahi hun. 😆 😆 😉

Sumit and Soumy luk at her.

So : theek hai, tumhari marzi. Main bhejta hun unhe. 😕

They both start going, when Soumy turns and says,

So : All the best, kumkum.
😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
What a beautiful story it is turning out to be.........loved it .......
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Posted: 17 years ago
Kumkum goes out to call the kids but sees noone. 😕

Kk : arey, Sumit aur Soumy to jaa chuke hain, to bachche kahan hain?
😕 😕
She starts searching them, in garden area, when a cockroach falls on her, she jumps out of fear. 😆 😆 When she closely examines it,

Kk : yeh to nakli hai, par kisne pheka? 😆 😆 😆

She keeps luking all around, walking, when her leg entangles in a string and she falls, 😆 😆

Kk : ouchhhh…..ahhh…….yeh..yeh dhaaga….yeh yahan kaise aaya?.....yeh…….ek min….(something strikes her mind)….kahin yeh bachche to?.....(she gets up).achcha bachchu…kumkum se panga…..abhi batati hun. 😆

She thinks of something , then quietly goes inside. Then 2 kids comeout, a boy of 8-9 years, and a girl of 6-7 years.

Girl : bhaiya, no reaction, ab……..andar kaise jaayenge? 😆 😆

Boy : haan, isne to kuch kaha hi nahi…chalo dekhte hain. 😆 😆

They go and knock the door, the door opens on its own. They enter when a snake falls on them, they shout in horror. Then they it's nothing but a plant bush. 😉 😉

They look around and start walking, when they gaet disbalanced due to some small balls and fall on a mattress. They get up and turn only to find Kumkum standing with her arms crossed. 😆 😆 😆

Kk : Hii, kaisa laga mera surprise?....Tit-for-Tat. 😆 😆 😉

The kids are a little afraid.

Kk : nahi nahi, mujhse darne ki zarurat nahi hai, main tab tak kuch nahi karungi, jab tak tum log kuch nahi karte. Okay? 😳 😳 😉

The kids quietly go and sit on the sofa, luking down. Kumkum goes and switches on the T.V. , and puts cartoon channel. Then she goes inside. The kids start watching it.

After sometime, she comes out and says,

Kk : tum logon ko bhook lagi hogi, kya laon? 😛 😛

They didn't reply.

Kk : theek hai, phir jo chocolates fridge mein rakhi hain, wo bekaar jaayengi, khair , koi baat nahi. 😉 😆 😆

And she goes away. Then the kids luk at each other.

Kids : Chocolates….. 😃 😃 😃

They quietly get up and move towards the kitchen and open the fridge, when they hear a voice,

"Ehem……..Ehem…." 😆 😆

They turn to see Kumkum standing, She goes and sits in between them, and takes out the chocolates,

Kk : ye lo, tumhare liye hi hain..lo. 😛 😛

They take the chocolates.

Kumkum : ab bhi baat nahi karoge? 😳 😳

They luk at each other and then at Kumkum and smile,

Boy : Mera naam Sharman hai. 😊

Girl : Mera naam Aashka hai. 😊

Kumkum : aur mera naam Kumkum hai. 😊

They shake hands. And then Kumkum keeps enjoying with them the whole day, playing video games, eating, laughing, kumkum telling stories to them and so on. 😃 😃 😃

It's night, sumit and Soumy return.

So : yaar, yeh itni shaanti kyun hai? 😆 😆 😕

Sumit : haan, bachche to theek hai naa? 😕

So : nahi, bachche nahi, Kumkum to theek hai naa? 😆 😆

Sumit : shut up, andar chal.

Soumy : ghar ka saara saaman to hai 😆 😆

Sumit : Soumyyyyy. 😡

Then a maid comes.

Sumit : Suno, Kumkum aur bachche kahan hain?

Maaid : Jee sir, wo didi ke kamre mein hain.

Sumit : okk.

So : Didi ???

Sumit : Kumkum.

So : Ohh..chal.

They go to her room (After Mary had gone, Kumkum lives in her room ).

Sumit opens the door and sees …..

Children are sleeping and Kumkum is lying beside them, luking at them. 😳 😳

Sumit : Kumkum.

Kumkum sees them and goes to them.

Kk : jee, wo bachche so gaye the, thak gaye the naa….khelte khelte…tabhi…. 😛 😳

Soumy (still in shock) : Kumkum, tum theek ho? 😆 😆 😆

Kk : jee…..haan.

Sumit : Stop it, Soumy.

So : achcha, okk….ab mujhe inhe ghar le jaana hai. 😊

Soumy goes to pick them when his phone rings,

So : Sumit, plz inhe gaadi tak le aa….plz. 😛

Sumit : okk.

Sumit picks sharman and kumkum picks aashka. 😃 😉

They luk at each other. And then move.
😳 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
Thanku Priya and Rokaiya....thanks for the comments. 😊 😊

bas do episodes aur phir u can have my.....or say......

Your.... "Valentine Special". 😳 😳

thanks again 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesum verni 👏 👏 simply fantastic
loved soumy's dialogues 😆 😆
btw madam..valentine's day chala gaya hai but ur valentine special scene abhi tak nahin aya
not fair 😆 😆
kisi ko aise wait karwana is not goood 😉 😆
ok continue sooon ok..tc
n do inform me when u'll update 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
Double dose bt valentine is missing verni 😆 ...

Chal no probs..fabulous part..loved it 😃

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