pyrasa bandhan updated pg40 on 06.02.07 - Page 10

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Posted: 18 years ago
#91
good but why so small
continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#92
Nice, par aaj bahot kam update karte ho aur intezaar bhi zyada karvate ho, please, write soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#93
hi good but ot was too short.plz continue soon.
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#94
funny and nice part continue soon and write more. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#95
when are you going to write more plz update soon if you get chance
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Sharman and sumit reach kumkum's place.The whole house is decorated with flowers.Rohit is instructing the workers and is very panicky...Su and sharman go to him
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Su-pranam bhaiyya...

ro-haan....tum phool wahan...Sumit...tum aa gaye...

Su-haan...kya hua ...aap pareshaan kyun ho rahe ho.?

Ro-dekho na...pooja shuru hone wali hai...aur tayyari poori hi nahin hui....

Sh-arrey...aisi kya baat hai....hum aa gaye hain na....aap bas dekho sab kaam kaise fatafat nipatega....kyun bhai?

Su-correct....bas ab tension mat lo aap...we'll arrange it all...

Ro-yaar su...sab mehmaan bhi aane shuru ho gaye aur...

Su-to jao na aap...jaldi jao....yahaan ka kaam hum sambhalte hain......

Ro-ok.....

Rohit goes to attend the guests.Sharman helps the florists in decorating the flowers....Meanwhile Anjali comes...

Anjali-Sumit aa gaya....sumit...sumit.....pls jaldis se meri madat kar do.....ye idhar alpana mein kaun sa rang daloon...?

(she's making an alpna)

Su-erm...bhaibhi....yahaan aapne yellow liya hai....to yahaan....erm....red...haan red dalo....

Anjali-excellent...mera to dimag hi kaam karna band ho gaya hai.....arrey par blue...wo to kk ke paas hai...su...pls.pls.pls. ek kaam kar doge mera...i m sorry par pls.....?

Su-itna sorry bologe...to der lag jayegi....bolo na bhaibhi?

Anj-kk ....wahaan pooja mein rangoli bana rahi hai...pls us se blue colour le aao....

Su-pooja?....

An-woh....straight se third room....

Su-ok.....

He goes to the pooja room...Kumkum is busy in hanging a bandanvaar above the internal door inside the pooda....She stands on a stool...but is unable to reach there ...so she stande on her toes...but gets disbalanced.....and falls...........
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(obviously 😆 )when sumit catches her.....She closes her eyes in fright and screams.....Sumit, lost for sometime,.....stares at her, holding her in arms.......
Sumit kumkum ki aankhon ke...balki uske hi jadoo mein kho jaata hai.....bas ektak...uski hi or dekhta hai.....he himself doesnt know...Why? Kumkum opens her eyes and gets lost in sumit's eyes.....Suddenly both of them remember .....Sumit lets her get down......

KK-su...tum kab aye?

Su-jab tum girne waali thi....

They laugh....

Kk-Ek dost hone ha ek aur faida....mujhe girne se bacha liya....

Su-bilkul....achha kk...bhabhi blue colour maang rahi thin....

Kk-haan ek minute.....

She gives him a packet....

Kk-su meri rangoli nahin dekhoge?

Su-tumne dikhayi hi nahin....

Kk-(holds his hand) aao.....

Su is escatic by her approach....

Su-wow....

Its a beautiful ganesha rangoli....

Kk-thik hai...

Su-nahin....bahut aachhi hai.....par ek minute....ye tumne apna kya haal bana rakha hai?...

He looks at her dress....its multicoloured with rangoli colours.....

Kk-wo rangoli banane mein kapde gande ho gaye...bas change karne hi jaa rahi thi...wo bandanvar...

Su-ruko...tum dobara gir jaogi...main lagata hoon...he stands on the stool and sets the bandanvaar...

Su-kk...ab thik hai....

Kk-nahin ...thoda left ....

Su-ab....

Kk-woh beech wala gir raha hai....

Su-offo...ab...

Kk-perfect....

he gets down.

Su-ab main bhagta hoon...bhabhi ka blue colour dena hai...nahin to bhabhi mujhe hi blue-black kar dengi....

he leaves...

Kk-unable to control her laughter-paagal....chal kk tayyar ho ja.....
She goes to her room....

After sometime, sharman, sumit,anjali and rohit are oustide.pratha is in sumit's arms.Kumkum gets down from her room and everyone is shocked........
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Kumkum is draped in a red sari...looking stunning.....
Sumit is not able to blink her eyes ....and move them off her...kk comes down....looking a little confused.....

Kk-kya bhabhi....saari pehenane ko kyun bola aapne.....mujhse nahin sambhala laata...

An-(takes kaajal from her eyes and puts it on er forehead)..nazar na lage....bahut sundar lag rahi hai...

Everyone complements her....Then rohit remembers...

Ro-arrey...panditji to lene bhi to jaana hai na...nahin to der ho jayegi...kk tu chalegi....?chal jaldi se chalte hain....

Kk-main...(looking at her saari)...bhaiyya sorry...main kahin nahin jane wali...aap bhabhi ko hi le jao....

An-thik hai ...jaldi chalo......

They leave.
su-kk kuch aur kaam hai kya?......

Kk-mere khayal se nahin...par check kar lete hain...

Sh-ok...didi...main bahar dekhta hoon...

KK-ok...main kitchen check karti hoon...

Su-ok...main bhi jaata hoon....

They get to their decided respective places and get engaged in some work or other.....After half an hour the meet again......

su-kk bhaiyya..nahin aaye?...mandir to paas mein hai na....

Kk-haan....mujhe bhi fikr ho rahi hai....aur itne guests aa gaye hain...pooja bhi start karni thi na....

sh-didi...main phone karoon?

Kk-haan sh pla...ye mere phone se kar lo.....

But the phone is engaged....

Kk-shaayad raate mein ho?.....

But they don't reach even after another hour.....

Kk is pacing up and down her room...

Su-kk relax....shaayad pandit ji ko der ho gayi ho aane mein?....

Kk-su...pata nahin...mujhe ajeeb sa lag raha hai.....

Sh-did...tension nahin lene ka....bhaiyya bhabhi aate honge....

Pr-bua....mummy kyun nahin aayin..?

Su-(takes her in arms)...beta mumma aa rahi hain.....

Suddenly the phone rings.....Kumkum recieves the phone...

Kk-kya...?

She's shell shocked....
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Posted: 18 years ago
#97
gr8888888 very nice dear 👏
waiting for the next part
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Posted: 18 years ago
#98
Mere khayal se accident ho gaya hoga, magar it's outstanding, please, continue, aap bahot der karte ho update karne me zara jaldi karo.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ok guys here goes the next part:

Kumkum is schocked.....she's in a hysterical state and drops the reciever and sits down on the sofa...Sumit and Sharman are confused....

Sumit-kumkum....kumkum....kya hua?...kiska phone tha?...bolo na..?

Kumkum-bhaiyya....bhabhi....main......

sharman-didi....bhaiyya ka phone tha kya...?

Kumkum(in tears)-bhaiyya....woh.....

Sumit-kumkum....tum ro kyun rahi ho....?kumkum.....kya hua...bolo na...

kumkum-bhiyya ka accident ho gaya hai......(she breaks down into tears)....

Sumit-kya......?

Kumkum falls down on the floor and cries...aansoo behte hi jaa rahe hain....She's hysterical....

Sumit bhi uske paas neeche baith jata hai...aur use sambhalne ki koshish karta hai....

Sumit-kumkum ....sab thik ho jayega....tum ro mat...kumkum ye waqt rone ka nahin hai...humein bhaiyya bhabhi ke paas jaana hoga...accha ye batao...wo kahaan hain....

Kumkum-city hospital mein.....

Sumit-ok...chalo...hum jaa rahe hain...(wipes her tears)...aao....

They rush to the city hospital......

At the reception:

Sumit-kumkum...main abhi poochta hoon...

Sumit-mr. rohit sharma aur mrs. anjali sharma....yahaan aaye hain...unka accident hua hai....

Receptionist-woh...room no.22 mein hain....

Sumit-thanx......

He turns to kumkum, who is in tears and in very nervous and tensed....

Sumit-room no.22......chalo.....

As he turns to go to the room, kumkum holds his hand....
Sumit understands her condition...he holds it more tightly,...

Sumit-ghabrao mat...sab thik hi hoga.....hum hain na ....tumhe pareshaan hone ki zarurat nahi hai.......aao...

Kumkum gets a feeling of warmth and security from his touch....They move on to room no.22......

In the room-

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Posted: 18 years ago
superb.
now make sukk tog waiting for tht 😛 👏

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