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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Henna042


<FONT face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size=2>Thanks Preethi!


<FONT face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size=2>per tujhe kya zaroorat haipresent ki...tu toh khud hi itni pyaari gift hai...😉


<FONT face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size=2>jus like a teddy as Verni said! 😃


well henna thanks a lot 😳 😳 😃 .
i am waiting for the doose 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago

Later on that evening…kk is in her room getting ready to go to sleep 🥱 …its really dark outside and the whole house is quiet…she closes her eyes…suddenly 😲 the pictures from the horror movies flash in front of her…scared she sits up…

Kk: (breathing deeply) nahi 😕…kk plz movie keh bare mein mutt soch…

She sits there trying to contain her thoughts and also get a control over her breathing…suddenly she hears something…😕

Kk: (screams) 😵

Quickly puts her hands on her mouth to stop herself 🤔… in a hurry she ons the light she looks around the room but doesn't see nething…she thinks it was just her imagination 😳…still really scared she picks her fone up 2 call su…🤔

Its almost 12 am but she doesn't care…😡

Kk: uski wajah se to yeh sub ho raha hai…😡(shaking) daara diya…

The phone rings and she waits for su to pick up…

Su on the other hand is in dreamland thinking of kk obviously 😆 and how close she was sitting to him in the cinema and how scared she got…his phone rings…still in mid sleep he picks the phone up…😊

Kk: (whispers) sumit 🤔(trying to be quite so that no1 at home hears)

Su:…mmm 🥱

Kk: (a lil louder) sumit 😳

Su: (dreamily) kumkum… 😊

Kk: (shouts) sumit 😡

Su: (that woke him up a lil) 😲

Su: oh…kya hua kk?...😕

Kk: woh mujhe neend nahi aah rahi thi…

Su: (still sleepy) mmm🥱 …mujhe to bohut neend aah rahi hai…😳

Kk: haan woh toh tumhe aayegi naa…😡

Su:…kumkum…tum chila kyun rahi ho?….😕

Kk: mujhe daara kar pooch rahe ho chilla kyun rahi hoon…😡

Su: hmmm 🥱

Kk: hmm kya ??? 😡 ab chilaun nahi to aur kya karoon?

Su: kk tum waapis mere sapne mein aajao 😊…wahaan tum bohut achi thi 😳…mujhe peh chilla bhi nahi rahi thi… 🥱

Kk: kya? 😲...yahaan maine daar gayi hoon aur tum wahaan chain se sapne dekh rahe ho 😕

Su: is quite 🥱

Kk: ….sumit…😲

Su: (no response)

Kk: Sumit…😕

Annoyed cuts the phone….

Kk: lag tah hai phir se so gaya hai …uff 😡…ab mein kya karoon? 😕

She decides to go downstairs and get herself a hot drink…she goes to the kitchen and too her surprise Priya is awake too…

Kk: bhabi aap iss waqt jaag rahi hai…😳

Pr: woh bus rahul ko kuch chahiye tah 😊

Kk: oh…😳

Pr: aur tu….tu kyun jaag rahi hai? 😕

Kk: ab bhabi aapko kya bataon…

Pr: chal bait pehle…

They sit down at the table…

Kk: bhabi mujhe daar lag raha hai…😒

Pr: pagali 😊…kis baat se?

Kk: baar baar dimaag mein bureh kyaal aah rahe hai…

Pr: woh kyun? 😲

Kk: bhabi promise keegiyeh keh aap husseingi nahi…😔

Pr: acha…teek hai…promise 😳

Kk: woh aaj su mujhe picture dikhane lekhar gaya tah…😳

Pr: toh iss mein kaunsi daarneh ki baat hai 😆 (laughs a little)

Kk: (slowly)…picture horror movie thi 😕….aur mein daar gayi…

Pr: (trying to hide her laughter) oh to yeh baat hai 😆…ab tu isse apne dimaag se nikhal deh 😳…zyaada soch mutt 😊…kuch nahi hoga…

Kk: (nods) 😳

Pr: chal ab jakar so jah…

Unwillingly kk goes back to her room …but jus can't help thinking about the scenes from the movie 😕…she has a sleepless night!

Edited by Henna042 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
..........
arey dunno worry i m still a writer....... 😊

okkkkk yes firstly..........for henna 👏

now my write up.........

kk was sleeping but was still restless in sleep .........and suddenly gets up with a noise.......her bhabhi comes......

pr:kya hua kk....? 😕

kk:bhabhi woh maine ...........maine bohut darawna sapna dekha.......mujhe bohut darr lag raha hai.... 😕

pr:theek hai tum daro mat main paani laati hoon.....

kk:nahi bhabhi........aap bas mere pass raho plzzzz....

pr sees that she is too afraid........so she sits beside her till she falls asleep.....

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next moning.......su comes to pick her up for the college....and meets priya on his way to kk's room.....

su:namaste.

pr:namaste.......su tumne kk ko woh darawni picture kyun dikhayi?

su:woh.......woh bhi mujhe tang karti rehti hai.... 😕

pr:su pata hai..........woh itna darr gayi thi ki raat bhar theek se so bhi nahi paayi.......

su now becomes serious.......

su:erm....woh kahaan hai?

pr:apne kamre mein....

su goes to her room........kk was standing near her window combing her hair.....

su goes and keeps her hand on her shoulder and she turns and gets afraid.....

kk:ohhhh su tum.........main to dar gayi thi......pata hai su kal ...mujhe bohut dar laga.. 😳

and saying this she hugs him tightly.....su smoothens her hair...

su:i m sorry .......mujhe aisa nahi karna chahiye tha.......jab tunhe meri sabse zyaada zarurat thi to main tumhare paas nahi tha........i m sorry. 😭

kk:su plz don't be sorry.......main tumse naaraz nahi hoon. 😳 😛

su is really guilty.......kk holds his face.

kk:su plz.......aisa munh mat banao........mujhe yeh aala su nahi pasand........mujhe woh su pasand hai........jo mujhe chidhata hai.....tang karata hai....aur phir manaata bhi hai........smile naa... 😳 😊

su smiles faintly.....

kk:aise nahi mere su waali smile.....plzz for me..... 😃

su:tum nahi sudhrogi. 😊

kk:achcha tum sudhar gaye kya? 😆 😆

then they laugh and hug........ 😃 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
ek din maine nahi padha....& it reachd 90 pages.....chalo ab century mein der nahi hai 😉 😃 😳....
& btw....gr8 write ups henna & verni 👏....
bahut mazaa aaya padh ke 😃 😃 😃....
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Posted: 18 years ago
now ek din may century bna na hai.
it was great heena,verni 👏 .
chalo ab zaldhi sa liko 😃 😳 .
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Posted: 18 years ago

Great write up Verni! 👍🏼...really don't feel like revising so thought might as update the fanfic for u guys!!!!

Su is still holding kk in his arms…😉

Su: hmm…haan sudharunga 😃

Kk: acha?!!! 😲

Su: per ek shart per….😈

Kk: kya? 🤔

Su: shart yeh hai keh…😈

Kk: waiting…😊

Su: tum 😳…mujhe…ek…sirf ek 😳…kiss do…😈

Kk: 😕 tries loosening his grip

Su: moves closer 😆

Kk: doesn't know what to do…😳

Su: about to kiss her 😃

Kk: puts her hands on his mouth…😆

Su: stops n gives her a pretend annoyed look 😡

Kk: mutlub keh tum nahi sudharoge na…😆

Su: (moves her hands) nahi… 😆(laughs) ab to bilkul nahi 😊

Kk: she takes a step back 😳

Su: he takes a step forward 😈

Kk: (moving back) sumit…😳 😳 😳

Su: (still moving forwards) kumkum 😆(mockingly)

Kk: college keh liye dar hogaygi…

Su: toh main bhi office keh liye late ho jaonga 😉

Kk: toh jaane do nah phir…😳

Su: mmm sirf ek kiss 😈

Kk: stops suddenly …looks back and sees shes reached the bed n cant go back nemore

Su: takes his chance…puts his arms round her waist…😃

Kk: puts her hands on his shoulder 😊 to try n push him away 😳

Su: takes no notice…leans forwards 😛

Kk: leans back blushing 😳 😳

Su: smiles 😊…coming closer! 😈

Purposely he lets her go coz he knows she will fall on the bed…

Kk: ouch su…

Su: he lies next to her…😳

Kk: about to say something 😲

Su: sssshhhh 😳…kuch mutt kehna…😊

He moves her hair from her face 😳…kk jus watches him…he comes closer and is jus about to kiss her when…

Kk: bhaiya aap…😕

Su: quickly turns around 😲 😲 😲

Kk: laughs at him uncontrollably…😈

Su: sitting on the bed…holding his heart 😲…oh god 😒…tum neh toh mujhe daara hi diya

Kk: sits up…serves u right 😆 …kal jo itna daariya tah mujhe…😈

Su: yeh teek nahi hai kk

Kk: (gets up) bilkul sahi hai 👍🏼…chalo ab college chor rahe ho yah nahi? 😳

Su: nods

Kk: chalo phir 😊…holds his arm and pulls him…

Finally they leave…😆 😆 😆

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Outside college…

Kk: acha su mein chalti hoon…oh haan thanx for the lift 😊….(turns to get out of the car)

Su: (holds her hand) thanx for the lift? 😕...mutlub keh meri sari mehnat bekaar meh…mein subha jaali uta taki mein tumhai college chordoon aur uske badle mein sirf thanx …(acting hurt)

Kk: acha 😲…to tumneh yeh sub meri liye nahi kiya balkeh kisse wajah keh liye kiya?

Su: (stuck in his own trap) haan…nahi …nay nay maine tumhare liye kiya…haan tumhare liye 😳

Kk: (thinks) hmm mere saath drama karni ki khoshish kar raha hai…😈

Su: (makes a sad face) ok phir tum jao 😒…see u!

Kk: (looks at his expression) su…😳

Su: hmm 😔 (looks up at her)

Kk: tum nah 😳…oh ur just impossible…(she leans over and kisses him ❤️ on his cheek) ab khush ho? 😊

Su: (smiles) 😃

Kk: gets out the car and walk towards the college gates she turns and waves at him…

Su: smiles happy with himself 😆

Just then a guy approaches kk and starts talking to her…su sees and his eyes just widen with curiousity…😲

Kk: oh hi…😊

Guy: hi kumkum bade dinoh baad dekha hai tumhe college mein 😆…pata hai I really missed ur company in class 😆

Kk: laughs 😆

Su watching gets extremely jealous…😡

Su: yeh kk itna huss kyun rahi hai 😡…kaunsa teer maar liya hai iss joker neh?😡...ab kk koh class keh liye dare nahi ho rahi…

He continues watching…

Kk: nahi bus aise hi 😳…taabiyat teek nahi thi to issliye college nahi aapiye…😳

Guy: thank god ab tum teek ho 😃…mein dehkoon to…kahin tumhe high temperature toh nahi hai 😆…(comes closer and puts his hand on her forehead)

Both laugh at the joke…😆 😆

Su: (clenches his fist) haath hata warna doonga ek 😡…ladhki dehki nahi keh pura ka pura docter ban gaya…😡

Su is getting restless and very jealous…

Kk: hum yahaan kadhe kadhe baatein kar rahein hai aur class keh liye late ho rahe hain…😳

Guy: oh haan baaton baaton meh mein to bhool hi gaye…aao chaltein hai…

They turn to go into through the gates…they continue talking and the guy rests his arm on kk's shoulder…they continue laughing as they walk 😆

Su: (watching them intensely) … itne kareeb se kaun baat karta hai… baat karni hai to door kadhe ho kar bhi baat ho sakti hai…😡 (grits his teeth angrily)

Su drives off angrily 😡…completely and utterly jealous…😳

The day passes and kk has a wonderful day at college 👍🏼 whereas su has spent most of the day pacing up and down in his cabin thinking about the morning 👎🏼…he tries to stop but he just can't help but be jealous…

Su: koi aur meri kk koh chooeh 😡…mujhse nahi bardasht hoga 😡…chaheh wo koi bhi ho…😒

Later on Su goes to pick up kk…his a little late so kk decides to wait with some friends…finally he arrives…kk overjoyed to see him 😃…quickly walks upto his car…she sits down…

Kk: (happily) Hi 😊

Su: (doesn't look at her) hi…😳

Kk: (gives him a funny look…thinking) iss kya hogaya hai? 😕

They drive off…

Kk: hum kahaan jah rahe hai? 😳

Su: (quietly) tumhare ghar…😔

Kk: (makes a face) nahi su …maine abhi ghar nahi jaana hai…chalo kahin ghoom neh chalte hai 😃…(looking at him hopefully)

Kk (thinks) shayad ab iss ka mood teek hogaye…😉

Su: (sadly) nahi ..aaj mera mann nahi kar raha…😒

Kk: su plz 😊…mera to mann kar raha hai… 😳(smiles cutely at him)

Su: (gives in) kahaan jaana hai? 😳

Kk: erm…beach peh…😃

Su: (doesn't argue…just quietly nods) 😳

Kk: (watching his reaction thinks to herself) su…akir tum itne chup kyun ho? 😲…aaj mujhse baat bhi nahi kar rahe …ab to hum tumhari favourite jaagha peh bhi jah rahe hai aur tum phir bhi khush nahi ho 😒...(looks out the window)

Su looks at kk…and sees that she also has gone quiet…looks ahead again…

Su (thinks) ab meri wajah se kk bhi chup hogayi …pata nahi kya soch rahi hogi…per mein kya karoon?…kk ko kissi aur keh saath istara behave karte hui to maine pehle khabi nahi dekha 😳…shayad iss liye mujhe itni jaalen ho rahi hai

Kk (looking out the window wonders) su ki udaasi ki wajah kya ho sakti hai? 😕...shayad koi office keh kaam ki wajah se….per nahi su to kaam karta hi nahi hai 😆…toh kaam ki kaise pareshani nahi ho sakti hai 🤔… (continues thinking long and hard)

Finally they arrive at the beach…suddenly the reason y clicks in kk's head…

Kk: (to herself) 😊 acha to yeh wajah hai udaasi ki…abhi door karti hoon…😳

They get out of the car…kk holds su's hand and leads the way…Su without realising holds her hand tight as though she will run away if he lets go 😳…kk feels this and is sure the reason she is thinking is correct…Su is feeling a little insecure…😳

They walk along the shore…with the waves touching their feet…the beach is quite…hardly ne1 is around…

Kk: su…udaas ho? 😳

Su: (looks the other way so that she cant see his expression)

Kk: mujhe bhi nahi bataogeh?

Stops and puts her hand on his face…slow turns his face towards her…

Su: (doesn't look into her eyes)

Kk: (is upset to see him hiding his feeling) plz su 😔…batao nah kya hua hai? 😳

Su: (gathers all his feelings) kuch bhi to nahi hua hai…😊

Kk: su tum jooth mutt bolo …batao nah plz?...😳

Su: bus waise hi…aaj office mein kam kuch zyaada tah 😳…iss wajah se todha takh gaya hoon 😊

Kk: aur yeh such hai…😕

Su: hmm…😳

Kk: yahaan dehko aur kaho keh such hai 😳…aur koi aur baat tumhe pareshaan nahi kar rahi…😳

Su: (slowly lifts his eyes so that he looks into her eyes…but doesn't say nething)

Kk: sumit tumhari har baat jaane kah…har feeling ko jaane kah mujhe pura haq hai 😳…ab sirf suchai chahiye mujhe…kaho…🤔

Su sits down on the sand…and takes a deep breath 😕…kk sits beside him holding his arm…😳

Su: kk aaj jub maine tumhai college tak chora…mein bohut khush tah keh mujhe tumhare saath guzaar neh keh liye tora aur waqt mila 😳…(looks to her) per jub wo ladka wahaan aaye 😡 aur jaise tum dono baat kar rahe the…mujhe pata nahi kyun bura laga …maine bohut khoshish ki apne aap ko samjaneh ki 😕….kay koi baat iss mein hai hi nahi per…😕 apne aap ko sumjah nahi pahya…😕

Kk: (gives him a thoughtful look) 🤔

Su: mein jaanta hon iss mein tumhari koi galti nahi hai 😳…mujhe tum per pura barosa hai…galti to meri hai 😕…iss tarha react karne ki…😕

Kk: iss mein tumhari bhi koi galti nahi hai 😳…samaj sakti hoon tumhe kaisa laga hoga…bus tum udaas mutt ho 😊…(smiles at him) ab jo tumne mujhe bata diya hai agali bare mein tumhari feelings kah kyaal rakhoongi…ab khush? 😳

Su: per kk mera yeh mutlub nahi hai keh tum har kisi se baat nahi kar sakti …bilkul nahi hai 😳

Kk: mujhe pata hai su…😳

Su: 😕 bus aaj pehli baar dehka nah iss liye todha ajeeb laga…

Kk: (jus looking at him) 😳

Su: (turns to her) per ab tumse jo keh diya to 😊… jaalen khud ba khud katum hogayi 😃…(finally smiles an enormous smiles)

Kk: cant help but smile after seeing him smile

Su: I'm stupid na…

Kk: haan toreh se 😆…(laughs) per ek baat kahoon? 😳

Su: hmm kaho…😊

Kk: woh ladka nah mujhe bilkul bhi pasand nahi hai 😆…hamesha mein usse door rehne ki khoshish karti hoon 😆… (laughs) tum nah bhi kehte to mein usse door hi rehne wali thi…chalo ab toh bahana bhi milgaya hai mujhe 😆…(laughs)

Su to himself: toh woh ladka kk ko pasand bhi nahi tah 😕…mutlab waise itna time waste kiya iss keh bare mein soch kar …(looking on shakes his head)

Kk hears him and laughs 😆

Kk: puts her arms on his shoulders sitting on her knees in front of him…😳 per mujhe yeh ladka to pasand hai 😆..playfully slaps his on the cheek…😳

Su: acha?!! 😈

Kk: (smiling) hmm 😊

Su: to phir…😃

Before she can respond…he leans back and pulls her down as well….both are lying on the sand…kk on top of su…su holds her tight so she cant get up…🤗

Su: ab jo tumne keh hi diya hai to mein nahi choroonga…😈

Kk: (blushing) to mein kub kaha hai chordo 😳

Su puts his hands on her face…he brings himself closer…he looks into kk's eyes 😛…he slowly touches her lips with his…kk's heartbeat races ❤️…she shuts her eyes and lets him…they kiss…kk holds tightly onto su's shirt trying to contain the feeling 😳 😳 😳…after a long kiss su finally lets her go…he takes a deep breath and smiles 😉 at kk extremely pleased

Su: (grins) I love u kumkum 😃

Kk: (smiles) I love u 2 😊

She puts her head on his chest and gives him a long warm hug! 🤗

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Posted: 18 years ago
...............wow henna superbbb 👏

yaar sachi mein tooooooooooooooo sweet........ 😳

achcha henna amrit kahaan gayi???????? 😕
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Posted: 18 years ago
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then kk realizes that they are on the beach...........not their home.........she gets up shyingly........ 😳 😳 ........and starts looking the other way she was blushing a lot....... 😳 .........su gets up .....

su:kya hua?

kk:kuch nahi.....(still looking down).

su understands that she is blushing.......he takes his arm around her and supports her.....she rests on him.

su:pata hai kk jab tumahre pass hota hoon to sab bhool jaata hoon.....sab kuch jaisa hai jo bhi hai .......sab achcha lagta hai.....

kk (blushing still) : mujhe bhi.

.........they sit there till evening .......when it starts getting darker........kk moves away..

kk:su bohut der ho gayi hai....chalen.

su:hmm man nahi ho raha.

kk:su plz bhaiya bhi office se aate honge.....
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Posted: 18 years ago
..........

su not wanting still gets up....

su:okk chalo. 😳

they hold each others hand and move on........

.........next day....

pr calls veena.........

pr:hello auntie namaste.

ve:namaste beta.....bolo kaise yaad kiya.

pr:jee hum soch rahe the kyun na shaadi ki baaki rasmein shuru kar den.... 😊 😛

ve:haan kyun nahi to bolo pehle kya karen? 😊

pr:jee humne socha tha kyun na pehle sangeet ki rasam rakhen?

ve:bilkul to kal hi kyun nahi?........main taiyaari shuru karti hoon. 😃 😃

pr:jee hum bhi....... 😊

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kk attends her college........and meets su ........su was waiting for her outside the college........

su:hi.....kaisa raha college? 😊

kk was little tense........

kk:hmm .........haan theek tha.

su:kya hua? 😕

kk:woh su mere xams.........hone hain.

su:kab?

kk:shaayad hamari shaadi ke baad paden.....

su:to isme tense hone ki kya baat hai? 😊

kk:su ........shayad tumne suna nahi.........shaadi ke baad.......to humara honeymoon delay ho sakta hai..

su got a little upset.......but then said smiling.

su:oho to kya hua?.... xams zindagi bhar to nahi chalenge.....baad mein chale jaayenge.. 😳 😊

kk was surprised at such a reaction........as she knew how excited su was for honeymoon.... 😳 😊

kk just looked at him.......

su:kya hua aise kya dekh rahi ho? 😊 😛

kk just came near him and hugged him....... 😃 😃

su:kya hua kk?

kk:i luv u su........mujhe laga tum naraaz ho jaaoge.....kyunki tum to honeymoon par jaana chahte the.....aur... 😳 😊

su:paagal mere liye tumhari khushi se badhkar aur kuch bhi nahi....samjhi. 😳 😳

kk:u are the sweetest husband........oops i mean....lover.....i mean.... 😃

su:main to sab kuch hoon tumhare liye.......naam ki zarurat nahi.... 😳 😉

kk smiles and kisses him on his cheek.....su turns his face to get a kiss on another cheek.......kk kisses him there tooo 😊

now write 😊

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