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vernika

@verni

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#11

mera bachcha gud write up and a gud start too.............. 😃 😃
lovely....keep it uppppppp 👏

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HIBA

@juhi_hussain

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: verni
mera bachcha gud write up and a gud start too.............. 😃 😃
lovely....keep it uppppppp 👏

thanx ur make me happy & thanx a lot 4 ur comments & liking my work .😃

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@juhimerijaan

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: juhi_hussain

HI u r the 1st 1 who cooments me a lot thnnk u dear & thnx againg 4 liking my work.u make me happy yar 😊

its ok yar & where the 2nd part?😕

ur story line is really 😊gud plzzz cont soon plzzzzzzzzzzzz

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Nidoo

@-Silencia-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 18 years ago

#14

hey gr8 startin yaar.......👏 👏 👏
vaise i ws also writin a story 😳 , but now-a-days dont get much time 2 think & write 😭 😭 😕

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HIBA

@juhi_hussain

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: nature
hey gr8 startin yaar.......👏 👏 👏
vaise i ws also writin a story 😳 , but now-a-days dont get much time 2 think & write 😭 😭 😕

O great hum dono hi writter gud 😊per kaha hai aap ki story main read karna chite hoo

& thanx 4 comments itni clap thank u😊

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HIBA

@juhi_hussain

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#16

😊next post very soon

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HIBA

@juhi_hussain

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#17

Evening

Veena & DADi sumit k bare main baat kar rahe hai
V- maaje sumit ko us k past se bahir lane k liye kya karee hum
D- veena mujhe to lagta hai sumit ki shadi
V- sumit to is k liye razi kabhi nhi hoga
tabhi sameer enter hoota hai
sameer sumit k kahine se WH aata hai
& who sab se milta hai
Veena- sameer kab aaie hoo
S-aunty kabhi wapas aaya hoo likin abhi to aap k saath hoo to us ko chooriye abhi yahi hooo
DADI- beta tum yaha aaie humie bohat acha laga k hum tum ko abhi yaad hai
S- dadiiii kese baati kar rahe hoo aap ,wise jis ne mujhe bulaya hai who kaha hai
dadajee- beta who sumit office se abhi tak aaya hi nhi hai
sameer- ye loo mujhe bula k khud hi nhi aaya hai abhi tak.
V-oo tum sumit se phele hi mil chuqi hoo
S- ha aaj subha
S- wise aunty jee sumit mujhe phele jisa nhi laga kya koie baat hai kyu jis ne us ko aise kar deeya hai
V- sameer who
Dadi- kuch nhi beta who bas office k kaam ki wajha se
sameer- ye to nhi hoo sakta
dadi - tum theek kahi rahe hoo
sameer - ab main aagya hoo na sab theek kar dooga
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VIRANI
karan office se wapas aata hai
tulsi - beta tumhare pari wapas aa rahe hai is ghar ki jaan wapas aa rahe hai
karan- such maa ye to bohat hi achi news hai
tulsi - mihir bhi sun kar kush hooga.
karan - kab aarahe hai whoo

peeche see aawaz aate hai
aarahe hai nhi aagaieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
mumma main aagie
karan shout pariiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

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HIBA

@juhi_hussain

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#18

HOPE u like 😳& dont 4get to comments yar 😉

LOVE

HIBA😊

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vernika

@verni

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#19

👏👏

Originally posted by: juhi_hussain

thanx ur make me happy & thanx a lot 4 ur comments & liking my work .😃

u have done a gud work so u need the comments........😛

😃

well this one is also very gud keep it upppppppp👏