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Posted: 19 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: nature

yeh helloo...............sochte raho πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜›
actually all of u thought ki i'll b makin Su enter thru excuse me, isliye i changd him 2 jatin πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜›
ab u wait n watch till nxt prt πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

actually i wasn't think it'll be Su!! I thought it'd be some random guy who'll like kk or her friend n somewheer later on su will come in the story...i never imagined jatin also........are jatin n su brothers here too???

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Posted: 19 years ago
#72
superb re πŸ‘ πŸ‘πŸΌ so interesting u cud make serial out of dis story wud b super hit!! πŸ€— ab tumhe ise aage badana hoga waiting for d next part!! 😳 nidhi u asked to read now u hav to continue it πŸ˜‰ impatiently waiting 4 d next part 😳 πŸ˜†
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Posted: 19 years ago
#73
you know so long alreday.....c'mon now nidhi di.....you have to update it yaar!!!




It's SUMAR, shazia_haya here!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#74
[quote=sumra]actually i wasn't think it'll be Su!! I thought it'd be some random guy who'll like kk or her friend n somewheer later on su will come in the story...i never imagined jatin also........are jatin n su brothers here too??? [/quote]

tht you'll get 2 know in d next partπŸ˜‰ πŸ˜›

[quote=ash]superb re so interesting u cud make serial out of dis story wud b super hit!! ab tumhe ise aage badana hoga waiting for d next part!! nidhi u asked to read now u hav to continue it impatiently waiting 4 d next part [/quote]

thnk u soo much ash πŸ€— πŸ€—
serial out of the story.....ab itna bhi jhaad pe mat chadaao mujhe πŸ˜† πŸ˜›
& plz b patient sweety 😳


[quote=sumra]you know so long alreday.....c'mon now nidhi di.....you have to update it yaar!!! [/quote]

hey sumra, i know i have to update it, but kya karun, i have a very hectic schedule 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: nature

[[quote=ash]superb re so interesting u cud make serial out of dis story wud b super hit!! ab tumhe ise aage badana hoga waiting for d next part!! nidhi u asked to read now u hav to continue it impatiently waiting 4 d next part [/quote]

thnk u soo much ash πŸ€— πŸ€—
serial out of the story.....ab itna bhi jhaad pe mat chadaao mujhe πŸ˜† πŸ˜›
& plz b patient sweety 😳


[quote=sumra]you know so long alreday.....c'mon now nidhi di.....you have to update it yaar!!! [/quote]

hey sumra, i know i have to update it, but kya karun, i have a very hectic schedule 😳 😳 😳

seriously its sooo gud it has got all emotions in it.. ah suspense too now do tel me who is dat who tels hello!!!?? is it su??πŸ˜‰ ja kahan se aa gaya re??😳

ya i knoe u hav a hectic day but wenever u find tym do CONTINUE!!

ab mujhe bhi is fan fic mein add karna na bhoolnaπŸ˜‰

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Posted: 19 years ago
#76
hai nidhi after a long tme.
great story surely make a serial i will produce it what do u say.
waiting 4 next part πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 19 years ago
#77
HI nidhi dear ur story is fab & plzzzz now cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: nature



[quote=sumra]you know so long alreday.....c'mon now nidhi di.....you have to update it yaar!!! [/quote]

hey sumra, i know i have to update it, but kya karun, i have a very hectic schedule 😳 😳 😳

Before-in the summer vacations-I wouldn't have understand why some of you don't have time and all..........coz I just finished Grade 9-which is the last year in junior school life......now I'm in Grade 10-it's like the senior school life and whatever you learn is really important and in Grade 11-a public exam too-.........yah so now as I'm in Grade 10-life got more harder-coz it was easier in the junior school life......secondary 1, 2 n 3 (grade 7,8 n 9)-now I UNDERSTAND every bit of it whenever one of you says that you guys are busy and so and so........anyways I'll still be waiting for your update....

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Posted: 19 years ago
#79
hey all u ppl............i m bak wid d next part πŸ˜‰
m sooo sooooo sorry 2 keep u waiting 4 soo long 😳 😳 😳
SCENE 5

Kumkum, Nidhi, Jatin aur baaki sab peechhe mud kar dekhte hain ye jaanne ke liye ki ye hello kisne bola. Aur vahan unhe dikhta hai ek bahut hi handsome sa ladka, wearing a designer black jeans & a superb red t-shirt, jis mein zip lagi hoti hai jo aadhi khuli hoti hai. Uske 4 baal maathe par hote hain aur aankhon par smart se goggles chadaaye hote hain. In short, voh bahut hi raapchik kism ka ladka hota hai jise dekh kar koi bhi ladki fisal jaaye, par kyunki us waqt Kumkum gusse main hoti hai, isliye use zyaada farak nahi padhta, lekin uski dost Nidhi zaroor fisal jaati hai, uski nazrein sirf aur sirf us ladke par hi tiki hoti hai.

The Guy : Hellooo!!!!!
Kumkum : Wrong number
Guy : Sorry???
Kumkum : you should be!!!
Guy : ye aap kya keh rahi hain madame??
Kumkum : vahi jo aap sun rahe hain mister
Guy : maine aapse hello kahaa aur aapne.........
Kumkum : maine kaha wrong number, aapki aawaaz sunte hi mujhe pata chal gaya ki mujhe aapse baat nahi karni hai
Guy : Oh my godd.........you are soo rude
Kumkum : me??? NO ways........infact you are rude, bina jaane pehchaane hi beech mein bolna shuru kar diya aapne
Nidhi : jaane de naa yaar, dekh naa kitna handsome hai
Guy : lagta hai aap ki dost ko insaan pehchaanne ki achhi samajh hai
Kumkum : vaise toh use achhi samajh hai, par aaj pata nahi use kya ho gaya hai
Guy : dekhiye madam, aap bina baat ke hi baat ko badhaa rahi hain
Kumkum : achha theek hai, main baat ko nahin badaati, aap khud hi bata dijiye ki aap yahan kyun aaye hain aur aapko kya zaroorat hai beech mein bolne ki
Guy : pehli baat toh ye ki maine kisi ke beech mein nahi bola aur doosri baat ye ki aap ko koi hak nahi apne senior Mr. Jatin se is tarah baat karne ka
Kumkum : ohho...........toh ab Mr. Jack ne ishaaron se apne saathi bula liye, aapko kya lagta hai ki aapki is harkat se hum ladkiyaan dar jaayengi, but let me tell you ki aisa ,kuch nahi hoga
Guy : oh hello madam, ye Mr. Jack nahi, Mr. Jatin hain, aap zaraa tameez se baat kijiye inse, ye aapke senior hain
Jatin : rehne de na Sumit, mainsambhaal loonga, tu jaa yahaan se

Sumit : nahi bhaiyyaa, main yahan se nahi jaaonga, ye ladki aapke saath itni badtameezi se pesh aa rahi hai
Kumkum : toh ab main samjhi, Mr. Jack ne apne saathi ko nahi, apne chhote bhai ko bulaya hai, kya socha hai ki dono bhai milkar ladkiyon ko pareshaan karoge??
Sumit : oh madam, ab aap apni hadein paar kar rahi hain, bhaiyyaa aap ko kuch keh nahin rahe iska matlab ye nahi hai ki aap kuch bhi bolti chali jaayengi
Nidhi : haan haan, aap bilkul theek keh rahe hain, ab hum aapko kuch nahi kahengem, hum bas yahan se jaa hi rahe hain
Kumkum : jee nahi, hum yahan se tab tak nahi jaayenge jab tak ye dono bhai aur ye Nik hum se maafi nahi maangega
Sumit : maafi aur voh bhi aap jaisi "chhipkali" se, sawaal hi paida nahi hota
Nidhi : haan aap bilkul sahi keh rahe hain, ye toh hai hi chhipkali aur aap, aap toh mere dil ke raja hain
Kumkum : chup kar Nidhs, aur kya kaha tumne, main chhipkali, toh tum "chhachhundar"


so guys tell me how it is.....😳 😳
aur haan............voh hello waala apna sumit hi hai πŸ˜› πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 19 years ago
#80
GR8 part dear hope that u cont soon 😊

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