FF pyar - scene 23 - *68 - SuKk 2gether - Page 3

Originally posted by: Shazia_haya

Hey did anyone forget about this fanfic also with the other one!! I'm just reminding you all because I feel that no one commented or wrote the update for over a day.............I thought people would be giving comments but I saw there was nothing for over a day!! Guys freshen up!

I'm sorry for everything and THX!!

hey shazia, i haven't 4gottn abt d fan fic, it's just tht i haven't been able 2 cum online these days 😳

par ab main sabki shikayat door kar deti hoon, i m gonna post d 2nd part😃

ok evry1 here i m continuing d story.......
kumkumianz introduced in this part : Ektanj(ekta.....eks), nature(tht's me......nidhi😉)

SCENE 2

Ek chhota, magar khoobsurat ghar, jahan sofa par ek ladki baithi kisi se phone par baat kar rahi hai.
Girl : achha sun, tune vo boss ko to nahi bataya na ki main bimaar nahi thi par concert mein gayi thi, batana bhi mat,varna tujhe to pata hai na ki kya hoga. Ab chal main phone rakhti hoon, arre ad khatm ho gaya hai na, & i dont wanna miss even a second of the show. Tujhe to pata hai na ki Shabaash India main kabhi nahi chhodti, to bas fir jaldi se keep the phone or i myself will disconnect it.

Vaise to ye ladki TV dekhte dekhte sabzi kaatne ki koshiish kar rahi hai, par sabzi hai ki kat hi nahi rahi; ab kategi bhi to kaise, kaatne waali ka dhyan hi kahin aur hai, sabzi kahin aur uske chhilke kahin aur, aur itna hi nahi vo sabzi kaatne aur cheelne ki koshish kar rahi vo bhi bina knife ke. Ye ladki poori tarah se show dekhne mein gum hai aur itn khoyi hui hai ki doorbell bhi use sunayi nahi de rahi hai, aur doorbell hai ki baje hi jaa rahi hai. Finally jab show mein break aata hai, to vo darwaaza kholti hai.

Darwaaza khulte hi use Kumkum aur Anku nazar aate hain, aur fir Kumkum zor se uspar chillati hai, " Aap kya kar rahi thi ekta di? Itni der kyun laga di darwaaza kholne mein? Pata hai hum kabse yahan khade hain?"
Ekta : Arre kuch nahin, main to TV dekh rahi thi. You know na ki Shabaash India mera favourite show hai, to use beech mein chhod kar kaise aati main, agar kuch miss ho jaata to??"
Kumkum : achha to aapko show miss karne ki chinta hai, hamari nahi. Agar show poori raat chalta to aap poori raat darwaaza nahi kholti kya??
Ekta : haan................mera matlab hai nahi.........arre sun to, kahan jaa rahi hai???..........(Kumkum leaves the room in anger & goes upstairs).............uff....ye ladki bhi na.........kya hua hai ise anku, ye itni upset kyun hai??
Ankita : Pata nahi, mujhse bhi chillake hi baat kar rahi thi
Ekta : Ab to bas ek hi insaan ise theek kar sakta hai
Ankita : To bulaao unhe?
Ekta : haan..............aur jaldi

Ekta aur Ankita dono kisi ka intezaar kar rahi hain, baar baar ghadi ki taraf dekh rahi hain. Tabhi doorbell bajti hai, Ankita uthke darwaaza kholti hai. Darwaaza khult hi use nazar aati hai ek ladki jo use dekhte hi kehti hai, "Kya baat hai anku, mujhe itni der raat kyun bulaya??
Ekta vahan aati hai aur kehti hai, "Thank god Nidhi, tum aa gayi, tumhara hi intezaar kar rahe the hum dono."
Nidhi : Vo to theek hai Eks Di, par baat kya hai?
Ankita : Vahi to nahi pata
Nidhi : matlab??
Ekta : Matlab ye ki koi baat hai, ye hume pata hai par vo baat kya hai ye hum nahi jaante.
Nidhi : Aap dono please seedhe seedhe bataeye, meri kuch samajh nahi aa raha
Ankita : Baat ye hai ki aaj jab Kumkum didi shoot se vaapas aayee to unka mood bilkul bhi theek nahi tha, aur jab maine unse reason poochha to unhone mujhe daant diya
Ekta : Haan aur ghar aate hi mujh par bhi chillane lagi, pata nahi kya hua hai use, ab tum hi usse baat karo
Ankita : haan............you are her best friend.......vo aapko sab kuch bata dengi
Nidhi : Dont worry, main baat karti hoon usse.

Nidhi goes upstairs, enters Kumkum's room & finds her crying on the bed. Vo uske paas jaati hai aur uske sar par haath rakh kar kehti hai, "Kya baat hai Kumkum, kyun itni pareshaan ho? Kuch hua hai kya?"
Kumkum : Nahi kuch khaas nahi, bas aaj shoot mein man nahi lag raha tha, baar baar vahi scene shoot karna pad raha tha, vaise tum itni raat ko yahan r rahi ho?
Nidhi : Anku ka phone aaya tha, vo bahut pareshaan lag rahi thi, aur Ekta di bhi
Kumkum : Ye anku aur di bina poochhe kuch bhi karti rehti hain dono
Nidhi : Par usne galat to nahi kiya, vo tumhari behene hain, unhe chinta hai tumhari
Kumkum : I know, aur fir maine bhi to unpar kitna gussa kiya hai, vo pareshaan ho gayi hongi
Nidhi : Exactly..........isliye unhone mujhe bulaaya .......chalo ab jaldi se batao ki kya baat hai
Kumkum : Kaha na kuch nahi, bas shoot problem
Nidhi : Jaise ki tumne kaha aur maine maan liya, Kumkum, main tumhari best friend hoon, tumhari aankhon mein dekh sakti hoon...............aur vaise bhi mujhe pata hai ki shoot par kya problem hui thi
Kumkum : Kya??
Nidhi : Haan......Vishal ka phone aaya tha, isliye main vaise bhi tumse milne aane hi waali thi

Uski ye baat sunkar Kumkum ko rona aa jaata hai, vo Nidhi ke kandhe par sar rakh kar rone lagti hai.
Nidhi : Bas karo Kumkum
Kumkum : Koshish to bahut karti hoon, par ye aansoon hian ki rukte hi nahi
Nidhi : Kab tak is tarah roti rahogi?
Kumkum : Jab tak uski yaad aati rahegi
Nidhi : To bhool kyun nahi jaati use?
Kumkum : Khud ko bhool sakti hoon, par use nahi

She turns & remembers the old days.............................................

wowwwwwwww nidhs gr8 part dearoo.....eks darwaaza nahin khol rahi 😆

same haal yahan hai....i also dun open d door agar kumkum chal raha hota hai 😆

w8ting fr ur next part.....aakhir twist n story kya hai 😳 😳 😳

Awesome Nidhi!! Just tooooooo good!! 👏

Aur bahut sahi pehchana hai mujhe.. Hu ka kuch bhi ho tv par..main darwaza kabhi nahin kholti!! Bhale koi kitna wait kare!! 😆 Mera dhyaan kahin..sabzi kahin aur..chhilke kahin aur.. 😆

Waiting for the next part..

Originally posted by: ankuhujulover

wowwwwwwww nidhs gr8 part dearoo.....eks darwaaza nahin khol rahi 😆

same haal yahan hai....i also dun open d door agar kumkum chal raha hota hai 😆

w8ting fr ur next part.....aakhir twist n story kya hai 😳 😳 😳

thnku anku sweety.....😳

& twist aur story keliye to u'll have 2 wait..........itni jaldi suspense thodi na khol doongi😛😳

Originally posted by: Ektaj

Awesome Nidhi!! Just tooooooo good!! 👏

Aur bahut sahi pehchana hai mujhe.. Hu ka kuch bhi ho tv par..main darwaza kabhi nahin kholti!! Bhale koi kitna wait kare!! 😆 Mera dhyaan kahin..sabzi kahin aur..chhilke kahin aur.. 😆

Waiting for the next part..

thnku eks.........😳

ab tumhe main nahi pehchaanungi to kaun pehchaanega😉.................aur ye sirf tumhara hi nahi, hum sab ka haal hai..............sabzi kahin aur ..........chhilke kahin aur😆

😆 very funnnni part.....eks nt openin door 😆

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GR8 part 👏👏
& cont soon nidhi w8 4 next part

Originally posted by: juhi_hussain_lo

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GR8 part 👏👏
& cont soon nidhi w8 4 next part

omgg sona.................itna applause.....i'll faint yaar😳..........keep sumthin 4 d nxt prts also😛😆

Originally posted by: Ektaj

Awesome Nidhi!! Just tooooooo good!! 👏

Aur bahut sahi pehchana hai mujhe.. Hu ka kuch bhi ho tv par..main darwaza kabhi nahin kholti!! Bhale koi kitna wait kare!! 😆 Mera dhyaan kahin..sabzi kahin aur..chhilke kahin aur.. 😆

Waiting for the next part..

arre mujhe toh chilke aur sabzi bhi na dikhe hu ko dekhte hue😳😆😆