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Nidoo

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Posted: 18 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: juhi_hussain_lo

Gr8 part nidhi both paerts r FAb 👏keep it up gr8 work & me alos w8 4 su kk lagaie scene w8 4 that & yar aap ko kk ko aqle chor k nhi aan chiye tha per ab aap ki bhi khair nhi kk se ladaie paqi hia aap ki ab😳😊

arre aise kaise kk aur meri ladhaai ho jaayegi.....after all v r bst frnds 😳 😳......aur fir is fan fic mein tab tak ladhaai nahi hogi, jab tak main nahi chaahti 😛 😉 😆....

btw thnks 4 appreciatin sona 😳 😳...

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@juhimerijaan

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Posted: 18 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: nature

arre aise kaise kk aur meri ladhaai ho jaayegi.....after all v r bst frnds 😳 😳......aur fir is fan fic mein tab tak ladhaai nahi hogi, jab tak main nahi chaahti 😛 😉 😆....

btw thnks 4 appreciatin sona 😳 😳...

aare yar aap k chine se to ye story hum roz bhi read kar sakte hai 😳per rahe baat ladaie k yaha per to sab su kk ki lagaie deekhna chite hai per main jo hoo na aap or kk ki deekhna chiti hoo kyu k jaga ladaie hooti hia waha hi ziyada pyar hoota hia frndship main (jise me & my frnd )

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Nidoo

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Posted: 18 years ago

#183

hey ppl i hope u haven't forgotten this fan fic 😳 😳....
i know it's been a long long time since i last updated it 😭 ....have been 2 busy due to exams 😕 .....
will update it soon....after this friday most probably 😳 😃...

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Nidoo

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Posted: 18 years ago

#184

now tht my xams hv FINALLY finishd 😃 😃 so i m bak here 😉 😛..... aur is baar maine henna se inspiration lekar emoticons use kiya hain 😉....
so here's the next scene :

Previously : Nidhi drives away with Sumit in his car to the college, while Kumkum was left standing alone on the bus stop.

SCENE 10

Kumkum was watching Nidhi drive away with Sumit and was very angry with her. 😡 😡 😡 😡

Kumkum (to herself) : Pata nahi Nidhi ko kya ho gaya hai ......usse is chhachhundar ke aage kuch nazar hi nahi aa raha hai 😡 😡.....usne us chhachhundar ke liye mujhe chhod diya 😡....MUJHE ....apni bachpan ki dost ko ....apni best friend ko 😭....milne do usse college mein 😡....main usse baat hi nahi karungi 😵....tab pata chalega usse 😡....

Just then the bus arrived and Kumkum climbed into it. The bus was fully packed with people 😕, there was no place to sit 😕, so Kumkum had to stand there.😕

Kumkum (to herself) : hey bhagwaan.....pehle mujhe meri dost ne dhokha diya aur fir is bus ne 😡.....hamesha toh mujhe is bus mein jagah milti hai, lekin aaj hi nahi mili 😕....ufff .....

Suddenly the driver applied brakes and Kumkum got a push from behind. Since she was already very angry 😡, so she just turned around and started shouting on the guy standing behind her 😡, without even seeing him 😕.

Kumkum : dikhayee nahi deta kya 😡.....dekh kar nahi khade ho sakte 😡.....tum ladkon ko toh bas bahaana chaahiye hota hai ladkiyon ko dhakka maarne ka 😡 (😆)....jahan ladki dekhi nahi ki fisal gaye 😡(😆).....kabhi ladki nahi dekhi kya 😡(😆)...

The Guy standing behind her : excuse me madam....aap please chillana band kijiye 😆...maine koi aapko jaan boojh kar dhakka nahi diya hai ....mujhe bhi peechhe se dhakka laga …

Kumkum : achha....toh main dekhoon zaraa aapke peechhe kaun hai jisne aapko dhakka diya hai??? 😡 😡

The guy shifts a little to another side, and there behind him in the bus, is standing Jatin. Kumkum becomes shocked 😲and furious 😡on seeing him.

Kumkum : ohhho...mujhe toh pehle hi samajh jaana chahiye tha ki aap jaisa hi koi ladka hoga ye badtameezi karne waala 😡....toh Mr. Jack aa gaye na aap apni asliyat par 😡....

A guy standing next to Jatin speaks up, he is his friend.

Jatin's Friend : dekhiye miss...pehli baat toh ye ki inka naam Jack nahi, Jatin hai 😳....doosri baat ye ki inhone aapko jaan boojhkar dhakka nahi diya 😳....aur teesri aur final baat ye ki aapko inse aise baat karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai 😳...

Kumkum : dekhiye Mr....pehli baat toh ye ki inka naam Jack ho ya Jumpoo ya kuch aur, mujhe koi farak nahi padhta 😳...doosri baat ye ki main inhe aur inke bhai sahab ko bahut achhe se jaan gayi hoon 😡aur mujhe pata hai ki mujhe dhakka inhone hi diya hai 😡....aur teesri aur final baat ye ki main jo bhi keh rahi thi, inse keh rahi thi, aapse nahi, isiliye aapko apni taang beech mein adhaane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai 😡.....samjhe aap... 😡😳

Jatin's Friend : dekhiye aap....

Jatin interrupts him in between.

Jatin : Vishal bas kar....iski taraf se main aapse maafi maangta hoon 😳....dekjiye Kumkum jee main....

Kumkum : aapki itni himmat ki aap sabke saamne mera naam le rahe hain 😲 😡 😡...

Jatin : agar main aapka naam nahi lunga, toh main aapko bulaaoonga kaise?? 😕

Kumkum : koi zaroorat nahi hai aapko mera naam lene ki ya mujhe bulaane ki 😡....sab samajhti hoon main 😡...aap dono bhai bilkul ek jaise hain 😡....farak sirf itna hai ki aap aisi ulti-seedhi harkatein karne ke baad bhole banne ki koshish karte hain 😡...

Jatin : kya hua?? Sumit ne kuch kiya kya?? 😕

Kumkum : ye jaakar aap apne uss chhachhundar bhai se hi poochh lijiyega 😡...
(to herself) : naatak toh dekho iska 😳…….ye dono bhai ekdum nautanki hain ……chhota bhai……voh chhachhundar 😡…..meri best friend ko apni gaadi mein bithaake le jaata hai 😡……aur badha bhai……jaan boojhke dhakka maarta hai 😡aur aise behave karta hai jaise isne kuch kiya hi nahi ho 😡…..lekin haan voh chhachhundar ek maamle mein apne bhai se better hai 😳…..voh jo karta hai saamne se karta hai 😊…..lekin ye Mr.Jack 😡………pehle toh ye saamne se khud kuch karte nahi hain 😡, aur auron se apna kaam karwaake jab pakde jaate hain, toh khud kabhi nahi bolte 😡……..kabhi apne uss chhachhundar bhai ko saamne le aate hain toh kabhi apne doston ko 😡….. pata nahi main chaar saal is college mein kaise bitaungi 😕....aur aaj toh sirf doosra hi din hai 😕 ....

Just then, their stop comes & all 3 of them – Kumkum, jatin and Vishal – step out and move towards the college gate.

I hv written after such a long time....so I dunno how has it cum out 😔....isliye I want honest comments from everyone...okk 😳....

Edited by nature - 18 years ago

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nikhnu

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Posted: 18 years ago

#185

wowwww........it's fantastic......keep it up 👏 👏....

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nitya

@preethi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#186

nidhi it is just superb 😃 .
bichary kk kithna gussa ma usa thodha thandha phila dho 😆 😆 😆 .
dont make us wait more.
👏 .

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nikhnu

@nikhnu

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Posted: 18 years ago

#187

ur fan fic is really great....

Edited by nikhnu - 18 years ago

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Billi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: nature
now tht my xams hv FINALLY finishd 😃 😃 so i m bak here 😉 😛..... aur is baar maine henna se inspiration lekar emoticons use kiya hain 😉....[/quote]
arre akir mein hoon hi inspirational 😆