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Posted: 19 years ago
awwww so sweeet thanx shazia, and verni this is 4 u 🤗
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Posted: 19 years ago
awwwwwwww rachu........it's lovely....and yes ab su-kk and rach-sharman.ki story aage badhao....... 😊
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C'mon Rach there are so many fans here.......go on with your story......ITNA BHI SATANA HUME ACHA NAHI HOTA!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
lol thanx guys!! i was thinkin of updatin the special part last nyt but cudnt due 2 personal reasons......but even now im not going to because i cnt resist but update the normal part!
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Previously Aman and Shravan declare love for each other. Sharman and Rach suceed in cheering Anjali up. Now to continue

Part 23

Guest stars - Cezzane Khan as Anurag Malhotra, Urvashi as Komolika Malhotra, Manish Goel as Tilak Chopra

6 Months Later!!!!

A house is shown, it is decorated outside and inside, a girl is shown walking up some stairs wearing a bright red saree with heavy embroidery. She stops at a door and knocks, her hand is shown on the door handle, she is wearing a wedding ring, she opens the door and walks in, the person she is talking to isnt shown

?????? - kya kar rahe ho tum? abhi tak tayar nahin hue

Sindoor is shown on her forehead

?????? - hmm, ab jaldi karo zyada time nahin hai

A mangalsutar is shown around her neck

?????? - of ho tum samajte kyun nahin aaj tumhari shaadi hai Shravan!!!

Shravan is shown, trying to sort his wedding clothes out

Shravan - kya karoon, mere kuch samaj nahin aata....aap meri madat karo Di!!!

Shravans sister Rach is shown, she tilts her head and smiles

Rach - tumhara kya hoga? ab main tumhare saath thodi na rehti hoon, im married lekin tumhara kayal rakhne vaali aah rahi hai is ghar mein kyun

Shravan blushes and they both laugh, someone enters the room, its Komolika

Komolika - oh my god, jaldi karo, ladki vale ke ghar bhi jaana hai!!

Rach - dont worry mom! aap neeche ka sab samaliye and ill take care of him acha

Komolika - acha beta

Rach and Shravan continue talking, another house is shown which is also decorated, inside the back of a guy is shown, he is shouting, he puts his hand up to wave the person away, he is wearing a wedding ring. He turns around and goes into the hallway and talks to someone

???? - yeh kya hai? teek se karo, god sab kuch mujhe hi karna hai? cummon this wedding needs to be perfect, aakhir meri cousin ki hai

servant - ji sir

A woman comes and sees whats happening, its Kumkum

Kumkum - sab par rog jama rahe ho kyun? jao apne papa ke paas Sharman!

Sharman turns around and smiles at his mother,

Sharman - kya ma aap bhi na

Kumkum - tumhari biwi kahan hai?

Sharman - voh tho dusre taraf se aah rahi hai na...dhule ki behen jo tehri

They smile, Kumkum turns and looks at something

Kumkum - sach, uske aane se ghar kitna pyaara hai

She goes, the photo is shown, its of Rach and Sharman on their wedding day. Back at the Malhotra household, everyone is getting ready to go

Anurag - sach main bohat kush hoon, beti ko vidaa karke ab bahu ko lekar aah raha hoon

Shravan - yes dad youre right

They hug

????? - mujhse nahin milo ge?

Shravan - arre papa!!!!

He goes and meets his dad

Anurag - hey Tilak how are you

Tilak - bete ki shaadi hai, im great

Rach - bade papa, papa, chalo baraat ko lekar jaayee

The baraat leaves, it reaches the Whadwa House, some girls along with Siya are not letting Shravan and the family in

Rach - ofho bhabhi aane bhi do

Siya - pehle shagun do

Rach - kya bhabhi

Siya - arre tujhe kyun fikar hai, hissa tumhe bhi milega, tum issi ghar ki bahu jo tehri

Komolika hands money to Siya, she lets them in, the Whadwa paivar greet them, Shravan sits in the mandap

Rach - ladki kahan hai?

Siya - hmm chalo usse lekar aate hai

They disappear, Shravan looks nervous, his dad smiles at him, soon Rach and Siya come down with the girl

Rach - sach kahoon, tho Aman tum kitni achi lag rahi ho!

Aman (whispers) - thanks bhabhi

Rach and Siya help Aman into the mandap, the phere take place, everyone throws flowers. Shravan puts sindoor on her forehead and the mangalsutar on her.

Rach - hey Sharman ro rahe ho?

Sharman - meri behen ja rahi hai, tumhe gham nahin hai

Rach - kyun hoga, mere bhai ke saath ja rahi hai, ab door thodi ja rahi hai, tum bhi na

Both of them have a little arguement

Kumkum - tumhe kya hua

Rach - mama dheko na yeh....

Kumkum - bas bhi karo

Sharman - nahin ma ab tho isse teek karna hi parega

Sumit - arre koi nach gana karo tum sab!

Sharman and Rach walk in opposite directions, Rach goes to the girls and Shravan goes to the boys, Dhruv joins him and Siya goes to Rach. Shravan starts singing Ladki Kyon from Hum Tum

Sharman
ladki kyun na jaane kyun ladkon si nahin hoti

sochti hai zyada, kaam voh samajti hai
sochti hai zyada, kaam voh samajti hai
dil kuch kehta hai, kuch aur hi karti hai

ladki kyun na jaane kyun ladkon si nahin hoti
ladki kyun na jaane kyun ladkon si nahin hoti

sochti hai zyada, kaam voh samajti hai
dil kuch kehta hai, kuch aur hi karti hai

ladki kyun na jaane kyun ladkon si nahin hoti
ladki kyun na jaane kyun ladkon si nahin hoti

pyaar usse bhi hai magar shuruat tumhi se chahe
kudh mein ulji ulji hai par baalon ko suljahe

i mean youre all the same yaar, hum ache dost hai par uss nazar se tumko dheka nahin
voh sab tho teek hai par uss baare mein maine socha nahin

sabse alag ho tum yeh kehke paas tumhare aaye aur
kuch din mein tum mein alag sa kuch bhi na usko paaye

uff yeh kaisi shirt pehnte ho, yeh kaise baal katate ho
gaadi tezz chalate ho, tum jaldi mein kyun kahte ho, gimme a break

tumhe badalne ke paas voh aati hai
tumhe mitane ko jaal bichati hai
baaton baaton mein tumhe paasati hai
pehle haasati hai fhir bada rulati hai

ladki kyun na jaane kyun ladkon si nahin hoti
ladki kyun na jaane kyun ladkon si nahin hoti

Rach
hey!
itna hi kudh se kush ho tho peeche kyun aate ho
phool kabhi tho haazar thofe aakhir kyun laate ho

apna naam nahin bataya aapne, coffee peene chalenge
main aapko ghar chordoon, hehe fhir kab milenge

bikra bikra bematlab sa toota poota jeena
aur kehte ho alag hai se hum taan ke apna seena

beegha tholia kahin farsh pe, toothpaste ka dhakan kahin
kal ke moze ulat ke pehne, waqt ka kuch bhi hosh nahin

jeene ka tumko dang sikalati hai
tumhe jaanwar se insaan banati hai
uske bina ek pal rehna sakoge tum
usko pata hai yeh kehna sakoge tum

isliye ladkiyan ladkon si nahin hoti
isliye ladkiyan ladkon si nahin hoti

Sharman
jaane kaun kaun se din voh tumko yaad dilaye
pyaar ko chahe bhool bhi jaaye tareekye na bulaye

1st March ko nazar milayi 4 April ko main milne aaye
21 May ko tumne chooha tha 6 June mujhe kuch hua tha

Rach
ladkon ka kya hai kisi bhi mod pe voh mud jaaye
abhi kisi ke hai abhi kisi aur se voh ho jaaye

tumhare mummy daddy ghar par nahin great main aajaoon
tumhari friend akeli ghar rahi hai bichari main chordaoon uff

Sharman
ek haan kehne ko kitna dehlati hai
tak jaate hai hum voh jee behlati hai

Rach
voh sharmati hai tabhi chupati hai
ladki jo haan kehde usse nibahti hai

isliye ladkiyan ladkon si nahin hoti
isliye ladkiyan ladkon si nahin hoti

Sharman
na na na ladki kyun....oh god

Rach
isliye ladkiyan ladkon si nahin hoti
isliye ladkiyan ladkon si nahin hoti

Sharman
ne ne ne ne oh someone shut her up
alright alright ismein jagadne ki kya baat hai arre

Rach
pehle pehle bavre jaise paas paas mandraye
fhir busy hoon yeh kehkar tum ko voh tarkaye
samja karo darling aaj bohat kahm hai
door hua tho kya dil mein tumhara naam hai
jis chehre par marte hai voh boring hojaye
kuch hi din mein nazrein inki idhar udhar mandraye
sirf pyaar se zindagi nahin chalti
tum interior decoration ka course kyun nahin karti

Sharman
ok thats it!

Sumit and Kumkum come between them and cool them down, both start laughing and hug each other

Rach - tum ladke na

Sharman - Rach!!!

Rach (smiles) - just joking!!!!

To be continued....

Stay tuned for Part 24!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
ahhhhhhhhh... 😃 i have nothin to say..im speechless 😳 😳 good work..hrry up nd right the next part for the normallll!!!! 😛 😳 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
yo forgot to mension wat i meant buot "normal" i meant to say write the next part of amanz( 😳 ) nd shravanz wedding:D 😃 😳 nd rach am little confused bout shravanz dad..liek anurag nd tilak..which one is there dad..anurag or tilak..cuz he says dad to both so got a little confused 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
Hey I hope we could see some-a bit romance between Sharman and Rach......or their wedding/Suhagraat or even their honeymoon na Rach.......and even this time you don't have much romance between them.......Anyways I loved the story....plz continue fast THX A LOT!! Yaar when are you gonna have scenes between them?

Don't mind-I'm sorry if I sounded rude-but I had no intentions of doing that na......I hope you understand a fan's desperation....you know how desperate I am.....you know how I feel na Rach.....I love your story just too too much.........
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Posted: 19 years ago
awwww thanx guys...lol aman well anurags Shravans stepdad....rachs real dad n tilaks shravans real dad....
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Previously Rach and Sharman are shown to be married, everyone is celebrating Aman and Shravans wedding. Now to continue

Part 24

Everyone is still at the wedding, Aman and Shravan are sitting together

Sharman - ve Shravan tum meri behen ka kayal rakho ge na

Shravan - of course Sharman kyun koi shak??

Rach - tum isse dara kyun rahe ho, Shravan iski baat mat suno ok

Shravan (laughs) - ok di

Rach - Aman main janti hoon ke tum thodi si dari hui ho lekin fikar mat karo tum jaldi hi settle ho jao gi

Aman - thanks Rach

Sumit - tum sab yahan kyun batein kar rahe ho, jao ab newly wedded couple ka waqt aah gaya dance karne ke liye

Aman - hum? nahin uncle

Shravan - kyun nahin chalo

They both get up and go to the middle, Sharman puts Sajan Tumse Pyaar Ki from Maine Pyaar Kyun Kiya

Saajan tumse pyaar ki laraayi mein
Saajan tumse pyaar ki laraayi mein
Toot gayi choodiyaan kalaayi mein, kalaayi mein
Toot gayi choodiyaan kalaayi mein
Toot gayi choodiyaan kalaayi mein

Jaanam tumse pyaar ki laraayi mein
Jaanam tumse pyaar ki laraayi mein
Jaaga main akela rajaayi mein, rajaayi mein
Jaaga main akela rajaayi mein
Jaaga main akela rajaayi mein

Pal pal har pal teri lagan
Teri ada ne le gayi man
Gore gore haathon pe mehndi ka rang
Us pe yeh sharmaane ka dhang
Us pe yeh sharmaane ka dhang

Haan main sharmaayi pyaar ki laraayi mein
Toot gayi choodiyaan kalaayi mein, kalaayi mein
Toot gayi choodiyaan kalaayi mein
Toot gayi choodiyaan kalaayi mein

Bechaini tadpaati rahi
Chaandni dil dhadkaati rahi
Seene pe bijli si chali
Karwat leke raat dhali
Karwat leke raat dhali

Neendiya na aayi pyaar hi laraayi mein
Jaaga main akela rajaayi mein, rajaayi mein
Jaaga main akela rajaayi mein
Jaaga main akela rajaayi mein
Jaanam tumse pyaar ki laraayi mein
Jaaga main akela rajaayi mein, rajaayi mein
Jaaga main akela rajaayi mein
Jaaga main akela rajaayi mein

Toot gayi choodiyaan kalaayi mein
Toot gayi choodiyaan kalaayi mein

At the end Shravan and Aman are hugging each other, Sharman whistles and the pair get embarrased and let each other go

Kumkum - vaah acha dance kiya tumne

Shravan (blushes) - thanks aunty

The wedding is over, the vidai has taken place, Sharman and Rach are in their room, Rach has just got changed into a nightie

Rach - kya soch rahe ho?

Sharman - bas ke Aman kush rahe

Rach - tum chinta bohat karte ho

Sharman - vaise aaj tum bohat nach rahi thi? (hugs Rach from behind) kya tumne abhi tak pata kiya hai ke kya main papa banne vala hai?

Rach - of ho, kal doctor ke paas jaoongi aur pata lag jayega if im pregnant or not

They sit on the bed, Sharman puts his head in Rach's lap

Sharman - agar tum ma banne vali ho tho dheklena main dehd saare toys, teddy bears aur bachche ke liye kapre lekar aaonga

Rach (smiles) - acha

Sharman - haan aur next door jo spare kamra hai usse main nursery mein convert kardoon ga, aur poora ghar baby proof kardoon ga, haan aur baby posters laoon ga main is kamre mein

Rach - aur?

Sharman - aur bachche ka saara samaan laoon ga, nappies, cot, pushchair, car seat....

Rach - bachche ke liye sab kuch....ma ke liye kuch nahin

Sharman - of course laoon ga, tumhare maternity clothes, tumhare liye bbaloons aur dehd saare flowers

Rach - so sweet...lekin Whadwa...Sharman Whadwa pehle yeh tho pata karne do ke main pregnant hoon ke nahin

Sharman - tho pata laga loon ge aur agar tum pregnant nahin ho tho koi baat nahin (looks naughtily at Rach) hum aur koshish karenge na

Rach playfully hits him

Rach - tum na....kya baatein kar rahe ho agar kisi ne sun liya

Sharman - tum naraz kyun hoti ho? main tho srif....

Rach - acha baba chordo aur so jao, good night

Sharman - haan good night

Rach gets in bed but Sharman still thinks about what it would be like if they have a baby

**imagination**

shows Sharman, Rach overlooking a sleeping baby in baby cot, both of them hug each other and watch the baby sleep

**reality**

Rach - kya soch rahe ho? aajaoo so jao

Sharman - kuch nahin, aah raha hoon

He gets up and gets into bed, he kisses Rach on the forehead and cheek and turns the light off

The next day Rach is on her way to the doctors. She reaches the surgery and opens the door......

To be continued

is rach pregnant? find out in part 25!!!




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