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Shazia_haya thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
Hey thx for the lovely update.....I waited so badly.....so must know how badly Rach, ryt? lolz

I'm now waiting for the next update.

Well I read between the topics that you love reading books......me too and I've got uncountable amount of books at home!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
lol aman ur gna have 2 wait and find out....i actually planned wat im gunna do before i went 2 sleep 😆 😆 😆

Nooori jaan glad u liked it....haan ill update soon but after the special prt 😃

awww thanx shaziaaa!!! ye i hav books at home but i tend 2 get them frm the library 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
Special Part 11 - honeymoon day 1!!!!!

Guest Starring Anuj Saxena as Jatin the Taxi Driver

Kumkum and Sumit have arrived in Mauritius, Sumit collects the luggage and goes to find a taxi, he taps someone on the shoulder

Sumit - excuse me?

???? - yes

Sumit - is this taxi yours?

???? - of course mine....wait....you indian?

Sumit - yes indian.....but

???? - oyee balllleeeee shaavaaa main bhi indian sat sri akal ji!!!!

He hugs Sumit, Sumit feels a bit uncomfortable

Sumit - ji....sat sri akal

???? - main hoon Jatin, taxi driver aur tour guide, kahan jaana hai tuahnu??

Sumit - ji teher jao aap yeh saaman rakho main apni biwi ko lekar aata hoon

Jatin - oh jaldi jaayee ji, main tuhada wait karta hoon

Sumit looks at the guy, gives a half smile and goe to get Kumkum, 5 minutes later he comes back

Jatin - yeh thuadi ki kende ah....better half

Sumit - ji haan yeh meri biwi Kumkum hai, Kumkum yeh Jatin hai, taxi driver

Kumkum (smiles) - namaste

Jatin - oh namaste bhabhi ji, aao baitho, kahan jaana main chord tha hoon

Sumit - humhe Lazaros Hotel chord do, baito Kumkum

They sit, during the drive Jatin tells them about his homelife, Sumit rolls his eyes, Kumkum laughs at him and tells him quietly to be nice. 1 hour later they arrive at the hotel

Jatin - oh lo aagayae, main saaman kadta hoon

Sumit - thankyou, yeh lo aap ke paise

Jatin - oh kya Sumit paaji, aap se paise nahin leh sakta

Sumt - leh lo please varna yeh udhar mere sar par rahega

Jatin - chalo teek ah, changa fhir, have a good trip.

Sumit - thank you.....

Kumkum and Sumit are about to go

Jatin - oh suniye ji

Sumit - ji?

Jatin - yeh lo mera card, agar kisi cheez ki zuroorat hai tho mainu zuroor yaad karlo

Sumit - zuroor, bye

He leaves, Kumkum looks at Sumits expression and laughs

Sumit - ajeeb aadmi tha....

They laugh

Kumkum - chalo

They go inside

Sumit - excuse me im Mr Sumit Whadwa, i beleieve there is a reservation here for us?

Assistant - yes sir the honeymoon suite, room number 12b, the bellboy will show you the wy

Sumit - thank you

They go to their room, Sumit and Kumkum open the door and find it is decorated with red and white hearts, and the bed is decorated with rose petals.

Kumkum - wow its so beautiful

Sumit - tumse kaam

Kumkum - Sumit....

Sumit - kya? sach tho hai, chalo view dhek the hai

They look out the window and can see the ocean

Kumkum - vaaah

Sumit - kamaal hai

Sumit orders room service and a bottle of champagne, when it arrives he pours two glasses, Kumkum hesitated but took it. Sumit asked Kumkum to dance, he puts Koi Tumse Nahin from Krissh

dhoop nikalti hai jahaan se, dhoop nikalti hai jahaan se
dhoop nikalti hai jahaan se
chandni rehti hai jahaan pe
khabar yeh ayi hai wahaan se
koi tumsa nahin, oh koi tumsa nahin
koi tumsa nahin, oh koi tumsa nahin

neend chupti hain jahaan pe, neend chupti hain jahaan pe
neend chupti hain jahaan pe
khwaab sajte hain jahaan pe
khabar yeh ayi hai wahaan se
koi tumsa nahin, oh koi tumsa nahin
koi tumsa nahin, oh koi tumsa nahin

phool, titli aur kaliyaan, ho gaye tumse khafa
hoo Phool, titli aur kaliyaan, ho gaye tumse khafa
chhen li joh tumne inse, pyaar ki har ek ada
pyaar ki har ek ada
Rang banta hain jahaan pe, rang banta hain jahaan pe
rang banta hain jahaan pe
roop milta hain jahaan se
khabar yeh ayi hai wahaan se
koi tumsa nahin, oh koi tumsa nahin
koi tumsa nahin, oh koi tumsa nahin

mere dilke chor ho tum, kiya tumhe ehsaas hai
haan Mere dilke chor ho tum, kiya tumhe ehsaas hai
ishq tha duniya mein jitna, sab tumhare paas hai
sab tumhare paas hai
hey deewanapan jahaan pe, hey deewanapan jahan pe
hey deewanapan jahan pe
bante hain ashiq jahaan pe
khabar yeh ayi hai wahaan se
koi tumsa nahin, oh koi tumsa nahin
koi tumsa nahin, oh koi tumsa nahin

dhoop nikalti hai jahaan se, dhoop nikalti hai jahaan se
dhoop nikalti hai jahaan se
chandni rehti hai jahaan pe
khabar yeh ayi hai wahaan se
koi tumsa nahin, oh koi tumsa nahin
koi tumsa nahin, oh koi tumsa nahin

After the song has ended Kumkum feels tired and wants to sleep

Sumit - kya sleeep?

Kumkum - haan bohat neend aah rahi hai

Sumit - kya.....eek hai sojao

She falls asleep, Sumit watches her for a while then also falls asleep.

to be continued!

Day 2 of the honeymoon in part 12!!!




anku2cute thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
wahhhh rach jee...acha tha par chota tha...wsh there ws less of jatin n more of hmmmmm sukk 😃 😃 😃

ab whn s d next part jee 😉 😉 😉 am eagerkky w8ting...i wsh kal hi u do the next spl part as a bday gft fr me 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
aw wicked sweets plzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon i am totally luvin ur fanfic

Luvs YA

Luv Noori (strawberries and cream luva)
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Posted: 19 years ago
awwww ankitaa.....acha hua socha thodi si comedy bhi karloon.....erm ill see agar mere pas tym hua then i will
Rachu_1987 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
awww thanx a lot noori glad u liked it sis 😊
anku2cute thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: rachandeep

awwww ankitaa.....acha hua socha thodi si comedy bhi karloon.....erm ill see agar mere pas tym hua then i will

hehe...tym nikalooooooooooooooooooooooooo😆

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Posted: 19 years ago
I love the story.......continue fast......I'm still waiting for the next part........I'm getting good at being patient and all na Rach?
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Posted: 19 years ago
rachu jaan it's becoming beautiful day by day...............ar say part by part.............lovely.........get going..... 👏

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