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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey guys thanks so much for liking my previous update...WOW it seems like forever since I started this FanFic...This FanFic is very special to me I started it the day I joined the IF and through this I have met some AMAZINGLY WONDERFUL people...The FanFic became a part of my everyday life I looked forward to updating it and reading all the comments...Your comments have been so ENDEARING and USEFUL...I am SO GLAD that I wrote this FanFic and joined the IF...I am happy to tell you all that I am finally posting the last part of the FanFic Pyar Toh Hona Hi Tha...I did have some more tracks to introduce in the ff but I feel like I won't be able to update it as promptly and I won't do justice to the writing either so it is better to end it when you all like me and the ff 😆😆😆...Once again guys THANKS SO MUCH for reading and liking the ff mwah and hopefully you will ENJOY the last part😃😃😃 Luv Alwayz Sahar😳
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Hey guys if you haven't done so please read the message I posted above😃and ENJOY the last part
Part 43: End mein sab kuch theek ho hi jata hai

Recap:

After a minute Rajiv passes away

Sumit: Rajiv nahin Rajiv tu aisa nahin karsaakta RAJIV

The paramedics try to revive him but no use

Para 1: Sorry Mr. Wadwa he had lost too much blood

Sumit: Nahin yeh nahin hosaakta

Para 2: Mr. Wadwa

Sumit: No I am telling you damn it... this is not possible...check him again

Para 1: There is nothing we can do

Sumit: Please check him again...yeh

The paramedics try to revive Rajiv and this time they are successful...He starts breathing but is not concious

Para 1: Mr. Wadwa lagta hai apki baat theek thi apka dost phirse breathe karna shuroo kardiya

Sumit is relieved...now the paramedics take them all to the hospital...The whole family gathers there...after half an hour the doctor comes out

Doc: Can I talk to Mr. Wadwa in private?

Sumit walks over to him

Doc: I don't know how to tell you this but Rajiv might have dogded death but

Sumit: BUT WHAT

Doc: Um woh coma mein chala gaya hai actually loss of blood (Doctor continues but Sumit doesn't listen to him)

Sumit: Coma lekin woh toh theek hogaya tha naa (he walks away)

Sahar: Sumit kya kaha doctor nay?

Sumit is quiet and stunned

Sahar: Tum kuch bolte KYON nahin...KYA kaha usne...kya main milsakthi hoon ussey

Sumit: Woh

Sahar: Main janti hoon woh bilkul theek hogaya naa...main abhi jakar dekhti hoon Raj...

Sumit pushes her towards himself

Sumit (with tears in his eyes): Rajiv coma mein chala gaya hai

Sahar is stunned for a minute then she comes to her senses

Sahar: NAHIN tum jhoot bool rahe ho naa (she hits him in denial and then she starts crying)

Sumit: Sahar dekho ro maat woh jaldi theek hojaaye ga you don't worry main janta hoon Rajiv humain chod kar nahin jaaye ga

Sahar: Sumit woh (she is unable to say anything)

Everyone is in a state of shock and misery...After a few minutes the doctor comes in again with new pertaining to Kumkum's current situation

Sumit: Doctor Kumkum ab kaisi hai

Doc: Woh abhi out of danger nahin hai...agar agle 10 ghante mein usey hosh nahin aya toh woh bhi coma mein jasaakhti hai

Sumit and everyone else receive another shock...Sumit steps out to the reception area and sits on a couch...Suddenly he feels somebody's hand on his shoulder and Sumit looks up

Sumit: Preeti tum

Preeti: Tumhe kya laaga kay itna kuch hojaaye ga aur main nahin aoon gyi

Sumit (tearing up): Preeti woh Rajiv aur Kumkum...

Preeti: Main janti hoon Sumit don't worry sab kuch theek hojaaye ga (to herself) Mere liya don't worry ab kuch hi waqt reh gaya hai jab tum meri bahoon mein hoon gaye (Preeti tries to hug him)

Sumit: Preeti main Kumkum ko dekh kar ata hoon

Preeti: Sure (to herself) dekh aao kyon ki bechari jarahi hai humain chod kar

Sumit goes to Kumkum's room and goes to sit right next to her...He looks at her for a while lovingly and starts to brush through her hair...He starts to think of all the good memories

Flashback:

As he is about to knock Kumkum opens the door in his face and hits him on his nose.

Sumit: Oh what the heck man AOOOOOO Oh mannnn yaar tu dekhe kar nahin door open kar saakhta tah (He doesn't look at Kumkum and that's why calls her a man)

Kumkum (A little confused and flustered): Waise main woman hoon lekin I am sorry mujhe nahin paata tha keh aap yahan door ke samaney hoon gay

Sumit looks up and feels something unusual...a feeling he doesn't understand YET. For few seconds he keeps staring and then Kumkum starts talking.

Kumkum: Hello are you ok??? Kuch bole nahin rahein aap...kahin maine saakth toh nahin maar diya

Sumit: Oh nahin I am sorry meri hi galti thi main door kay samanay karda sooch raha tha keh knock karoon keh nah...I was nervous to meet you

Kumkum: Arre that's perfect

Sumit: HUH

Kumkum: Nahin nahin kyon ki main bhi nervous thi mujhe laga paata nahin kaun psycho ho

Sumit: Lekin main aapko psycho toh nahin lagta na

Kumkum: Well woh toh thodi der baad main judge karke hi bataaon gyi

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Sumit: So hum kya karein gay is challenge mein

Kumkum: Mujhe kuch paata nahin hai lagta hai yeh toh hum harein gay

Sumit: Way to go Ms. Negativity

Kumkum: Sumit

Sumit: Let's pick a song at least

Kumkum: I don't know

Sumit: How about one of your Shahid ji's songs??

Kumkum: Main Shahid ko achi memories kay saath yaad rakhna chahiti hoon aur yeh performance to DISASTER hone wali hai so let's not pick his song

Sumit: Yaar toh phir toh hum TROUBLE mein hain...how about we dance to Zinda Hoon Main

Kumkum: Pagal ho gaye ho kya

Sumit: Nahin tumne kardiya hai

Kumkum: Kya

Sumit: Oh Kuch nahin

Kumkum: Acha hum itna DEPRESSING song nahin karyein gay

Sumit: Ok how about Beedi

Kumkum(Slaps him on his head in a friendly manner): Yeh mazaak ka waqt bilkul nahin hai

Sumit: Toh iska metlaab Zara Zara Touch Me is out

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Kumkum slips when she is spinning but HANDSOME Sumit catches her in his arms and she smiles...Preeti leaves after seeing this

Kumkum(to herself): Tum kab kab bachao gay mujhe

Sumit(tohimself): Jab bhi tumhe bachnay ki zaroorat hogi

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He starts to walk towards Preeti who is standing next to Kumkum...Kumkum moves a little away because she is not happy that he is going to kiss her...As Sumit reaches near Preeti LIGHTS GO OFF but Sumit continues anyway he holds her hands which are cold but very soft... he gets closer and closer to her and Sumit slants his head to the left and she slants towards the right...they are so close now that their lips start to shiver a little and then they kiss

Sumit(to himself): Ishq hai tu mera aur main chahtha hoon kay yeh waqt yahin tahm jaaye...main tumhare saath apni zindagi guzarna chahta hoon aur dekh layna hum eik ho kar hi rahein gay

He is holding her hand and kissing her still...the lights are still off and suddenly he feels a poke in his finger and realizes its her bracelet

Sumit immediately steps away and realizes that he has kissed KUMKUM in the dark

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Sumit: Kyon karahi ho yeh

Kumkum: Kya

Sumit: Haar baat pay mere liye cover up karahi ho, meri koi baat bhi tumhe bori nahin lagti...

Kumkum: Main tumse pyar karti hoon Sumit

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Sumit (to himself): Tum kitna pyar karti ho naa mujse aur main tumhe kabhi pyar wapis nahin de paya kitna pagal tha main jo main jaan nahin paya kay tum hi mera saacha pyar ho hum dunno hi eik dosre kay saati hain aur ab jab main tum ko kohne wala hoon toh mujhe paatha chala kay tumse hi meri zindagi hai Kumkum tum nahin toh Sumit bhi nahin Tumhe wapis ana hoga Kumkum mere liye wapis ana hoga (he is tearing up and he wipes his tears)

Then Sumit leans in and touches Kumkum's face then he reaches towards her lips and kisses her and as soon as he gets up

Kumkum: Sumit (She says it faintly)

Sumit: Kumkum KUMKUM tum theek ho Kumkum tum theek ho Kumkum (he hugs her) Tum nahin janti mera kya haal hogaya tha tumhare bina Kumkum thodi der kayliye mujhe toh laaga kay mujse meri saansein kissi nay cheen li hoon Kumkum main bohut khush hoon Kumkum tum theek ho

Kumkum: Zayaada hi daara diya naa maine

Sumit: Haan aur phir aisa maat karna warna main maar jaon ga

Kumkum puts her hand on his lips: Sumit aisa maat kaho

Sumit removes her hand: I love you Kumkum main tumse bohut pyar karta hoon (he hugs her)

Then the doctors come in and check up on Kumkum

Doc: Wow Mr. Wadwa yahan bhi good news aur udhar bhi

Sumit: What do you mean?

Doc: Rajiv has recovered too

Sumit: Kya matlab woh coma mein

Doc: Ab nahin hai

Sumit: OMG yeh kaise hua

Doc: You can call it a miracle Mr. Wadwa uper wale nay hi sab kuch kiya warna humare haat mein toh kuch bhi nahin tha

Kumkum: Sumit main Rajiv se milna chahiti hoon

Sumit: haan haan aao

Both of them go to Rajiv's room where everyone is standing around Rajiv and Sahar is sitting by his side

Sumit: Rajiv kya samjhta hai tu apne apko haan is tarah sab ko daarane ka koi haaq nahin hai samjha tu (he tears up and hugs him)

Rajiv: Arre mujhe toh laaga tha kay main toh gaya lekin lagta hai uper wala saari ladkiyoon ko disappoint nahin karna chatha tha

Sahar hits him lightly

Sumit: Dramebaaz ab toh sudhar ja ring bhi dedi Sahar ko

Rajiv: Arre usne yeh accept toh ki lekin woh janti hai zindagi baar yeh sehna padhe ga

Sahar: Manzoor hai lekin phirse aisa kuch maat karna samjhe

Everyone is happy and all but soon the police enters

Police: Sorry to disturb but humein is case kay baare mein investigation karni hai

Sumit: It's ok ap puchiye jo puchna hai

Police asks them to explain what happened and Rajiv tells them exactly what happened and also tells them the truck number that crashed into them

Police: Thank you for your cooperation hum jald se jald apka case solve karne ki khoshish karein gaye

Few days pass and Rajiv, Kumkum, Sumit, Preeti are called down to the police station

Police: Hi humne ap sab ko yahan isliye bulaya hai kyon ki humain paatha chal gaya hai kay apka accident kis nay karaya hai

Sumit: Toh apka matlab hai kay woh accident kissi kay kehne par karaya gaya tha

Police: Bilkul jo truck number Rajiv nay humain diya usey humne driver ko pakar liya and we found out that woh accident planned tha

Everyone is shocked and Preeti feels nervous

Preeti: Are you sure woh meher eik accident nahin tha

Police: Yes kya ap loog jaana chahein gaye who was the mastermind behind all this woh accident Preeti ney karwaya tha

Sumit: KYA

Preeti: Nahin Sumit yeh sab jhoot hai Sumit

Sumit: Bakwaas band karo tumne meri Kumkum ka accident karwaya tum itni ghir jao gyi maine soocha bhi nahin tha door ho jao meri nazaroon se

Preeti: Sumit HAAN maine karwaya uska accident aur main toh yeh bhi chathi thi kay woh MAAR JAYE isne mujhe tumse door kiya Sumit...Sumit tum mero ho aur isne

Sumit: Main tumhara nahin hoon mujhe toh ab samjh mein aya hai pyar hota kya hai aur woh bhi Kumkum ki wajah se Kumkum hi mera saacha pyar hai aur koi nahin samjhi tum

Preeti: SUMIT NAHIN MAIN....(Police takes her away)

Police: Don't worry Mr. Wadwa ab woh jail se nikal nahin paye gyi and you are safe from her

They get home and everyone is happy that finally all is good now

Rajiv: arre khushi ka mookha hai toh main bhi kuch announce kardoon next month saari ladikyaan sad hone wali hain kyon ki Rajiv Sahar se shaadi karne wala hai June 2nd (he hugs Sahar)

Everyone continues to celebrate and then Sumit pulls Kumkum aside

Sumit: Kumkum um mere saath aao

Kumkum: Kahan

Sumit: Shhh no questions

They both drive off to Sumit's vacation house

Kumkum: Sumit yeh ghar kitna pyara hai OMG

Sumit: Abhi humara kamra toh dekho (he takes her to the room and it is all decorated with flowers and candles)

Kumkum: Sumit yeh sab tumne

Sumit: Bohut bolti ho tum acha yeh lo

Kumkum: Kya hai yeh

Sumit: Gift

It's a red saari and Kumkum goes to other room and wears it...She looks like a dulhan and she feels a little shy

Sumit: Tum kuch bhool nahin rahi

Kumkum: Nahin tumhare liye chodha

Sumit smiles and takes the sindhoor and puts it in Kumkum's mang

Sumit: I love you Kumkum aur main bohut hi idiot hoon kay main yeh realize nahin kar paaya pehle

Kumkum: Khabardaar agar mere hippo ko idiot kaha

Sumit: Ok sorry pandaboo

Then he leans in kisses Kumkum on the lips...Kumkum feels a little shy and Sumit smiles he picks her up and takes her to the bed all decorated with rose petals...She closes her eyes and Sumit touches her face and smiles...Kumkum opens her eyes and kisses his hand...Then Sumit kisses her again...The lights go offfffffffff lol

Here is a VM to go with the Suahaagraat😉😉😉
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WyLXy_wyL9U[/YOUTUBE]
Well the life will continue to be AMAZING for Sumit, Kumkum and everyone else...Rajiv and Sahar and Naz and Gaurav end up getting married together on June 2nd...Obviously Sumit and Kumkum attend but pregnant Kumkum that is...they are expecting a kid in March 2010 = )
Edited by Sahar18 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
tht was coolllllllllll i love last part
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
What!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! don't tell me this is ur last part..................all the time i'm waiting 4 ur updates & now u're saying that u've finished this ff.............that's such a bad news..............Kumkum serial khatam ho gaya..........yeah ff was the only way by which we could be close 2 our favorite jodi on television.................I'm very very upset................
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Posted: 16 years ago
lovely part nice to see sukk together
but why r u ending the fanfic
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Posted: 16 years ago
loved your ff
try to write another one

Irika

Posted: 16 years ago
we loved the last part. but you could have continued as it was so good. it was like watching kumkum serial. please write new ff and we will sure read it. thanks again for lovely ff.
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Posted: 16 years ago
what a fantastic end sahar
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Posted: 16 years ago
aaaaaaaaaaaaa..............sisi
aap ne apna ff itna jaldi finish kar diya............
well aap ka last pari ff ka baouth hi acha tha.............
it was really nice the way end it...........
thanks for the wonderful ending with the vm
hahah..........vm was cute toooooooooooooo
thanks for this wonderful story
aur aap ko meri trafs se pure 100 out of 100 milte hain
is amazing mindblowing fantastic story ke liye
thansk for lettign me know
luv u
mariam

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