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soundsofcedar

@soundsofcedar

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Posted: 16 years ago

#301

Originally posted by: juhuti

hey sahar no need to hurry up....take ur time..we can wait..study comes first and then all the other things...so take ur time
love afreen

Thanks Sweetheart but I am taking a break from all the studying today I am so beat 😆 and I have Monday off so I can update today😃 Though I really appreciate your support hun🤗🤗 Luv Alwayz Sahar😳

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soundsofcedar

@soundsofcedar

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#302

Part 17: 😭Sab Eik Sapna Tha😭

They both are still mad at each other😡

Kumkum(knocks at Sumit's door): Agar aap tayaar ho gaye ho toh bahir a jaye ga main yahan wait karahi hoon😡

Sumit(opens the door): Chalo waise wait karne ki apko zaroorat nahin thi😡

Kumkum: Janti hoon ab chalein

They go to the lobby for the meeting

Kay: Well guys hum ne decide kiya hai kay aaj you all deserve a break so ENJOY it and we will have another challenge tomorrow😃

Preeti: So guys hum kya karein gay aaj😃

Sumit: Mujhe inka toh paatha nahin😡 lekin main aur tum eik romantic picnic par jayein gay😃

Preeti: Really Sumit you are GREAT 😃

Sumit: I love you😃

Kumkum gets a little disturbed😡 when he says that and faces the opposite direction😡

Rahul: Acha tum log enjoy karo main aur Kumkum Goa dekhein gay right Kumkum😃

Kumkum: Jo tum chaho😊

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At their picnic😃

Preeti: Sumit tumhe paatha hai kitne dinyoon baad hum is tara waqt bita rahey hain I am SO HAPPY😃

Sumit(Not paying attention): Haan main bhi😕

Preeti: Tumhein paatha hai kya hua eik ladka keh raha tha.....(As she is telling a story)😃

Kumkum: Arre Sumit miss kar rahe they na mujhe😃

Sumit: Nahin😡

Kumkum: Dekho main jaanti hoon kay tum mujhe picnic par lana chahtay they so main agayi acha hippo ab khana thoda share karo na😛

Sumit: Tum yahan kyon ayi ho?😕

Kumkum: Sumit yeh sawaal tum apne ap se pucho hmmmmm yeh jawaab khud tumhein tumhare dil se milay ga😉

Sumit: Tum kya keh rahi mujhe kuch samajh nahi arahi😕

Preeti: Arre baba maine kaha na kay woh naach raha tha toh maine usko trip kardiya hahaha😆

Sumit: Kya😕

Preeti: Kya kya???😕

Sumit: I am sorry main...tum continue karo😕(to himself) Mujhe kya ho raha mujhe Kumkum kyon nazar ayi aur main apne dil se kya pucho mujhe kuch samajh nahin arahi yeh kya ho raha hai mere saath😕

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Around the city😉

Rahul: So meri Kumkum kahan jana chahiti hai 😃

Kumkum: I don't care jahan tum janna chahatey ho😕

Rahul: Ok wahan chalein (As he is talking)😊

Sumit: Nahin Kumkum tum toh beach par janna chahiti ho naa itna acha musaam hai aur uper se tum theek bhi nahin ho ao chalein😃

Kumkum: NAHIN kyon aye ho tum yahan??😡

Sumit: Arre tum chahiti thi kay main tumhare phaas rahoon kyon ki tum mujhse😉...

Kumkum: BILKUL NAHIN chale jao yahan se😡

Sumit: Theek hai lekin kya tum mujhe apne dil se nikhal pao gi😉

Kumkum: HAAN😡

Rahul: Ok then coffee pehle pitay hain aur phir museum dekhte hain😃

Kumkum: hmmm 😕(to herself) yeh kya hai kyon mujhe Sumit yaad araha hai na woh mujhse pyaar karta hai toh main kyon uski oor khichti ja rahi hoo...Mujhe kuch karna hoga😕

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At 5:30pm

Kay: Hey guys today hum dinner akhatey karein gay...So please enjoy the food aur khaney kay baad eik surprise aap sab kay liye😉

Rahul: So Preeti picnic kaisi rahi😃

Preeti: Bohut achi Sumit ne sab kuch bohut acha plan kiya hua tha aur tumhari sight seeing kaisi thi 😃

Rahul: Great yahan ki coffee toh BOHUT achi hai😉😉

(Preeti and Rahul gesture to each other😃 since SuKk are not talking at all)

Preeti: Acha toh Kumkum ummmmm oh nice bracelet😊

(SuKk look at each other😭)

Preeti: Kahan se li tumne😃

Kumkum: Woh eik ache dost ne gift ki thi😭

Preeti: Kahan rehta hai yeh dost😊

Kumkum (looking at Sumit): Dost tha😭 ab bus ajnabi sa bun kay reh gaya hai😡...main samajhi thi kay woh bohut acha hai lekin woh sab ki tarah chala gaya chor kar mujhe😭

Sumit: May be tumne usey kuch zayada hi mang liya tha woh mang liya tha jo woh already kissi koh day chuka hai😭

Kumkum: Main nahin janti thi kay usey woh manganay ki yeh sazah milay gi kay woh apni dosti bhi mujhse khatum kar day ga 😭

Sumit: Us ne dosti wapis mangi nahin thi may be tumne hi tor di😭

Kumkum: But the important thing is that kay ab wo toot chuki hai😡

Preeti: Wow mujhe nahin paatha tha kay itne chotey sawaal ka itna bada jawaab mile ga😆

Kay: Sorry for interrupting lekin guys humney basement mein aap kay liye dance floor arrange kiya hai so please go down stairs and HAVE FUN😊

SuPr and RaKk are dancing and this is the song playing in the background:

😭

Kahin to.. kahin to
Hogi wo,
Duniya jahan tu mere saath hai..

Jahan mein, jahan tu,
Aur jahan, bass tere mere jazbaat hai,
Hogi jahan subah teri,
Palko ki, kirano mein,
Lori jahan chand ki,
Sune teri baahoin mein..

Jaane naa kahan wo duniya hai,
Jaane naa wo hai bhi ya nahi,
Jahan meri zindagi mujhse,
Itni khafa nahi...

Saasein kho gayi hai kiski aahon mein,
Mein kho gayi hu jaane kiski baahon mein,
Manzilon se raahein doodhti chali,
Kho gayi hai manzil kahin rahon mein..

Kahin to, kahin to,
Hai nasha..
Teri meri har mulaqaat mein,
Hoton se, hoton ko,
Chumti, o rehte hai hum har baat pe,
Kehti hai fiza jahan,
Teri zamin aasmaan..

Jahan hai tu, meri hassi,
Meri khushi, meri jaan…

Jaane naa kahan wo duniya hai,
Jaane naa wo hai bhi ya nahi,
Jahan meri zindagi mujhse,
Itni khafa nahi..

😭

During the song, Sumit and Kumkum are constantly looking at each other!!!!

Kumkum(to Herself): Yeh theek nahin ho raha mujhe hi kuch karna hoga😡😕 (to Rahul) kya tum mujhse pyar karte ho😭

Rahul: Haan😃

Kumkum: Toh agar main tumse kuch kahoon toh woh karo gay mere liye😭

Rahul: Of Course😃

***😃For all of you who want some romance between Sumit and Kumkum should wait for next update because I am ADDING AN AMAZINGLY CUTE SCENE between SuKk thanks to the ideas of Nazia (AKA Roza123) and Afreen (AKA juhuti) so STAY TUNED AND I WILL MAKE IT UP TO YOU GUYS SOON😃***

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Afreen

@-Afeelicious-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#303

OMG sahar
ab main kia bolooon....bas yahi keh sakti hoon
k the part was just SUPERB...MINDBLOWING...
EXCELLENT.....AWESOMEEEEEEEEEE
totally loved it.....

really loved those dream sequences
😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
nice dialogs...........
par ye kia suspence pe khatm kar dia
pata nahiin k kk us ra😡😡😡
se kia maange gi

can't wait for the next part
if u have then plzzzzzz
upload the next part soon.
love afreen

Edited by juhuti - 16 years ago

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sonia

@miss.sonia

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Posted: 16 years ago

#304

AS ALWAY FANTASTIC,AWESOME AND SOO ON ....... :p

UPDATE SOON AND THANKS FOR THE PM

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shafia Akhtar

@IISHAFS

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#305

wowow tht was cool part plzz contuied soon

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Nazmien aka Naz

@NazNgs

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#306

Haila Sahar 2 parts already..OMG im so much behind...uff going to catch up now

Meri Comments for part 16

NAHIINNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!

sab kuch barbaad hogayi....🤢😲

AAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! 😡😡

Ya rabba, Hee bhagwan, Ya Khuda, Hee Matarani, Hee Shambunath

Ya Bajrangbali, O My God, Jesus Christ,

ye kya hogayaaaaaaaaaa.....

😭

Sahar yaara..omg ye tune kya kiya yaar

Mere ansooo to abhi rukhi thi..ab phirse shuru hogayi yaar

mere to saare rumaals gele hogaye

OMG..SuKk alag hogaye..😲😭

Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!

jee karta hain main kissi koewe mein chalaang lagadoon

par kya karoon yahaan winter hain na to sab koewas are frozen😆

to wo bhi nahi karsakti...

Im devastated yaar...yaa khuda koi mujhe sambhalo..

But Sahar...what a writing yaar..omg

awesome, fantastic, mindblowing

with every part of ur fanfic..i get blown away...

the dialogues omg so perrrfeecctt ufff

Amazing yaar...the Su Kk jagra parts are so painful and so well written

i could actually hear them scream to each other

in the end part in the room..

kaise ye sab tum soch lete ho yaar..kaise..?

uffff when reading..i was shocked just like when

watching SuKk fights during the Yash track in Kumkum

Ufff Fantastic..

AND omg ye RaPr ko na..ufffff 😡

Innko to main goli maaro yaar

ahhhhh ek gun se inn ke bheje ko ura dena chahti hoon

ufff ye Kameena aur ye churail..ufff mere ko high bloodpressure de rahe hain🤢😡

ufffff kab ye dono peetenge yaara..im really waiting to read that part

where RaPr gets tappars and maar..god bahut mazaa aayega mujhe wo din..

Anyways 16 part was fab..even though it is the jagra part.. u wrote so well

and ya the funny part in the beginnning was also cute...when Su says

yaara ab main kya karooon..😆 it was funny from Su angle par from Kk angle it was kind of painfull

anyways awesome part...

going to read part 17 now...😃

Meri comment for part 17

haila jagra is still on

OMg so painfull to read when Su says ILU to Churail

awwww poor Kk

awwww love the part when Su sees kk

while the churail is talking abt her nonsense stories😆

ya Su apne dil se poocho aur churail ko goli maaro

aur Kk also sees Su..

ufff yaar Sehar..ab to mera dil karta hain ye parts main waaki scenes mein dekhoon

Mindblowing part yaar both dreaming abt each other in their confusion

MINDBLOWING....and the lines so well written ek dum perfect yaar...

OMG yaar Su Kk talking so painfully to each other

when churail asks about Kk bracelet

and then that part ther of Kk Su talkin abt the dosti

omg omg cried buckets full of tears😭

Aur ye Churail aur kameena Sukk ke wounds pe salt lagarahe hain

uffff just want to kill PrRa..bekaar log hain ye..

god i really hate them😡

And the song..omg the lyrics are makin me so sad

yaar And Kumkum what is she gonne do 😕

OMG kya maangne wali hain wo Kameena se

omg i hope its somethin he can't do for her..

O god kahin kuch ghalat na hojaaye..

Omg Sehar yaar jaldi next part beecho

aur ye jagra please jaldi khatam kardo yaar

my heart can't take it anymore

all this dukh and ansoo is gettin too much yaara

😭

Pleaseeee Sehar make it up to us soon yaar

mujhse aur SuKk ki doorie bardaash nahi hoti yaar

Ye doorie ab sahee jaaye naa

Uff hope i will smile again in ur next part...

But even if the part was painfull and heartbreaking

the writing is Amazing and really Serial material

creatives yahaan check karle to unko bhi malung hojaayega

ke kitne talented log hain yahaan...

Sehar u should really make serials yaar..such fantastic parts likhte ho na tum

u and Noorya should really take this writing seriously..

coz u guys write Mindblowing stuff here

aisa dialogues aisa dynamic parts

to sirf masters likh sakte hain

aur Sehar u r a Fanfic Pro writer yaar

a Master in writing..

really love ur fanfic..keep writing

waiting for next part...😃

Edited by RuhaanSimifan - 16 years ago

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maheen hanif

@maheen55

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#307

i like the way ur writing waiting for next part some romence between kumkum and sumeet

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Priya

@Pearl29

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#308

OMG Sukk ka itna gussa ................didn't think that it will result in such a big fight.................now can't wait 2 c what surprise u have in store 4 us..................can't wait 2 read it now..............just loved the dream sequence which u added................

U know that there r crazy fans of Sukk here so whenever someone writes about them or about their seperation or anything bad .................then it becomes difficult 4 us as fans 2 digest soooo please don't worry about apologiseing ........................we know that after a big fight there it will be more interesting 2 c their friendship.............so do continue writeing just the way u do .......................we look forward 2 more sweet parts in the future.................

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noorya

@...Noorya...

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#309

OMG Sahar!!!!!............................yaara that part was soooooooooooooooo sad😭........but AWESOME!!!................yaara really enjoyed it😛!!!!

uffffffffffffff yaara yeh kiya hota jaa raha hai sukk ke beech😕.......i feel sooo bad seeing them like this😒....aur yeh sab sirf aur sirf rahul and preety ke waje se😡......aaaarrrrgggggghhhhhhhrrggghh..HATE THEM!!!!!😡😡😡

awwwwww sooo sweet the way kk thinks about su and su about kk in their "dates"...loved that part😳.......................but omg yaara when Preety asked about the bracelet and kk said "dost tha"..........omg main apne aansoon rokh nahin paayi😭.............and the dance scene...omg soooo cute and sad at the same time.....love that song😳.....

and OMG yeh kk ne kaisa sawaal poocha Rahul se...........................yaaar kahin voh yeh naa kahe ke hum shaadi kar le!!!!!!😲😲................omg ab next part tak wait karne padega.................and desperatly waiting for sukk scene😉...............

once again MINDBLOWING part sweety😛....keep it up😛😳

Edited by mdtafan - 16 years ago