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Aimen

@tsaian

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Posted: 16 years ago

#111

thanks alot jasu, rahila and poorvi

i will update the 12 part soon

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Aimen

@tsaian

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Posted: 16 years ago

#112

episode #12

kk give sumit a gift pack

sumit: yeh kia hai

kumkum:its a gift 4 u sumit: lakin kia liyay kumkum: hamari dosti k liyay kal tum nay mujhay apn alucky band dia tha aur ajj mai apnay dost ki kuch dena chati hoon sumit: thanks and he was about to open the pack . kumkum stop him and asked him to take this to your home and open there sumit : kyun aisa kia hai ish mai kumkum: jab dekho gay to maloom chal jahay ga sumit ok

jasmine karan and other of their friend tell them : k yahin rokhnay ka irada hai ya ghar bi chalna .

sumit : ok chalain

kk jasmine and seema leave collage

seema and jasmine : ok kumkm hum chaltay hai

kumkum : ok bye and take care

kk is about to call his driver then she suddenly hear a voice" apka driver hazir hai"

kk turn back and see sumit is there with his bike

kk : tum

sumit: je mai mujhay maloom hai k sar anahin ayee aur tumharay pass koi conyence nahin hai

kk: sumit wo to theek hai lakin har dafa tumhain takleef dena caha nahin lagta

sumit: yeh baat dosti k rule k against hai . aur app kuch bolay bina bike pay beth jao

kumkum:ok and then she sit in a bike

sumit: kia baat hai ajj kafi confident say beth rahi ho kal to kafi dar rahi thi

kumkum: q k mai janti hoon k mai tumharay sath hon

then sumit start a bike

kumkum: rokho rokho

sumit: kia hai

kumkum: wo dekho ghol gaphay wala . mera ghol gaphay khanay ka bohot mood hai

sumit: ghol gaphay !!

kumkum: haan chalo na

sumit: ok

kumkum to a ghol gaphay wala : bhaiya 2 plate ghol gaphoon ki rez mirchi k sath

sumit: mai aik shart pay ghol gaphay kahoon ga

kumkum: kia

sumit jo jitni zyada plate khay ga wo in ghol gaphoon paisay dega

kumkum: agree and both start to eat ghol gaphay

and finally sumit win and sumit pay the bill

kumkum: tum jeet ghay ap chalain

sumit : han sure

sumit drop kk at her house. kk asked him to come home but sumit refuse and he said ; k mujhay aj jaldi hai tumhara gift dekhnay ki aur jo k tum apnay samany dekhnay nahin do gay . ishi liyay mujhay jana hoga tak mai jaldi ghar poonchoon aur gift dekh sakoon

kumkum: ok bye

sumit : bye

episod end

episode 13 on pg 16

Edited by tsaian - 16 years ago

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maheen hanif

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Posted: 16 years ago

#113

very good i too like golgappaas

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Aimen

@tsaian

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Posted: 16 years ago

#114

episode#13 su come to his hoe su mom: agahay beta . fresh h jao mai dinner serve kerti hon sumit nahin maai mujhay bhook nahin hai . ap kha ker so jao
then su go his room and close the door of his room and jump on the bad and takeout a gift pack from his bag

su open a gift there was a letter in and another pack

so start to read the letter

" sumit kal tumnay apni sub say lucky ckkez apni lucky band mujhay di hamari dosti ki nishani k roop mai . tumhari us lucky band denay k baad mai kal sari raat yehi soochti rahi k mai tumhain aisa kia don . aur tub meray demak mai yeh idea aya k mai tumhain apn zindagi k sub say kimti cheez don "

now u open the pack aur gifr dekhnay k baad agay ka letter parhna

sumit open the gift pack and he stuuned to see there was a barbie doll . sumit see and he get surprised

sumie then start to continue to red the letter

" sumit tum shayat ish doll ko dekh ker hairan ho aur yeh sooch rahay ho k yeh kaisa gift hai. sumit yeh doll meri zindagi ki subsay kimti cheez hai. ish doll say mainay apnay zindagi ki saray raaz. tamam kushiaan her gham bantay hai. mano to yeh meri poori zindagi.aur yeh doll meray liyay ish liyay bi bohot kimti hai qk ish doll say meray us anjaan dost ki yaadain hai jo meri zindagi mai kuch pal k liyay aya aur meri zindagi mai rang brh ker chala gaya. ish doll ka pair ish gurya ka gudha ushi anjaan dost k pass hai,umeed kerti hon k tumhain yeh gift pasand ahay . mai tumhain apni gurya nahin apna yaqeen darahin hoon"

after reading a letter of kumkum he jumped from his bed and take a doll with him and he open his cupboard. there was a gudha there and he kept gurya opposit to the gudha and said welcome kumkum

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maheen hanif

@maheen55

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Posted: 16 years ago

#115

zabardast, mindblowing , superb ,very intersting 👏kumkum sumeet childhood friend hai in my opinion nai k haan. plz write soon waiting ffor next part

Edited by marrukhkhan - 16 years ago

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Aimen

@tsaian

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Posted: 16 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: RuhaanSimifan

Hi Aimen 😊

First of all im very sorryy yaara for not replying to ur pms...and that i did not comment earlier on ur FF..

Par kya karoon...was so busy with work and all....that could not read ur fanfic...but today i read all the parts at once....and..

OMG..👏 FABULOUS

Kya Fanfic hain yaara..ufff sooooo cuuuuttteeee and soooo adorable..

jee karta hain bas read karti jawoon

i reallly love this college track..its awesome

ff the lines u write are so like Sumit and kumkum dialogues awesome

u know when reading i can actually hear them saying it...

and omg i love Karan he is sooo funny..

and waw ur such a gr8 writer..

the parts are so well written that we also feel the cuteness in the story at least i do

when Kk had to sing infront of the whole class...uff amazing..

so well written i could actually see Kk all scared and with closed eyes sing a song..

uff amazing writing there...and when SuKk becomes friends soooo cuutteeee...

when Su brings Kk home on his Bike and then Karan teasing Su the next day

and then Su dreaming of Kk so sweet and

the blue dress that both comes in blue so cute,,

and haila mera fav, color bhi blue hai..😆

so sweet..reallly love the dialogues u write so funny and so like SuKk...

ufff cant wait to read what gift Kk gave Su...

jaldi post karo yaar.....im waiting...ab tera fanfic ki bhi addiction hogayi mere ko 😆😆