FF Kya Yehi Pyaar Hai part47 pg68 VALENTINE - Page 8

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Posted: 17 years ago
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really it was too exciting...pata nahi kk ka next reaction kya hoga....... pl update soon............................
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hiiii noorya....fantastic part dear.....too gud....👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: nirmola

Wow, very nice writing.I like it.

I like Ruhan's attitude, and also enjoyed Ru-Adi conversation.

and Su-KK ....these two are outstanding.

thank u so much dear
im glad that u like my characters
keep reading😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: Pearl29

WOW!!!!!!!!!! kya scene tha................Su's first kiss 2 kk..................ab jaldi jaldi likho............can't wait 2 know the story................

thak u dear for loving the scene😉
hope u will like in the futur also
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sukklover

Woooooooooowwwww.very nice.Su kisses Kk .....................can't wait.Jaldi next part bhejo.

thank u for your lovely comment and for reading my ff
dont worry agla part aa raha hai😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: shreya baldwa

really it was too exciting...pata nahi kk ka next reaction kya hoga....... pl update soon............................

thank u dear and im glad u like the part
keep reading in the futur
and KK ka reaction.......................................just wait and watch..........................
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: preethi

lovely itt doo cont soon

thank u dear next part jaldi aa raha hai toda patience rakho😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: sweetpoorvi

hiiii noorya....fantastic part dear.....too gud....👏

hi sweetpoorvi thank u for your lovely comment
hope u will like in the futur😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#79
awwwwwwwww soooooo goood soo cute sweet romantic😳
oh god this is one of the best ff's plz plz plz pzl
dont taken again too much time
plz plz contnienu soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#80
Hi guys thank u once again for all lovely coments😊
so bcoz i didnt post for a long time here is another part
Part20
Few days past, its evening and KK is a terrace, she's a little upset. She was thinking about what happened with Su😕. Her phone rings its Su
KK : hello
Su : hi KK kaisi ho?
KK : theek hoon........................tum batao kaise ho?
Su : main...........................bohut bore ho raha hoon🤢........................acha yeh batao kya kar rahi ho?
KK : kuch nahin terrace pe hoon
Su : kyun koi pareshani hai kya?
KK doesnt say anything...................................
Su : janti ho jab main upset hota hoon tho kya karta hoon
KK : kya?
Su : ek long drive pe jaata hoon😊
KK : aur tumhari pareshani door hoti hai?
Su : of course! aur bohut maaza bhi aata hai khas kar ke raat ko😛
KK smiles : acha..........................tho phir next time jab tum long drive pe jaaoge tho main bhi chalungi tumhare saath
Su smiles : paka?
KK : haan
Su : th phir chalein?😈
KK confused : kahan?😕
Su : tumhari areshani ko door kare ek long drive pe😃
KK : Su tumne time dheka hai 7baje gaaye......................aur mujhe nahin lagta maa mujhe....................(Su interups her)
Su : aunty ne haan keh diya😛
KK getting more and more confused : lekin tumne maa se kab poocha?😕
Su : agar aap meherbani karke sirf ek baar balcony se niche dhek lenge tho apko apne sare jawaab mil jaayenge (KK still confused does so and is shocked to see Su there😲)
KK : Sumit!!??.......................tum???
Su : ab vahan se dhekti rahogi ya phir chalogi bhi (KK diconects the phone and comes down to Su)
Su : chalein? (KK smiles and gets in the car and the leave)
In the car :
KK : tumne maa se kab baat ki?
Su smiles : jab tumhare ghar aaya tho pehle aunty se baat ki phir tumse
KK : lekin tumhe long drive ki kya zaroorat hai? koi pareshani?
Su : pareshani tho nahin hai lekin main bhut bore ho raha tha😳
KK smiles. they drive 1 hour and then go to the beach. They walk for a while and sit on a rock
KK : jab main pareshan hoti hoon tho yahan aati hoon aur apni pareshani ka haal nikal ne ki koshish karti hoon
Su : aur nikal pati ho?
KK : kabhi kabhi....................aur jab nahin nikal pati tho sab kuch bhagvaan pe chorti hoon😳
Su : aur jo pareshani tumhe iss waqt satati hai uska haal mila tumhe?
KK looks at Su and avoid the question : kafi der ho gaayi hai ghar chalein?
Su noods his head and they leave. At the way it starts raining and KK gets happy
KK : Su gadi roko
Su : kya?😲................KK barish ho rahi hai😕
KK : issi liye tho........................plz Su stop the car
Su stops the car in a side, KK gets out and starts playing in the rain. Su keep looking at her and her childood behaviour😛 and he smiles.He gets out of the car also and was just staring at her. After few secs he start moving toward KK but she didnt noticed him she ws too busy with the rain. He holds KK's arms from back and pulls her close to him😳. He softly kissed her cheeks then her neck😍.
KK tries to escape from Su but he holds her more tightly and makes her face him. He then comes very close to KK their nose were touching KK can feel his breath and he whiperer in her ear
Su : i love you KK😳 (KK doesnt react at all she just keep looking at Su and says)
KK : mujhe ghar jaana hai (and she gets in teh car. Su does the same)
At the way KK doesnt say a word and when they reach her house she just said
KK : ghar jaake jaldi kapde change karna varna saardi lag jaayegi...............bye (and she leaves)
Su : KK...............KK (but she left)
KK goes directly in her room, she lock the door take her night suit from the cuboard and sudenly she starts crying😒 she sits on the floor and cried a lot😭
KK to herself : kyun Su? kyun kaha tumne yeh baat mujhse? Nahin karti main tumse pyaar! aur naa hi kabhi kisi se kabhi karungi😭
hey bhagvaan meri madat karna...............(Ji knocks at the door)
Ji : Di? open the door
KK quikly whipes her tears : haan Ji bas abhi aayi (and she opened it)
Ji : kya hua di darwaza band kyun kiya?
KK : voh..............................
Ji : anyways chal saath mein picture dhekte hain mere room mein😛
KK : Jiya......................hum baad mein dhek le?.......................voh saar mein toda dard hai
Ji : Di tum theek ho naa?
KK smiles : haan nothing serious..........................toda araam karungi tho theek ho jaayega
Ji : theek hai (and she leaves)
KK close the door and lie down on her bed. she cried all the night
hope u will enjoy this part also😉 i know its not a very long one but enough for a sunday😆
Edited by mdtafan - 17 years ago

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