PRANBIR FF ( TIME TO GET THINGS RIGHT)

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Posted: 4 years ago
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PROLOGUE

I am bored with the current track. So I am writing this. Like no one likes if there are problems all the time. I think Abhi and Pragya are now old. I like the love story of the new generation more. What would happen if some new people enter their lives??? Not to make things worse, but to make everything right.


I am introducing a few new characters.


CHARACTER SKETCH


UDAY TRIPATI


Pranav and Shrenu’s father, Uma’s husband, Neeraj’s uncle. (Here) The richest man in India, third richest man in the world. Business man. Owner of the Tripati group of companies. Abhi’s friend.


UMA TRIPATI


Pranav and Shrenu’s mother, Uday’s wife, Neeraj’s aunt.


PRANAV TRIPATI

(Zain Imam)


(ohh!!I just love this man😍😍😍🙈🙈🙈)

Uday and Uma’s son. CEO of the Tripati Group of Companies. Shrenu’s brother. Neeraj’s first cousin. He likes Prachi. Cricketer. Girls drool over him. But he doesn’t like any girl ( Prachi is an exception 😉)


SHRENU TRIPATI

(Shrenu Parikh)


(Cutie pie 😘)

Uday and Uma’s daughter. Pranav’s sister, Neeraj’s first cousin. Prachi’s friend. MBBS student in the University of Georgia.


NEERAJ YADAV


(Harsh Rajput)



Kesh Yadav( The second richest man in India) and Nita Yadav’s son. Uday and Uma’s neice, Pranav and Shrenu’s first cousin. CEO, YADAV GROUP OF COMPANIES. Rockstar. Girls drool over him.

All the other characters are the same.


INTRODUCTION


Abhi has won the case. Tanu has been sent behind the bars. Abhi has brought Prachi and Pragya to the MK Mansion. All the problems between Abhi and Pragya are now sorted out. The Kholis and the Mehras live together in the MK MANSION.


So, now Abhi, Pragya, Prachi, Rhea, Alia, Mitali, Purab, Aryan, Baljeet dadi, Vikram, Pallavi, Ranbir and Ranbir’s grandmother are under the same roof.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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INDEX


Chapter 1:

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Posted: 4 years ago
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CHAPTER 1

🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏


So here I start my first ever work…..


Hope you guys will enjoy…..


Vikram: Congrats my man. At last you are free, proven innocent….Party tho banta hai.


Alia: Ofcourse, it is mandatory. Let those people who supported that evil Tanu know who is right and who is wrong.


Abhi: okay guys… The party will be tomorrow.


Vikram: why tomorrow? Aaj hi rakthe he.

Abhi: No, today Uday is coming here with his family.


Vikram: Uday, from London??!


Abhi: Yes


Vikram: wow, it has been almost four years since I have not seen him. When will he come?


Abhi: Today. Aate hi hogi.


Shahana enters……


Abhi: Shahana, beta aao


Shahana: Namaste Mr.Mehra


Abhi: Mr. Mehra??? I have told you to call me uncle.

Shahana: ohhh sorry sorry. Abhi uncle, where is Prachi?


Abhi: She is in her room.


Shahana: Thank you uncle bye.


Abhi: Bye.

The Tripatis (Uday, Uma, Pranav, Shrenu and Neeraj) arrive at the MK MANSION.


Uday: He gane ki dukaan…


Abhi: he golu…


They hug each other.


Abhi: Arre Pragya, Vikram, Aliya, come everyone, see who is here.


All except Prachi and Shahana come there. Rhea was jealous seeing Shrenu 🙈🙈🙈. Ranbir and Aryan was jealous seeing the two handsome guys- Pranav and Neeraj.


Shrenu, Pranav and Neeraj buy blessings from the elders.


Pallavi and the grandmothers: Born and brought up in foreign still keeps the Indian culture. Jeete raho baccho.


The Tripatis and the MK’s except Ranbir, Rhea, Aryan are talking.


Prachi and Shahana come there.


Rhea(in mind seeing Prachi): They are rich and Papa’s friends. So they will be staying here for some days, or weeks. That is enough. I can use them to trouble Prachi. First let me make friends with them.


Rhea goes near PSN( Pranav, Shrenu and Neeraj): Hi guys….


They look in her direction.


A big smile broke in all the three faces. Shrenu moved Rhea aside and ran towards Prachi followed by Pranav and Neeraj and hugged her.


Seeing Shrenu run, everyone looked in that direction.


Shrenu (while hugging Prachi): Prachs…. My baby……Ohhh how much I missed you…..


She broke the hug.


Pranav and Neeraj also gave her a short hug and started to talk with her.


Uday and Uma went to Prachi and hugged her. She took their blessings.


Everyone else was wondering how they knew Prachi.


Rhea was standing there dumbfounded. (In mind): They avoided me for that Prachi?? And how lovingly they are talking to her and they are not even bothered about me. What was my plan and what happened!!???


Ranbir (to Aryan): hey, how do Prachi know the Tripatis. And you saw how those two boys hugged her and she was smiling.


Aryan(smiling): actually what do you want to know? How they know each other or why Prachi smiled when he hugged her?? You tell that you don’t love her, then why are you being so protective or….. jealous??!!


Ranbir (to Aryaan): Shut up. (In mind)I still love her and yes I am being protective because she is mine. No one else have the right to touch her.


He thinks about the Parth and MMS incident and she telling that it is true. He gets angry.



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Posted: 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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PART 2


Hi guys…


Hope you liked the first part….


Pragya:Itni dhoor se aayi he na aap log rest kar dijiye. Come, I will show you the rooms.


Prachi: Ma, I am going with Shahana to meet Saritha aunty.


Pragya: Okay beta. Wait(takes something) it is Saritha Ji’s favorite dish, give to her.


Shrenu: Come fast okay. I have a lot to talk to you.


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The young generation (Pranav, Shrenu, Neeraj, Ranbir, Aryan and Rhea) are sitting together.


Rhea(in mind):no one knew that Prachi was dad’s daughter. Everyone considered her as a middle class girl. Then how did she come in contact with them?


Ranbir (in mind): if they hugged her and she responded means they know each other. But how? They seemed to be very close.


Pranav and Neerav noticed this.



Pranav: do you guys want to know anything from me?


Ranbir blurted out: Yes ( he realised what he said and managed) I mean how do you know if I want to ask you something?


Pranav: I ask what I want to know. I can understand id f someone is thinking of asking something.


Ranbir: Shrenu, how do you know Prachi?


Shrenu: Once I came here for a camp in Attapadi, Kerala where the native tribes live. Some socially committed students from our college in Georgia and few students from HSC program(okay it is an imaginary program never mind). We spent almost one month together. I and Prachi had to share the same tent and thus we became friends.


Ranbir: just one month. Then you guys did not get to see each other?


Shrenu: we have our ancestral property in Mumbai. We used to invite her for the functions. It was she who organised my cousin’s wedding anniversary, diwali decoration. She is more like a family to us.


UMA calls Pranav and he leaves.


Ranbir: so how long do you know her?


Shrenu:almost six years. You know what, mera Pranav bhaiyya toh uski deewana hai. Hamesha uski prashansa karti hai. Even if he is in a very bad mood, once he hear her name, a smile automatically comes on his lips(Ranbir clenches his fist) I, mom, dad and everyone in our family likes her. My mom wants her to be her daughter-in-law.


Rhea, Ranbir and Aryan: What/Kya???


Neeraj: isme shock hone wale kya baat hai.


Aryaan: accha, toh isme shoch hone wali koi bhi baat nahi hai??


Shrenu: Arre puri toh suni meri. When she came to know that Mr.Mehra is her dad, she had informed me. We thought of coming here then, but I had my exams, bhaiyya was having rest as his shoulder had an injury and my aunt was near delivery so my mom had to take care of her. Actually we came here to ask Prachi’s hand for marriage.


Ranbir:No, I mean why, I mean…


Shrenu: why? Rab ne Bana Di Jodi hai vo dono. P for Prachi and P for Pranav. Aww… It will be so cute. I will be very lucky to have such a pretty,and nice bhabhi.


Ranbir (in anger):stop this.( Everyone gets scared)(calming down) I mean first talk to Prachi, then we will decide. Aur waise bhi there is nothing in a name.


He leaves from there.


Shrenu:uski problem kya hai? why did he say so?


Aryan:leave it. Sometimes what he says doesn’t make any sense.


Rhea(in mind): if Prachi gets a better boy… No… She loved Ranbir, so I want him. And why is this Ranbir getting so disturbed hearing Pranav and Prachi together? Does that mean he still loves Prachi. Nooooooo.


Neeraj (to Aryan): What was her name?


Aryan:whose?


Neeraj: that cute, bubbly, chubby girl who was with Prachi.


Aryan: her name is STAY AWAY FROM HER.


Aryan leaves from there.


Neeraj: these guys are strange.


Shrenu: yes, yes they are.


Prachi and Shahana come back.


They sit with Neeraj, Shrenu and Pranav to talk.


Ranbir was seeing this from the hall. He feels uneasy and goes to his room.


Aryan also feels uneasy seeing Shahana talking to Neeraj and goes to Ranbir’s room.






That’s all for today…


Hope you like this. Which part did you like? Please do comment.




I want a suggestion from you guys. Do you want Pranav and Prachi as a pair of our Pranbir? The next part depends on it. I have two options. What do you think? I want to know what majority like.




Thank you.





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Posted: 4 years ago
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RANBIR’S ROOM


Ranbir was boxing as he was angry as hell. Aryan comes there and throw a ball-( showing that he is angry too). Ranbir was shocked to see Mr. Cool Aryan angry!!!


Ranbir: Kya hua? Itne gusse me kyu hu??


Aryan: Kya hua? Seriously? You did not see what is happening there? Kaise voh Shahana aur voh Neeraj baate kar rahi hai- haste haste.(Aryan mimics them smiling. Ranbir bites his lips to control his smile). I have not seen her talking to much boys in our college and now, she is not stopping, talking and talking and talking. What is there too much to talk?


Ranbir: Kuch jalne ki boo aa rahi hai. Aryan is that you?


Aryan: Hello!!! It may be from you. I have been noticing how uneasy you were when Pranav hugged Prachi, when Shrenu told that he likes her and…

Ranbir: stop. There is nothing like that..


Aryan: Accha… Then why did you get up from there angrily and now you are boxing.


Ranbir: voh mujhe kuch kaam yaad aa gaya tha. And if I am boxing that doesn’t mean that I am angry…..


Aryan: Then what does that mean?


Ranbir: first you tell me why you threw the ball in anger???


Aryan: voh…..mei…..voh……I….


Ranbir: words seek rahe ho kya?

Aryan: leave it yaar. Let us talk about something else.


Ranbir: that will be better, both for you and me.


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LIVING ROOM, MK MANSION


Abhi: so you know Pragya and Prachi earlier. And they didn’t tell me. Why?


Pragya: mujhe toh nahi pata tha ki ye apki dosth Uday hu.

Uday: aur hame nahi pata tha Prachi aapki beti aur Pragya tumhare wife ho. Why? Why weren’t you together?


Pragya, Abhi and Alia look at each other feeling embarrassed.


Abhi: voh… Actually…some misunderstandings….and…


UMA: so how long did you remain separate?


Pragya: hmmm…20 years…


Uday: 20 years!!! For some misunderstandings???


Abhi: it is not just misunderstanding( he explains what happened)


UMA: this is what is called misunderstanding.


Uday: Abhi, don’t feel sad if I say something. You were my childhood friend and I am seeing you after a very long time. Many things have changed, but I have to tell you, the think that you lack is proper communication. If you hear something wrong about your partner, the first person whom you should discuss it with is your partner. Trust is very important in every relation. And in marriage it is a must. It has been 29 years since I am uma got married. And we had never left each other. If we have some problem, we talk to each other.


UMA: it is not just misunderstanding but ego. Because of these two things, Rhea didn’t get the love and care of and mother and Prachi didn’t get the care and love of a father. And you both lost 20 precious years of your married life.


Uday: please don’t allow such mistakes to happen in life again. It will hurt Prachi. If Prachi gets hurt, we all gets hurt.


Servant: Sir, the designers are calling you.please come.


Abhi: Okay. Pragya, please come with me.


Abhi and Pragya leave.


Vikram: My man tell me. What all happened, what are your future plans?


Uday: I am thinking of staying here in India for a few years. Even my children like that. We want them to get married to Indians. We are going to start a new branch here.


Vikram: oh great…. So we’re are you going to stay? We all can stay here.


Uday: oh no..u and my family will be here for just three months, that too due to Abhi’s insistence. We will then move to our place in Mumbai. We are setting up our new branch there. Prachi beta know the place. She used to come there.


Pallavi (in mind): jab se is log aaya hai tab se laga raka ha Prachi Prachi Prachi. Aise kya kar diya hai us ladki ne?


Pallavi( to Uma): well….how do you know Prachi?


UMA: actually, Prachi is Shrenu’s friend.


Pallavi: that middle class girl….I mean Prachi and your daughter were friends? No one knew that she is Abhi’s daughter,she was considered a middle class girl. And your daughter, who is brought up in silver spoon made friends with her? Shrenu is great.


UMA: pallaviji tell me one thing, do you make friends looking their social and economic status?


Pallavi: I didn’t mean that. Shrenu was brought up in foreign and Prachi here then how did they meet…


UMA: oh… Thay met during a camp held in Kerala and became friends.


Pallavi: so Prachi became friends with a rich girl.


Uma:Shrenu usually do not reveal her identity when she is alone in India due to security reasons. Once we invited her to Shrenu’s birthday party to our home in Mumbai. That is when she came to know about us. Actually she kept a distance from us knowing our status as she felt high class people don’t like middle class people. She is well mannered. She know how to behave with elders, boys, girls, how to love children…… I want a bahu like her.


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ABHI’S ROOM


Abhi was thinking what Uday and Uma was thinking. So was Pragya.


Pragya: kya soch rahi hai aap?


Abhi woke up from his trance: aah..voh… I was thinking what Uday had said.


Pragya: even I was thinking the same.


Abhi: our ego and misunderstanding cost 20 years…. These 20 years not only we, but our children too had to suffer. Uday was right, we should believe each other. We should never repeat our mistake. Promise me.


Pragya: promise.


Abhi was sitting on the bed and Pragya was standing. He pulled her close and both started crying hugging each other.


Prachi and Rhea was hearing and seeing all this ( but standing in different places. Abhigya can’t see prhea. Prachi and Rhea can’t see each other.)


They smiled.


Prachi(in mind): thank you Uday uncle and Uma aunty.


End of the episode….


Hope you guys liked it.

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