Pranbir TS: Losses and realizations (part 2 updated)

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Note: I haven’t watched the recent episodes. So no idea what exactly is going on in the show. From the written updates I gathered that nobody is bothered about Prachi’s feelings. Saw a clip where Prachi is running away crying. This OS is written after that scene. Also based on a few suggestions I saw about Prachi’s death and people realizing her value.

Aliya Mehra felt like a queen right now. All her plans were a success and she couldn’t be happier. She could help but give a smug smile thinking how easy it was to manipulate her stupid niece and brother. She played a simple game and they are hurting the one person they claimed to love so much. She was indeed feeling proud of herself. But one thing or rather one person was worrying her too much. And that was Prachi Arora. She knew that Prachi won’t be bothered by her taunts nor will she fall for Aliya’s lies and manipulations. And this worried her very much. Another thing that bothered her was Ranbir’s immense love for Prachi. She was not a fool like the people around her. She knew perfectly well that Ranbir loved Prachi very much. She has seen that undying love many times... when he went to jail for Prachi, when he fought with his family for Prachi and very recently when he fought with cops for Prachi. Aliya knew that Ranbir won’t be able to stay away from Prachi for long. No matter what he promised his mother or what he planned to do, Ranbir’s love was way too deep to hurt Prachi or let her go. She knew that Ranbir and Prachi will be together again soon. And she, Aliya Mehra can’t let that happen. Ranbir is the key to keep that idiot Rhea in line. And more importantly she can’t see Prachi’s happiness. She needs to act fast before Ranbir and Prachi’s love destroyed her well laid plans. With that determination, she dialed a number.

He didn’t know why but he was getting extremely restless. But Ranbir’s heart knew that his Prachi was in danger. He had seen her running away, extremely hurt by that bet revelation. Her tears made him feel like somebody stabbed him multiple times. He realized that he couldn’t hurt Prachi no matter for what reason. To hell with his promise. He can’t let Prachi believe that their love was a farce. He needs to find Prachi and tell her the truth. He has had enough with people controlling his life. He won’t let anyone take away his Prachi from him. He is going to fight till the end for his love. He just hoped that he wasn’t too late to make this decision. With firm resolve he started looking for Prachi.

Ranbir has been searching for Prachi for long. He looked everywhere but he couldn’t find her. He saw Pragya coming towards him and decided to ask her about Prachi’s whereabouts.

Ranbir: Aunty, have you seen Prachi anywhere. I need to speak with her urgently.

Pragya looked at the young boy standing in front of her. She could clearly see that he was extremely worried for her daughter. Her daughter. A new sense dawned on her suddenly. She realized that she was so busy with her feelings that she forgot completely about her daughter. Suddenly Pragya felt angry at her husband, Rhea and most importantly at herself. She has been so focused to save a non-existent relationship that she ended up hurting the most important person in her life. NO, this was enough. She is done with the Mehras and their daily drama. She will find her daughter, apologize to her for hurting her and finally go back to Hoshiapur. She can’t let Prachi get hurt again and again because of these selfish people.

Pragya: No beta, I haven’t seen her for some time.

Pragya’s reply worried Ranbir even more. Where did Prachi go then? Pragya and Ranbir shared a worried glance when they realized that Prachi was missing.

Ranbir: Aunty I think Prachi is in danger. We need to find her fast.

Pragya nodded her head and dialed Shahana’s number.

Pragya: Shahana, is Prachi home?

Shana: No Maasi. Wasn’t she supposed to be with you at Mehra mansion?

Pragya: Yes Shahana. But I can’t find her here. So I thought that maybe she came home. Don’t worry. I will find her soon.

Pragya cut the call and looked at Ranbir who looked tensed too. Her daughter was missing. She needs to do something before it is too late. A sudden idea struck her.

Pragya: Ranbir, let’s check the CCTV footage. May bewe will spot her.

Ranbir nodded his head in agreement and both of them moved towards the CCTV room. On the way they met Abhi and Vikram and Ranbir informed them about the situation. All four of them decided to check the CCTV visuals to find Prachi.

What they saw scared all four of them. They saw a crying Prachi standing near the gate. All of a sudden a van came near her and two masked guys pulled her inside the van and sped away.

Ranbir felt like his world stopped for a moment. His Prachi was in danger and he was not there to help her. He has never hated himself so much. Pragya’s condition was no better. She saw her world collapsing around her. This felt like a repetition of what happened to her eldest daughter. But Pragya was determined to save Prachi. She is not going to lose another daughter. With that determination, she turned to Ranbir.

Pragya: Ranbir, call the police now. The number of the van is clearly visible. We will be able to trace its location soon.

Pragya looked at the young man who looked like he will break down any second. She patted his shoulder trying to comfort him.

Pragya: Now is not the time to fall weak Ranbir. We need to save Prachi.

Ranbir nodded his head weakly and he called the police.

They got a call from the police who managed to trace the van’s location. All of them rushed towards the said place. But the kidnappers got to know about this and tried to escape with Prachi. The chase ended near a cliff. The kidnappers were standing near the edge of the cliff with Prachi at gunpoint. All of the Mehras and Kohlis were also present.

Ranbir: Please let her go. I will give you whatever you want.

The kidnappers were about to reply but Aliya signed them to shoot Prachi. The leader of the gang nodded and turned towards Prachi and fired his gun. The bullet hit Prachi near her heart. The pain made her take a few steps backwards and she slipped and fell from the cliff.

Ranbir: PRACHIII

Ranbir tried to jump behind her but Vikram caught him on time. He kept struggling in Vikram’s hold. Finally, as energy drained and realization dawned, he collapsed on the ground. His Prachi was gone. He felt numbness take over him and every bit of life leaving him. Prachi was the air that he breathed. She was the life force that kept him alive. Now she was gone. He felt darkness seep inside him. He might be breathing but he was dead from inside.

Pragya felt like her world ended. She lost another daughter. The daughter who was her whole world. The daughter who motivated her to stay alive. The daughter for whom she lived. That daughter was gone now. And Pragya didn’t have anyone to blame but herself. She was the reason her daughter was gone. She neglected her daughter because of people who didn’t deserve her attention. May be she thought that no matter what she did Prachi will always be there with her. May be that’s why she tried to hold on to other people. But now she lost everything. Prachi, the most precious gift of her life was gone. Now she didn’t have any more reason to live. She felt a hand on her should and looked up to see her so-called husband standing near her.

The look Pragya gave him was scaring Abhi. It was not anger but pure hatred he saw in her eyes. Did he finally manage to make her hate him? He always took her for granted because he know she will always fight for him. But now he was not sure anymore. Prachi was gone and with her, Pragya was also gone. The woman standing in front of him was just a shell. Abhi didn’t know what to feel anymore. He lost another daughter and he didn’t know what to do. He just got Prachi back and now she was gone forever. Even when she was with him, he couldn’t give her the love and care she deserved. He blamed her and treated her as an unwanted burden. But now she was gone and he felt like a part of his heart died with her too.

Pallavi looked at everything happening around her with extreme pain. She know that she was also responsible for Prachi’s death. She hurt a pure soul like Prachi and now she even lost her chance to rectify her mistakes. She looked at her son who was staring at nothing. She knew that Ranbir is gone with Prachi too. Her selfishness took away not just Prachi’s life but her son’s life too. Pallavi Kohli felt utterly defeated and empty in that moment of realization.

Meanwhile, somewhere nearby… a heart was still beating… kept alive by the love for a man… by the determination to fight death for a man who loved her more than anything else in the world… who will be destroyed without her.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Beautiful..... ❤️❤️❤️

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Please write another...... with prachi coming back and pranbir milan.

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wow...its beautiful.... finally everyone realised prachi's value... especially pragya....

poor Ranbir...he is heartbroken...but prachi is alive, right?....

are you going to continue it?....please do it...n give a happy ending to Pranbir

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Originally posted by: Fantasyera

Beautiful..... ❤️❤️❤️

Thank you 😊

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Originally posted by: Fantasyera

Please write another...... with prachi coming back and pranbir milan.

I will surely try to write another part.

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Originally posted by: sanyogitaprc

wow...its beautiful.... finally everyone realised prachi's value... especially pragya....

poor Ranbir...he is heartbroken...but prachi is alive, right?....

are you going to continue it?....please do it...n give a happy ending to Pranbir

I wrote this initially as a way to release the frustration on the show. But now I am planning to write one more part for Pranbir.

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So heartbreaking 🥺🥺

Is Prachi alive ?

Give her comeback n pranbir Milan .....❤️

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So beautiful. I hope the writers of the show read such writing and the other one’s on the forum and take inspiration from them.

Khud dimag use nahi karna hai toh dhang se copy hi kar lete.

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Part 2


Vikram was sitting lost in his thoughts. It has been 6 months since their world collapsed. 6 months since Prachi left them all. 6 months since his son said a word. Prachi was gone forever and with her, all their will to live was also gone. Only people happy in that situation was Aliya and Rhea Mehra. Aliya was happy because she finally managed to completely destroy Pragya. The latter was nothing but a shell now… no emotions, no feelings nothing. Abhi had brought Pragya, Shahana and Sarita ji to Mehra mansion after Prachi’s sudden demise. Pragya didn’t even bother to protest because nothing mattered to her anymore. Her Prachi was gone and now she didn’t care about anything at all. And Rhea was happy because she finally got her mom and dad all to herself. But what Rhea failed to understand was that her parents might be physically present with her but mentally they were with Prachi. With her death Prachi got all the love she didn’t get when she was alive. Vikram didn’t know what to make of this situation.

Then there was Ranbir. Vikram’s heart pained thinking about his son. His son who was the most jovial person he knew was now just a living corpse. Ever since Prachi has gone Ranbir has not said a word. He has not cried, shouted or reacted in any way. He just sat numbly in his room, waiting for death to finally claim him, so that he can reunite with his Prachi. Vikram has also stopped talking to his wife and his mother. He finally understood what evil witches they were. To satisfy their stupid egos they were ready to sacrifice Ranbir and Prachi’s happiness forever. No matter what, Vikram was never going to forgive those two women again. They were as evil and poisonous as Aliya and Rhea.

The sudden ringing of doorbell brought Vikram out of his musings. He wondered who was that came at this early hour. Still confused, he went and opened the door. The person standing in front of him shocked him completely.

Vikram: Prachi beta

There stood Prachi Arora in all her glory. Prachi was saved by some strangers who still had some humanity left in them. Her own flesh and blood plotted her destruction and absolute strangers came as her saviors. Such was the plans of God. Prachi had recovered completely 2 months ago. Buts he was not sure what she wanted to do anymore. Her parents were not bothered about her and the man she loved, the man who motivated her to fight death… he too hated her. She was just a means for him to win a bet. Suddenly Prachi felt all empty and alone. But despite everything, despite her mind screaming otherwise, her heart still believed Ranbir’s love. Every time she thought about him, she could only feel love and warmth. No matter how much she tried, she couldn’t bring herself to abandon him or their love. So she decided to take a final chance. A last chance to measure the strength of their love. She hid herself from the world and started to observe the people who were related to her in some way or other… through blood, through friendship and though love. She saw that her mother was broken and her father was regretting too. But Ranbir’s condition shocked her completely. Gone was the Ranbir she knew. In his place was an empty shell… a man who lost all the will to live. And it was Ranbir’s condition that finally forced to Prachi out of hiding. And here she was… just a few steps away from her love.

Vikram finally got out of his shock and realized that Prachi is indeed standing in front of him. He immediately ushered her inside.

Vikram: Prachi beta, you really are here right.

Prachi smiled softly. Despite everything she couldn’t bring herself to hate this man. But his wife and mother and rest of the Mehras were a different case all together. Prachi was determined to never forgive those people. She was tired of trying to prove herself. Now she didn’t care at all. She was bothered only about one person… her Ranbir. She was here only for him.

Prachi: Yes uncle I am really here.

Vikram couldn’t express the joy he felt. He started shouting at the top of his voice.

Vikram: Abhi, Pragya, Ranbir, Shahana… look who is here. Prachi has come.

Rest of the Mehras and Kohlis, except Ranbir gathered in the hall hearing Vikram’s shouting. They couldn’t believe their eyes. Prachi was standing in front of them. Some were happy and some were fuming in anger.

Pragya couldn’t believe her eyes. Her daughter was standing in front of her. Her Prachi came back to her. With a new found sense of hope, Pragya hugged Prachi with all her might. Prachi was happy to see her mother. But still she couldn’t completely forget her mother’s blatant partiality towards Rhea. And Pragya’s irrational behavior will forever remain as a wall between the mother and daughter. Seeing her daughter’s cold behavior Pragya broke the hug and looked at her confused.

Pragya: You are ok right? Are you hurt Prachi?

Prachi: Yes Ma, I am fine.

Abhi: I am so happy to see you Prachi.

Prachi: Really Mr Mehra. I thought you will be ashamed of me. Isn’t that what you felt earlier? That no matter what I did I won’t be as good as your princess. That I am the reason your princess is suffering. So why are you so happy now?

Abhi and everyone else were taken aback by the hatred in Prachi’s voice. Never have they heard her talk in such a tone, not even with her enemies.

Prachi: I have no interest in you or your so-called family. I came back just for my Ranbir and no one else. So better keep your fake love with yourself.

Rhea: You can’t talk with dad like that Prachi. And Ranbir is just mine.

Prachi: Really Rhea… Ranbir is yours? Then why didn’t you get him? I was gone for 6 months and yet he didn’t come to you. That says a lot about you and your so-called love. Remember one thing very carefully Rhea Mehra… Ranbir is just MINE. No one can take him away from me. So you better stay away from him. Otherwise I won’t spare you.

Everyone was again shocked to hear Prachi. They realized that the girl standing in front of them was 10 times stronger than her previous version. Fighting with death has surely made her stronger and a more bolder person. They didn’t really want to mess with this Prachi.

Ignoring the rest of the circus, Prachi turned towards Vikram.

Prachi: Uncle, where’s Ranbir?

Vikram: He is in his room beta. Go and meet him. He would be so happy to see you.

Pallavi and Dida tried to apologise to Prachi. But she ignored them completely and moved towards Ranbir’s room. Pragya felt disappointment seep into her seeing her daughter’s behavior. Even after getting her daughter back from death, Pragya really didn’t get her back. May be she deserved this for the horrible way she treated Prachi.

Prachi moved nervously towards Ranbir’s room. Her heart was beating at an abnormal level. She felt scared, excited and worried all at the same time. What would be Ranbir’s reaction? Will he be angry at her for staying away from him for so long… letting him think that she was gone forever? But no matter what, Prachi was going to solve all the misunderstandings and get her love back. With that determination she pushed the door open.

The room was in complete darkness. She switched on the lights and a lonely figure was standing near the window. She felt her heartbeat quicken again and softly called out his name.

Prachi: Ranbir

Ranbir turned around hearing the most beautiful voice in his life. He saw Prachi standing there. His first instinct was to hug her tightly and never let go. But then he realized that he was hallucinating again. His Prachi was gone forever. His mind was playing a cruel trick again.

Prachi watched as various emotions pass through his face… happiness… then realization and then pure agony. She couldn’t hold herself back. She rushed forward and hugged him with all her might. For a second, Ranbir couldn’t realize what was happening. Them he realized that he was not dreaming… his Prachi was really back. That realization poured on him like cold rain… washing away all the sadness and agony and replacing them with pure happiness and joy. He hugged his Prachi back with equal force. He still couldn’t believe that she was really standing in front of him. For 6 months he begged to Almighty for one miracle… one miracle to bring his Prachi back. And finally his prayers were answered. His Prachi defeated death and came back to him.

Ranbir: You came back to me Prachi.

Prachi: Yes Ranbir… no matter how hard I tried I couldn’t go away from you. I belong to you just like you belong to me. We are incomplete without each other.

Ranbir: Yes Prachi we belong together. Without one, the other’s life is meaningless.

Ranbir broke the hug and kneeled in front of her.

Ranbir: I am really sorry for hurting you Prachi. But trust me, you are the only person I love. That stupid bet didn’t mean anything at all. I loved you with all my heart and still love you with all my heart. I am really sorry for hurting you. You can give me whatever punishment but please don’t go away from me again. I will die without you Prachi.

Prachi kneeled down too and touched his forehead with hers.

Prachi: I know you love me Ranbir. And I won’t ever go away from you. We will always stay together. I promise.

Ranbir: I love Prachi.

Prachi: I know.

Two souls united forever that day. No matter how hard anyone try, they cannot defeat true love. People who love each other truly will always come back to each other… no matter how many obstacles they have to cross. And that is the strength of true love.


The End


Edited by janecastle - 4 years ago

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