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Posted: 5 years ago
#41

Uff yeh Rahul nae behen kyu bana liya🤭🤭


Reminded me of the Rishi scene.


Toothpaste ki shakal jaisa cactus.

Ranbir sure gets brainless when he is jealous.

🤣🤣

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Posted: 5 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Aman120

thank you for the beautiful comment,, and also thanks for the help else i would still be stuck in that part😊😊 yeah next part will come soon,,


U r most welcome. And no problem Aman, I'm happy to help.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#43

Totally loved it. Such a romantic part. Totally awesome. The moment Pranbir shared was way too hot to handle. Prachi is losing in front of her heart's desire. Loved the fb scene too. Loved Abhi's sentence that love is reflected in a person's eyes. As usual Ranbir was behaving crazily when he came to know about the fraternal relationship between Rahul and Prachi. 🤣That toothpaste ka shakal wala cactus just cracked me up. 😆Loved how they teased Ranbir about the bangles and the Goddess’ blessing scene too.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: swetamwari

Absolutely loved it! Thank you for writing such a beautiful story!! You have described everything so beautifully, loved the abhi part too..he has always been a guiding light for ranbir

thank you for the beautiful comment😊 i also love the bound between abhi and ranbir,, i just wish abhi also helps ranbir in winning prachi in the serial but those are showing us the misunderstanding that ranbir loves rhea🤢
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Posted: 5 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: ican

Uff yeh Rahul nae behen kyu bana liya🤭🤭


Reminded me of the Rishi scene.


Toothpaste ki shakal jaisa cactus.

Ranbir sure gets brainless when he is jealousy.

🤣🤣

agar rahul behen nhi banata prachi ko toh ranbir se dande kata,, and yeah he gets brainless and always do silly things but it is sometimes enjoyable
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nandini25

Totally loved it. Such a romantic part. Totally awesome. The moment Pranbir shared was way too hot to handle. Prachi is losing in front of her heart's desire. Loved the fb scene too. Loved Abhi's sentence that love is reflected in a person's eyes. As usual Ranbir was behaving crazily when he came to know about the fraternal relationship between Rahul and Prachi. 🤣That toothpaste ka shakal wala cactus just cracked me up. 😆Loved how they teased Ranbir about the bangles and the Goddess’ blessing scene too.

thanks,, yeah her heart knows what it wants,, ranbir always behaves crazily,, like in rishi scene too when he come to knew, he hugged him and kissed his cheek in excitement,, i taught to include the cheek kiss too but then i remember there will be guest too,,
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Spoiler for part 9:-


ranbir:- (shocked) kya tum sach keh rahe ho,,


rahul:- (tensed) haa bhaiya,, ab aap hi didi ko sambal sakte ho,, hum mein se koi bhi unhe sambal nahi pa raha hai,,


ranbir ran from there to meet prachi,, he still could not forget what happened when she was drunk last time,,

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Pranbir Nafrati Ishq - 9


As the prayers were completed, pandit ji came in front of them,,

pandit ji:- bacho tum dono ko mata rani ne apna aashirwaad dia hai, sirf kuch hi aise jode hote hai jinko ye aashirwaad milta hai aur jinko ye milta voh apni nishani yaha chor jaate hai,, (they saw only some couple initials were written there) hum chahte hai ki aap bhi apni nishani chor jaye,,

he give them a knife, prachi and ranbir move forward and saw a perfect spot,, he wrote R with the knife, he gave the knife to prachi and she wrote P beside it,, they notice heart was carved around all names, so they did the same,, as they finish, they both felt a strong emotion running in their bodies,, they both were feeling love,,

as they move back, the couple was blessed by pandit ji and elders,, though they were not at home, but this was just like a home,, they have done so good to them, they not only offered them a place to stay but also let them to be a part of their family and pranbir will always be grateful for that,, prachi eyes's caught the sight of twinkling bangles he made her wear, she did admit that those bangles were very beautiful and she wanted to thank him,, after a long time, she was feeling happy inside, she was again feeling special,, she looked at him and taught about the bet,

prachi:- (in mind) pata nahi kyu par ye jaante hoe bhi ki tumne voh bet lagai, tumse nafrat karna nahi ho pa raha hai mujhse,, aaj tumhe dekh kar pata nahi kyu par mere dil ki dhalkan pirse tezz ho rahi hai,,

nikita, kritika and sonali came to pranbir and saw prachi staring at him,, they giggled and taught how a lovely couple,,

nikita:- (hiding her smile) bhabhi agar aap ka jiju ko dekh kar mann bar gya ho toh kya aap humare saath chalegi,,

ranbir instantly looked at her surprised,, he was happy he knowing she was staring at him,, he give her a teasing smile, prachi instantly turned away, her face was tomato red and she could not tell whether it was due to embarrassment of getting caught by them or due to blushing of getting caught by him,,

prachi:- (changing the subject) mu...mujhe ab uhhhh abhi mujhe ya...yaad aaya ki mujhe ek kaam yaad aaya (she ran off from there while they giggled)

ranbir laughed seeing her ran off but noticed rahul and sarpanj ji talking in a corner and by the looks of their faces, he could tell something serious happened,, out of curiosity he excused himself and walked to them,,

ranbir:- kya hua sarpanj ji,, (both looked at him shocked) aap dono aise kyu baat kar rahe ho,,

sarpanj ji:- (sweating) kuch nahi beta,, tum jao na utsav enjoy karo,,

rahul:- papa hume inhe bata dena chahiye,,

sarpanj ji:- (immediately) nahi kuch nahi bolo ge tum,,

ranbir:- kya bata dena chahiye,, agar aap humse kuch chupa rahe hai toh plzz hume bataiye,,

rahul:- (tensed) bhaiya ek mushkil ho gayi hai,,

ranbir:- (getting tensed) kaisi mushkil,,

rahul:- hume pata chala hai ki gao ke kuch logo ne humse bina pooche iss utsav mein sharab lai hai,, aur isse pehle hum unhe pakad paate, unho ne sharab chupa di hai,,

ranbir:- sarpanj ji aapko hamari koi madad chaiye,, mai aur prachi aapki madad zaror karege,, mai prachi ko bula ke laata hoon,,

sarpanj ji:- nahi beta ye saara kaam tum humpe chod do aur tum dono toh humare maimaan ho, tum dono utsav enjoy,, rahul aur mai ye saara kaam sambal lege,,

rahul:- haa bhaiya aap bilkul bhi tension na le,, mai sab sambal loga,,

they both left from there as someone called them,, thought they both tell ranbir not to get worry, he was sure to help them (he would need help instead) he taught to tell prachi about this and went to find prachi,, as he walked, he could not see her anywhere,, he saw nikita talking to one of the guest and maybe she knew where prachi is,,

ranbir:- nikita,,

nikita:- haa jiju

ranbir:- tumne prachi ko dekha hai,,

nikita:- (teasing smile) wow jiju so romantic, bhabhi ke bina ek second nahi ruk sakte,,

ranbir blushes unknowingly,,

nikita:- (excited) wow jiju you are blushing,,

ranbir:- (blushes) aisa kuch nahi hai,, voh bas mujhe usse kaam tha,,

nikita:- jaane do jaane, aachi tara se jaanti ho, aapko romance ki pari hai,, bhabhi kitchen ki taraf gayi hai (ranbir thanked her and started to head towards kitchen but she called him) jiju aap tension na lijiye, aapke romance ko koi disturb nahi karega (she gives him a teasing smile and ranbir was hell lot of embarrassed)

as he entered the kitchen, it was all dark in there, he taught to turn on the flashlight of his phone and as he turned it on,, he was welcomed by this

his legs froze to the ground, his eyes and mouth wide open in shock,, fear ran in his whole body,, he was trying to scream but no word seem to came out from his mouth,, he got so afraid that he started crying,,

his legs froze to the ground, his eyes and mouth wide open in shock,, fear ran in his whole body,, he was trying to scream but no word seem to came out from his mouth,, he got so afraid that he started crying,,

ranbir:- (crying) plzzzz bhoot ji, mujhe ku...ku..kuch mat kariye,, mai toh ek chota sa nana munna bacha hoon,, mujhe maar ke kya milega aapko,,

he kept on begging but stopped hearing some familiar giggling,, he was shocked when the ghost removed it's mask and there stood, the girl laughing at his scared face,,

ranbir:- prachi,,

prachi:- (in a kid voice) ranbir darr gaya ranbir darr gaya,, (stumbling a little) apna chera dekha kitna darr gaye the tum,,

ranbir got shocked to see her behaving wierdly and his mind clicked a few seconds later, she was drunk,, seeing her giggling brought back the memory of that day,,

flashback

It was another party at the mehra house, ranbir and aryan had decided to have a beer party at the terrace,, ranbir had arranged everything at the terrace but was left shocked when he saw empty beer cans, he heard a giggling sound, and as he turned around,,

"booo"

it scared the crap out of him,, and due to the jumpscare, he fall to the floor with his hand on his chest,, as he look up, he saw prachi laughing at him,, he quickly got up with an annoyed look at his face,,

ranbir:- prachi ye kaun sa tarika hai kisi ko daarane ka,,

prachi:- matlab tum dar gaye (laughs) ranbir dar gaya ranbir dar gaya (she kept saying and laughs while ranbir got lost in her laugh [BG:-tujhe kitna chahne lage],, her laugh so cheerful, he wonders whether he has anyone laugh like this cheerfully or heartwarming,, how can someone has such a beautiful laugh,, like just seeing her laugh can make his sadness go away,, how can someone eyes glow with such beauty,, she notices him somewhere lost, she waves her hand in front of him but he just looks at her, she tilts her head in confusion with him lost,, she moves closer to him and makes faces in front of his face in a motive to bring him back to reality but what he does is just smile at her cute antics,, annoyed by his smiles, she pouts,, she grabs the cold drink kept on the table and threw all the cold drink on his face making him completely drenched, his mouth falls open)

ranbir:- (annoyed) ye kya kia,, chii (he was covered in beer and makes faces)

prachi:- (pouts angrily) dekh lia mujhpe hasne ka anjaam,, mai itti der tumhe bula rahi thi, aur tum javab hi nahi de rahe the, bekar mein meri itni tasty cold drink barbad kar di,,

ranbir:- (shocked) cold drink,,

prachi:- (chirpy) haa kitti tasty thi ye cold drink,, maine na aaj tak aisi cold drink nahi pi,,

floor slipped beneath his feet, it was not a cold drink,, it was his death sentence if anyone caught her drunk,, she start stumbling and to maintain balance hold his arm tightly and moved closer to him,, ranbir gulped with their proximity,, his heart had already started racing,,

prachi:- ranbir duniya kyu goom rahi hai,,

her voice bought him back and he remembered that she is drunk,, he first taught to hide her so no one sees her like this,,

ranbir:- prachi tum mere saath chalo abhi,,

prachi:- (tilting head in confusion) par kaha,,

ranbir:- mere room mein,

prachi:- nahi mai nahi jaogi (sits on the froor) mai yahi baitogi aur taare dekhogi,,'

ranbir:- (he slaps his forehead seeing her stubbornness, a idea pops in his mind,, he too sits beside her) lekin prachi mai toh ja raha ho (she looks at him sad,, she don't want him to leave, she wants him to stay with her) mere kamre mein na kitni chocolates rakki thi (her face brightens on listening chocolate) par agar tum nahi aana chahti toh thik hai,, (he gets up and starts to leave)

prachi:- (she instantly rans to him and helds his arm) plz plz plz ranbir mujhe chocolate chahiye,,, plzzzzzz

ranbir:- (pretends like thinking) agar mai haa kaho ga toh mujhe kya milega,,

prachi:- jo tum chaho,,

ranbir:- thik hai chalo,,

prachi:- (beams in joy) chalo,,

he took her to his room and made her sit on his bed and grab some fresh clothes from his cupboards,, and just as he was about to move to washroom, a flying pillow hits his head, he look at prachi to see her pouting angrily crossing her arms,, he swears that if she will stays like that for one more second, his heart will explode with the speed it is racing,, she looks so cute while pouting,,

prachi:- (still pouting) meri chocolate,,

ranbir:- (trying to control) prachi tum do minute ruko mai change kar ke aata hoom,, aur muh fulana band karo,,

prachi:- (her mouths falls open and turns her face away still pouting) meri chocolate

ranbir:- bas change karlo phir deta,, aur kissi cheez ko mat chuna,,

he went inside washroom while she start searching his room,, yeah he told her not to touch anything but she wanted to know about him,, while looking in his room, she saw the cupboard and out of curiosity, she opened his cupboard and was surprised to see her photo in his cupboard,, automatically a smile crept on her face, as she heard a the bathroom door opening, she quickly closed the cupboard and sat on the bed,, as he exit, he saw her smiling brightly,, he was confused, few seconds before she was pouting angrily and now smiling brightly but she looks cute on both,, he didn't even notice when he got lost in her and now she was standing in front of him, her face close to his tilting in confusion,, he was back to reality when he saw her taking water,,

ranbir:- (he immediately runs and holds her from back and helds her both arms,, back hugging her) nahiiiiiiiii mujhe pirse nahi nahana,,

prachi:- (struggling in his grip but he didn't let go) choro mujhe,,

ranbir:- (still holding her) nahi, pehle tum voh glass vapas rakho,,

prachi:- (cutely) plzz choro,,

ranbir:- (melted but didn't want to get wet) nahi pehle rakho

prachi:- fine (she puts it back while he sighs in relief)

[BG:-Phir Kabhi]

his grip loses, she turns around still close to him and accidentally her lips brushes against his cheeck and both freeze in their spot,, their hearts had already on the race now, both were looking in each other eyes, they both were again feeling the same emotion, ranbir had started losing his control and his hand moved to cup her face, prachi closed her eyes feeling his soft and gentle touch,, their proximity were making them lose their breaths,, as he moved more closer, he realised what he was doing, she was drunk, he should not do this,, he try to move back but notice the tight grip of her hand on his shirt,, as he looked in her eyes, he feels an emotion travelling from her soul to his,, he don't know how but he could understand something, something like a signal,, a strong signal,, from her eyes saying to not leave,, prachi too sensed that emotion,, saying never,, it was like they were talking through their eyes,, he took her in his embrace,, and for the first time in his life, he felt complete,, holding her gave him the feeling that he was on the moon,, prachi could not understand why but she was feeling like she wants the time to stop and just feel his embrace,, why was she feeling like this,,

flashback ends,,

prachi was still laughing at his scared face while he smiled at that memory,, he heard her chirpy laugh after a long time, and his smile grew,, prachi noticing his smile smirked and moved towards him,, as they were close, ranbir was totally lost in her,, seeing him lost, she sprinkled some water droplets on his face shocking him,, his face got completely wet and she let out her chirpy laughter and teased him but was left shocked when he hugged her tight,, ranbir after a long time saw her playing pranks on him, maybe he sometimes get annoyed with those pranks but no one knew how much he yearned for those pranks,, prachi was confused by his acts, as they break the hug, she saw his tears which squeezed her heart,,

prachi:- (wiping his tears) kya ranbir tum ro kyu rahe ho, tumhe bura laga ki maine tumhe daraya, toh i am sorry but please mat ro (she held her ears) please mat ro,,

ranbir:- (he held her hands) prachi i should be the one to be sorry,, can i just hug you,,

he didn't even need to ask,, she instantly threw herself in his embrace, the drink was bringing her true feelings out,, her mind was shut down and only her heart was there today,, today only her heart will say not her mind,, as he felt her body fitting perfectly in his embrace, his heart held the enormous happiness after a long time,, they stood there for how long no one knew,, they both just wanted to feel each other, feel what they both had longed for,, as the melodious and charming sound entered the kitchen, they were brought back to their senses,,

prachi:- (bright smile) gaana,, chalo ranbir,,

he just smiled and walked out to see all the villagers playing dandiya,, as she listened to music, her body automatically started responding,,


(imagine ranbir and prachi in their place)


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dvkZmsqrSRw


as the dance finished, both were looking at each other smiling,, prachi felt her head heavy and stumbled a little but her hero didn't let her fall,, she must be sleepy he taught,,

ranbir:- (concerned) prachi tumhe room mein chalna chahiye,,

prachi:- nahiiii!!! mujhe mela ghoomna hai (she whines)

ranbir:- lekin prachi...

prachi:- plz plz plz plz (she requests like a child)

ranbir:- (he couldn't resist that face, he wouldn't stop her from enjoying) thik hai,,

prachi:- (jumps in his embrace) thank you so much ranbir,,

she breaks the hug and starts exploring the event cheerfully,, ranbir was grateful for seeing her smile and happy after a long time,, it was like an eternity since they fought and laughed without any pain in their hearts,, ranbir was holding her all long so she won't lose balance,, prachi was delighted with how caring and loving he is,, as they kept on enjoying, prachi stopped in her tracks and lets out a squeal of joy,, she instantly hold his hand and run to a place and it turned out to be a pani puri stall,, ranbir smiles seeing her craziness over pani puri,, when she starts describing pani puri,, no one can stop her, say something bad about pani puri, you wouldn't want to know what danger you are inviting,, she was super excited, smile was not leaving her face, as they reach there, they notice there was no one to give them pani puri,, her face fall, she so wanted to eat pani puri but now she can't,, she bowed her head down feeling very bad,, her eyes too started to tear up,, she started to leave sad,,

"chikchiki"

as she turned, she couldn't believe her own eyes,, he was standing there, wearing the plastic gloves ready to serve her favourite pani puri,, ranbir could not see her tears,, and he won't let her cry,,

ranbir:- (with pride and style) so Mrs. chikchiki,, kya aap chef ranbir ki pani puri khaana chao gi,,

prachi could not tell how grateful she felt having him,,

prachi:- (laughs) haa Mr. baklu (both laughed)

he started serving her, she ate every pani puri with enormous happiness filled in her heart,, her eyes held tears, not of sadness but of happiness,, ranbir was smiling wholeheartedly,, he could do anything, become whatever she wants, he can even leave his high class status for her,, but can't live without her,, all the guest were amazed to see how much they love each other,,

prachi:- (chirpy) baklu bahut khila lia tumne mujhe, ab tum dekho Mrs chef ka kamal,,

she started feeding him but he could not taste that much salty and started coughing,, prachi looked around and saw water kept on the table and instantly handed it to him which he gulped in one go, surprisingly tasty







guys i hope you all like the chapter,, plzzz tell me how was it,,


your comments always give me motivation and help me know if you like the chapter and want more,, thanks for all the support you have shown,,


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Posted: 5 years ago
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In the show Prachi is shown so mature and responsible.

So serious and sensible.

I really wish she could let loose sometimes.

Like she did in the ice cream date scene with ranbir.


It was fun seeing Prachi enjoy.

The dance and the pani puri.

The girl deserves to have some fun.

I hope Ranbir's confesses to Pallavi and abhi.

He gives Rhea a good scolding too.

He will be redeemed I guess then from the bet.

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Originally posted by: ican

In the show Prachi is shown so mature and responsible.

So reaponsible and sensible.

I really wish she could let loose sometimes.

Like she did in the ice cream date scene with ranbir.


It was fun seeing Prachi enjoy.

The dance and the pani puri.

The girl deserves to have some fun.

I hope Ranbir's confesses to Pallavi and abhi.

He gives Rhea a good scolding too.

He will be redeemed I guess then from the bet.

yeah, they have shown her responsible and mature but our hero will sure show her happiness,,


i too wish for more scenes like the ice-cream date,,


i am happy that you enjoyed the story,,


abhi will be broken when he will learn how evil rhea has become but sometimes i think if he should had put alia away from rhea, she could be a good girl having qualities like abhi,, naughty but good at heart,,

Edited by Aman120 - 5 years ago

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