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Posted: 5 years ago
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The feelings felt so real. They are both so hurt yet they'd do anything to save each other. Excited to see how you are going to take this forward. It's gonna be hard enough for both of them to trust each other but now ranbir's family and mehras hate Prachi. What would they do

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Double post 😛

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NOTE:


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i have uploaded a new story,, on the holi track,,


talli prachi aur bechara ranbir


plzzzz check it out,, and nafrati ishq next part will come soon,,

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Originally posted by: Aman120

NOTE:


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i have uploaded a new story,, on the holi track,,


talli prachi aur bechara ranbir


plzzzz check it out,, and nafrati ishq next part will come soon,,


It's awesome. Check my comment there.

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Pranbir Nafrati Ishq - 7


As they walked on the road,, ranbir was trying to talk to her,, he had decided that he will get her back,, he was still hurt when she didn’t trusted him but now knowing she cares about him, his broken heart had started to heal,, whenever they used to spend time, her actions always shown that she had feelings for him,, after her betrayer, he believed that she never had any feelings for him until yesterday when she was ready to sacrifice herself,, and knowing she might still have feelings for him, he was somewhere happy and also guilty, the way she behaved upon learning about the bet showed how much deeply she was hurt and he knew that he had gain her trust again,,

They kept on walking when they had reached the dhaba,, they went to someone who was working there,,

Ranbir:- bhaiya yeh yaha se delhi kitni door parega,,

Dhabe wala:- delhi yaha se 80-90 km door hai,,

Ranbir:- hum waha par kaise pohac sakte hai,,

Dhabe wala:- abhi koi nahi ja sakta,,

Prachi:- kyu bhaiya,,

Dhabe wala:- are bhabhiji (she felt awkward hearing bhabhiji) kal bearish ki wajah se sadak band ho gayi hai,, koi nahi ja sakta,, mai toh kehta hoon aaap dono abhi mat jaye kyuki sadak khulne mein ek-do hakte lag jayege,, aap ek kaam kar lo aap dono sarpanj ji ke paas jaye voh aapko sadak khulne tak rehne ki jagah de payege,, (guys there is no connection between sanju and sarpanj ji) kal hi humre dost gopilal woh (he points to his friend) who bhi jar raha hai,, aap kahe toh hum aapko bhi le chale,,

Both looked at each other,, they had no choice but to spent more time together,, ranbir taught that in this time, he will have a chance to win her back,, both nodded to bhaiya,,

Dhabe wala:- waise aap dono pati patni hai,,

Both didn’t know what to answer,, that was the truth, they were married,, ranbir noticed some guys who were staring her,,

Ranbir:- haa,,

Prachi looked at him,, when he said that, she felt different,, when she realized her feeling, she wanted to be with him but upon learning the bet,, she was broken but still her heart wanted him,, it still beats for him, her stomach still have butterflies hearing his name,, she still loves him,,

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Ranbir and prachi had decided to stay at the dhaba,, as the night came, the rain again started and everyone ran inside except ranbir,, prachi tried not to listen to her heart but knowing ranbir could catch fever, she went outside and saw him standing in the rain, she went towards him and stood next to him,,

Prachi:- andar kyu nahi chal rahe tum,,

Ranbir:- (smiles) prachi sawal ye hai ki tum kyu andar ho,,

Prachi:- (confused) matlab

Ranbir:- iss bearish ko dekho (she looks at the rain) yaad hai voh tumhi thi jisse bearish kitti pasand thi,,

She closed her eyes remembering the sweet moments they spent in the rain,, and tears were forming in her eyes so she just starts to leave when she heard that after a long time,,

“chikchiki”

She stopped in her tracks,, the name though too annoying but she got used to it,, he always teased her calling her chikchiki and in return she called him baklu,, she always missed this,, though she showed that she gets irritiated by it, she loved that name,, as she turn around, she saw him coming closer and hold her hands gently,, he looks in her eyes,

Ranbir:- i am sorry prachi,, (both had tears) I am sorry tumhe hurt karne ke liye,, I know ki tum bahut hurt hui ho uss bet ki wajah se but believe me, I really love you aur mai aise bilkul nahi reh sakta ab, nahi raha jata mujhse tumse dur rehna,, trust me prachi, I never acted, I never,, jo bhi maine aaj tak kia voh sab sach tha,, uss diwali party mein jab maine tumara saath dia,, I did it with my heart for you not for that bet,, jab tumara kidnap hua tha, I was genuinely scared for you, scared that I won’t meet you again,, prachi tab bhi jab tum mere against

Prachi:- I was never against you (ranbir got shocked) I always believed on you,, mujhe pata tha ki tum maya ko molest nahi kar sakte,, maine voh sab jo kia voh sirf tumhe innocent prove karne ke liye kia tha ranbir,, but tell me this how can I believe that you are not acting,,

Ranbir:- prachi I…

Prachi:- you were ready to play with my feelings,, ek bet liye bas (she jerks his hands) I don’t believe you,, I don’t (she couldn’t hold back more and just ran inside and broke down in tears)

Ranbir didn’t know what he was feeling now,, one side, a huge weight on his shoulders was gone but on the other side, he remembered how he treated her, she was always with him and he,, he shouted at her, ignored her and even said he hated her,, he was angry on himself,, he fall to his knees,, tears were not stopping,, even rain was not able to heal his heart,, he remembered every time he hurted her with his words,, she always tried to say something but he never listened to her,, he was an idiot, stupid, duffer,, he was feeling worst,, the trust was broken, she didn’t believe him,,

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Sarpanj ji had allowed them to stay there till the road gets cleared,, as they were married they had to stay in one room, Rahul, sarpanj ji’s son offered them to show the haveli,, he and prachi had become good friends in a short period of time,,


[guys I got stuck here so nandini helped me for writing this part,, Special thanks to her]


“Prachi, Ranbir, chalo main tum dono ko yeh haveli ghumakar dikhata hu. Kya kehte ho?” Rahul beamed at the couple.

“That’s a great idea. Chalo chalte hain.” Prachi was bubbling with excitement and bestowed her mesmerizing smile on Rahul.

However, there was someone whose enthusiasm regarding the prospective tour of the mansion was marred by the easy camaraderie that Rahul and Prachi shared.

Seeing her reciprocating Rahul's smile, anger began to churn inside Ranbir.

“Ranbir, kya hua? Tumhe nahi aana kya? Chalo.” Rahul’s voice brought Ranbir out of his disturbing thoughts.

He nodded in affirmation and accompanied them. As he meandered from one room to another, preceded by the laughing and chattering duo, the anger began to take the form of a full fledged jealous rage. The roaring flames of an intense jealousy began to scorch his insides.

Suddenly, Rahul came to a halt as his phone rang just at that moment. Fishing it out of his pocket, he placed it on his ear and was mute for a while as he listened to the other side. After cutting the call, he turned to Prachi and Ranbir.

“Sorry, guys. Something came up. Mujhe abhi office jaana hoga. But you both carry on. Main thodi der mein tumse aakar milta hoon.” Rahul smiled apologetically.

“No problem Rahul. Work comes fast. Tum befikar hokar jao. Kaam khatam kar ke aaram se aana.” Prachi smiled back at him assuredly.

Bidding farewell to both, Rahul trotted off.

Prachi was about to saunter away with a small smile still lingering on her rosy lips when strong fingers wound around her dainty wrist and she was pulled back, clashing with a hard chest.

Flummoxed, she looked into Ranbir’s eyes which had darkened ominously due to some unnamed emotions.

“What...what are you doing? Ranbir?” Prachi spluttered as Ranbir hauled her away along with him.

He pulled her after him inside the nearest room and shut the door behind them.

“Yeh kya badtameezi hain? Tumhari himmat kaise hui mujhe aise kheench kar yaha laane ki? How dare you?” Prachi freed her wrist from his clasp with a mighty jerk and rounded on him.

“Maine badtameezi kari jo tumko yahan le aaya? Aur jo tum kar rahi thi wo kya tha? Bahut sanskari banti ho na tum, toh aaj us ladke se flirt karte waqt tumhare sanskaar kya ghaas charne gaya tha?” Ranbir glowered at him

“Main flirt kar rahi thi? Kis se?” For a moment anger was forgotten as genuine confusion replaced it in Prachi’s mind.

“Oh toh tumhe nahi pata tum kis se flirt kar rahi thi? Yeh bhi mujhe hi batana padega? Fine. Agar aisa hain toh suno. Rahul tumse flirt kar raha tha aur tum bhi.” Ranbir gritted his teeth.

“Tumne sabko apne jaisa samjhkar rakha hain kya? Jaise tum ho waise baaki log bhi ho yeh jaruri nahi. Sab tumhare jaisa nahi hain ki ladki dekhi nahi aur shuru ho gaye.” As the clouds of confusion cleared away, anger returned with multiplied strength and Prachi scowled furiously at him.

“Tum abhi bhi mujhe lecture de rahi ho? Aur jo tum abhi kar rahi thi wo kya tha? Itna jo has has kar us Rahul se baat kar rahi thi, kabhi mere saath toh nahi kiya tumne? Woh flirt nahi tha toh aur kya tha?”

“Tumhe lagta hain na ki main flirt kar rahi thi? Haan kar rahi thi main flirt. Tumko kya farq padta hain agar main kisise flirt bhi karu toh?” Prachi retaliated.

It was on the tip of her tongue that her relationship with Rahul was fraternal but she thought against it. Why should she explain herself to him. He, who could agree to bet to fake love. Although her heart began to protest feebly that his love for her might be genuine but her mind silenced it with facts.

“Kyunki tum meri patni ho. Humari shaadi ho chuki hain, in case you have forgotten it.” Ranbir blustered.

“I want to forget it. Main bhool jana chahti hu ki humari shaadi hui hain. Main bhool jaana chahti hu ke main kabhi tumse mili thi. Taaki main yeh bhool saku ki tumne mere bharoshe ka mazaak bana diya, mere jazbaton ke saath khela. Rahul tum se toh laakh guna behtar hain. Kamse kam wo kisi ki jazbaat ke saath toh nahi khelta hain. Nafrat karti hoon main tumse, Ranbir. I hate you. Aur na main is rishtey ko maanti hoon aur nahi is shaadi ko. Yaha se nikalne ke baad mai tumhe divorce de dogi.” The rage overpowered and she spoke in anger,,

Prachi turned her back to him to contain the tears that were threatening to break through her rigid control. She was unaware of the fact that Ranbir had gone absolutely still and all colour had drained off his face, leaving behind a white mask of excruciating agony. His eyes were darker with anguish. Her every word had hit his heart as venomous arrows. Tears of pain and helplessness welled up in his eyes. Gritting his teeth against the unbearable pain, he left the room quietly.

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Ranbir was sitting on the car bonnet on the middle of the bridge drinking alcohol,, he needed it because the pain he was feeling was unbearable,, he was feeling guilty about how he behaved with her, he always screw things with his anger,, he shouldn't have talk like that, he knew that she don't flirt with anyone but seeing her with rahul,, he couldn't control himself,, her words broke his heart into million pieces,, no matter how hard he try, he could not stop the tears,, whenever he closes his eyes, her words came in his mind,, why can't she understand he really loves her,, does this marriage really don't matter to her, does she really hate him,, no plzzz no, these taught kept on squeezing his heart, it was like someone is continuously stabbing his heart,, this feeling is worse, the pain kept on increases,, he wanted this feeling to go, this was eating him and he can do nothing about,,

Ranbir:- (cries) plzz prachi come back,,

Prachi was waiting for ranbir in their room,, after their argument, she found that he had gone with rahul’s uncle to a nearby bridge,, she was sitting in their room, it was 1:30 a.m and ranbir still hadn’t returned,, she was very worried for him, though they again had an argument, him not returning home was worrying the hell out of her,, in anger she said that she hates him but the truth was that she was feeling weak,, his actions always weakens her, countless number of times, he has saved her and always he says that his love is genuine,, sometimes she just wants to forget everything and accept him but her mind always stops her,, she don’t know why but she was feeling sad,, her heart was having this unknown sadness, and she was feeling broken but why, automatically her eyes started to well up, tears started to escape,, she thinks to clean the room but as she does, she crosses the mirror and stops in front of it,, though she said that their marriage didn’t matter to her and she will divorce him,, the word divorce pained her, her heart did not wanted to divorce him, it wanted to stay with him,, as she look at time, she could not wait more so she decided to go find him,,

She immediately went to find him,, after a while she had finally reached the bridge, and took a breath of relief after seeing him but her heart broke seeing him in that condition,, he was drinking, she went to him and saw him crying badly,,

Prachi:- ranbir,,

As he turned to saw, she was broken to see him broken,, his eyes were red from crying,, the once chirpy and fun loving guy was now all broken,,

Ranbir:- (drunk) prachi (he rubbed his eyes) tum yaha,,

Prachi:- ranbir tum kyu pi rahe ho (she tries to take the alcohol but he didn’t let her)

Ranbir:- (he strumbles but maintains his balance) kyu prachi,, kyu yeh shaadi tumare liye matter nahi karti (no it was not true, she said that in anger but the truth was it did matter to her) why you don’t understand that I really love you,, (she tries to walk away) nahi prachi aaj nahi,,(he grabs her hand not letting her go) tum jaanti ho kyu mai tumhe waha se leke gaya tha,, kyu mujhe itna gussa aaya (she shooks her head in no) because I was jealous, (jealousy so that’s why he was angry she taught) haa mujhe jalan hui thi,, jalan hui thi ki tum mujhse baat bhi nahi kar rahi thi aur uss rahul se hass hass kar baat kar rahi thi,, mai tumhe kisi ke saath nahi dekh sakta,, prachi mai nahi sai sakta tumhe kisi aur ke saath dekh kar, mera dil toot ta hai,, mujhe saas nahi aa pati hai, mera dam gutta hai,, mere liye tumhe kisi aur ke saath dekhna naamunkin hai,, tumhe rahul ke saath dekha toh mai apne gusse par kabo nahi kar paaya aur tumse waise baat ki and I am sorry for that,, prachi jab tumne kaha ki ye shaadi tumare liye matter nahi karti, tum mujhe hate karti ho,, I couldn’t bear that, I could not bear your hate aur ye shaadi, meri liye ye bahut matter karti hai prachi,, prachi plzzz uss bet ki wajah se mere pyaar ko jootha mat samjo, I really love you,, I don’t want to leave you,, I can’t live without you,, plzz prachi mujhe chor ke mat jao (he hugs her) plzz mujhe chor kar… (he passes out)

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Prachi was standing near the window looking at the moon,, she somehow managed to bring ranbir back home and lay in bed,, what happened today was heart breaking for her, she had saw him this broken only when she changed her statement,, whenever she closes her eyes, his words came to her mind,, whenever she looks at him,, she remembers how he came here to save her, how much he was angry when those guys try to misbehave with her,, how he shielded her from sanju,, how he married her,, that night confession,, when she told him the truth, his jealousy with rahul and now what he said in drunk,, thinking about all these only one thing comes to her mind that he do loves her,, she close her eyes releasing the truth that no matter how much she try, she can’t ignore the fact that he really loves her,, but Can she ever love him again after all this?? Her heart still aches remembering the bet,, as she looks at him, she notice that he is shivering with cold,, she covers him with blanket but notice his head is burning with fever,, she bring water and cloth and place a wet cloth on his forehead,, she continued to treat his fever for the rest of the night,,



sorry guys for the late update,, it was late because i got stuck and needed some help,, but here it is,, hope you all like the,, i don't know how is the part so plzz tell me how was it,, i promise next parts will be more good,,


And guys plzzz check out my new story Talli Prachi and Bechara Ranbir


thanks for reading,,


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Edited by Aman120 - 5 years ago
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Ooooooooo.

I guess what Ranbir was trying ti tell Prachi was that since Prachin has not accepted she also loves him so he get a insecure and jealous but that would stop.


Also I really liked Prachi lecturing him on flirting with every girl.😆

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Such a poignant part. Loved it totally. That rain scene. I can totally imagine it. You have described the whole part beautifully, Aman. Poor Ranbir and Prachi. Both are hurting. Both are in so much pain. At least Prachi has clarified her stand and now Ranbir is aware of her unwavering faith in him that had broken due to this bet revelation. In away it has worsened his guilt. At least Prachi too is aware of his genuine love for her now. That drunken confession by Ranbir was very much necessary. I can understand it’s hard for Prachi to trust him again but I know gradually, our hero will her trust and love back again. Waiting eagerly for the next part already.

P.S – Sorry for late reply

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Originally posted by: Nandini25

Such a poignant part. Loved it totally. That rain scene. I can totally imagine it. You have described the whole part beautifully, Aman. Poor Ranbir and Prachi. Both are hurting. Both are in so much pain. At least Prachi has clarified her stand and now Ranbir is aware of her unwavering faith in him that had broken due to this bet revelation. In away it has worsened his guilt. At least Prachi too is aware of his genuine love for her now. That drunken confession by Ranbir was very much necessary. I can understand it’s hard for Prachi to trust him again but I know gradually, our hero will her trust and love back again. Waiting eagerly for the next part already.

P.S – Sorry for late reply

thank you for the beautiful comment,, and also thanks for the help else i would still be stuck in that part😊😊 yeah next part will come soon,,
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Pranbir Nafrati Ishq - 8


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As his eyes started to open, he felt some weight on his shoulders and saw prachi sleeping,, for a second, he lost his breath, she was looking like a cute kid who was sleeping peacefully,, as her mouth slowly moves, she was looking like princess,, ranbir lost himself in her cute face,, tremendous amount of butterflies invaded his stomach,, he could spend his whole life staring her because seeing her always gives warmt to his heart,, today he notice how much she looks cute when she sleeps,, he smiles seeing her cute face, he is definitely falling for her cute face too,, as some hairs were interrupting her sleep, he moves them while she feels someone's hand and woke up,, she cutely rubs her eyes and saw the handsome beside her and as soon as her eyes met his,, they both got lost in each other eyes, their eyes always held the intensity of love they shared and they always get lost in each other,, their heart started to race in sync and took over each other,, they both had lost each other to their hearts,, their hearts knew how much they longed for each other, how much they longed to feel each other,, their proximity sent their heart racing,, he couldn't control himself anymore so he leaned forward and kissed her forehead,, as soon as she felt his lips against her skin, she closed her eyes feeling an unknown pleasure running in her body,, as he cupped her face, both were breathing heavily with their proximity,, their heart had conquered their bodies, and so did his lips her,, a shiver ran through her body as she felt the kiss,, the once slow and passion kiss was turned into a rough and intense one,, as he moved for more kisses, she shivered feeling his hot breath against her neck,, the sudden knock on the bring them back to reality,, both were very awkward to each other now,,

" ranbir, prachi plzzz jaldi niche papa ne bulaya hai tum dono ko" rahul voice came from outside,, as there were no more knocks, they learned that he had already left,, prachi instantly ran to the washroom while ranbir sat there in deep thoughts,,

she locked the door and stand against it,, her heart was racing like a bullet train,, she was still feeling his proximity over her body,, as she touched her lips, she could still feel him kissing her,, as she places her hand over her heart , she feels an unknown warmness, a warmness her heart needed most,, the warmt she still wanted to feel, her heart was craving for his warmt,,

prachi:- (still heavily breathing) kya ho gaya tha mujhe,, mai aur ranbir itna close,, mai uske itna close kaise ja sakti hoon,, aisa kyu lagg raha tha ki mai apne aap kar kaabo nahi kar pa rahi thi,, kyu mai apne aap ko rok nahi paayi,,

while ranbir sat there in deep thoughts, his heart was also racing like a bullet train,, as remembered what she said yesterday that she hates him yet she came to find him and took care of his fever,, now their moment, how they both got so much lost in each other's eyes that they couldn't even control themselves,, he closed his eyes and saw her eyes,, how much intensity they held,, his chief's words came to his mind "jab pyaar ho jaata hai na toh voh uski aakhon mein dikkta hai"

Flashback

(guys remember chapter 6 flasback,, this is about that event)

Ranbir and prachi had arrived for the event,, ranbir was nervous as hell,, he was continuously smiling nervously,, prachi had sensed his nervousness so she held his hand, as he looked at her she give a smile,, he calmed down a bit,,

ranbir:- (still nervous) prachi mujhe bahut darr lag raha hai,,

prachi:- (soothing voice) ranbir kuch nahi hoga,, (he was still nervous so she knew what she has to do) vaise baklu zooth bola tha na tumne,,

ranbir:- zooth kaisa zooth,,

prachi:- ki tum kisi se nahi darte (laughs) darpok,,

ranbir:- (getting back to attitude) chikchiki yaha mai itna nervous ho raha hoon aur tum meri taang kich rahi ho,, haa ab samaj mein aaya, mauka mil gaya na tumhe meri taang kichne ka toh fiada toh uttaogi tum,, just wait and watch chikchiki, ranbir kholi iss event ko chutki mein kaise paar karta hai,,

prachi:- (smiles) okay,,

he got confused seeing her smile,, normaly she would lecture him when he shows attitude,,

ranbir:- (smiles) bada smile kar rahi ho,, joker hoon mai (she nods while he make an annoyed face) chalo abhi chief intezaar kar rahe hoge,,

prachi:- (in mind) finally tumara confidence wapas aa gaya,, ab tum nervous nahi lagg rahe ho,, waise you look cute in anger (she wides her eyes) ye mai kya soch rahi hoon, he does not look cute,, woh bas irritating hai, annoying hai, funny hai,,,,, funny,,,, nahi voh funny nahi hai,, voh bas accha hai,,,, accha,,,, SHUT UP PRACHI,,

ranbir:- kuch kaha,,

prachi:- (nervously) nahi nahi nahi,, maine kuch nahi kaha

ranbir:- nahi mujhe lagta hai maine kuch sunna,,

prachi:- are bola na baklu kuch nahi tha abhi chalo,, (she walks fast embarrassed)

they walk to a room and saw abhi,,

pranbir:- hello chief/sir

abhi:- (surprised to see prachi and talks to her completely ignoring ranbir) prachi tum yaha kya kar rahi ho,,

prachi:- (smiling) voh ranbir ko cheer karne aayi ho,,

ranbir waves his hand trying to caught their attention,,

abhi:- accha kia tum aa gayi,,

ranbir:- (feeling left out) chief mai bhi hoon yaha (they both look at him) hi (he gives his dimple smile)

abhi:- oh hi ranbir,, accha prachi suno (ranbir mouth falls open in shock and he pouts crossing his arms,, prachi giggled seeing him, sometimes he is such a cute kid,,,,,,,, stop calling him cute, she pouts in her own mind, why am i calling him cute,,) moh mat bana mazak kar raha hoon,, (he hugs him) taiyaar,,

ranbir:- yes chief,,

his nervous seemed to go away,, always all his worries goes away whenever he is with his chief,,

abhi:- accha prachi agar tum yaha ho toh plzz ja tum voh backstage ka area check kar logi,,

prachi:- of course sir, i would love to,,

she leaves from there leaving abhi and ranbir alone,, they sat down,

abhi:- toh kaisa feel kar rahe hoon tumare pehle bade show ke liye,,

ranbir:- (he knew he should tell him about his nervousness) chief mai thoda nervous hoon,,

abhi:- hona chahiye,, har koi hota hai,, jab maine suru kia tha tab mai bhi bahut nervous hota tha,, ye sab normal hai, tum tension na lo,,

ranbir:- but chief i am scared that i will let you down,,

abhi:- (smiles) you won't let me down,,

ranbir:- (he looked at abhi,, abhi and prachi words were same) aapko barosa hai (for ranbir, as long as he has abhi's trust, he could do anything)

abhi:- pochne ki baat hai,, jab aise bade bade events hote the tab mai bhi bahut nervous hota tha, toh jaanta hai mai kya karta tha,, jab mai stage pe hota tha toh apni aakhe band kar ke apni dadi aur fuggi dekhta tha,, dadi aur fuggi ke pass meri har problem ka solution hota tha,, (ranbir smiles thinking about how always abhi and prachi have solutions for all his problems) ussi ke baare mein soch rahe ho,,

ranbir:- (shocked) chief ki...kiske baare meinn,, mai kissi ke ba...baare mein nahi soch raha tha,,

abhi:- dekh mujhse toh zooth bol mat,, jab pyaar ho jaata hai na toh voh uski aakhon mein dikkta hai,, aur teri aakhon acche se dikh raha hai ki toh ussi ke baare mein soch raha hai,,

ranbir:- (knowing he can't hide) chief toh jis...

prachi interuppted them saying ranbir turn had came,, abhi leaves saying they will talk about this later,, ranbir was again feeling a bit nervous, she hugged him,,

prachi:- (in a soothing voice) don't worry,, i am sure you will do well,,

as he respond to her hug,,

ranbir:- thank you prachi,,

both stayed there for while until prachi realised what she was doing,, she immediately step back and smiled awkwardly looking here and there,, her face was tomato red,,

prachi:- mai chalti hoon (she ran from there blushing)

ranbir got on the stage,, the huge crowd was cheering for him, he remembered his chief's words and closed his eyes,, he saw his chief and prachi and with confidence, started his performance,, throughout the song, he kept on remembering the support he always received from abhi and prachi,, as the song ended, the crowd applaud for him,, and the whole audience cheered for his wonderful performance,, he looked at abhi who was very proud of him,, and finally he looked at his lady love who was looking at him with pride and love,,

Flashback ends

his chief's words starts roaming in his mind, "jab pyaar ho jaata hai na toh voh uski aakhon mein dikkta hai" her eyes has always showed him love,, she always gets lost in his eyes, she also has the same feelings,, like his heart beats for her, her heart beats for him,, she was hurt by the bet, she just shows that she hates him but deep down in her heart, she still loves him,,

ranbir:- (smiles) ab dekhta hoon chikchiki ki tum kab mujhse apni feelings chupa sakti hoon,,

prachi finally comes out of the washroom,, her face is still tomato red and is not even able to look in his eyes after their moment,, the sudden knock saves her from talking to him,, she quickly opens the door and rahul comes inside with some bags,, ranbir's face instanly turns into a frown seeing him,,

rahul:- ranbir, prachi papa chahte hai ki aap dono gao ke utsav mein aaaye,, plzzzz

prachi:- (smiles) thik hai rahul,,

rahul:- ye liziye papa ne aap dono ke liye kapde bizvai hai,,

ranbir:- (mummers) gao ke utsav mein aaye,, plzzzz (dramatically) aur ye itta kyu smile kar rahi hai thik hai rahul offo,, mai pagal ho jaoga agar inki baate suni toh,,

to his relief, rahul gave them the clothes and left,, prachi got to the washroom to evade any conversation with ranbir,, as soon as she got out, ranbir was mesmerized to see her,,



(guys you can check the photo at my wattpad id karpreet or someone can post it here)


(this is prachi's dress)


as she looked at him, she got lost in him,, he was looking handsome in his sherwani,,


(guys you can check the photo at my wattpad id karpreet or someone can post it here)


(this is ranbir's dress)


it took some time for both of them to realise that they were wearing the same colour dress,,

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as they move in the villiage,, prachi was mesmerized to see the decorations,, it was so beautiful, her heart started to beam with happiness,, the shining and twinkling of the lights seem to overpowerd her sadness with a happiness,, her inner child started to came out,, ranbir was happy to see her getting back to her usual self,, maybe they both were healing, it was said true, time heal wounds,, he saw her going to various shops and was completely lost in her that he didn't even acknowledge someone standing beside him,, a hand kept on his shoulder brought him back from his dream world and as he turned, his face immeadiately changed to a frown on seeing him,,

rahul:- bhaiya aap yaha kyu kade hai,,

ranbir:- (giving a forced smile) bas aise hi,, tum yaha kya kar rahe ho,, jao na dukane dekho kitti acchi acchi dukane hai (murmuring) ja na kyu mera dimaag karab kar raha hai (gritting teeth) yaha mai apni prachi ko itne pyaar se dekh raha tha aur ye toothpaste ki sakal jaisa cactus aa tapka yaha pe mujhe pareshaan karne,,

rahul:- accha bhaiya papa ne aapko aur didi ko pooja ke liye bulaya hai,,

ranbir:- (confused) didi kaun didi,,

rahul:- prachi didi,,

ranbir:- (he turned to him in shock) didi (confirming he heard it right while rahul nods) didi (rahul nods) matlab bhai behen (he again nods) didi (he frown changed to a bright smile) didi (he beamed in joy) DIDI (he hugged him in happiness) pehle kyu nahi bola, kitta cute hai re tu (he again hugged him while rahul was completely confused with his actions) teri prachi didi abhi shopping kar rahi hai,, oh wow didi (he left from there completely happy leaving a totally confused rahul,, poor confused rahul)

ranbir was beaming with happines,, he was now friends with rahul,, he could not tell how much happy he is now,, it was like a weight on shoulders moved away and is replaced by flower petals,, he was also enjoying the event now when he came across a bangles shop,, he recalled how much she loves bangles, he taught to buy it for her,, as he look at the bangles, one set caught his eyes,, they will definitely look perfect on her,, anything will look perfect on her,, he imagine himself making her wear these, he smiled at his taught and instantly brought them and went to gift it to prachi but stopped as one taught came in his mind, how will he gift these to her,, she is still angry on him, this bought a sad face to his face but he replaced it with a smile,,

ranbir:- (smiles) koi nahi (he saw her talking happily with rahul's sister nikita) bahut dino ke baad itni kushh ho tum,, jab tum mujhe maaf kar dogi aur mere pass wapas aa jao gi tab inhe apne haato se pehnao ga tumhe,,

he kept on looking at her,, for him, her happiness mattered the most, and he could spend his whole life just seeing her smile,, he was so lost in her that he didn't realise that somebody took the box from his hands,, as he saw the thief, the thief was rahul,, and he was running in prachi's direction,, ranbir's heartbeat started to raise and he too ran at a jet speed but was too late as rahul had already reached prachi,,

rahul:- (breathing heavily) aree prachi didi dekhiye,,

prachi:- kya hua rahul,,

ranbir came there running but before he could speak,,

rahul:- didi ranbir jiju ne aap ke liye chori karide hai aur aap ko de bhi nahi rahe the,, bas waha se aapko goore ja rahe the, ye dekhiye (he opened the box and everybody look at the gorgeous bangles ranbir bought)

prachi looked at ranbir surprised,, her heart fluttered seeing the bangles,, she still hadn't forgot the bet but today something different happened,, she wasn't feeling hurt, her heart was not breaking,, the void in her heart was filling,, she won't admit but her heart was happy,,


(guys you can check the picture at my wattpad id karpreet or someone can post it her)


nikita:- wah jiju kya choice hai aapki,,

kritika:- buddu ab bhabhi bhi toh inki hi choice hai toh zahir hai inki har choice best hogi,,

sonali:- haa kitne sundar choriya hai lekin ye aap inhe de kyu nahi rahe the,, ek minute kahi aapko saram toh nahi aa rahi thi inhe gift karne mein,,

(guys all these are just side characters so i am not describing them,, ranbir and prachi had good relations with them)

ranbir:- (getting nervous) aisa kuchh nahi voh...

kritika:- toh aap bhabhi ko ghoor nahi rahe the,,

ranbir:- nahi...

sonali:- matlab aap kisi aur ko dekh rahe the,,

ranbir:- (instantly) nahi nahi nahi,, mai prachi ko hi dekh raha tha,,

nikita:- dekho jiju ne kudh accept kar lia ki voh bhabhi ko dekh rahe the,, ab itni acchi chori aapne karidi hai toh aap kudd apne haato se inhe pehnaiye na,,

kritika/sonali:- haa bhaiya pehnaiye,,

sarpanj ji:- haa pehna do na beta,,

one by one everyone started to say to him,, having no choice he started to make her wear it,, they both were just looking in each other eyes losing each other,, winds started to flow fast and others were saying something but they couldn't heard it,, they just kept looking in each other eyes till they both feel something that landed over them,, they looked and saw it was a garland that landed over them,,


(again you can check wattpad id karpreet or someone can post it)

(imagine ranbir and prachi in their place)


(i got this idea from nandini's story,, i hope you won't mind)


as they look around,, more people came there,, a pandit ji came in front of them,,

pandit ji:- bacho aap dono ko mata rani ne apna aashirwaad dia hai,, ye pooja ki mala jo hava se aap dono par aa giri hai voh mata rani ka sandesh hai ki aap dono hamesha saath rahe aur unka aashirwaad hamesha aapke saath rahega,, aap dono ka pyaar kabhi kam na ho,, har saal har joda mata rani ke saamne pooja karta hai taaki unka aashirwaad hamesha unn sabke saath rahe aur mata rani ne swayam aap dono ko apna aashirwaad dia hai,, aur aap voh pehle jode ho jo pooja sabse pehle karege,,

they knew they had to do it,, so they start doing pooja together,, while doing the pooja,,

ranbir:- (in mind) maine aaj tak kabhi bhi aap par barosa nahi kia,, mere mom, dad, dida har baar bolte hai ki bhagwaan se upar is duniya mein koi bhi nahi hai,, har koi aapko maanta hai,, lekin maine inn baato ke baare mein kabhi nahi socha par jab prachi muskil mein thi tab maine aap se pehli baar dua maangi thi uski suraksa ke liye,, aaj prachi mere saath kade hoke meri biwi banke aapki pooja kar rahi hai,, kya ye sab hi hona tha, uska meri zindagi mein aana aur mera usse pyaar hona,, kya aap bhi yahi chahte the,, mai bas aapse sukriya kehna chahta hoon, prachi ko meri zindagi mein bhejne ke liye,,

prachi:- (in mind) maa hamesha kehti hai ki bhagwaan se bara iss duniya mein koi bhi nahi hai,, unhi se sihka hai ki chahe koi bhi muskil ho, aap mera saath nahi chorege,, aaj aap ne mujhe aur ranbir ko apna aashirwaad dia hai, aap kya sanket kar rahi ho,, kya iska ye matlab hai ki mera aur ranbir ka rishta nahi tooth sakta,,







guys i hope you all like the chapter,, plzzz tell me how was it,, this chapter has crossed 3000 words and is the longest chapter i have written so far,,


i promised that next chapters will be more interesting,, and here it is,, plzzz tell me how was it,,


thanks for reading,,


stay home,,stay safe

Edited by Aman120 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Absolutely loved it! Thank you for writing such a beautiful story!! You have described everything so beautifully, loved the abhi part too..he has always been a guiding light for ranbir

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