Abhigya OS : Destiny

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved all the three POV specially Tanu's😆
Nikhil ran away leaving Tanu👏⭐️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It's Amazing. I am a big fan of Abhigya. If u have free time please write ffs on abhigya even though it was already written on Rishabala.
Eagerly waiting for your next ff.
U have a great talent n your ffs all r supeerrr
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Posted: 8 years ago
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LAZYYY!!!!
I love it so much! The opening is so great, very romance novel-y with the business-minded hero thinking "damn I can't believe I ditched a meeting for this" 😆. Then Pragya shows up with her demand for a promise, and we have these hints that Abhi has a history with her but we're not sure whether to believe he can keep the promise. Loved the detail that Tanu asked for so much more and Abhi was surprised by the difference! The middle was such a change in tone with adorable and randy Pragya, and for a bit of it I felt it was moving too fast with Abhi's revelations that he actually did consider her, but by the end of that section I thought it was just perfect. Loved the blue salwar dream line, and how it built to a steamily suggestive ending that felt just right! Then the last part I didn't expect to like because it didn't seem necessary to have a third voice after the lovely ending. But it was like an absolutely hilarious epilogue, and very satisfying to see how RIGHT AbhiGya are together, so obvious even the third party witch can't help seeing it. 👏 Plus return of the blue salwar!!! 🤣 Overall, loved it a lot, thank you for sharing it here!!

Though, your stories do make me wonder how awful this Dipali character must have been, if she was actually the heroine's sister. At least on KKB, Tanu is not related to Pragya, as far as we know 😉

PS Did you see my comment on the story with Piyali! STILL GRIPS MY HEART, LAZY!!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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god this is soo amazimng... tanu is just not understanding whats happening... the return of the blue salwar...please can u put a sequel as to what happens later...

loved it...please write more..👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Would love to read a sequel on this story...love it soo much!!!
Please write a sequel to this...would love to know what happened after seeing pragya in this wear 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oh Lazy...this is beautiful. Let Tanu live in her own world...haha...if only she knows what Abhi sees when Pragya is wearing that blue salwar suit😆...Oh how I love your stories since Kayamath Forum too.
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Originally posted by: -Sri-

Love it.It was beautiful


Thank you so much😛

Originally posted by: chubbygirl

Loved all the three POV specially Tanu's😆

Nikhil ran away leaving Tanu👏⭐️


hehehe thank you😛.. even me, though i like Pragya's POV too☺️

Originally posted by: An57

It's Amazing. I am a big fan of Abhigya. If u have free time please write ffs on abhigya even though it was already written on Rishabala. Thank you dear... even I love Abhigya, though I watch the show only once in 2 weeks (though i would still feel up to date with the show😆)... Will defo do it, I am planning to post Dude & The Ordinary Girl soon... please do check out my index, and if u want me to post any of my other stories here, pls do let me know😛

Eagerly waiting for your next ff.
U have a great talent n your ffs all r supeerrr thank you so much dear😊



Originally posted by: -mina-

LAZYYY!!!! MINAAA🤗

I love it so much! The opening is so great, very romance novel-y with the business-minded hero thinking "damn I can't believe I ditched a meeting for this" 😆. Then Pragya shows up with her demand for a promise, and we have these hints that Abhi has a history with her but we're not sure whether to believe he can keep the promise. thank you so much hun... hehehe yeah, in the beginning dude is a cardboard without feelings😆... Loved the detail that Tanu asked for so much more and Abhi was surprised by the difference! yeah, though Abhi has a good read on both the sisters, Pragya wud always surprise him in a good way. The middle was such a change in tone with adorable and randy Pragya, and for a bit of it I felt it was moving too fast with Abhi's revelations that he actually did consider her, but by the end of that section I thought it was just perfect. Well, the initial story I had in mind, was more of anguish and insecurities with Abhi and Pragya not knowing the other's feelings and Tanu trying to get back with Abhi and Pragya insecure about his feelings... but then as I wrote it, I lost control of Pragya(I always lose control of my characters😆 changing my stories ALL THE TIME) Loved the blue salwar dream line, and how it built to a steamily suggestive ending that felt just right! hehehe, yeah, Abhi always had the hots for Pragya and that was one of the reasons he was afraid to approach her coz he wudn't be able to take her no as easily as Tanu's. Then the last part I didn't expect to like because it didn't seem necessary to have a third voice after the lovely ending. But it was like an absolutely hilarious epilogue, and very satisfying to see how RIGHT AbhiGya are together, so obvious even the third party witch can't help seeing it. 👏 Plus return of the blue salwar!!! 🤣 hahahahaha Abhi's beloved blue salwar... I always wondered what the vamps thought when the leads are lovey dovey and this was my attempt at seeing what they are seeing... they see everything but don't understand a thing.. Overall, loved it a lot, thank you for sharing it here!! thank you so much for reading it hun😛😛😛

Though, your stories do make me wonder how awful this Dipali character must have been, if she was actually the heroine's sister. At least on KKB, Tanu is not related to Pragya, as far as we know 😉 No, hun... in Madhubala, Trishna is Madhu's sister... Dipali was RK's girlfriend and she ditches him to marry his (good-for-nothing) step brother.. and RK becomes a superstar, and Dipali was desperately behind him.

PS Did you see my comment on the story with Piyali! STILL GRIPS MY HEART, LAZY!!!! Yes hun... A Love So Pure, right? I did... thank you so much... so glad u liked it so much... I read all the comments, but I don't get time to reply to all of them.. thank you🤗



Originally posted by: sasha01

god this is soo amazimng Thank you so much😳😳... tanu is just not understanding whats happening yeah.. she is living in a bubble😆... the return of the blue salwar...please can u put a sequel as to what happens later... hahahahaa... i don't have anything more to say for this couple😛... but regarding the return of the blue salwar😆... I don't think it reaches their house... on the way itself, Abhi is going to go crazy😉😆

loved it...please write more..👏thank you so much dear😛😛



Originally posted by: sally786

Would love to read a sequel on this story...love it soo much!!! thank you so much dear... sorry, there isn't much to tell for this couple... they know each other well and have found their rhythm... so not much story left😛

Please write a sequel to this...would love to know what happened after seeing pragya in this wear 😉 hahahahaha... Abhi goes crazy on the way home... they don't reach home😉... he wud end up tearing the dress beyond, making it one dream come true and one of their best memories🤣



Originally posted by: hutanbandar

Oh Lazy...this is beautiful. Let Tanu live in her own world...haha...if only she knows what Abhi sees when Pragya is wearing that blue salwar suit😆...hahahaha, yeah this way, Tanu would never try to create problems for AbhigyaOh how I love your stories since Kayamath Forum too oh thank you so much dear🤗🤗 what was ur username back then?.


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oh Lazy...I didn't join IF until KKB. But because of KKB, I watched Kayamath and end up in stalking its forum even though it was closed. And I really enjoyed reading your stories about Michi. Got really frustrated when you don't finish "You Belong To Me"...but I understand when you said that you lost interest in Michi...oh my...how did that happen? But yes, the story really sucks after epi. 400 over...
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Beautiful! Amazing! Perfect! Mind blowing!! I don't have words to express how much I loved this os!!<3<3<3

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