Write a song or poem for Abhi

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Just for fun, if Abhi was to write a song or poem for one of the people around him, what would it say?

I will start by creating a poem from Abhi to Tanu.

You came to me one day and said you were carrying my child.
But I do not remember you and I ever getting so wild.
But now that child of mine is no more.
And I really want to kick you out the door.
But something strange is holding me back.
Maybe it is because the writers will never end this track.

Now it is your turn.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh Tannu, I am not your Mannu..
Go with your Ninnu.. and leave me alonuuu
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Tia-

Oh Tannu, I am not your Mannu..

Go with your Ninnu.. and leave me alonuuu



"alonuuu?" 👏🤣


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Posted: 9 years ago
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There is a very famous Michael Jackson song that goes so well with this situation..It's called Billie Jean. Coincidentally it's about a woman called Billie Jean who is claiming that the kid is singer's and he is refuting the claim!

Here are some parts of the lyrics!



She was more like a beauty queen from a movie scene
I said don't mind, but what do you mean I am the one
Who will dance on the floor in the round
She said I am the one who will dance on the floor in the round


She told me her name was Billie Jean, as she caused a scene
Then every head turned with eyes that dreamed of being the one
Who will dance on the floor in the round

People always told me be careful of what you do
And don't go around breaking young girls' hearts
And mother always told me be careful of who you love
And be careful of what you do 'cause the lie becomes the truth

Billie Jean is not my lover
She's just a girl who claims that I am the one
But the kid is not my son
She says I am the one, but the kid is not my son


For forty days and forty nights
The law was on her side
But who can stand when she's in demand
Her schemes and plans
'cause we danced on the floor in the round
So take my strong advice, just remember to always think twice
(do think twice.)


She told my baby we'd danced 'til three
Then she looked at me
She showed a photo of a baby crying
His eyes looked like mine
Go on dance on the floor in the round, baby

Billie Jean is not my lover
She's just a girl who claims that I am the one
But the kid is not my son
She says I am the one, but the kid is not my son
Edited by -Tia- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Just rhyming..😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Well mine choice would b song dil e naadan from hawaizada movie suits best .
It's like
Aag ka daariya doob k jana ishq nahi aasan...
Dil e nadan tujhe hua Kya h
Aakhir is dard ki wajh kya h
Humko unse wafa ki h umeed
Jo nahi jante wafa Kya h
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lover is a liar
Liar is the lover
I'm a liar when I sing love love happy love..
I wanna never believe in love..
Love is a liar
Love love no happy love
Edited by -Tia- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I can write some 100 Songs for him.

For now,

You made me feel falling in love is a crime.
You made me feel love is a sin.

What should I do to earn your trust?
Will I be able to get it in this life?

If not tell me, we will meet in some other life where there is trust before love between us.


Not my own - lines from songs of 2 Telugu movies.
I just improvised it a bit.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh my dear sister aliya...
Kyo nikal rahi ho meri life ka diwaliya??
You are punishing me for what...
For loving you alot??
I cared for you so much...
But y are you hating me this much???
I would have happily sacrificed my life,
But you forgot everything just to be purab's wife???
Wishing for you to come back some day...
I can die peacefully after that day...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: jaydp59

Oh my dear sister aliya...
Kyo nikal rahi ho meri life ka diwaliya??
You are punishing me for what...
For loving you alot??
I cared for you so much...
But y are you hating me this much???
I would have happily sacrificed my life,
But you forgot everything just to be purab's wife???
Wishing for you to come back some day...
I can die peacefully after that day...


Awww 😭

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