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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: apratheba007

superb dear your all updates are really awesome.keep rocking dear😊


Thanks so sweet of u
Hope next part also excites u
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing update. Loved it.


Thanks really it means a lot to me
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good update i like it


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 9 AKELE HUM AKELE TUM


Abhi was speechless for moment,
It was unbelievable for him that his little sister aaliya planned all this, but at same time he was happy if not because of her, maybe he still won't have confessed, n ask Pragya that how aaliya knows that she also love him, who told her or she figured out herself, Pragya starts to tell
Flashback
As aaliya entered with ice cream cake, Pragya had tears in her eyes, she quickly wipes them n ask about abhi, aaliya noticed that but didn't ask her why she was crying, to cheer her, aaliya said,"Pragya, you are awesome, thanks for this surprise" hearing these words she came to reality, n saw aaliya was standing with ice cream cake in her hands, lone tear fell from her eyes, as today she crossed all limits, she was dreaming about abhi with her open eyes, n couldn't control her emotions, aaliya puts her hand on her tummy n talks to Angel,"you are so lucky to such a rocking mummy, she is the best" n side hugs her, Pragya smiles n asks her, "thanks, where is abhi??"
Still in hyper mood," Bhai was coming here to give to this cake, but I stopped him n ask to give it to me, as I wanted to chat with you n after you finish we will go down n dance"
She just hugs aaliya, " I can't take it anymore" saying so she started crying
Aaliya: don't worry, Bhai loves you
P( shocked) how do you know?? Did he told you
A: no, I just figured it out
P: how???
A: remember that day when Bhai went to Pune, n met with accident, actually he was thinking about you so deeply that he didn't see truck coming, so by that I was sure Bhai has feelings for you but not admitting maybe he was scared that if you are not feeling same as he does
P: but
A: let me finish first, when we were at clinic, I talk to Tanu, as she kept on saying that Bhai was saying about you again n again n I ask if she also feels that Bhai loves you, n she had same feeling, n said I should do something to bring u love birds together, then I had an idea n Tanu n her mom and Purab help me, we tried to provoke Bhai, but he did not confess
P:(throws pillow at her) so all that was your plan, ( again gets sad) but truth is he loves me like friend nothing else
A: no, he loves you, n I can prove you today itself
P: how???
A: you just wait n watch
Flashback ends
"And rest you know" says cuddling him
Abhi: she is such a dramabaz, but I love her, she made me confess, but I'm not going to leave her, she made fool out of me that day, tell me one think, she loves Purab or that was also part of her plan
P: don't know but I think she loves him, I have seen spark in her eyes
A: now let her come with her proposal, I will teach her lesson
P: that's rude
A: no, that's tit for tat
mean while Tanu had already told aaliya n Purab that abhi confessed his love for Pragya but was angry with her for playing prank with his emotions, after she came down as she was scared to death , n don't know what happened later that, both aaliya n Purab also got scared n warp up party before they came down, n aaliya went out with Purab n Tanu
Abhigya were little uncomfortable as they knew that those naughty friends of them will tease them n make fun of them as how childish plan aaliya had made n then also abhi got caught in it, they decided not to go down n locked door from inside
P: what are doing?? We can't stay here forever, we have to face them if not today but what about tomorrow??
A: I have a plan, I will act as I'm angry with all of you
P:(cuts in) now who is behaving childish??
A: shut up n listen, we will continue like I'm angry, n then I will make them all to say sorry
P: you are impossible
A: n you are my love, my life ( comes closer n kisses her on forehead) you are with me right??
P: ok, I'm with you, but I'm tired now, you also go to sleep, it's late ( was about to leave to go to her room n he stops her)
A: where are you going??
P: to my room
A: from now this is your room
P: (smiles) but
A: I know what you are thinking, tomorrow itself we will go n get married
P: ( her eyes filled with tears) I love you abhi n both hugs
A: ( makes her sit on bed) let me make you sleep comfortable
P:( blushed n makes faces to hide it) I know your naughty tricks, no need, you go n sleep on sofa
A: I promise I won't be naughty (makes puppy face) pls
P: ok, remember you promised
Both goes to sleep
Meanwhile Tanu, aaliya n Purab goes to club to celebrate as their plan was successful, they were dancing n drinking, aaliya excuse them n went to take another drink, when she was coming back she bumped into someone n shouted,"can't you see" n froze, the man was Suresh, she was completely cold, freeze for moment," you are alive!!"

I know I'm ending this at crucial point by trust me it will be worth wait
Do comment
Hope you like it
Happy reading

Part 10
Edited by Maggie11 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oh my!! Suresh is alive??? What now? Haiyaa...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Omg...suresh is alive ah...big twist ya...Thanks fr updating...
Oh...no...til next updates, I ll think about tis n ll bang my head in wall...pls update soon ya
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: shabeenia

Omg...suresh is alive ah...big twist ya...Thanks fr updating...
Oh...no...til next updates, I ll think about tis n ll bang my head in wall...pls update soon ya


Will update next part on Tuesday
Till then pls take care n don't bang your head 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: hutanbandar

Oh my!! Suresh is alive??? What now? Haiyaa...


He is my favourite after Abhigya
So if not in actual serial at least he should come back in this story
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Maggie finally getting the time to do some reading so my apologies for not commenting before now. Read all of the chapters in one go and was enjoying the twists and turns of this tale, only to be confronted with such a cliffhanger at the end of chapter 9.😲 I cannot believe that Suresh is alive...and I really really hope he does not decide he wants Pragya back. I know she is legally his wife but can he please go away again😆. Update soon I am anxious to know what happens next.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Maggie11


He is my favourite after Abhigya
So if not in actual serial at least he should come back in this story


I like him too. In the show, they somehow twisted his character, he is such a good friend, neighbour to the Aroras. But CVs made him bad because he fell in love with BB. Is it wrong to fall in love? Its not like he turns out to be like Taliyah. Yup, he made a mistake by agreeing to marry Pragya. But in the end, it was solved right? Oh poor Suresh. And they even made Abhi bashed him up to a pulp!
Edited by hutanbandar - 8 years ago

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