abhigya os/ts

hi!I'm Haleema.

I'm pretty rubbish at writing full paragraphs so i wrote something like a poem

i was bored so i thought of this and wrote it.

hope you like it

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I just assumed i wasn't loved,

Standing quiet,

Facing away from the wold,

and everyone,

i was petrified of falling into another trap called love,

you see love leads to heartbreak

and heartbreak leads to me self loafing,

i was just exhausted of hearing the word ugly,

too tired of being rejected,

i just wanted to be free,

no men, no heartbreaks, and just happiness,

everything i wish for,

will it be a dream come true?,

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it's as if the word is against me,

conspiring every second of the day,

when are my dream gonna come true?,

when is something actually going to be about me?,

can't the world just give me a break!,

was i burden to everyone?,

'your passing age!',

a ruckus everyday,

why was ma so desperate to get me married?,

and why to him?,

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tortured and crippled,

i had alway seen the good in you,

seen everything,

good and your worst moments,

weren't you supposed to hate me?,

why did you have let the other side come out?,

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i fell to hard,

i was expecting too much,

how did i just expect you to love me?,

you flaunted you girlfriend at every chance,

how did i let myself?,

i didn't want to fall in love,

i knew the consequences,

why?,

now i was going

say goodbye,

the knife wavering in my hands,

should i?,

i have nothing left,

should i live for you,

one word and i will stay,

no,

you won't say it,

my eyes filling with tears,

i can't,

i placed the knife on my wrist,

blood gushed from my hand ,

i bit my lips,

preventing me from howling,

both hands covered in blood,

i wilted in pain

the blood i so scarcely see,

was now flowing from my wrists,

i was becoming so flaccid,

the knife left my hand,

i'm going too quickly,

i need you,

this time you aren't here to save me,

like all the other times,

you can't save me,

not today nor tomorrow,

a saviour, a god,my love

you stayed in my once healthy beating heart,

now it lay crestfallen and shattered,

i was never going to regret marrying you,

I'm going,

are you going to save me,

where are you?,

can i just look,touch you,

for the last time,

please i pleaded,

my eyes are closing,

remember when you held me,

carried me when i was about to fall,

my cheeks glowing as i lay in your arms,

suniye i'll wait forever,

for you,

our memories engraved in my head,

our mundane banters will forever live on in me,

here and up there,

i'm breathing my last,

fading, fading ,

i'm falling into a dark abyss,

i love you,

my head lolled back,

my once flushed skin turning pale,

Abhishek i whispered my last,

my eyes closed,

my last sight a mirror,

if only it was you,

a lonely tear lay astray on my cheek

i'm leaving,bye

your sincerely,

Pragya Abhishek Mehra

this could be turned into a two shot

the second instalment will be about Abhi.

please comment it will make me want to continue writing

It is a simple yet painful piece of writing. Though I don't like to read suicides in stories, I am impressed with how you expressed Pragya's pain. I loved the first two stanzas the most.

That was nice, Pragya committing suicide. Do write more!!

nice piz continue soon 😊

Really amazing. Complex emotions expressed in simple words and phrases, breaking of a heart expressed in fragmented and choppy lines which still create a flow of thoughts- honestly there couldn't have been a better way or structure to get this point across.

Very well written!! Though the tone of it was sad, the emotions were expressed beautifully!! Good job :)!!

Nice os. Loved it.
Thanks for pm.

Wonderful piece of writing! Emotions and thoughts of Pragya...well expressed. Your English is good. Do continue soon...