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SS: love is...

At the end of this SS, I would like you'll to give reviews, what you'll think about love n complete sentence love is ...

After spendng her childhood in orphanage, she started leaving in girls hostel, to pay for her expanse her had joined as part time as art teacher at play school n she went for night collage to complete her education, one night when she was returning from collage one of boy from her collage try to hit on her, she slap him tight n insulted him by calling him impotent, she was real bindas girl, she was not afraid of anything, very brave, happy go lucky, cheerful girl, she was very found of kids at school, she had many friends but she never had any best friend, with whom she would share her happy or sad moments, she had mostly happy moments as she was always nice to everybody, next day that boy followed her to school n then collage, just when she was alone, he trow acid on her n ran from there, she was shouting in help n crying of pain for almost 1/2hr, there was car passing by, when he saw her, he stop car n help her to sit in his car n drive her to his hospital, he was Dr Purab Khanna he was gynaecologist in his early 40s, treated her, next day when Pragya opened her eyes, she was again crying in pain, soon bulbul came n nurse her, clam her n told she is lucky that acid attack did not spoiled her face, her just below her jaw line, neck n little part of her left shoulder was injured, bulbul was nurse in this maternity hospital, she was just like her, as days passed they became best friends, but Pragya lost her job, kids were scared of her appearance n she stop going to collage n applied for correspondence course, Dr Purab was nice man, he offered Acountent job to her n she agreed, she used to stay here at hospital, she was very happy being around with pregnant ladies,all of them were surrogate mothers,this hospital was meant for them only, identities of these ladies were not disclosed to couples who wanted child. One day Dr Purab receives call from Abhishek mehera( Abhi the rockstar) that his dadi passed away, so he went to Mumbai to meet him
Abhi was broken beyond repair, dadi was his whole world, Purab asked him to settle down in life, but Abhi was determine to his decision to remain single in life, Purab asked him that what's life if not shared with someone, one needs partner in life, to that he argued Purab himself was not married, Purab told him" I'm not married but I have my girl, my angle Aarna with me"he had adopted her, when she was two weeks old from orphanage
Abhi told him,"I would love to have child, but of his own n without marriage" Purab looked confused n ask him,"I didn't get you, what you mean" Abhi with smile told him," I can child with surrogacy" Purab was more then happy n offed him that he could help him with this but Abhi said," my only condition is it should be her first surrogacy" Purab asked him why he wants this to that he replied, " I have read somewhere that first time mother take better care of baby" Purab smiled at his thought, n assure him that he would find someone n keep whole thing confidential, after discussing whole matter he returned to Pune,
On coming back he discuss same thing with bulbul but he did not disclose Abhi name, Pragya happened to over hear their conversation, that whole night she was thinking about it,after thinking over n over again she said to her self,"this will solve my problem"
She needed money for plastic surgery n 2 lakhs was big amount for her, Purab did offered her but she didn't wanted to bother him, her self respect didn't allow her, she wanted to start her life again n live it to fullest, wanted to join that school again as she loved kids there. Next day she went to him n said," sir, I heard your n bulbul Di conversation yesterday n if you don't mind I'm ready to do it, in return you can ask that couple to pay my surgery bill" Purab told her about complication related to this n she should not emotionally attach to baby, " sir, I every well know about this, I'm not only doing this for money but I will be glad if I'm reason for some else happiness"
Purab agreed n ask her to do some tests n called Abhi that he found girl, n her condition that he will have to pay for her surgery as her fee, she doesn't need anything in cash
3 months passed, today was her first sonography, she was excited n amazed to see life inside her, though it was like size of peanut but heart beat which showed on graph was exciting her, she requested Purab to send copy of this to couple," actually he is going to be single parent" Pragya was surprised but did not asked any question about," so what, he needs to know after all he is going to be father, n he has right to see it, ( after minute she again said) can you mail him, he may not even know about what all test n all going on, his child should be loved by father from start, he will bound with baby from now" Purab laughs at her innocence," I will give you his id, you only mail it but nothing more then that no conversation ok"
Pragya smiled n agreed, within an hour she mailed reports
Abhi was happy when Purab told his report is positive n will soon become father but when he read mail n saw sonography tears came in his eyes, he was on cloud 9, he wanted to reply instantly but he remember Purab words that he can't contact her, he bought some books related to pregnancy, read them all, but after week he could not hold on his curiosity n he mailed her
Pls leave comments if you'll like it n complete sentence love is... According to you
Happy reading
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Love is...
Part 2

Abhi mailed her
"Hi, I'm very thankful to you for carrying my child, for giving me my biggest happiness, I promise I will take you to best surgeon for your surgery, it's amazing I saw sonography, I was almost in tears of happiness, it's awesome, I'm going to be father, I also bought some books related to pregnancy, but they confused me more, so I need some questions to be answered, do you have any morning sickness or carving for any particular food, do you get proper sleep, n take your vitamin tabs, is you gaining weight, so you are 15 weeks, you should do anomaly scan when 20 weeks, pls do reply but I request you not to tell Purab or anyone that I mailed you n asking for reply pls, ok take care"
After reading mail, Pragya was overwhelmed by him, but was little surprise that he didn't mention about his wife, she hesitated to reply, but after 2days she replied
"Hi sir, I'm glad that I can give someone happiness, you don't have to think about my surgery now, just think about baby,n I'm taking care of your baby, bulbul Di helps me with all info I need to know about pregnancy, n yes I do get morning sickness, I feel like vomiting when I smell hot milk but I take soap n smell it n that helps, about carvings I really don't have any, I'm taking all medicines Purab sir have asked me to have n I have gain weight, at this point in pregnancy getting sleep is not that difficult maybe at later stage, I also need to ask you something, bulbul Di told me that reciting gods name during this time is good for baby, so if you tell me about your religion that would be helpful, n I more thing, what you aspect boy or girl, I know it's personal question but I read somewhere if we talk to baby they respond so was thinking call baby by nick name, can you suggest
I hope you won't mind it, do reply soon bye take care"
From that day they exchange mails regularly Abhi was glad that Pragya was taking care for his baby
"Hi, I'm really thankful that you are taking care of my baby, n you can ask me anything, I will always be happy to answer, you can name baby "Fuggie", as it looks like balloon in sonography, I'm punjabi, but I don't believe in God, he has taken every happiness Of my life, my parents, my dadi everyone which mean world to me, only because him now I don't believe in love or relationship, so it doesn't matter, How is your morning sickness now is it better??? Pls feel free to ask, or inform me anything that bothers you, Bye take care"
to that she replied,
"Sir, wow, girl, even I have same feeling, I read on some site, n calculate delivery date n conception date n it turn out to be its girl, I'm sending link, you can check yourself, "Fuggie," its unique name, so does it means balloon, i m really sorry to hear that you lost your family but at lest you have loving wife, I'm orphan so I know how it feels, but not believing in God is not right, I believe in God, even though I don't know I'm of which religion n anyways not believing in God is your choice, you just can't take this right from baby, when baby will grow up baby will decide weather he wants to believe or not, tell me, do your wife think same, even she don't believe in God?? I know it's personal sorry if I sound rude, think over it, bye sir"
when Pragya mention about wife Abhi was taken aback he didn't reply for few days, he was constantly thinking about his fuggie n Pragya, day by day he was feeling restless n thought Pragya should know I'm going to be single parent, I'm planning to rise my fuggie on my own, I will keep her always close to my heart n finally decided to tell her everything without giving his identity, Pragya was shock n angry, asked him, well actually bombarded him with questions, her insecurity, curiosities, she was completely gone insane, n the fact that Purab also knew, that Abhi was going to be single parent,

"Are you out of your mind???
how will you rise baby alone???
You will be busy in your work n fuggie will be whole day with maids n servants, are you planning baby for them or yourself, how can you be so selfish, fuggie deserves love of both parents, just because you are running from commitments, fuggie will have to suffer, if you really feel you can give her that love n affection of mother too then promise that you yourself will take care of fuggie from feeding to getting her to sleep to changing nappies all that things a mother does for baby, you should do, you have planned this n you will alone take care of fuggie, oh god, how you will do it??, i think you should take maternity leave for at lest three months n after that also you have to make sure you work from home or take fuggie to your office, but first join those prenatal classes, they will teach you everything, oh my god I'm going nuts, my BP is rising, oh god help me, I know, I should not question you but you are going to have baby all alone n you better start believing in God , as now only he can help you, you know everything happens for reason, if you had all the happiness in world then fuggie would have not came in your life, maybe God wanted to give you much more then anyone can ask, you are lucky you got second chance in life, as you will be reborn as father, will have your fuggie soon in your arms, I'm sure you are going to best father any child could have, Bye sir take care,"
Abhi was amazed at her replied but glad that she was so much worried n cared for fuggie n her future, from that day he started going to guru dhwara everyday, but taking care of baby just like mother gave him goose bumps, from that day he changed his getup to Sardar n went for prenatal classes hiding from media n fans, n their mails were like endless, both would reply at once as if they are chatting on phone,
She was almost 6months pregnant, Abhi was busy for his upcoming concert n had not mailed her just for one day actually only time till his concert got over, Pragya was curious he had not replied for over 5 hrs after she mailed him, that was making her more n more restless so she started watching TV, she was surfing channels, then stop at music channel n started listening to song happy love, (abhi's live concert) just then fuggie kicked for first time, it was little pain full, but that experience was magical, at that instant she shared that info with Abhi n but he was still busy, that day late night he saw he was having more then 10 unread mails from Pragya, he read them in one go, but didn't reply, he was eager to meet her now, he also wanted to feel baby, his fuggie, who reacted n kicked on his song, fuggie would move n at times kicked so hard that Pragya would almost cry out of pain, Pragya would mail him like live updates, as he was not replying, he was lost of words to all this info, n this was making Abhi more n more eager to meet his fuggie,so very next day early morning he went to Pune, but he knew Purab would not allowed to meet, so he waited till late night, he finally seek in like thief, was looking for Pragya, to his surprise there were 4-5 pregant ladies sleeping in that room, he thought for while n remembered that she was having scar near her neck, so slowly he checked all ladies, but non had such scar, suddenly Pragya came from wash room n saw someone standing near bed, n shouted chor chor chor, he notice her n was happy that he found her n quickly hide, all came running, bulbul said she is imaging things there is no one n ask to go to sleep. After waiting for almost an hour Abhi slowly came near her, n softly kissed on her tummy, n his fuggie kicked, he gently was rubbing his hand on tummy when Pragya thought its bulbul Di, thanks her n said she was feeling better, n less painful, n then talk to herself, I think I should stop listening to Abhi music this fuggie gets hyper n she kicked her hard again n Pragya woke up with pain, n scolds "fuggie one more kick n I will stop playing happy love song of yours" telling that she looked around for bulbul but no one was there,before he had quickly hide under bed, Pragya thought she must be imagining that bulbul was here, this went for 2 more days, he would come n talk to his fuggie n feel her, n then this was routine for every week end,

Hope you'll like it
I know all other stories of mine is still not updated but soon will updated them all
Pls leave comments that's keeps me motivating to wright more
Happy reading
Edited by Maggie11 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice Start... 👏
Continue soon..😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice scenario!
Love is... Beautiful!

Well, continue soon, thanks for pm.
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Good start dear, waiting for the next piece of ur imagination
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wow that is soo wonderful love is awesome u can give other people lovee to make them happy.
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Good start and very intresting .continue soon
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Originally posted by: Shafoo

wow that is soo wonderful love is awesome u can give other people lovee to make them happy.


Nice thought, love is in other's happiness
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Story with different thought
I loved it👏
Plz continue

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Just go-ahead with this it was awesome concept.. it's just a start but both dnt the relation of love r blood that will show by this pregnancy period...

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