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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shafoo

that is nice update


Thank you Shafoo...

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Wow!!! Wonderful update!!!! Loved it!!!!

Abhi was about to know about Prem's illness, but they didn't let to. Poor Prem!!!! He is so sweet but that illness!!

Pragya had a great time!!! She was enjoying shopping and bike riding!!! She is too cute!!! Enjoying the wind!!! Her brother is a great guy. He bought her everything she wanted. She eyed something and he would get it, so sweet!!!

Pragya was surprised seeing Prem, Abhi, and his mother there!!! She was so happy thinking about surprise but Abhi teased her!!! Hehe!! so? so? And talked about studies, seriously!!! But after going to room, she understood the surprise!!! Yeah!! And Abhi, first wisher!!!! And Prem wished her in French!! wow!!!! She hugged him!!! He was jealous for the little moment but Pragya hugged him tight, kissed him in cheeks and forehead in excitement!!! Wow!!! So sweet!!! Prem in middle between too hehe!!! Their cake cutting, wonderful!!! Abhi fed first!! Prem and Abhi's same gift?? Pragya's day was too wonderful, full of surprises!!!! And atlast her father!!! Gift to open only after becoming 18? What could be that??

Abhi's grandfather!! He raised him? Oo Abhi became sad!!! Next morning!!! His hair and for lol!!! They teased him!! He faked anger!!

Nive and Nadzz, This is wonderful!!! Loved each and every scene!!!! Amazing!!!!! Thanks for pm.



Thank you Kaustavi for such a lovely comment and mentioning about all the points that stood out for you...

You have to wait for Pragya's 18th to find out what that gift can be 😉😆...

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Amazng work Nive & Nadzo👏

Just read all the 7 chapters nd I'm eagerly waitng fo the next one😳I just loved it..❤️
At the beginning,wen prem was introduced in the story I felt hez going to be the villain of abhigyas life & bt as the story progressed my thots changed..Bt still in a confusion😆
I culd remember sum IF members while reading spclly wen it cums to love of Pragya fo icecreams I remembered nive nd wen Abhi says dey vil tease me sayng that I can't keep up the words,I remember sowmii😆Totally enjoyed it..
I'm hppy fo another reason that is I could discover soo many new words nd that gives me greatest pleasure😊
My fav line z she z lyk a moon...& like a brightest star...
Thanks fo givng this beautiful FF🤗


Thank you Sandy for such a cute comment 🤗 ...

Prem a villain in AbhiGya's life, never. It's impossible 😳😆. Glad to know that you feel that you are learning, nice. Awww, definitely one of our favourite lines too in the fic. Pleasure is all ours. Next update will be up soon...

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This should have been done earlier but never late than never. If you would like to receive PM's for the updates please press the like button. Thank you!!!!!...
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Chapter 8

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I was getting frustrated that Pragya and Prem were trying to make me angry so I kept my anger further to rile them up. The further I stayed quite the more annoying they were. I am not going to lie that I wanted to laugh out loud with their cuteness but I told myself that I was not going to let them win. Still I had the urge where I just wanted to burst my feelings and tell Pragya that my dad let me join guitar classes. It was almost the end of the day and Prem stopped but Pragya kept going by calling me silly names, trying to tease me, trying to talking to Arjun. That's it I had enough. That was when I went towards her and grabbed her arm to take her away so I can talk to her. She looked petrified.

I asked her what was she doing. She replied why did it matter to me. I said because you are my friend and she replied, "a friend who you won't talk to". I told her that she only started it. She said that she just teased but I was one who made it an issue and told that I won't talk. "OK Tell me sorry. We will end it here", I told her as I didnt want to continue the fight. I just wanted to share my happiness of joining guitar classes with her. To my surprise, she asked me why should she say sorry. I told her that she teased me to which she replied that I also used to tease her a lot and asked me whether I was apologizing to her everyday. Was she picking up a fight with me? I was annoyed at her statement. She stood there with her arms crossed and I also waited for her to tell sorry first. Prem came out of nowhere and asked me whether we were done talking as he wanted to go home soon. "I am going now", Pragya said and started walking. Prem asked me what did I do. I just frowned at him as he asked me instead of asking her. I and Prem started walking behind her. I called her but she didn't respond and then Prem went towards her. They started talking with each other again and I was left behind.

"Oye Chashmish", I called her and she turned back and gave me a murderous stare. She bent down to take something. It looked like a small stone.


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Me and Prem were having fun teasing Abhi. He loved teasing me. Wait till I show him what I am capable of. His face was worth seeing. Abhi was totally gobsmacked that I was being like that and I was loving it. Let me carry on. I and Prem tried various ways to make him angry but it wasn't really working. I was kind of frustrated and wanted him to just talk to me. He was being silent and it felt very weird. Weird that he was being silen becasue he was so jovial usually. I wondered if something was troubling him. It was end of the day and still there was no progress despite my and Prem's efforts to get him angry or even talk. I could tell from his face he was getting annoyed and saw almost a glimpse where he just wanted to talk to me. Prem gave up. I would never give up on Abhi. I approached Abhi and started coming with silly names so he would get irritated. I called him "nutty, moody, grump, kadoos, kanjoos, mango", even though he wasn't one. He did gave me a sharp stare when I said all these but still he kept quite. I sighed. I started teasing him about how he missed me that's why he was not in the mood. I was the best, and so forth I continued with my teasing. Still nothing. Suddenly I saw Arjun and thought to try my luck. When I was talking to Arjun. Arjun spoke sweetly back I felt weird but didn't want to show my awkwardness to Abhi as I knew he was watching me from the corner of my eye. I had a little smirk as I saw him approaching us and whispered to myself, this worked. I internally gave myself a high five since Abhi won't give me one. Once he came near me, he gave a murderous look and I got scared since he grabbed my arm to take me away.

He held my hands so hard that it hurt me. I pulled his hands off mine and he asked me what was I doing. I asked him whether it mattered to him. We had a silly argument over who was wrong and then the final stage reached when he asked me to tell sorry. I told him that I wouldn't. OK, I was teasing him and annoying him. I accept that I was at fault. But he also teased me everyday and if he came to know something annoyed me, he would definitely do that. So when I did the same, why was he making it an issue? I actually wanted to apologize him for not talking to him for the past few days mistaking him to be hiding something from me when he was actually planning a birthday surprise. But he just spoiled my mood by making a big deal out of me teasing him. I didn't want to apologize for this reason because I wouldn't have teased him if he hadn't told me and Prem that he wouldn't talk to us. After some time, Prem came and asked whether we were done. I told them that I would be leaving and left. After few seconds, Prem came chasing me and asked me whether I and Abhi fought again. He told me to go soft on Abhi and then I heard Abhi shout something that I didn't like. He called me Chashmish. I turned back and stared at him. I wanted him to know that I didn't like the name. I looked around for something to hit him with.


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She was about to hit me with the stone and I ducked down . I missed the stone. She tried to grab another stone but I held her. I told Prem to go home and I would meet him there. Prem said his byes to me and Pragya. As soon as he was out of our sight, I took hold of Pragya and took us to the nearby park which was on on our way. We sat under a tree. I asked her what was she doing. She simply replied that she felt like hitting so she got the stone. She said, "I almost got you. But you...you are just too fast. I don't like that name so don't call me Chashmish". I told her how much I liked that name so I was keeping it and she can't do anything about it. As soon as I said that, her face lit up, she had a mischievous smile and a glint in her eyes.

She asked me to call her again with that name. I got a little suspicious but I called her Chashmish. She told me "again" and started walking backwards. I shouted Chashmish. She started laughing silently and I realized that there was a boy walking there. He was also wearing glasses and most of all, he was older than me and looked like a giant. He looked at me angrily and I understood what Pragya had done to me. I went to my cycle and Pragya came running behind me. After running for few metres along with my cycle, we stopped to breathe. We bent down with our hands on our knees and looked at each other. We started laughing at our latest adventure.

"So you are here?"

We saw Pranav stopping near us in his bike. We didn't realize that time had passed away quickly and it was getting late. Pragya's mom had started worrying that she didn't come home yet so she had called my home and Prem had told that I and Pragya would be coming late. Pranav had been searching for us as Prem had told them that we had a fight. I scolded him in my head for being a detailed updater. Pranav took Pragya in his bike and I started cycling to my home.


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I grabbed a small stone as I did not really wante to hurt him or make him bleed. As I was about to hit him, he bended down on time and the hit was missed. Damn, I thought. I took another stone but he held me again. As he told Prem to go home, Prem said bye to his brother and me. Abhi didn't leave my hand but watched Prem go. As soon as he was gone Abhi took me to a nearby park. He made me sit under a tree in park. I was skeptical. I was wondering why he wanted us to sit under the tree when we can easily walk and talk. He was just enquiring what I was doing with the stones. I told him the reason. Instead he was being stubborn and told me he was s going to keep the nick name he kept for me. *Shrugs*, I so did not like that name. At the same time, a thought occurred on my mind and I was too happy.

I saw a boy of my brother's age wearing a glass coming by. I decided to teach Abhi a lesson. I told him to call me like that again and he obeyed me like a baby without knowing the plan. I told him to call again and started walking backwards in the boy's direction. The boy heard Abhi shout Chashmish and my plan worked. He looked at Abhi angrily and Abhi started running. I ran behind him. We ran together for few minutes until we became sure that we were out of the boy's sight. We stopped and laughed at what happened. By that time, my brother came searching me. It seemed that Mom had called Abhi's house and Prem had informed them about our fight. I went home with my brother in his bike while Abhi started cycling.


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The next day I decided to tell Pragya everything about my guitar lessons, the first thing in the morning. I thought I should buy her sweets. On my way to school with Prem, I bought sweets pack for Pragya from a corner shop. Prem didn't really question me as he didn't like sweets for some weird reason and he knew how much I loved sweets. It was quite surprising despite being twins we had different taste in things. It can be a good thing also. I didn't like sharing my favourite things so it helped. When we reached school, I saw Pragya by the gate talking to her friend. As soon as she finished talking to her and saw me, I went running to her and told her I need to tell her something. Prem was looking at me in a strange way. He just told me that he will meet us in the classroom and he went off. From my backpack, I got the sweets out and at the same time excitedly Pragya asked "What would you like to tell me? that you missed me?" Then she chuckled. I rolled my eyes with a smirk and said to her "in you dreams". She frowned and looked away with closing arms around her by her chest with a pout. I laughed and she saw me squinting her eyes, frowning more. I laughed even louder. I gave the sweets to her which were in my hands, she looked at me with a curious face, and then looked at me again for few seconds and had a big smile. She took the sweets and started munching already. Then I told her "let's sit on the bench" and sat near the entrance of the school. As we sat, we discussed about our evening what we got upto and then finally came the moment where I wanted to tell her. I was more excited about her reaction as I know she would be more happier than I was. When she almost finished her sweets, I said to her "Chashmish, I am going to start my guitar lessons?" She stared at her sweet for a second and the next one fell as soon as she put her head up to me, and asked "what?" I told her again I was going to start my guitar lessons. She said "say again". This happened three times. She stayed stunned for few seconds. As soon as she got up and got me up, she held my hand and started jumping up and down, then finally hugged me. Seeing her this excited made me more excited than the I was excited about starting my guitar lessons. As my eyes were closed during the hug, I sighed and was thanking that I couldn't ask for a better best friend.

As she broke the hug, she gave me a tight handshake saying "All the best Rockstar". "Rockstar?" I looked at her curiously. "You like that film na?", she asked me knowing the answer. She said that she was going to call me Rockstar. I was amused at her decision but I liked the name. As the bell rang, we ran to our class. I was very happy that Prem even asked me why was i smiling so much. Before I could reply, we saw the teacher looking at us so we stopped our conversation there. After our class, I had went to meet my Mathematics teacher as she had asked me to meet her after class. She told me to be focussed and not play during classes. She also warned me that if i continued to be careless, she would call my parents. I told her that I would try to follow her words and started walking towards our classroom as Prem and Pragya were waiting for me. That's when I saw Prem being surrounded by some boys and Pragya scolding them.


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I was at school earlier than usual and was talking to my friend. She was telling me about her new pet. I got sad thinking about what happened and the pup at our home. As she carried on talking, I wanted to finish her story so that I could tell mine. We both told each other about pets and our love for them. As she was from a different class, she went away with a bye. I saw Abhi and he came running to me to tell me something. Prem went to the classroom. I was teasing him about me and what he wanted to tell me. He was being the annoying cutie bestfriend that he was by teasing me back. I got annoyed for few seconds, but how can it last longer than that, *sigh*. I didn't realize when he took the sweets out but I was too happy though I was hesitant whilst looking at him but I loved my sweets and he knew how much I loved white mice. I took them from him and started eating. We sat on the bench together near the entrance of the school. We sat and discussed about our evening and how our day went. My sweets were almost finished. I was craving for these since few days ago. Then I heard something out of the blue, unexpected from my bestfriend, "Chashmish, I am going to start my guitar lessons?". I stared at my sweets for a second thinking I heard something and the next one fell but my head shot back up at him and I asked "what?". He told me again that he was going to start his guitar lessons. I said "say again". This happened three times. I was stunned for few seconds then immediately got up and got him up, I held his hand and started jumping up and down, then finally hugged him. I was too excited. This is his dream. I was so happy. Happy is an understatement, don't you reckon? As my eyes were closed during the hug, I sighed and was thanking that I couldn't ask for a better best friend.

I then gave him a heavy handshake and wished him. He was surprised that I called him Rockstar. I asked him about his liking towards the movie. He seemed to be happy with the name. The bell rang and we realized it was getting late to class. We held each other's hands and started running towards our classroom. The whole day was exciting until our classes got over. I and Prem waited outside our class while Abhi went to meet our Mathematics teacher. I had told him several times to be attentive in class but he never listened to me and the result was that the teacher had called him to meet her after class. We were talking about Abhi's guitar classes. Prem said that the classes would be on weekends. I asked him whether he was also joining to which he said he was not interested in music and he would rather join a library. Library! The idea was interesting. I said I would also like to join a library. He told me that I was reading too much already and that's why I was wearing glasses. It was unusual of Prem to talk like that but I kept quiet as it was good to see him trying to be jovial. I teased him whether he would also start wearing glasses if he started going to library often. I took off my glasses and put it on him. We were laughing at each other. Few older boys passing by gave some rude comments on Prem and started calling him names. Prem took off the glasses and asked me to leave the place with him. I wondered why Prem wasn't talking back when they were mocking him. If it had been Abhi, there would have been a wrestling match. Prem and Abhi were completely contrasting characters. He held my hand and we started walking but they didn't let us proceed. That's it. I couldn't stand there silent when they started pulling his tie and messed with his hair. He seemed to be too much affected by their comments as he gripped my hands tighter. I shouted at them to stop or else I would complain to the teacher.

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Edited by -Nive- - 9 years ago
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Awesome update. Enjoyed reading it.

Pragya and Prem teased Abhi. It was difficult for him to stop talking but stopped. And their fight. I was scared this silly fight might become big but I'm so happy it didn't. Prem is always stuck in between two lol. Glad he steps aside and leaves them on their own. Chasmish!!!! This name came!!! Haha!!! Pragya's mischief!!! They had to run from that boy!! But I'm imagining that in picture and that was fun!!! Abhi was so eager to tell the news to Pragya but couldn't.

Next day!! Pragya!! Oh my god!!! Best moment!!! Pragya's reaction hearing the news!!!! Awww so sweet!!! She was far more excited about Abhi joining guitar classes!!! And they both thinking each other to be best bestfriends!!!! Loved this scene a lot!!! And she will tell him Rockstar from now!! Cool!!!!

Guys teasing Prem and Pragya defending him!!! Abhi came just then!!! So Abhi teach them a lesson for teasing poor Prem!!!

Loved this part!!! Abhi's rockstar journey started, guitar classes!!! Abhigya's friendship is awesome!!! Waiting for the change in their relationship!!! Thanks for this lovely update Nive and Nadz!! And for pm too!!!
Edited by kaustavi - 9 years ago
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Nive nd Nadzo👏
It was a cute update..Loved the park scene & the way hw u showed the birth of the name CHASHMISH nd Pragyas rxn to it😆 I could see the scene infront my eyes with sriti there..And P trying to annoy A..That was too cute..I wish v get too see more of natkat,mastikhor Pragya on onscreen too..😃
Love the way how u explain the scene in detail that it helps a lot in imagining it..For eg:I loved the way u explained P's happiness on A joining guitar classes nd the park scene too😳
And not to forget the last part where she stood fo Prem..The brave pragya👏
Amazng work as always...Loved it❤️
Edited by Soundarya_2 - 9 years ago
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Hey nIve and naddz.
Do I have to say something about story outline.
It was something marvellous and cute.

The mere plus point of your writing is exact thibg how you show.
I love it.
The way abhi and pragya being like. Differing abhi and prem in every way you coukd. And juatify abhi's likeness to pragya and vice versa.

The superb in today epi is abhi often smiling this is how I do when I was happy. And pragya stood for prem such a brillance. It seem like you are watching me and my class.
Oof love it.
You are making me think my class often

Love it
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Kaustavi, Sandy and Ayesha, can't reply individually right now but we do appreciate your thoughtful long comments. It is a pleasure to read. Glad you guys are loving it. Most importantly thank you for reading ❤️...

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Chapter 9


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As I went towards them, the group of boys went away. I looked at Pragya and Prem but they were dodging the question as I was trying to find out what the matter was. I left it as I thought it might be nothing. After few seconds I saw Prem saying, "thank you", in a mere whisper. Then I looked at Pragya and she gave me a hesitant smile. I smiled back not knowing what was happening. The day went really quick at school with the assignments and deadlines dues that were arriving. It was after school when I got home I spoke to Prem. I tried various ways to get the truth out of him, me not letting it go made him tell what happened and how he made Pragya promise not to tell me therefore she was stuck as she was wanted to tell me but couldn't so I understood her dilemma. My anger furiated even further when Prem told me exactly what was being said to Prem and to what extent the words were used for Pragya when she was trying to defend my brother. My blood boiled further.

Hearing all those words made me want to beat them up. But that wasn't going to help. They were older than me and greater in number. But that wouldn't stop me from getting them punished. The first thing I did after reaching school the next day was to go to the Principal's room. I didn't go to my teacher or anyone else but straight to the Principal as my anger was at its peak. How dare they talk meanly like that to my brother and my friend. Seeing me, a 11 year old kid wait outside surprised the Principal. He asked me to come inside and listen to my complaints patiently. Then he called Pragya and Prem. They looked confused as to why they were being called to the Principal. Pragya looked at me wanting to know what was happening. The Principal asked Prem whether anyone bullied him. He said no quickly and I was going to shout at him to tell the truth but then Pragya said yes. She narrated the whole incident to the Principal and Prem's nervousness lessened by that time. The Principal asked Prem whether this was all true. He nodded yes. The Principal called my class teacher and some other teacher. Within 10 minutes, the boys who mocked my brother and best friend were in Principal's room.


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As I saw Abhi coming towards us, Prem nodded at me and said please in a whisper. I looked at Abhi and realized the group of boys were gone. It was so awkward. I did not really want to hide it from Abhi but since Prem made me promise me I had no choice. He was trying to get us talk about it but Prem answered him throughout whilst I stayed quiet. I gave out a big heavy sigh and just then Abhi looked at me. It was so weird he smiled but I could not smile back at him properly, more like I was just showing my teeth to him, trying to smile. We had our classes one after another and finally when it finished I ran and told Abhi I had to go since I wanted to avoid him in the meantime. When I reached my home my parents weren't there luckily my brother was in in. I and Pranav were playing on the playstation and guess what? I beat him to it. We played call of duty. He told me to tell no one as his reputation would be at stake considering our age difference. I wasn't really into games and he was teasing me with betting on what time our parents will reach home. He said 9pm and I said 8pm. I won the game but he won the bet. We had lots of fun.

The next day at school started very strangely as I went to school a little earlier than Abhi and Prem but saw Prem coming alone. When I asked him about Abhi, he said Abhi was angry and he had left to somewhere telling he had some work to do. Prem had told Abhi about the previous day's incident. I was worried what was Abhi up to. I prayed god that he shouldn't get into any fight with the boys. Just then, our class teacher came and asked me and Prem to come to Principal's room. I and Prem looked at each other. That's it. My nervousness and tension started increasing rapidly. Prem was also tensed. We were worried as to whether Abhi got into any mess because of the boys. As if we weren't afraid enough, we saw Abhi inside the Principal's room. I looked at Abhi trying to know what was happening. The Principal asked Prem whether anyone mocked him. Prem being afraid and trying to avoid any further problem said no but I couldn't agree with him. After all, the issue had reached to the Principal, it needed to be solved and also I didn't want Prem to be bullied again. So I started telling the Principal how the boys mocked Prem's appearance and teased him rudely. The Principal asked Prem again about his stand on the incident and Prem accepted this time. Within few minutes, the boys were assembled in Principal's room along with our teachers.


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It has been six weeks since I had started my guitar lessons which were every weekends on Saturdays. On my first day Pragya came along since I wanted her to be there and she wanted to see how I get along. She loved it. I don't understand what she loved because as soon as the class finished I tested her with questions, she went blank and looked at me with a pout and just hugged me saying how happy she was for me. i just shook my head and smiled at her innocence. My teacher Mr Hyatt was teaching us about the first essence of guitar lessons and the format used. We learnt about different types of guitars. Six weeks ahead I had been pretty busy with the lessons, school and family. It was rare that I got to go to Pragya's home for the weekends as became awfully tired. Prem hasn't got bullied from the bunch of boys since the warning from the Principal. Everything was going well in life until one evening when I heard my parents talk inside their room whilst I was passing by to go the washroom. One thing I heard and it frightened me.

"You are going to leave me? That's it?", I heard my mom speak. My dad said that he was tired of fighting. Then I heard the door open so. I hid behind a wall in the corner and I saw Dad walking out of the room angrily. I didn't know whether I should have went and asked mom what was happening. But they talked as usual during our dinner. When I told Prem about this, he said that it must have some small fight between mom and dad just like how the fights between me and Pragya. He told me not to think much about that as our parents seemed to behave normal in front of us. He asked that if they were really angry, how did they smile at each other during dinner in front of us. I convinced myself that I was over thinking though I couldn't think it as a small fight. I fell asleep after getting tired of thinking. The next day at school was very busy as our exams were approaching. It was during our Science class, our teacher casually asked us about our ambitions. Everybody was happily telling about their wish to become an engineer, doctor, lawyer etc. I was waiting for my turn to tell my rockstar wish. It was Pragya's turn and she stood up.


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It was the first day of Abhi's guitar lessons and I was so excited for him because I knew how passionate he was about music. I was too happy. I felt elated once he asked me to come with him. The guitar lesson was for two hours. As soon as I entered the classroom, there were extra chairs at the back of the classroom where the family members tend to sit. Abhi made sure I was seated and comfortable before he went to his teacher. The lesson started. I really didn't understand anything as such, only few words stood out to me, like music notes, feel the beat, the strings. Other children's family members were seated too. I was avoiding talking to any of them as my parents taught me not to talk to strangers. One man, an uncle was trying to talk, he went as far as "hello beta, who you are with?" Then luckily, Abhi just came in and asked if I was okay. I went running towards closer to him and was relieved. Then told him, "let's go because the class is finished". He smiled at me and gave a glare to the uncle. We walked home together as the lessons were on weekends every Saturday. I told him what happened with uncle and he just said to tell him immediately the next time. Abhi was talking about his lesson and I just stared at his love for music. He asked me questions and I went blank, with a smile just hugged him to let him know how happy I was for him. Sometimes I wish I was that passionate about something. It was getting dark, as we walked home today I saw a star. I told Abhi about the stars and how my mum says if you see a broken star you should make a wish and it will become true. We respectively closed our eyes and wished. I don't know what Abhi could have wished for, maybe I can take a guess. It has to be his music. The only wish I had was, wish I was passionate about two things in life just like Abhi. I want to know how that feels, how it embraces you and how does it make others feel. Like how I am happy for him for his passionate two things. One is his love and care for his family and friend i.e me and the other his music. As we were done with our wishes, Abhi dropped me to my door and his Dad just reached in time as Abhi's Dad was aware of him dropping me home through my mum because I let my mum knew on Friday, a day before. We went to our homes and I felt content. It has been six weeks now since Abhi started his guitar lessons and he doesn't get time to come in the weekends to my home. I have been spending most of my weekends either with mum or my brother. My dad used to be free sometimes but he gets busy at times at work. I love when he makes up for the catch up time.


I was playing with my puppy when my brother came home. He just waved his hand at me and went straight into kitchen. I heard him pleading mom for something and mom kept refusing. I wondered what were they talking about. Both of came out and mom sat on the sofa while my brother sat on the floor near her. He then looked at me and said, "She was just 5 years old when she went out with her friends. But I am 18 now mom". I was taken aback that he involved me in the matter when I didn't even know what it was. Mom replied that I didn't go out with Abhi and Prem alone but it was a family trip. He kept persuading mom but mom didn't give in. She finally told him to ask dad and she would agree whatever his decision would be. My brother was disappointed and went to his room. I left the pup in his place and went to my brother's room. I knocked his door and he asked who it was. It was unusual because he never asked the question before. After few seconds of silence, he opened and asked me what I wanted. I stood silent. He then smiled at me, kneeled down on the floor, grabbed my shoulders and asked me what did I want. I asked him whether he wanted to go out with his friends. Before he could reply, I told him that he goes out with his friends often and asked him what was the need to ask dad now. He lifted me and made me sit on his bed and sat opposite to me in a chair. He told that his he would be joining a new college soon after his exams so he and his friends have planned to go on a trip to Andaman-Nicobar Islands before his exams. I exclaimed that I knew where the place is as I had learnt it only the previous week. He explained to me that they have planned to stay there for a week and that was the problem. I told him I would also help him get permission from dad as the plan sounded exciting. I was thinking to keep myself awake until dad came but I slept off. When I woke up the next day, my brother was not at home so I couldn't ask him what happened. My day at school was usual until our Science class came up. I love Science and that's why Science classes
were exciting to me but this time it was not the reason. Our Science teacher asked us to talk about ambitions and I was excited.





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