It's a Pragya OS + Abhi's reaction pg 2 updated to TS

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: nive_kb

OS can have part 2?
*haven't written parts before *

Yeah...convert it to TS...simple 😉

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-Nive-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Converting OS to TS.

Second Shot specially for Abhi's reaction.

Abhi couldn't understand what was happening. He stared at Daadi until she came to him. She tells him everything.

He looked towards Daadi and asked "Why won't I believe you Daadi? You have been with me all these years. You didn't think I would believe me. I believed you all these days. You said everything is going to be fine soon. Is this what you were talking about?"

Everybody in MM Hall. Pragya is coming down the stairs with her suitcase. Abhi always wanted to see her in Chatris wearing Chashma. She granted his wish now. But it didn't matter now - what she wore or the chashma. She couldn't face his eyes. She asked Rachu whether she can bring Maa home in the evening because she needs to arrange things at home because she needs to arrange things at home for Maa and can't take Maa with her now. Abhi was just looking at her. Pragya started walking. She had a heavy heart, a heart full of guilt.

Abhi called Pragya. She felt it weird. It was not unusual for a husband to call his wife by name. But it was unusual for them. Both of them never called the other by their names. She felt it's because of his anger. She turned back and went to him. Abhi wanted to talk a lot. But he couldn't. He just said four words with tears trying blur his eyes. "You didn't trust me?" Pragya tried to talk. He put his finger on her nose. She paused.

"I know ours wasn't a normal marriage. We didn't have the usual husband wife relationship. We always had lies between us. But didn't you feel that I deserved to know this? I was feeling guilty for a mistake I didn't do. I was cursing myself everyday for that night. I was blaming myself. You were silent whenever I said, my honewala bacha."

"I should have felt guilty of marrying an innocent girl for revenge. I should have felt guilty for cheating you to agree for my marriage to Tanu in front of her parents. I should have felt guilty for cheating my Daadi over the marriage. I should have felt guilty for cheating my Saasu Ma who treats my like her own son. I should have felt guilty for making you go through the pain to see your husband with his girlfriend. But what I did was feeling guilty for a mistake I didn't do?"

Pragya didn't let him continue. She pulled his finger and unpaused her. She put her finger on his nose. "Please don't do this. I didn't want you to break like this."

Abhi hugged her before she could speak anything else. He said, "I don't want Fuggy." Pragya was confused.

"I just want you, my Pragya. You should promise me that you wouldn't ever hide things from me again, no matter who says."

"OK, Abhishek" she said smiling.

Pragya hugged him and started crying. This time it was happy tears from both of their eyes.

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Wowww!!!! Thank you so much for posting Abhi's reaction!!! 😃

Coming to the update, I just loved it!!!!! Got me in tears...😭

It was lovely and well done!!! 👏 Thanks a lot for considering our request!! 😳

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anamika.viji

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Ty 4 making it TS 😊 !! Loved it ,nive !!

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chubbygirl

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Nive its awesome👏
I want this pragya and loved Abhi's reaction.
What happens to Tanu I am curious.

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-jaya-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

I so wanted pragya to be outspoken like this in the show..glad that pragya realised its not just about abhi there are her other loved ones too which needed to be taken care and its so typical of dadi to think about proofs ...i loved this

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-Nive-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Thanks Aish, Viji and chubby. Glad that you liked the second part. It came out as I started writing. So I didn't know how it is going to end until I finished it. 😆

@chubby why do we need her reaction now? You can imagine as you want it to be.

Edited by nive_kb - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: jaydp59
I so wanted pragya to be outspoken like this in the show..glad that pragya realised its not just about abhi there are her other loved ones too which needed to be taken care and its so typical of dadi to think about proofs ...i loved this

Thank you 😊

It just started from a random thought.

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chubbygirl

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: nive_kb
Thanks Aish, Viji and chubby. Glad that you liked the second part. It came out as I started writing. So I didn't know how it is going to end until I finished it. 😆

@chubby why do we need her reaction now? You can imagine as you want it to be.

Nive after a year of this crap I need to know what happens to her😆