It's a Pragya OS + Abhi's reaction pg 2 updated to TS

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Caution: The characters in this OS may not reflect those in the show.

Pragya and Purab finally set a CCTV in Aliya's room. They saw the recording every night. But Tanu and Aaliya didn't talk much about the baby and NIkhil explicitly. One fine day when Pragya was watching the footage live, she heard a shocking fact.

Tanu and Aaliya were talking about thier depressing talk in front of Bulbul at hospital. Pragya was shattered. She went to their room directly. Tanu and Aaaliya were shocked at her presence. Pragya questioned Aaliya. Aaliya didn't answer her question but she asked Pragya, "Does she have proofs?". Pragya looked on. She realized her fault and obsessiveness over proof. She heard them say that but they are not at all afraid of her knowing the truth. Tanu started her taunts. Pragya's eyes were red. She didn't hesitate to slap Tanu. Aaliya was dumbfounded.

Pragya met Daadi and told all that happened. Daadi quickly replied, "You have the CCTV recording na?". Pragya didn't expect that. Daadi said, "We can show that to Abhi and expose them". Pragya said, "For what? The person who died is my sister and now you want me to prove HIM that they are responsible for her death. Why should I prove him?". Daadi started in a shivering voice, "Beta, don't cry. Be strong. We have fought this long".

"This is not a war, Daadi. This is stupidity. I have ruined my life and my loved ones' lives. I am leaving. I just wanted to inform you before I go", Pragya told as she started walking to the door.

"We can tell him the truth. I will also come with you. Rachna, Purab, Akash. We all can go to him". "I am not coming anywhere" said Pragya firmly.

"It's my duty. I should have told him what I came to know. I should have told him that his beloved ones are betraying him. But I didn't do that. Why did I think whether he will believe me o not? Its not about our me telling the truth but about letting him know that he is being cheated. Maa came to know about Nikhil. When I told you the truth, I didn't think whether you'll believe me or not. But..."

Daadi tried to stop. But Pragya was in no mood to stop.

"It's no longer about proving Abhi. It's about how I lost myself, my good will, my character, my everything and suffered a fake personality. What did Bulbul do? What did Purab do? He lost his wife. What did Maa do? It's all due to this drama."

As she couldn't continue talking about this, she started to the door until she saw someone standing near the door. It was him. Tears rolled down faster. All these days she wanted him to know that she was his fuggy. But now when he came to know it, she couldn't even stand there.

"I am sorry Abhi". That was all she said. That was the first time she called him by name after almost 1 and half years of marriage.

She thought to herself, "I always made sure that Bulbul didn't miss Dad all these years. But now I wish I had my dad with me. He wouldn't have let me do this"
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Naina- thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ooh, but now I wanna know what happens next! She called him Abhi! What was his reaction? Interesting how she feels that not Sarla, but her father wouldn't have let her go through this.
Loved her frustration and subsequent outburst. Nice job Nive!! 👍🏼


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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was so emotional and very good dear!!! 😭

Loved it a lot!!! 👏
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Originally posted by: Naina-

Ooh, but now I wanna know what happens next! She called him Abhi! What was his reaction? Interesting how she feels that not Sarla, but her father wouldn't have let her go through this.

Loved her frustration and subsequent outburst. Nice job Nive!! 👍🏼



Thought only about Pragya and her reactions. I left everything else to the reader's imagination 😆

Thank you for your review Nainu!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Aishwarya--

It was so emotional and very good dear!!! 😭


Loved it a lot!!! 👏


Thank you Aishwarya 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Niive, as soon as I read your caution message I went straight to the end first and got even excited. Read the whole from start to ending in order 😛 😆...

Loved it...

You wonderfully potrayed Pragz how it wasn't just about him anymore but her other loved one's too and realized to the extent of how she was losing herself. Niive, you also fulfilled your wish in here, with her calling him Abhi 😆. It's interesting how she thinks of her father rather than her mother knowing well that he wouldn't let her go through this whereas her mother is all about husband and their needs and doesn't see beyond that...

I sooo want to know Abhi's reaction when she calls him by his name...

You are leaving it as OS?! 😵...

Thank you for sharing 😊...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice OS , nive :)
But want to see abhi's thoughts/reaction too :(
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: anamika.viji

Nice OS , nive :)

But want to see abhi's thoughts/reaction too :(

Yeah...it's not fair 😭...I tried to see it in my imaginations...but we want to read in your words only 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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The pragya I wanted to see. The reason I don't like the present Pragya.
Thanks for making me read Atleast...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Aishwarya--

Yeah...it's not fair 😭...I tried to see it in my imaginations...but we want to read in your words only 😆


OS can have part 2?
*haven't written parts before *

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