Abhigya FF : Something is Wrong part 13 (pg 10) - Page 6

Good that Pragya and Sonali reconciled their differences. She is right.. The pool incident is not an accident... Tanya too found in the same beach and hotel is no coincidence. You know what dear... This story reminds me of Visil a Tamil movie. Except there the protagonists are not married...

Ishika is a good judge of character. So now they are gonna have girly time... Hope it turns out well. Sonali's Life is also in danger... Someone wantonly raised the temp and locked the door...

Wow! Abhi surprised Pragya but inturn got surprised. It's sad to know that Pragya's mom died on the same day...

Another attempt to kill Sonali...tgabk his she diverted the direction and saved herself... But the killer is also save... How quickly he covered himself?

So Shekhar wants to help them...hope he uncovers some mystery...

Thanks for the PM.

You are good at making the heart race and fill us with terror...but that story is ghostly while this one is more of a mystery and thriller... I think that story kind if resembles a Tamil movie Chandramukhi, which is itself a remake of a Malayalam movie... The Bengali dancer there is an Andra dancer in the movie... Very nice story dear! Keep up the good work...

Pragya is wrong... Her sacrifice for her friend is good but she didn't think about Abhi...How he might have felt... The humiliation and rejection in front of the whole college. I am glad he overheard their conversation with Amy...haha I loved the forced kiss too but was interrupted by the phone call... Wrong timing!

If they have followed Abhi's advice I guess there would have been no problem later...now Vishal and Sonali dumped the body in the water... The prom started. Who is this mysterious person?

Update soon Ash... Waiting!!

The lights go off immediately when Ishika goes out of house. Omisha looks at the shadow outside the window and hides behind the couch. Pragya and Sonali who went inside to take the candle senses somebody's presence outside in the couch. The killer looks at them from couch and tries to break the door .

Pragya : Sonali run (pushes her away)

Both of them meets Omisha in living room and runs upstairs in the attic. The killer approaches inside through front door and follows them upstairs. The girl keeps running in the room. They put huge table at the table to control the door banging. Pragya tries to call Abhi but in vain. There is loud thunderstorm and it starts raining when Abhi feels Pragya is in kind of danger.

Abhi : Vishal, where are you? this girls didn't came back yet and I can't get through Pragya's phone

Vishal : okay i will reach the farm house, where are you

Abhi : I am on my way, I will call Shekhar, now only he can help us and I will not listen to all of your excuses

Vishal : fine do whatever you want

The three girls find an exit door in the basement and start running. Omisha while going down is scared when she sees killer coming in front of her. She instead runs upstairs in fear and reaches the glassed roof. Omisha's leg slips causing her to fall down from roof. She goes inside the house and runs to one of the room.

Pragya ; where is Omisha? (starts looking for her down in basement)

Sonali : I don't know, lets check outside, come on

Pragya ; no he might outside, lets find the other way

Both girls come outside of the house and looks upstairs to the room where Omisha is stuck the room. The girls gets scared when the killer finally approaches from the back and slashes badly on Omisha's neck. The killer waves both girls and leaves. Abhi reaches there will police and finds Pragya terrified with the whole incidence.

Abhi : its okay I am here (consoles her)

The police investigates in the whole house and sends Omisha's body to lab.

Shekhar : this is not an accident, Pragya, Sonali I know both of you have been hiding something big from me, I am not expecting anything from anybody else but if you want anything drastic happen its your choice

Abhi tells Sonali and Pragya to confess everything in front of Shekhar.

Abhi : I am with you all, go ahead

Rohan ; Abhi, if we had listen to you last time then situation might have been different right now

Abhi : thats fine Rohan, its still not late you guys can rectify your mistake, go

Ishika too requests Vishal to tell everything to police and I promise brother will help you all out, its high time truth should come out

in the evening the group comes to Shekhar's house together.

Ishika : brother, they all came here to tell you something (signals everybody to come inside )

Shekhar : why are you all standing there, come and have a seat, now tell me what is happening, one thing is for sure that this murder links is related to all of you

Rohan : actually sir (starts telling him everything)

Shekhar stands up in disbelief hearing their foolishness

Shekhar : I don't believe this, why didn't you all report this incident before

Ishika : brother, please do something, they didn't do this accident intentionally

Shekhar : nobody will believe all this, I will think of something, first I have to find about that killer, what does he want

Pragya : but how? he is very shrewd, he has close eye on all of us

Shekhar : thats why, we have to lay a trap very carefully but he should not get any kind of signs for this

Ishika : brother but till then don't you think they should get some security

Shekhar : how about you all move to my guest house for couple days and I will get tight security for you all so don't worry

Everybody agrees to Shekhar's condition and goes to their respective house to grab their belongings.

Ishika : brother, I want to tell you something

Shekhar : go ahead

Ishika : I want to marry Vishal, you know i am with him from 3 years, its high time now

Shekhar : look Ishika, I know i never refused you for anything but unfortunately today I have to

Ishika : but why bro, what does he lack

Shakhar : till this case does not get solved, I will not take decision and better not do anything wrong

Ishika : then listen to me, I will not marry anybody else other than Vishal (runs away)

Mehra house

Pragya is quite tensed reminiscing her moments with Omisha

Abhi : Pragya, I know you are quite upset with Omisha's incidence but its life

Pragya : Abhi, she was my friend, I shared everything with her and because of our enmity she became the victim (cries soberly)

Abhi : its okay, I promise you I will not let anybody harm you all even it will cost me to risk my life, you all are my life

Pragya puts hand on his mouth and warns him to not say anything like that

Later all of them comes to Shekhar's guest house where Ishika welcomes them

Ishika : welcome everybody to my house, don't stare at me like stranger

Sonali : Ishika, why is this house so messy

Ishika : actually Sona, we haven't opened this house from last 5 years, so I will start cleaning, you guys can put belongings inside the room

Pragya ; why you alone? we all will do it together

Abhi : and we boys will rest

Ishika : not so easy, Mr Mehra, you boys will cook today

Pragya and Sonali widens their mouth hearing her

Sonali : ishika, let it be, we will cook it or else we have to eat burnt food

Rohan : oh Ms photographer, don't challenge us, we can make better food than us clear

Abhi : this Rohan will make screw us up today, what is the need to agree

Ishika : Sonali, let them make food, we will make them eat first if it is not good

Abhi : how convenient Ishika, boys lets go and start preparing

Sonali : all the best boys (gives them thumbs up)

The boys goes into the kitchen while Ishika consoles tensed Pragya

Ishika : I know whatever happened was not good but Pragya don't blame yourself, its not your fault

Pragya : how should I not, first my mom, then Amy and now Omisha, why

Ishika : Pragya, whoever it is, he wants you all to get weak and surrender yourself but you all have to be strong enough alright

Sonali : Ishika is right, Pragya its high time we should move on, I am sure Shekhar sir will that person and we will ask forgiveness to him for whatever happened

Ishika : okay now come on cheer up, lets go and start cleaning

The boys have hard time in the kitchen. Girls look at the condition from the door and laughs at them.

Abhi : this all happened because of you Rohan, what was the need to agree

Vishal : I know, (stamps the vessels) you are so fond of challenging this girls when you know we cannot cook

Rohan : you both are cowards, always scared of this girls

The girls start cleaning the house including the rooms and sweeps everything.

Precap : Tanya makes re entry to the farm house and gains Vishals sympathy again which disturbs Ishika way too much. She goes to confront Tanya directly

PS : Guys since this is horror, I am thinking to end it in 5 or 6 parts, there is nothing more to write. There is still some suspense post some more killings

Omisha is also dead now...how did this mysterious killer has eyes everywhere? It means he doesn't work alone...someone is helping him...but how and whom?

Thank god! They finally revealed the truth to Shekar...Ishika is so stubborn! I like her like that...and please I don't want her to be killed...she is so sweet. If Sonali is dead...I can manage 😆

I am so sorry...probably you are gonna kill me for my heart less comment but I can't help it...since you have mentioned that in a thriller horror story deaths are unavoidable...I gave my suggestion. Rest...your wish 😃

Thanks for the PM.

After a while boys set the dining table can call the girls for dinner.

Rohan : Girls, come on dinner will get cold

Sonali : wow, that smalls nice, I didn't knew you were such a good cook

Rohan : didn't I told you don't try to challenge us or else you will lose

Vishal : yes (looks with attitude to Ishika who smiles at him)

Abhi : RJ Pragya, what auspicious time are you waiting for, start the dinner

Ishika : no, you all worked so hard today, we will feed you with your hands what say girls

Pragya : thats good idea, you all come sit with us

The girls make their respective partners sit with them and feed them.

Abhi stops Pragya midway and makes her eat the food which she tearfully eats.

Sonali : wow, the food was awesome, I enjoyed it so much

Rohan : come on then we will take the dishes and clean

Pragya : no, you all relax we will finish the cleaning in kitchen

Later while cleaning the kitchen Ishika finds a bill near the dustbin and food packages inside. She laughs inside for the boys' deed

Sonali : what happened ? what is that

Ishika : no nothing at all, just some old receipts (tears it and throws away)

Vishal looks at Ishika while she was disposing off the packages. He goes to apologizes after girls leave the kitchen.

Vishal : I am sorry sweetheart (holds hie ears)

Ishika : and what if I don't forgive you (Wraps her hand around his arms) my dear boyfriend, learn to cook before marriage, I will not put feet in kitchen after marriage

Vishal : ooh, you are telling me off from now, great job, after all you are police's sister

Ishika : thats why start get afraid of me

Vishal holds her tightly and is about to kiss her but sees Tanya from window coming.

Vishal : Tanya? (leaves Ishika mistakenly and leaves outside to the door)

Ishika feels helpless as always she wishes to spend time with Vishal, Tanya lands up

Abhi : Tanya? what are you doing here

Tanya comes there with a bag and has tensed face

Pragya : is everything okay?

Vishal : why did you come suddenly? can you say something

Tanya : can I stay with you all for some days, my landlord kicked me out because I could not pay the money and I am leaving this town in few days for new job

Ishika looks on at disgust and ignores her tears

Tanya : I know i should have not come here like this, I thought before leaving I spend some time with you all before leaving, can I stay here

Vishal : sure, why not ? consider this your home okay

Ishika : excuse me (looks at Vishal)

Vishal : come on ishika, look at her state, where will she go, she does not even know anybody in this city

Ishika : thats not my problem, this is my house not any type of orphanage home

Shekhar : Ishika, thats not the way to talk with any guest, its okay thats matter of only few days (says angrily)

Abhi : sir, its okay calm down, don't be angry on her

Ishika : But brother, you don't know this girl

Shekhar ; I don't want to hear anything

Ishika ; fine brother, If you are insisting then (leaves outside)

Shekhar : Tanya, you can put the luggage in the guest room

Shekhar goes outside to console Ishika who is sitting on grass.

Ishika : brother, from childhood you never refused me for anything, let alone shouting at me and today you told me off in front of everybody

Shekhar : I know i did wrong but this is not what i taught you

Ishika : bro, respect is given to people who deserve it, you don't know what girl is upto, she has bad eyes on my Vishal, ever since we met in Goa

Shekhar : look Ishika, I don't know what happened there but there is a reason why I let all stay together

Ishika : why?

Shekhar : till now, only Pragya and Sonali are attacked, those two boys not attacked yet

Ishika : so what? whats your point

Shekhar : my point is, the killer will now play his next move very carefully

Vishal goes to meet Tanya who is arranging the room

Vishal : Tanya, are you okay (puts hand on her shoulder)

Tanya : Yes I am (slowly hugs him)

Vishal : don't worry everything will be fine, I am with you always

Ishika fumes in anger when Tanya unexpectedly gets close to Vishal

Ishika : what is going here (goes inside)

Vishal : nothing, I was just trying to cheer her up,

Ishika : yea, I was looking how you were you cheering her up,

Tanya : No you are getting all wrong (feigns innocence)

Ishika : and you, I am letting you stay here only because my brother wants, stay in your limits or else I will forget my promise to brother

Vishal : but Ishika, this poor girl

Ishika : Enough, I really don't care what happened to her (shouts out loud)

Everybody comes to the room hearing Ishika's anger

Pragya : what happened Ishika, why are you shouting

Ishika ; nothing Pragya, your brother has lost his senses

Vishal : thats it Ishika, you are over reacting now, stop it

Tanya : you both don't fight because of me

Ishika : you keep your mouth shut, you are responsible for all this

Tanya ; if you have problem with me staying here then I will leave (takes her bag and goes outside)

Vishal : Ishika , what problem you have with this girl

Ishika : I don't find it necessary to answer you that when you don't care about me, just forget it (goes to her room)

Vishal : ishika listen to me

Pragya ; Vishal don't forget ishika is your would be fiancee you cannot talk to her like this get that straignt

Vishal : Pragya, you tell me whats my fault, and Tanya she is just a friend to me I don't know why Ishika hates her

Sonali : but Pragya, I feel Vishal is right, Tanya looks very decent and innocent girl, she have not done anything that would hurt Ishika

Pragya : its futile to argue with you all

Abhi : Pragya, end this argument right here

Pragya goes to console Ishika who is crying in the room

Pragya : Ishika, don't cry like that I scolded Vishal a lot, how could he shout at you

Ishika : you tell me Pragya, what did I lack in my love, do I not love him, I stay like he wants then why can't he listen to me one time

Pragya : look I don't know why you hate Tanya, even I feel sometimes she is weird but maybe she might be not bad at heart

Ishika : no Pragya, I have seen by my eyes that she is purposely casting evil eyes on Vishal but I don't know what magic she did

Pragya : I know what you are saying, I will find out what is happening but you please don't cry like this okay, I love that attitude Ishk

Ishika ; okay, Pragya you know me so well from years but your brother does not understand me

Pragya : He will one day, trust me I know he loves you a lot

Ishika : just like you love Abhi so much, you are such a good wife for him, he is so lucky

Pragya : It is other way around, I haven't given him the right of husband

Ishika : what?? you mean?

Pragya : yes, but he is still willing to wait till I am ready

Ishika : then finish his waiting Pragya, for how long you will torture poor guy, today is your night, go ahead and make it special

Vishal convinces Tanya to stay back. Pragya decides to take her marriage to next level. She enters the room and finds Abhi standing at the window and hugs him from back.

Abhi : what happened ? are you okay

Pragya : till today, you supported me everything, how could you love me so much when I did not give the happiness you deserved, my past always came in between

Abhi : not your past but your insecurity, Pragya, you are my whole life i cannot think a moment without you

Pragya slowly leans on him kisses him passionately. Abhi carries her in his arms and lays gently on bed and nuzzles her neck. Both of them end up consummating their long lasting marriage.

Tanya talks to herself : Ishika, you are not that stupid as I thought but today's incident will definitely drive you away from Vishal and then he will be mine forever, this is just a beginning just wait and watch how I create rift, I know till you are between this people my task will not be completely

Her phone rings

Caller : Tanya, is work done, I heard today a good drama happened in the house

Tanya ; I know, work will be done, just few days I will drive this ishika away because she will not let me finish my task of creating the misunderstanding between everybody

Caller : do whatever you want, you only have a month, I want to see the fire in their life

Tanya : fine, Tanya would aways fulfill her promise (hangs up the phone)

Precap : After getting bashing from Pragya for talking rubbish about Abhi, Tanya posions Rohan's mind by talking about Abhi and Sonali's affair. She finds good opportunity to get close with Vishal.