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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 8

Later in the evening Pragya is organizing her room when she looks at their old pictures of college and their fights. She puts it back when she gets a call from an unknown person and picks it up

Pragya : hello (says putting things on her bed)

Caller : hello Pragya, how was trip, I heard you and your friend were attacked in the hotel

Pragya gets scared hearing his words and starts sweating

Caller : what happened Pragya? why are you sweating like that, don't be scared because I have got surprise for you

Pragya : what is it? (says with terrified voice)

Caller : don't worry, you will find out soon I promise Ms RJ

Pragya ; what do you want from me? who are you?

Caller : nothing I will tell you when time comes, but yes make sure to make your best friend check her backseat (hangs up)

Pragya : hello, listen (shouts but throws the phone in anger)

She runs to Sonali's office to stop her from driving the car

Pragya : Pia, where is Sonali

Pia : she just left 10 minutes ago, is everything alright

Pragya : oh god, I have to stop her (runs to the parking garage and drives the car)

She keeps calling Sonali who is busy listening to the music with her phone in the bag.

Pragya : damn, why is she not picking up the phone (says irritatedly)

Suddenly it starts raining while Sonali is busy driving the car. Somebody approaches on the backseat of the car. Sonali checks her phone and sees Pragya's missed call.

Sonali : Pragya? sorry I was driving, your so many missed call is everything alright

Pragya : Sonali, there is somebody in your backseat

Sonali gets frightened hearing it and looks at the back noticing somebody holding a knife. The killer is about to slash her but she turns the car around causing the killer to fall outside in river.

Pragya hears the noise and keeps calling her but Sonali is not able to respond

The car crashes on the tree which makes Sonali unconscious. Pragya reaches the spot and sees the police around.

Pragya ; Excuse me officer

The officer turns out to be Shekhar who got transferred to Bombay.

Pragya : you? what are you doing in Bombay

Shekhar : Commissioner Sir sent me here to solve your sister's case, but what are you doing here, it is a murder spot

Pragya : thats my best friend's car, I came her to see,

Shekhar : okay, we are shifting her to hospital, because she is injured in her head

Pragya rushes to the hospital and informs everybody about the accident. She gets the call from the killer

Caller : so how was the surprise, I heard your friend is injured

Pragya looks around the corridor

Caller : are you trying to find me, not so easy sweetheart, you will not be able to find me till I want, have fun till then (hangs up)

Rohan : Pragya (scares her from behind) how is Sonali, where is she

" She is in that room" says Pragya pointing to the room

Abhi and Vishal too comes there asking for Sonali . The trio goes inside to meet the doctor in the cabin

Doctor : please take the seat

Rohan : doctor, how is my wife, she will be alright na, is there any major injuries

Doctor ; she is out of danger but in the accident she has some fractures in the leg and due to injury in the head we have to keep her under observation

Pragya ; there is no other problem right, we can take her home after that ?

Doctor : yea definitely but make sure she takes complete bed rest and don't let her take any kind of stress or else it will be a problem for her

Abhi ; thank you doctor

Vishal consoles Rohan who is quite upset around what is happening. Shekhar calls Pragya outside the hospital and asks about the aware of the accident

Shekhar : I checked Sonali's phone and I saw your number in very recent calls, you had talk with her few minutes ago

Pragya gets slightly restless but is encouraged by Shekhar to reveal truth. Abhi intervenes their conversation and changes the topic

Abhi : actually officer, Pragya and I were discussing about having get together with our friends after long time, so I told her to inform Sonali about that

Shekhar : but so many missed, you could have texted it right

Pragya : actually she said her phone was in the bag and she was listening to loud music thats why she didn't pick my call

Shekhar : and then when you were talking with her the car crashed

Pragya : yes (nods nervously)

Shekhar's POV : Something is definitely wrong here, their eyes clearly says they are lying to me

Abhi ; officer can we go home

Shekhar : yea sure, good night and take care

Mehra house

Abhi tells Pragya not to mention anything to police till they find out about real killer

Pragya ; but Abhi, one day truth has to come out one way or the other

Abhi : Pragya, have you lost it? if you open your mouth then you all will be finished in a moment, that officer will never believe that whatever you all did was just an accident

Pragya : we should have checked it, I don't know what he wants from us

Abhi : he is revenging from you guys, first your sister, now Sonali, he just wants to kill those people and their families who were there that night, means you, Sonali, Rohan and Vishal, but police already considered it was an accident

Pragya : somebody knows our secret, thats why he is targeting my family too not only us

Abhi ; yea, that person might be a witness of that accident and maybe one of his

Pragya : Abhi , I am really scared, how will we find him he has his eyes on our every single moment

" Don't worry Pragya I will not let anybody to get harmed even if it cost my life" says holding her hand tightly

Pragya ; please don't say that, you don't have anything to do with our mistake I will not let you suffer

Abhi : Pragya, remember, our lives are one now and we will face everything together

Pragya hugs him emotionally while Abhi have little bit of smirk on his face

Rohan enters the room and gets emotional seeing Sonali's condition. She is surrounded by the machines and wires.

Rohan : I am sorry Sonali, after today I will never leave you alone even for a moment

At night Pragya, Abhi and Vishal reaches near an isolated lake, They hear some weird noises of bird chirping, They could only hear their own footsteps.

Pragya : this is the place of accident

Abhi walks around the place and finds a small bracelet on the edge. He hides the bracelet in his pocket and leaves the place with Pragya and Vishal immediately. Shekhar goes over the old files of accidents three years ago.

Shekhar ; what might be the matter that this people are hiding, I think maybe Ishika can help me find the truth

Shekhar requests Ishika to help him find the truth .

Ishika : bro, how should I do this

Shekhar : look Ishika, my instincts are never wrong, and god forbid if anything drastic happens I will not be abe to do anything, your friends are scared to reveal anything to me because I am a cop but they don't know that we are here for their help

Ishika : are you sure they might know anything

Shekhar : I am damn sure, Ishika if things go out of hand then they will have to spend their whole life in jail

Ishika : don't worry bro, I will find out everything and let you know

Shekhar : thank you (puts hand on her head)

Precap ; Flashback of past ; Tanya meets somebody secretly on her farm house

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Posted: 8 years ago
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main problem is tanya in Abhigya and there friends life maybe tanya same person who is after pragya.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing update Ash. Loved it.
The story is getting really interesting. Continue soon please.
Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting start and character sketch...
Will read the story tomorrow...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 9

After few days Sonali is discharged from hospital. The three girls get together at Sonali's farm house. Omisha too joins them for get together. Ishika devies a plan to make Pragya reveal their past.

Omisha ; how are you feeling right now Sonali? I heard you had a bad accident

Sonali : I am fine, just a fracture on leg

Ishika : okay girls, here is the hot chocolate (brings the tray of coffee)

Pragya : give me I will help you

Ishika : its okay, I will do it, you relax (puts the tray on table) by the way did the police find out how did this accident happened

Sonali : actually the car's break were failed thats why

Ishika realizes Sonali is lying as the car crashed due to rain. Shekhar calls Ishika and makes an excuse to go out for a while.

Ishika : I am so sorry Pragya but bro called me back to home, I will be back soon

Pragya : thats perfectly fine, we will be waiting soon

Omisha : Pragya, why do I feel you were lying to us about accident

Pragya : what do you mean by that?

Omisha : you forgot so easily that you received a threatening call in our office

Pragya and Sonali gets scared hearing her words

Omisha : Pragya, I am your friend from 5 years, we shared so many things with each other, what is happening

Sonali tells Pragya to reveal truth behind everything. Omisha gives thumbs up to Ishika (stands outside door) who is earlier requested her to convince Pragya.

Flashback

Xaviers college

Group of five friends; Abhi, Pragya, Sonali, Rohan and Vishal are the perfect example of true friendship

Cafeteria

Abhi plans to propose Pragya in front of whole college on Valentines day. Sonali who secretly loves Abhi misunderstands thinking Abhi will confess his feelings for her.

Abhi : hey Vishal, everything is ready (wraps the cloth of table)

Vishal : don't worry, and you should be lucky I am here to guide you to woo my sister

Abhi : excuse me, don't fly so high, I am enough by myself to do all decoration

Rohan too joins them

Abhi : hey lover boy

Rohan ; what lover boy? you are the cool stud of this college

Abhi : don't worry, after my set up we will also do make Sonali confess

Rohan : no buddy, she loves somebody else I can feel it, she will never accept my love

Vishal : why running after one girl, you will get another hot girl (Stares at girl)

Rohan : shut up Vishal, mark my words one day you will get a girlfriend like that who will control your behavior

Vishal : dude, nobody can take my freedom

Abhi : if you both are done can we finish this preparation

Later on the day Abhi sings a romantic song for Pragya and bends on his knees

Abhi : Pragya, will you be my valentine for lifetime

Pragya : why for lifetime

Abhi : what? (Asks in confusion)

Pragya : why are you so shocked? oh now I understood that you never got rejection from any girl thats why your ego is hurt

Abhi : Pragya what are you saying?

Pragya ; because I don't love you (says normally) why should hook up with someone I don't love

Abhi : Pragya, please every time joking is not good

Pragya : listen Abhi I am not kidding, I don't have same feelings for you

Everybody mocks on Abhi when Pragya leaves the floor. The friends are too shocked with Pragya's sudden behavior.

Vishal : Pragya, have you lost it, till yesterday you were crazy behind Abhi, now what happened

Pragya : Its not my problem that you all had big misunderstanding, I don't love Abhi, I just wanted to hurt his ego for being arrogant in front of whole college

Vishal ; no, do you really think I would believe your words, this is not my sister

Pragya : Vishal, I am very tired can you please go from here

Vishal informs their sister Amy about Pragya's rude behavior with Abhi

Amy : but it might be possible she don't love Abhi in that way

Vishal : sis, come on, I know her very well, she loves Abhi madly but something made her step back

Amy : okay, I am coming tomorrow to meet her, see you

Abhi is hardly hitting the punching bag reminiscing Pragya's rejection and his humiliation in front of people.

Rohan : Sonali, isn't it strange that Pragya who was behind Abhi till yesterday made him a joke in from of people

Sonali : I know, even it sounds strange to me, but maybe she does not love Abhi

Rohan : if she did not she would have said it politely but she made a fool of him

Sonali tries to talk with Pragya but shrugs her off

Next day Amy comes to meet Pragya and asks about her behavior

Pragya : what is wrong with all of you? sis you know me very well

Amy : thats why I am asking you, what is the problem I know you love Abhi so much then why did you say no to him

" Because Sonali loves him" says Pragya turning around with tears in eyes

Amy ; what? (shocked)

Pragya : that day when Abhi was preparing for valentine to propose me, Sonali took it all wrong and told me Abhi will tell his feeling to her

Amy : then why didn't you tell her the truth

Pragya : she is my best friend, that day when she told she loves Abhi I just broke from inside and promised her that I will not come between her and Abhi at any cost

Amy : but how can you expect Abhi will love her

Pragya ; thats why I behaved rude with him so he can forget me and move on with Sonali

Amy : Pragya, I can't believe this, do you really think Abhi will easily forget you

Pragya : I told Sonali to be with Abhi at this time, both of them will grow close

Amy ; ridiculous, Pragya (gets irritated with Pragya's deed) you have no idea how foolish thing you did

Abhi overhears everything and is furious at Sonali and goes to her

Abhi ; wow, Sonali I must say you are such a good friend

Sonali : Abhi, what happened? what did I do

Abhi ; when you know I love Pragya more than my life and you told her to move away so I can be yours

Sonali : Abhi, please, I did everything for you, I love you a lot (gets in tears holding his collar)

Abhi : you don't know the meaning of love, if you did then you would have understood that I love Pragya (holds her tightly and pushes hardly)

Sonali : Abhi , I am sorry

Rohan comes to the place when Abhi is behaving rudely with Sonali, Both of them gets into huge fight.

Rohan : how dare you talk to her like that, you don't have right to tell her anything

Abhi : really? and she can do anything, because of her Pragya made fun of my emotion

The fight gets bad till vishal comes there and stops the fight.

Vishal : guys stop it (pushes Abhi)

Rohan : If you were not my friend then you don't know what would I have done

Sonali : Calm down Rohan, why are you both fighting because of me

Rohan : this friendship is over Abhi

Abhi : really, even I don't want to see your face for lifetime, hell with your friendship (leaves)

Later at night Abhi sneaks onto Pragya's room which scares her

Abhi : its me (puts hand on her mouth)

Pragya : what the hell are you doing here (removes his hand) I told you I don't want to see your face

Abhi : now your charade won't matter in front of me so stop your acting

Pragya : what are you talking (looks away)

Abhi : really? don't tell you are unaware of what is going on, (holds her waist tightly) I know what you were talking to Amy

Pragya : Abhi, I did everything for my friend

Abhi : really ? and what about me, you did not think about me

Pragya : you still haven't understood me, friendship comes for me first alright, now go from here (is about to leave but Abhi leans her against the wall forcefully)

Pragya : Abhi what are you doing, leave me I said

Abhi looks intensely into her eyes and crushes her lips passionately. Their kiss turns wild and passionately but is broken by Pragya's phone.

Pragya : yes Vishal, what happened

Vishal : Pragya, we have to rush to Ooty soon, dad's health is deteriorating, we have to leave right now

Pragya : what (gets shocked) I will be there soon

Abhi : Pragya, whats wrong

Pragya : dad's health is worsening, he is on the deathbed

Abhi : don't worry he will be fine, I would have come with you but I have to leave tomorrow too to visit my sister Maya, she has been insisting from past 6 months

Pragya : its okay, you go I will manage and Vishal is with me too

Abhi : take care (hugs her and leaves)

Pragya starts her packing immediately. Sonali dresses wound on Rohan's hand

Sonali : Rohan, what was the need to fight, you know how much guilty I am feeling that your 7 years friendship is over because of me

Rohan : anybody talking bad about you, I cannot tolerate that

Sonali ; why so and Abhi was right, I got selfish for a while and did not care about my best friend's happiness

Rohan : I don't think I find it necessary to answer that question

Sonali : you have to answer Rohan (holds his collar)

Rohan : because I love you a lot but never got courage to tell you that

Sonali : why didn't you tell me this before

Rohan : because I know I would never get my love

Sonali : I am sorry Rohan

Vishal and Pragya rushes hurriedly in their car when their car breakdown in the middle. Rohan and Sonali who are passing by that road comes to their help.

Rohan : where are you both going?

Vishal : to airport, actually dad's health is not good, he wants to see us and this damn car

Rohan : come I will drop both of you

Vishal and Pragya gets into the car.

Pragya : i am sorry Rohan for Abhi's behavior

Rohan : Pragya please, lets not discuss that right now, just think about your family

Sonali puts hands on Pragya's shoulder as comfort. Rohan's phone is ringing but falls down when is about to pick it up. He bends down little but Sonali shouts when another car comes in front.

Sonali : Rohan watch out

Rohan looses the balance of the car and accidentally hits the car. The car crashes upside down on the hill. The road is deserted and complete silence. The foursome get out of the car and goes to the car. They opens the door and finds the driver dead.

Vishal : I think he is dead

The girls panic hearing it. Vishal suggests to run away as nobody saw them.

Rohan ; have you gone crazy, we cannot leave him like that

Sonali : Vishal is right, Rohan lets leave immediately from here

Pragya : that is wrong, we will be in big trouble

Vishal : okay don't panic let dump his body down in the water

Pragya ; Vishal, use your senses, what if anybody found the body

Vishal : you keep quite Pragya, nobody will get to know about all this, Rohan what do you say

Rohan : I guess we don't have any other choice

Pragya ; no way, lets call the police

Rohan : shut up Pragya, do you really think police will believe us, they will think we are culprits

Vishal : Rohan, don't listen to her, lets dump this body

Both boys take the body and throws into the water. The four gets into car and escapes from the place

After few weeks the group meets and discuss about the accident when news channel shows the accident.

Sonali : guys, police found the dead body, Pragya you were right that day

Abhi : I don't understand why didn't you report that time, maybe police might have believed you now they have strong clues

Rohan : Abhi, we didn't have any choice, and I don't have rich father like you that he will bail me out in a moment

Abhi : you are going personal Rohan, I didn't mean that

Vishal : guys stop fighting, the situation is serious right now, it has become police case

Abhi ; there is only one way, tell the truth to police and we will get the best team for case

Rohan : no Abhi, it is not that easy, because I was driving the car and it my car, no way I will tell the truth

Abhi ; Rohan, understand, situation will go complicated more if you stay quite

Rohan : i am not your slave that you can dominate me whenever you want

Abhi : fine do whatever you want, and I don't want to waste my precious time on advising you all, don't come to when something wrong goes

Rohan : I don't need your advise, Abhi, and from today I don't want to see your face, we all should break up, its high time now

The group of friends break up after the incidence due to the ego and jealousy.

Flashback ends

Pragya : I feel somebody close to that person is blackmailing us

Sonali : our 7 years friendship broke in a moment because of one incidence

Omisha looks at Ishika who is equally shocked to hear the story. Ishika goes away into the car when Shekhar calls her. The lights suddenly goes off which scares the girls .

Sonali :Pragya what happened

Pragya : don't worry, there might be a problem in the electricity, I will get candles

Omisha sees a shadow of a person outside the window.


Precap : Ishika does not reveal truth to Shekhar after Vishal requests her not to. Police investigates about Omisha's murder

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Posted: 8 years ago
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its looks like there is some who followed abhigya and there friends life 7 friends broke there friendship over some silly small things and they misunderstood each other and they broke there friendship.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shafoo

its looks like there is some who followed abhigya and there friends life 7 friends broke there friendship over some silly small things and they misunderstood each other and they broke there friendship.


you are right, flashback is not over yet, there is still twists left showing the real reason of breakup 😊
Edited by ashpat3 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi dear! Thanks for PM...Will try to read and comment within tomorrow. Sorry for being late...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wonderful start! So Amy, Pragya and Vishal are siblings? Ok...Amy and her boyfriend Sunny is murdered! Seems like a mysterious story...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Ok...I am so confused...since you are not letting the suspense out..I am indeed curious to know about the killer. What does he have against Pragya? But instead of harming her..he is killing everybody close to her...her past is mysterious too...hope Abhi is not the next target...

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