Spellbound | [COMPLETE all parts p1] | AbhiGya Hogwarts AU FF by mina - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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I don't have words to appreciate your imagination and writing skills. This story concept is mind blowing.
Your story divorce actually made me join india forums. Now I'm addicted to it.
So thank you so much for sharing your works with us.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Hey Mina,
Liked betrothals concept for Abhigya.

Loved how chashmish's emotions evolved from kindaa lost in love to understanding to compromised.
Though not sure how long she can keep them like this.

Abhi is same the way a boy generally behaves for a girl of his family, caring, attentive etc.

Looks like next chapter will have more role of Raghav with Phataka 😊

Very nice read.
Waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
Res. Res. Res.
Nice update.
Will come back. 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: frenzyy

Kudos to you for bringing abhigya to hogwarts!! What can I say? I simply loved it.. I adored chashmish the most here - and loved how you portrayed her feelings - being betrothed since birth to abhi and abhi trying to make her lie so as to lead a free life for a few years - her confusion, refusing to see anything beyond abhi, wanting to be in slytherin jus so she could be with abhi - aww! your chashmish is adorable.. Her refusal to involve anyone in the tiny heartbreak of seeing her fiance close with another was brave of her.. Your abhi is Sly, he has a gf but didnt tell prags lest he hurt her and he goes all out to protect his image at hogwarts! Ha ha, confrontation was nice at least prags is aware he has a gf now.. Prags defo deserved to be in ravenclaw and Purab in gryfindor👏 As always loved raghav-pragya friendship!! 😳



Yay, glad you're enjoying! Pragya is our central character for this fic so I'm happy you're finding her adorable and brave! And yes, Abhi is very careful about managing his image...personally I think that was the more important consideration, but there is an element of not wanting to needlessly hurt her too. Personally I like the angst of her knowing and bearing, though I'll have her explode at him too if the need arises...she's still learning how to be strong for her own sake and isn't quite ready to hold her ground when he gets defensive, though she is already able to at least stand up to him to start with. And good to now you agree with the Sortings! Thank you for reading and commenting, please stay tuned :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: Mystery1

Can you give Pragya the one calls her Phataka for quite some time?! 😆...


Urghhh I didn't like this Abhi in your story. What he did to Pragya, urghhh I sooo didn't want her to accept 😭...

Thank you for the read...



Yes I can and already have 😉

Even if she didn't accept, she'd have no choice but to accept. There's nothing she could really do to control him, and anything she did to complain would ruin what they could still have together. Don't worry, there's hope for him yet, and remember they're both still quite young! When they argue on the tower in part one, Pragya is 14 and Abhi is 16.

Thanks for reading and commenting Nads, please come back for the rest! 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: vlhs12993

I don't have words to appreciate your imagination and writing skills. This story concept is mind blowing.
Your story divorce actually made me join india forums. Now I'm addicted to it.
So thank you so much for sharing your works with us.



This really means a lot, thank you so much! I'm a little sorry to have led you into addiction but mostly glad that you've joined us here for discussing and appreciating the show. 😆 Thank you so much for following my fics and I am really glad you like this story idea! 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you! Didn't recognize your new name but then I checked your index. Nice to see you around again 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: sanya_p

Hey Mina,

Liked betrothals concept for Abhigya.

Loved how chashmish's emotions evolved from kindaa lost in love to understanding to compromised.
Though not sure how long she can keep them like this.

Abhi is same the way a boy generally behaves for a girl of his family, caring, attentive etc.

Looks like next chapter will have more role of Raghav with Phataka 😊

Very nice read.
Waiting for the next update.



Hi Sanya, thanks for reading and commenting! Pragya's emotional journey in this story is pretty much parallel to anyone's journey of emotional maturity through adolescence. She's a sensible girl and she'll meet each challenge as it comes. Good observation about how Abhi treats Pragya - there's definitely a sense of her belonging in his world, which might give you a hint of what kind of behaviour we may see from him in the future. And yes Raghav does have a role to play...let me know what you think as it unfolds. Thanks again! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: Tisha1313

Res. Res. Res.

Nice update.
Will come back. 🤗



Heehee yay! Glad you liked! 🤗 I will wait 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Hello it was really awesome. Loved it. Eagerly waiting for the next part.

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