Abhi-Pragya fiction: RESTLESS (Epilogue- Page 85, Dec 29) - Page 38

Originally posted by: aakanchanadevi

Wonderful update..Nicely written Tia!!😊

So this is the way they are going to be separated.. Pragya's insecurities lead their separation..😭

Now I agree their separation is really needed..

Now I am more interested in their reunion..😃

Thanks Tia for the update.. The way you portrayed the story is Awesome..⭐️

Originally posted by: anamika.vg

Res :)/unres :)

Nice update tia ! The banner kills me :) ...want to see the pragya & abhi as in the banner

Now I am seeing the starting of separation between them ...curious to know wht u have in store for us 😊

Originally posted by: sanya_p

Another beautiful chapter and lots of emotion.

I'm loving this Abhi who exactly knows Pragya...the ways to handle her, understand her. He is 100% in this relationship. Perfect 10.

Pragya still has a long way to go, she is almost at the same place and she can never walk along with him until she gets peace within herself. First she needs to believe on herself and the choices that she has made in life, until then there is no further scope. So right, they need a separation. Not for Abhi, but for the Pragya's sake.

👏👏

Originally posted by: Nora9497

Good morning Tia,I just woke up and found this amazing update

Thank you for making my day and getting me so curious about AbhiGya

It looks like because of Pragya insecure she won't support him properly to reach his dream and he won't like it

What I don't understand why didn't she tell him that her mom is trying to get her marry after her master then he would be able to understand why she is so worry about the future without him

Originally posted by: Mystery1

Brilliant update. You always make me wanting more. So please can your OCD come back for this whole weekend 😉 😆...Joking, you can take your time really, no rush 😛...

Pragya's never fully tells him the whole deal and then the whole manana happens and both end up in the same place. Technically Abhi has the right to go off on her...Now I think something else will happen?! Along with Pragya you are making me restless 😆 Doesn't Abhi get restless?! 🤔...Both are not fully ready I think, her lack of insecurity and fears and him going abit off on one on her and giving silent treatment if needs be...

It is Pragya's fears about her future, after all. I guess the leap of faith will come after they seperate ...Is Abhi going to be the one that makes the first step when they meet again?!...

Thank you for the morning treat 😊...

Originally posted by: harisha_kb

Well Tia, finally I made up my mind to put up my complaints on your Abhi.

Firstly, what is his problem?
I understand he wants to achieve big but why don't he understand what a simple girl wants?

Secondly, why does he leave her like that in between? Does he really know what is happening to her when he leaves her like that.
He is hell bent on making things go in his way but what about her way? She wants something too. Why is he not thinking about it?

He is just increasing her insecurities day by day instead of helping her out of the insecurities.
I understand he expects trust and support.
Well, she expects something too what about that?

He and his ambitions are good but not his behaviour and his reactions.

Originally posted by: frenzyy

Frenzyy!! Hugs to you yaara. Itna effort liya aapne!! I take a bow.

Why do I feel this is the final push he needed to make it big (achieve his dream) & this was their last convo? Prags never got to clear the mu did she?

Or this is the start of everything going south for them?

You are onto something here! I will go there soon.

Prags insecurities triumphed over everything - but she didn't have a choice did she? Her mom was looking for proposals(he isn't aware about it, right?) and she felt the need to be reassured again and again.. On the other hand, he wanted her to be his pillar of support - but he doesn't explain anything to her and expects her to understand him without him having to do it all the time.. But, both of them are wrong - & wasn't this always the problem in their relationship - their difference in lack of making the other understand their feelings? Abhi jumps to conclusions too soon, throws tantrums, flips @ the drop of a hat & doesn't wait for her to explain things...She is so deep in her insecurities that she always ends up mixing words and conveys something that she doesn't really mean to.. He has been like that from day 1 (ignoring + not attending her calls leading to their first date, silent treatment leading to confession & so on) and Prags was never really successful in conveying what she wanted to him without a misunderstanding (the very first time she questioned him after meeting the prof as to why he bunks classes - she did convey it wrong even then and he told her why don't you ask where I have been directly instead?, her rean after their second kiss and telling him off that she didn't like it but all that she wanted to know was if he was serious but she unknowingly hurt him, another time was when she asked him about their future (marriage)and he did get angry only to cool down later and so on) so these two have been so mature and immature at the same time - their emotions get the better of them..

You got them soo soo right. Those are exactly their issues. But hopefully their emotions will help them, let's hope. After all, it's those undying emotions that keep us in love..whether we are together or not.

Jus like prags wants his assurances he is no different -- he constantly needs prags attention/care/concern on him all the time (when he asked her why she didn't call him or she could have asked his landline no from purab to call him, when he asks her to sit besides him, sleeps on her lap, expects her to call him as soon as she reached pune post their confession - he always waits for her to come to him - making her take the step to come and talk to him - knowing fully well she would - like the time he made prags take him on a date - only in the date he tells her that he wanna to spend some time with her not before and also that she isn't like other girls and he likes her - and during their confession only after chasmish confessed he did)- abhi is confident about them and their future but he also throws his own tantrums and wants her attention all the time. they are both different yet similar and restless without the other.

Awww this is so well you have caught. I purposefully put this on Abhi.. he wants her to react to him.. he does things in the background, coaxes her into it.. as if he knows how this will work out.. He lets her decide but the decision he has already sketched.. schemy he is.. but in a good way.

She understands his dream and loves him unconditionally but her insecurities about the future isn't leaving her at peace - he is trying hard to become the rockstar and loves her equally but fails to understand her & her insecurities that makes him react too quickly as the only constant thing that clouds his mind is his dream.. Each of them have a flaw and none of them is perfect!! Simply love your abhi and Prags more & more..

Now waiting for them to meet again in present - for they need this time (separation) to truly understand each other.. Rockstar abhi meets prof chasmish! Bigger question is would he act like he has changed (indifferent)? He has done that in the past would he do that now too - to get a reaction from her? Or would he be normal towards her?

Hmm, let's see what happens when they meet again.. let's see. It will all uncover soon.



Coming to the update - it was fabulous - loved chasmish scolding abhi for being irresponsible - report submission and he submitting it not for himself but for her.. Abhi feeding her the last bite (he has always done that from day 1 so cute) Nikki's rean and abhi saying he doesn't care if the world gets to know about them (again he is confident of their future) but since only his dadi matters to him he will tell her personally.. Prags Getting mad at him for missing his finals & not graduating with them was also true to her nature (she is insecure about their future and feels abhi has to concentrate on this too)

- this is the first time she herself didn't talk to him leading to their major fight - and he throwing a party to in her achievement (he always had supported her dreams - from getting a chance for her to work with the prof she wanna to now celebrating her achievement (amidst their fight) when she is doing her masters)!! teasing her about protection but jus so chasmish wont get all worked up again -clearly he truly cares for her and loves her a lot.. Whenever they (rather chasmish wanna) have "the talk" about the future it always ends up in trouble for them - at college (post kiss), in his room & now in her home.. Although abhi shouldn't have stormed out and should have waited for her expln but hadn't he always been sensitive & flip/ react immediately and when it comes to his dream/music nothing less was expected of him- so no surprises with him moving out the way he did - he has done that in the past.. the catch is he feels he failed to make chasmish understand him or assure her of their future.. Everything about the update was too good!!

Thank you for noting them in character on several of these scenes. Feels great when readers see things just like the writer wanted them to.

Abhi can never be truly happy achieving his dream without his chasmish by his side and he can never be happy sacrificing his dream and having only chasmish.. he wants both and now that he is already a rockstar waiting for him to see how he will win his chasmish back(although she is already his)...knowing how chasmish feels about the celebrity world (and he isnt fully aware of that yet) - its going to be an interesting professor chasmish-rockstar abhi clash!

Yes it is catch-22 situation for him. I say it in the soap too. Soap Abhi can never be happy without Aalu, Daadi, Pragya, Music any of it... he wants them all...he is generous in giving love but he doesn't know how to not have that love around...

Cheers to you - Jus love the story even more as it unfolds.. Totally "restless"ified until we get the next doze of it!!

Next doze will hopefullly come soon.. Banner is up.

On a another note, jus wanna to let you know - have read all your individual works so far, (OS, drabble, Rockstar ff) as well as your collab with mina - its simply tooo awesome!! *hats off* A small request can you PM me of anything you write in future? As for Restless I wont need a PM because I am checking it ever so often :))) Just don't wanna miss any of your future writing, thanks in advance! :-)

So glad you have read them all, Frenzyy. I will remember to PM you if and when I work on something.

Thanks a ton and a big hug!🤗

Originally posted by: Asma-

Pragya feels very insecure about their relationship and this so weird she wants to support him on his music career but her practical vision may lead her to a separation I'm quite excited to see how they will separate and how they will meet again :)
Tia it was really nice :) thank you so much sharing this with us

Originally posted by: kaustavi

This chapter includes all things; from their college time to Pragya's masters' time and Abhigya's bond hasn't changed after college. Pragya's insecurity about music world and wish if Abhi had also finished his studies, then he would have found a stable job. It's her nature to think so but Abhi misunderstands her. Oh! Sad but loved this chapter a lot, thank you so much and waiting for other interesting chapters ahead. Just thinking after their separation, how will Pragya manage to stay unmarried with the pressure from her home to marry. As at home, if she hasn't told Bulbul about Abhi, then obviously she hasn't told her mother about him.