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anamika.viji

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Wow..tia !! It's so beautiful ...already read this two times...perfect title.

All emotions of pragya are perfect ...her dilemmma of feelings ..unable to find out abhi's feelings for her...her reactions when abhi ignored her ...her feeling n reaction when abhi kissed her perfect.. I can feel wht pragya was feeling ...her reaction on the next day n her emotions on seeing how abhi behaves normally after tht kiss...her emotional struggle...👏

Abhi as usual naughty boy..never misses a chance 😳😉...his way of making pragya to dinner ..lovely...

The way he helped her in tht time of need ..beautiful n understanding...tht shows pragya's importance to him ...

Now I am caught in tht vortex too😃...pls continue soon...

Edited by anamika.vg - 9 years ago

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Aafrah Khan Ahluwalia

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Posted: 9 years ago

#182

Tia you can't stop here! No no no!! Please update very very soon!! This is like hanging in mid air!! Their was so much in this chapter looks like their bond is moving from strength to strength!! Abhi sold his music for her?? That's so Romantic!!!
Honestly Pragyas reaction to the kiss was something I couldn't relate to, but I guess it's Prags and that's exactly how she would react!!

All in all, it was one awesome chapter! Guess I M being demanding, but when do we get the next chapter?? I am anticipating so much more of AbhiGya closeness and attachment there!!

Thanks for such a lovely read!! :D

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TeluguAmmayi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#183

First he sulks for not sitting next to her and ignores her 😕
Than he demands a dinner 😲
Again pecks on the cheek 😆

Poor Girl, Added to all this he kisses her 😆
And than behaves normal 😕

I was like what is this man even doing to her? And he sells his music stuff for her. Aww he is so sweet but...
Anyway i like him. He is so caring and loving yet so disturbing and adamant.

Well I am curious to know what all he does and makes her restless 😆

Edited by harisha_kb - 9 years ago

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nitarata

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Posted: 9 years ago

#184

@Aafrah, how would you would you have reacted (or as in you would have Pragya react) to that kiss..I mean if you wrote this scene..Just curious, if you want to let me know.

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Nora9497

@Nora9497

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Posted: 9 years ago

#185

Wah Tia,very emotional amazing chapter ..enjoyed it to the core. Thank you so much for it.

Waiting eagerly for the next one👏

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-JollyJabeen-JB

@-JollyJabeen-JB

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Posted: 9 years ago

#186

Tiaa.. wow this chapter😲

I don't even know where to start. It was so good😆

So yayyy Abhi and Pragua finally kiss!! Haha and her reaction is so perfect. Could totallly see Pragya acting in this way.. being nervous, confused. This is probably a big deal for her.. I want to see what Abhi makes of all this though.. like his perspective😳

I'm hoping the next chapter is the chapter they speak hehe.. and awww he is ill!! Pragya ready to nurse him back to health I cannot believe he sold his musical instruments for her though. That was beyond beautiful👏🤗

Awww Tia.. you are a lovelllyyy writer!! Can't wait for your next update xx

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Mysterious7

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Posted: 9 years ago

#187

One question, why was Abhi being normal after everything that happened between Pragya and him?!

This chapter was awesome. Loved everything about it. Can't even pick any particular parts because everything was sooo good. Her keep on running away from him, I can so imagine Pragya doing this especially because it's her first maybe. And running away straight after their first kiss, it is so appt from Pragya. The chapter was sooo intense, I felt the jitterz and butterflies. And him selling his music for her was too romantic. Are we going to get Abhi's perspective too?! I want both Abhi and Pragya perspectives 😳...From your writing I can visualize everything, Tia 👏...

Edited by Mystery1 - 9 years ago

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sudanindia2014

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Posted: 9 years ago

#188

Loved, loved, loved chapter 6.. I my self is in a vortex after reading it it's full of events .

Reading the first part I was like Awww I'm so happy for Chashmish's other cheek 😆 never expected what came next .. you know the CVs in the show sort of made a big deal out of Pragya's first kiss ( at least for me ) but they keep dragging so whenever I read about it in FF specially yours, Mina's, Afrah's and other great writers of the forum I always feel that their first kiss in the show is going to be disappointing 😭.Cvs who wrote and still writing the pregnancy Track will not be able to make it as beautiful as yours guys but I hope they prove me wrong, I know Shabir and Sriti will be awesome doing the scene of their " fake" first kiss ( in case Krishna read this post 😈) but will the Cvs give it a good context ? I really hope so

loved the part of Sarla ma's heart attack, Abhi in action is always a treat to see and read about and what make it great is how easy he do it ,his heart show him the way and his body just follow ..and he never make it an issue , making him sell his musical stuff for her was perfect as I always think that the ultimate test for Abhi's love will be choosing between Pragya and his music and he will sure choose her ( he already said that in the show once )
yes I said it many times that we need Abhi's voice to know what's going on in his mind but nevertheless I always feel that his " muteness" speaks louder than words and no matter how clear we saw Pragya's love Abhi's love is clearer in spite of all the denial and disguise .. I felt the same while reading this chapter

Thanks for an awesome and long chapter it worth waiting for but I hope we will not wait long for the next.. this chapter left us all on our toes

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sanya_p

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Posted: 9 years ago

#189

Hey...I love the natural flow of this story.

The whole situation around wedding, kiss was bound to happen from Abhi's side, what else you would expect from a guy, she was looking hot after all.😉

Afterwards, not a big deal from Abhi's side as if, what he did was so natural, actually yes.

Abhi is already going to length and breadth to help her out and refusing to take money back as if she is his responsibility or his own self if anything else.

Now, Pragya dear is again going to a guy's room...ahem..ahem. And me is waiting😊

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TeluguAmmayi

@TeluguAmmayi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#190

Originally posted by: sudanindia2014
Loved, loved, loved chapter 6.. I my self is in a vortex after reading it it's full of events .

Reading the first part I was like Awww I'm so happy for Chashmish's other cheek 😆 never expected what came next .. you know the CVs in the show sort of made a big deal out of Pragya's first kiss ( at least for me ) but they keep dragging so whenever I read about it in FF specially yours, Mina's, Afrah's and other great writers of the forum I always feel that their first kiss in the show is going to be disappointing 😭.Cvs who wrote and still writing the pregnancy Track will not be able to make it as beautiful as yours guys but I hope they prove me wrong, I know Shabir and Sriti will be awesome doing the scene of their " fake" first kiss ( in case Krishna read this post 😈) but will the Cvs give it a good context ? I really hope so

loved the part of Sarla ma's heart attack, Abhi in action is always a treat to see and read about and what make it great is how easy he do it ,his heart show him the way and his body just follow ..and he never make it an issue , making him sell his musical stuff for her was perfect as I always think that the ultimate test for Abhi's love will be choosing between Pragya and his music and he will sure choose her ( he already said that in the show once )
yes I said it many times that we need Abhi's voice to know what's going on in his mind but nevertheless I always feel that his " muteness" speaks louder than words and no matter how clear we saw Pragya's love Abhi's love is clearer in spite of all the denial and disguise .. I felt the same while reading this chapter

Thanks for an awesome and long chapter it worth waiting for but I hope we will not wait long for the next.. this chapter left us all on our toes

may be the choice was music Nuha ...
We had Pragya missing Abhi in the first chapter 😲
This fic is more interesting to me than the present KB track 😊