Abhi-Pragya fiction: RESTLESS (Epilogue- Page 85, Dec 29) - Page 21

Originally posted by: Nora9497

Wah Tia,very emotional amazing chapter ..enjoyed it to the core. Thank you so much for it.

Waiting eagerly for the next one👏

Originally posted by: -JollyJabeen-JB

Tiaa.. wow this chapter😲

I don't even know where to start. It was so good😆

So yayyy Abhi and Pragua finally kiss!! Haha and her reaction is so perfect. Could totallly see Pragya acting in this way.. being nervous, confused. This is probably a big deal for her.. I want to see what Abhi makes of all this though.. like his perspective😳

I'm hoping the next chapter is the chapter they speak hehe.. and awww he is ill!! Pragya ready to nurse him back to health I cannot believe he sold his musical instruments for her though. That was beyond beautiful👏🤗

Awww Tia.. you are a lovelllyyy writer!! Can't wait for your next update xx

Originally posted by: Mystery1

One question, why was Abhi being normal after everything that happened between Pragya and him?!

About the kiss? Normal as in what? May be the kiss was a kiss for him.. .. and he did want to know what she felt about it na? But then this Sarla Maa thing happened, the kiss got sidelined.

This chapter was awesome. Loved everything about it. Can't even pick any particular parts because everything was sooo good. Her keep on running away from him, I can so imagine Pragya doing this especially because it's her first maybe. And running away straight after their first kiss, it is so appt from Pragya. The chapter was sooo intense, I felt the jitterz and butterflies. And him selling his music for her was too romantic. Are we going to get Abhi's perspective too?! I want both Abhi and Pragya perspectives 😳...From your writing I can visualize everything, Tia 👏...

Originally posted by: Mystery1

Tia, Tia, Tia I thought of your fic after seeing Pragya run away from Abhi today when he wanted to get close to her more after he kissed her on the cheeks 😛 😆...

Originally posted by: sudanindia2014

Loved, loved, loved chapter 6.. I my self is in a vortex after reading it it's full of events .

Reading the first part I was like Awww I'm so happy for Chashmish's other cheek 😆 never expected what came next .. you know the CVs in the show sort of made a big deal out of Pragya's first kiss ( at least for me ) but they keep dragging so whenever I read about it in FF specially yours, Mina's, Afrah's and other great writers of the forum I always feel that their first kiss in the show is going to be disappointing 😭.Cvs who wrote and still writing the pregnancy Track will not be able to make it as beautiful as yours guys but I hope they prove me wrong, I know Shabir and Sriti will be awesome doing the scene of their " fake" first kiss ( in case Krishna read this post 😈) but will the Cvs give it a good context ? I really hope so

loved the part of Sarla ma's heart attack, Abhi in action is always a treat to see and read about and what make it great is how easy he do it ,his heart show him the way and his body just follow ..and he never make it an issue , making him sell his musical stuff for her was perfect as I always think that the ultimate test for Abhi's love will be choosing between Pragya and his music and he will sure choose her ( he already said that in the show once )
yes I said it many times that we need Abhi's voice to know what's going on in his mind but nevertheless I always feel that his " muteness" speaks louder than words and no matter how clear we saw Pragya's love Abhi's love is clearer in spite of all the denial and disguise .. I felt the same while reading this chapter

Thanks for an awesome and long chapter it worth waiting for but I hope we will not wait long for the next.. this chapter left us all on our toes

Originally posted by: sanya_p

Hey...I love the natural flow of this story.

The whole situation around wedding, kiss was bound to happen from Abhi's side, what else you would expect from a guy, she was looking hot after all.😉

Afterwards, not a big deal from Abhi's side as if, what he did was so natural, actually yes.

Abhi is already going to length and breadth to help her out and refusing to take money back as if she is his responsibility or his own self if anything else.

Now, Pragya dear is again going to a guy's room...ahem..ahem. And me is waiting😊

Originally posted by: --simmi--

Tia! That was so intense! A little bit of everything! Your stories make me love Abhigya even more! He did so much for her! So what went wrong?

Originally posted by: SHIBANA2222

you are really making me restless😭 its just amaz...ing. please update at a speed of 195km/per min 😆