Abhi-Pragya fiction: RESTLESS (Epilogue- Page 85, Dec 29) - Page 16

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: aakanchanadevi

oh Tia!!😃

It's tooo nice.. How come you wrote this nicely..👏

I love the first kiss of Abhi to Pragya..😳 It's so cute and the dialogue "I missed you".. Just Love it..

Lovely!Lovely!!Lovely!!!❤️


Kanchana, thank you so much...😃🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sanya_p

Tia Tia Tia!!!

I kept smelling burning my lunch but didn't have heart to leave the update and go to the kitchen.

Seems Abhi also has hidden feelings for her and just doesn't know yet...typical Abhi. Good to know that Pragya was daring enough to go to a boy's room.

PS - Lunch was not completely burnt..I could manage 😉


Aww Sanya.. I really hope your food didn't taste any less because of the fic..

Yes, Pragya dared to go to his room.. let's see aage aage kya hota hain..😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sudanindia2014

An Aphigya- full chapter.. the dream of every Abhigya fan ..loved it so much and the " I missed you " and the small kiss at the end.. how cute
Shirtless Abhi another Abhiggya fan dream..loved the recreation of one of our best Abhigya moment

I almost cry " busted " thinking that we caught him red handed having feelings for chashmish when he said he brought her a gift and he had to go and burst my bubble saying " I brought one for Nikki too " a funny thought came into my mind after that as Abhi is also an enigma here and we have no idea what's going on on his front ..I said to my self I hope we can have a version of Tia's " Abhi's voice " for Tia's FF too 😆

Thank you so much for updating regularly it's really nice to have them soon and this chapter was a bit longer it's like having an extra treat Thank you so so much


Aww I am glad you are feeling more AbhiGya in here...
Sorry about the phulkari gift.. Nikki was one intentional..

Abhi's voice. hahahaha.. lol.. Tia is only hearing Pragya's voices here.. so Abhi will remain Abhi for now.

I am eager to finish this fic too.. it's just boils in my head so much..

Thanks Nuha.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Asma-

It was really nice :)
Aww Pragya 's feelings I think Abhi just takes her for a good friend nothing more :/
I love their friendship he is so important for her that she came early to meet him so cute .
The poster he had in his room so funny


Thank you Asma.. We will know about Abhi more may be in the next chapter.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: frenzyy

Aww!! Really beautiful chapter.. Abhi taking up the project with Prags was cool, he didn't leave his friend alone.. Really really cute moments - could totally imagine the grumpy abhi complaining of headache and he ending up sleeping on chasmish lap(remembered abhigya scene from kkb - where abhi says her hand has jadoo like dadi when she gave head massage) typical abhi teasing Prags of not calling him when he could have called her too.. His repeated asking of whether she missed him was cute.. So wanna abhi'S pov when he saw chasmish waiting for him @ the station, his rean on seeing Prags with the dupatta he gifted (he got one for Nikki too but that doesn't count & Aliya is nice here? Interesting)) and lastly when his rean when chasmish finally answered his question & admitted that she missed him.. Small request - Can we get abhi'S pov (as a separate OS maybe) with jus this short scenes from phone convo to the peck? (Rockstar plz?) The peck @ the end completed the entire scene beautifully - looks like somewhere abhi has feelings for Prags but abhi being abhi didn't realize it until it was too late? Are they still in touch @ present? Another wonderful chapter!!!


Frenzyy!!!
I am glad you could feel Abhi/AbhiGya...I want that essence to flow along.
I am not considering Abhi's POV writing as of now.. let me see if I do it later.
Thank you for the detailed comments.😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Okay, come back.😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Nora9497

Amazing update Tia,I think Abhi is in love with chachmish as well hoping but from the first chapter there is a misunderstanding on the way that why they are separated ...please update soon thank you for this beautiful story


Thank you Nora!! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anamika.vg

Nice one tia :)

U used head massage of pragya ... Tht was cute ..liked fluttering butterflies again ...

Both are missing each other..pragya waiting for in railway station n all..adorbs..

Pragya got her first kiss from abhi ;)
Waiting to see how it's going to proceed further :)


Glad you liked that railway station thing.. My fav part too in the fic..
Thanks Viji.😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: --simmi--

TIA!!!

Abhi with short hair! Yay! Aha 😆

Thanks for the quick updates! Always look forward to reading more cause you are awesome!


Yes, Simmi.. I myself didn't want him in that hideous hair/head band. So found a way to cut it off!

Thank you so much!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Alright folks, here is the next chapter banner.
The chapter may not come immediately.. but until then...

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