||AbhiGya TS:The Patch-Up(A Mission by RaBul)||1st part upd,pg.2,19/11

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Hey guyss!! Just thought of writing an OS. This is completely different from the current one. Hope you will like it!!

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ABHIGYA TS : THE PATCH-UP

CHARACTER SKETCH :

Set in A COLLEGE CAMPUS!!

Abhishek Mehra : The lead singer of College band. Best friend of Purab.

Pragya Arora : (Not a Chashmish) A very beautiful and simple girl. Best friend of Bulbul.

Purab Khanna : Lover of Bulbul. Best friend of Abhi.

Bulbul Malhotra : Lover of Purab. Best friend of Pragya.

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INDEX:

First part

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TEASER :

"Me...That too her...Again...Never..." Said a frustrating Abhi to Purab.

On the other side,

"Me...That too him...Again..Never.." Said a blood-boiling Pragya to Bulbul.

Then the two faces turned opposite to each other saying,

"I just hate her and never want her in my life"

"I just hate him and never want him in my life"

Then the two angry birds started walking in opposite directions after biding a Goodbye to each other.

"What can we do now Purab??Whatever may happen, I want them to be one...Again.." Said Bulbul with a sad face.

"Don't worry Bulbul, We will make them one again and Bring their AbhiGya status back in their college...Okk??"

"But How..?"

"First we have to know the cause for it...We know it already but anyhow we have to confirm it and then find the culprit and make them one again..Are you ready??"

"Hmm...Yess"

"Mission AbhiGya 'The Patch-Up' starts now.." Said the two love birds chorusly and Hi-Fiveing each other to make the current Angry birds into love birds...ONCE AGAIN...

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LOVE,

AMAYA❤️

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interesting start.do continue it dear.
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Originally posted by: shrutigaur37

interesting start.do continue it dear.


Thank you so much shruthi!! Glad you liked it...😊
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Yeah do continue please . liked it
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nice teaser do continue soon😊
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i ike it
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Wow, I'm intrigued by this story and want to know what happened to Abhigya!
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Very nice start continue soon pm me thanks for pm
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Hey guys!! I have changed it into a TS instead of OS. It has many content so I split it Up into Two parts. I hope you will enjoy reading it!! I will update the second Part ASAP!! Enjoy reading Guyss!!
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ABHIGYA TS : THE PATCH-UP


'What crap is Bulbul saying?? I should love Abhi...Noo...Not at all..He is a liar, He fooled me, He cheated me, I just hate him. Belief on each other is the Basement of love. But he broken my faith and left me. Now again, I am not ready to be fooled' Thought Pragya to herself. The last words between Abhi and Pragya were "Goodbye" to each other walking in opposite directions. The truth of their Break-up hurted her as she knew that she didn't do any mistake. She felt tears in her eyes as she came across the memories of their love - Their Hugs, Their first kiss, Their couple name "AbhiGya", their small fights, his care for her and his transparent love proposal for her during a concert in the college - Everything. In every single thing, she missed him a lot. Till date she cannot understand why he left him so abruptly when the mistake lies on him.

She came out of her memories when she heard her hostel room door open. She quickly wiped out the tears before Bulbul came. "Prags, Why didn't you say Ok to Abhi?? What happened?? You said me and Purab that you both did break up because you both wanted to concentrate on your studies. But now the exams are going to end right and our college life is going to end and we have our farewell after 5 days. Then Why did you not accept him now?? Studies are over and why not now?? I and Purab planned to make you meet each other but you both denied your love. Why?? I think there is another reason behind your break up. Say me Prags or otherwise I will never talk to you" Said Bulbul and turned her face and walked towards the room door. "Bulbul wait.." said Pragya and hearing her Bulbul stopped. "What??" "I'll say the truth" Said Pragya.

Flashback starts

Sun shone through the window of Pragya's room and the irritating alarm made her wake up. She then made a big Yawn and her hands immediately went near the side table and picked up the phone. Her phone beeped indicating a message and that too from her love - Abhi. her lips immediately stretched into a big smile and she opened the message. It read:

"Hey love, Happy b'day. Good morning. I am the first one to wish ryt? Ofcourse, yes. Happy b'day love. What do you want as a gift?? A thing or a Kiss or anything..."

She immediately blushed seeing the last line and replied.

"Ahm..Ahm..Stop okay. Thank you so much Abhi. Yes, you were the first one to wish. Thank you so much."

"I LOVE YOU MY LOVE"

"I LOVE YOU TOO ABHI"

"Say me what gift you want na..?"

"Hmm...Take me out somewhere. Today is Sunday so just take me out please. We can go a long drive in your bike, Then dinner. Okayy??"

"Okayy But.."

"But what??"

"If the warden sees you, then it will become a big issue."

"Don't worry dear, I will wait for you near the coffee shop near your house..How's that??

"Wow...you have back up plans also..Master mind love!!"

"LOVER OF YOU RIGHT, will be like that only.."

"Okaayy love, But don't say to Bulbul. She will say to Purab then he will torture me"

"Okayy dear, I will not say to Bulbul..Okkaayy?? I will be there at 3pm near the coffee shop. Okay...come and pickup me...In your bike.."

"Okaay meri ma..I will come. Happy b'day again my love. You will never forget this day in your life!!"

"Let me see..Bye.."

"Bubye love!!" Said Abhi as their conversation ended. Both Abhi and Pragya was in their own worlds dreaming and thinking about each other.

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Time went very slow for Pragya as she was eagerly waiting for the clock to strike 2:45pm which showed that time was only 1pm. She even chose the dress she wanted to wear.
She thought of wearing a white gown which had a low back and front and her sleeve was translucent showing her shoulders fully which was matched by a small white diamond earring with her hair left lose having a hand bag of white colour. As she got ready, The time was 2:30pm and she did a light touch up. She thought of leaving the room happily as there was no Bulbul who went with Purab. As she took her phone and kept into the bag, she found a message beep sound. She happily opened it thinking it Abhi but it was Gaurav who messaged her. Her smiled faded a little and she read the message:

"Hey Prags... Happy b'day. Be happy, Always keep smiling. I think I am the first boy to wish you right..??"

"Thank you so much. Noo..Noo... Abhi wished me at 6am itself and also sent a message at 12am night.."

"Ohh...Okaayy. So what are your plans..??"

"Hmm..Nothin much.."

"Ohh Okaay...Have a nice day..Byee"

"Okkayy Bye.."

And then she saw the time, It was 2:47pm. She hurriedly locked the room door and took an auto to the coffee shop after informing the warden like a Friend's birthday party.
She gave the money to the auto driver as he went. She saw the watch and it striked correctly 2:55pm. She waited for him for five minutes. As the time lapsed, The Five minutes grew into an half an hour wait but there were no signs of Abhi's bike near her. She became very tired because of the sun's heat and made her way into the coffee shop but was stopped by a voice."Hey Pragya.." She turned back to see the owner of the voice."Hey Gaurav..What are you doing here??"Asked pragya."I can ask the same question to you right?? What are you doing her..?"replied Gaurav. "Actually I am waiting For Abhi...He said me to come here.."said Pragya. "Ohh..Birthday plans Ahh..Ahm.."said Gaurav which made Pragya blush. "But I saw him in his house now only yaar..That too with a girl"hearing this, her blush turned into a shock. "What are you saying?? He said he will come...I think you saw someone else.." "Noo...It was Abhi for sure. I passed across his house and I saw him and a girl in his balcony, It was Abhi for sure.." Pragya was so shocked hearing him. But she didn't believe him. "I will straight away go to Abhi's house and Check him.." "Go Pragya, No problem...If you want Go and see.." "Okkaayy Gaurav bye..." she said and went fast to Abhi's house by walking. As she took each and every step, her ears were filled with Gaurav's words. She thought to herself that Abhi will not be in the house as he loves her a lot.

She went into his house after informing the watchman. As she thought of stepping into his house, she heard loud noise of TV. As she turned her angle of face slightly, She was shocked to see ABHI talking with a girl and that girl was having her hands in his shoulders standing so close to each other. She was taken aback by the scene and she was about to fall down. Her eyes were filled with tears as she ran away from his house crying so badly and realizing that SHE HAD BEEN CHEATED BY ABHI.

Flashback ends

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Thankyou for reading and do leave your feedback and hit the like button.

LOVE,
AMAYA❤️






Edited by AbhiGya_sh - 9 years ago
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Wow 😲 What's happened???
Please update soon
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