Abhigya OS: Chashmish Without Chashma - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely OS karishma❤️...Very nicely written..😛

And Welcome to the forum Karishma 😊
Edited by MarGan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi!!

This was sooo beautifully written! The way you've described all the small details and emotions is wonderful! The ending was my favourite part "welcome home chashmish"

Hope to see more stories from you!

Rix xx
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Haaye so adorable! Thank you for posting :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow thanks for writing this, wish this happens in the show
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: aafrah

Karishma, firstly welcome to the forum!
A warm hug to you!

I think you write exceptionally well. This story is such a simple one. It doesn't clarify anything but the AbhiGya moment is too deep and very personal.

There are so many small things I loved about it. For instance Abhi wearing the chashma to have a better perception of the matter, Abhi's desperate attempt to compromise with Tanu by trying to see a lil but of Pragya in her by making her wear the specs. His feeling of blasphemy after seeing Pragyas specs on Tanu and the sweetest was his test for identifying Chashmish - I don't know it have me the Cinderella feel. If the chashma fits her she is his Chashmish - pragyas glam avatar yet squinting at the papers ..lol not used to lens yet. And Abhi taking the opportunity and offering her the specs and hugging her back in his life..awww it's just tooo perfect for words..it's intense, cute and so very possible in the current storyline..wish the cvs give us such a scene

Oh and did I forget the first part? Abhi clinging on to her chashma as it made him feel closer to her... Awww so much romantic feels..

Karishma please do wrote more and soon..really amazing piece!!
Welcome once again and awaiting to read truck loads of stories from you.

Love
Aafrah


Hi Aafrah! Thank you so much for your comments! Wow, this is the first time someone has understood my writing so well. By the way, I'm a huge fan of your stories, I look forward to reading more while I'm on this forum 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I can't believe this is your first OS! You write very well! Where were you till now?!
The Cinderella-ish reference was amazing. Keep writing! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Cute and adorable story.
Please do write more.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: ...Tiana...

Lovely OS, Karishma😊

Abhi's love was sweet😳 And him missing Pragya was even more sweet😳

And the last part was awesome👏

I Loved this specially

He softly inquired, "Need these?". Startled, Pragya turned around only to be captured by Abhi's intense eyes. She shifted her gaze towards the floor, caught off guard. "I...I'm...those aren't...", she stumbled over her words. "Let me help you", Abhi offered. He gently placed the frames on Pragya's slender face. And in that moment, Abhi knew that everything was right. He tenderly engulfed his wife in an embrace and whispered into her ear, "Welcome home Chashmish."

This was lovely😳

I loved this OS😊

You are an awesome writer👏 Please write more soon😊


Thank you Tiana! I really appreciate your feedback 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: anamika.vg

Cute OS karishma :)

Nice name BTW :)


Thank you, @anamika.vg! I love your name too :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: --simmi--

Aww first of all welcome to this forum and what a brilliant start to it too!

A very simple story but with a very strong moment for Abhigya! Him looking at her Chashma trying to comfort himself into believing Pragya was still with him, romantic feels!

And the last part, a cherry on top of the cake! 'Welcome Home Chashmish' Awww that was ADORABLE! What a lovely story you have written here! ❤️


Aww thanks, Simmi! I loved your recent OS!

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