Abhigya SS~I fell in Love~ PART 5(final part)@Pg13-12th sep[Completed] - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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oh durga, just now see it, next week ur marriage, oh best wishes dear,
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Originally posted by: NasreenAyesha

oh durga, just now see it, next week ur marriage, oh best wishes dear,

thank u dear 😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thank u for adding me in ur pm list... and heartiest congratulations for ur wedding...stay blessed always..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I wish it should be abhi;p plz continue soon
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Originally posted by: ray_rajpoot

thank u for adding me in ur pm list... and heartiest congratulations for ur wedding...stay blessed always..



thank u so much dear 😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: KAPPorwal01

I wish it should be abhi;p plz continue soon


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Posted: 10 years ago
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hiii guys.. i'm back..back to work.. back to forum... so much stories to read 😃😆 and thank u all for the lovely wishes... ⭐️ finally i became Mrs from Miss..😳 and sorry for late update... don't scold me ..poor soul i'm 😉 i guess u guys would forgot first part.. so just read that part and continue with this second part 😊😛


PART 2

I was waiting for his grip to get loosen since long time..but he had no way of loosing me..he was holding me like a doll the way how a child will hold his toy not wanting to give it to anyone. As some time passed being idle, I felt calm..peace in my heart... I could feel his warm breath on my neck & I felt comfortable with it.. "wait a minute..what I just felt??? COMFORTABLE with IT?? How the hell I could think like that"... again my heart stated to race...I was shivering in fear again. I wanted to go out of this place at any cost..After a long wait finally he had turned that side.. I took this chance to move out from him and I succeeded too... then I searched for cloths to wear..."it has to be somewhere on this bed..yaa finally I found something.. a knee length night gown"... I wore it and got out of the bed.. I could see nothing but darkness around me..when I took two steps forward, something was stopping me to move further.. I touched to check what it was... it was a sofa..a bigg one indeed. I sat on it keeping my legs up to my chest and I kept my face on my knees.."my mind is with thousands of questions now.. what I'm doing here??.. Definitely I haven't been kidnapped, because I could feel his soft and fondness over me and I felt he had no voice of harming me either.. "then why I'm here.." I was bewildered. I was deep in thought, thinking "what to do in morning here..what should I ask him"... just then a flash of brightness covered the room.. in the sudden light of brightness my body had shaken a bit and my eyes closed tightly. He had switched on the light..when I opened my eyes, I could see a tall man standing in front of me with suspicious look on his face. I kept on staring at him.."he is tall ..a little dark..and the muscles are damn fit.. I guess he is the regular visitor to gym..his deep eyes were looking at me.. sec by sec his eyes changed from suspicious look to bothered, cared look" I could feel. "but why?.. and he is telling me something? Becoz I could see his lips are dancing since I saw him..but I couldn't hear anything.. "oh god!!..he was coming very near to me. So close..i looked at him scared" .. just then I heard his loud voice calling out my name "PRAGYAAA"... and I shook a bit... he cupped my face and continued "what happened Pragya?..i had been calling u all these time.. its 5th time I'm asking u what had happened?", just then I realized why he shouted my name loud becoz I couldn't hear his voice..or I could say I was in my deep thought in exploring him... I looked at him demented, shocked and with all possible way of scary look. I couldn't control myself though reacting in such a way. He looked at me so worried, I could feel the devotion in his eyes..his eyes.. I could see his eyes all day..deep dark brown hypnotizing eyes I must say..i felt home in his embrace ..i had some mysterious feel when I looked his eyes..i couldn't take off my eyes from his eyes. The mystery feel I never had.."It was like if some soft thing like a butterfly sat on my heart and it is dancing on me.. I couldn't clearly get what actually that feel was..so I just summarized it in this way.. soft thing dancing on my heart"...

He was still looking at me anxiously and waiting for my answer... I tried to ask him why I'm here and who he was..but all I could do was just blabbering something ..." I...i..just...I want to say...want to ask...u..me..." my throat dried..i gulped and finally I ended up asking him water..."I ...wanttt water...".. I was such a fool.. I couldn't utter a word properly in front of him...then he went near to night lamp where water bottle had been kept.. once he moved from me, I breathed so fast and felt relieved..."ufff... I was in some state..i couldn't able to ask him any questions..and his eyes..are doing something in me..it seems danger...i shouldn't see his eyes hereafter" I thought. By the time he took the water bottle..a blue bottle..but he was shacking the bottle?? Why?".. and I couldn't see the bottle clearly.. I mean it looked blurred...and yaa..even other things in the room seems me blurred.. but why I wondered.. just then I realized I was seeing without my specs..my second pair of eyes.. "where they are??? " I widen my eyes so that, if I could see anything.. but nothing I could see though.. he came near to me and said " no water in this.. I will go down and take water.. u be here" he turned to move but stopped & looked at me.. I too looked at him without asking anything... "here is ur specs..wear it" that's all he said and left the room after giving the specs to me.. I wondered how he knew I was thinking about my specs and then i wore my specs.. " ahh now I can see everything clearly.. a big room it is in fact..a big bed where 4 people can sleep I must say..and the sofa on which I was sitting also was soft and big and the color combinations of bed, sofa and the room design everything looked soo nice ..i mean I loved it..the room looked like how if I would have designed."..Just then I saw a big frame behind the bed on which a girl like me.. I mean she is veryyy similar to me, holding him from his back and he was holding guitar in his hand..both were sharing a cute smile..but I shocked to see a girl like me.. but there were some minor differences between me and that girl.. the first thing was she had a short hair which was only half of mine ... and she had sharp eye brow and it suited her well.. and her chubby cheeks.. where in..."me ..i'm a skinny girl"... she was also looking lean but she had extra cheeks compared than mine.. Wondering on her I brushed my hair.."ohh my goddd just when I noticed I didn't have my long hair.. it had shorten..how on earth it happened??" I shocked and some unknown fear occupied me...

To confirm how I look, I went near to the dressing table where a long mirror which was higher than me, was smiling at me... when I saw myself I almost lost myself.. shocked.. I was looking exactly damn like that girl in the frame..my hair had shorten. And sharp eyebrow.. little extra chubby cheeks, I still looked skinny but not like before... seeing me in this state, in this room, with someone who knew my name, I thought I had been definitely trapped somewhere... but why??.. again everything was flashing in my mind.. my heart was beating like beast in a way at any time it would jump from my body. And I could feel blood is flowing so fast all over my body...blood pumping so hard... and again I felt my vision getting darker though I was in specs.. "hell.. yaa,.. am I going to faint now?? Not again and particularly not now please" I thought but no more my thought existed as my ear also becoming deaf ..but I could hear my name.. someone..he was calling me "PARGYAAA..".. and fell on something..on a pair of hands may be..

When I opened my eyes, I found me on bed lying like a patient.. then I remembered that I had fainted last night...I tried to get up but my hand was stuck somewhere...I tried to see why I couldn't take off my hand and saw him holding my hand with both of his palms...and he was resting his head on our hands whilst sitting on the chair besides me... I felt sad and worried on him... "who is he.. why he is doing this..why I feel like he is concerned on me"..i was staring at him thinking all these. Just then I heard a old lady's voice entering into the room.. "Pragya beta..got up?? See...what I brought for u.. your favorite mushroom soup.. get up and drink it fast so that you will feel good and healthy.. get up" she finished. Then she saw him holding my hand and resting, she called him "ABHI... Abhisekh beta.. how many times I need to tell u.. see finally your pragya got up.. u go and have your breakfast first at least now..it's 3PM and u didn't have ur breakfast yet.." she scolded him.. I confused at her statement "ur pragya??" when I became his pragya?? I wondered... Only then he took off his face and hands from mine and he looked at me to check whether I was fine... his eyes were red..i understood that he didn't sleep at all after I fainted.. he smiled at me and went into bathroom to fresh up.. then Dadi sat near to me and started to feed me the soup.. I felt emotional and remembered about my mom.. she used to feed me always.. Dadi seems me good and cared...she was worried about me and told me something which made my mind go blank .. she actually said.. "your husband is still behaving like a child".."MY HUSBAND"...yaa.. I had mangalsuthra around my neck I checked. Definitely something happened to me.. all I could remembered was, "my marriage was stopped..well I fainted before it stopped..and then when I wake up I found myself here... but now I could see a photo frame of mine with him, most important thing is,I was sleeping with him..now dadi is saying he is my husband..".. something is fizzy.. either they all are trapping me or I was out of the world for sometime..meanwhile Dadi had finished her duty of feeding me and went out telling me to take rest.. I nodded my head and stared at my mangalsuthra.. Just then he came out from bathroom, he looked fresh finally... he came near to me and asked how I was feeling...I just nodded my head without saying anything..he told me to take rest and walked towards the door.. I called him "Abhishek..one min" that's all I said..but the reaction I got from him for the single word I uttered was like a volcano.. he turned to my side and I could feel he was in shock.. but I didn't know why.. I just called him..nothing else.. passing each second, his face became soo dull, worried and I can feel the pain in his eyes... I never thought calling by his name will make him this much worried and shocked... anyhow I continued to tell him... "i..want to say u something... I ...i dnt..." and I cutoff by his reply... "I KNOW"..his voice was deep worried... "how he knows??? and what he knows???..i didn't say him anything.. then how come he know what I was trying to talk to him?" thinking that I gave him confused look.. this time when he replied, I could feel tears were forming in his eyes and his voice was shaky.. he was holding his tears and he said " I know that u don't remember me now" (I know u can't forget me ever..u just don't remember me now..and I know what to do now" abhi thought to himself) after telling this he left the room leaving me shocked...he didn't want to break down in front of me... I really wondered how he found that I didn't remember him..." is he a magician who reads everyone's minds or only my mind?"..."Only MY MIND!!! My heart said"...

------------------To Be Continued--------------------

so hows it guys? waiting for ur comments 😳



Edited by sdurgasakthi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Dear Durga, the first time and this shot?! It was a super idea! Who is this guy with her? I'm dying of curiosity. please update soon 👍🏼 👏
Edited by olushka2924 - 10 years ago
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This part was very unexpected for me! She is the wife Abhi, they love each other, but for some reason she did not remembered about him? What happened to her? I am very worried for them: Pragya in turmoil, suffering Abhi... their history impresses more and more ... Durga, I will follow your creativity, good luck! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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full of suspense👏
nice 😊
update more soon eager to know the mystery😛😉

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