Abhigya SS~I fell in Love~ PART 5(final part)@Pg13-12th sep[Completed] - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: Tricha

Durga !!!! My dear thank you so so sooo much for end the suspence !!! 🤗

I don't know if I would be able to wait more 😳 😆
Abhigya true love !!!! It's so cute And most of all the way he explain their feelings to her was ... Oh my God, I lost my words, I can't tell you how much I loved the flashback part
So I was right, It's not the first time 😔 Hope after, this won't happen again

Thanks again for your PM
And as usual (I think you know me now), I can't wait for the next part, So please update soon 🤗 ❤️


awww❤️🤗 welcome... finally put an end to all the suspense..suree.i'll update the next part(final) by tonite 😉😉as i already completed 75% of it..😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ray_rajpoot

great work abhi is so supportive 😊😛

update more soon 😃


thank u so much 😊😊😊 yaaa.. abhi is alwaysss supportive
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thank u 😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thank uu 😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: NasreenAyesha

durga atlast u broke the reason for her memory loss, wonder what happen next it still interesting yet confusing.
she is falling for him, loved that


yaaa..how can she stay away from him.. how can she be without falling for him
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sdurgasakthi


awww❤️🤗 welcome... finally put an end to all the suspense..suree.i'll update the next part(final) by tonite 😉😉as i already completed 75% of it..😊


Final part ??? Already ???? 😭 Why ? I love your story ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tricha


Final part ??? Already ???? 😭 Why ? I love your story ❤️

yes dear 😊 my story is upto this only..ll update final part in few mins 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hiii sweet people 😊 first of all Thank u sooo much for the support u all gave me 🤗 i never thought my first ever story will get such a sweet response 😳😳 here is the last part 😊

PART 4- http:////www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4445179&TPN=11

PART 5- Final Part

I was sunk in gallery throughout the journey...I took my eyes off from the mobile when he stopped the car...i got down from the car. The place looks like where my home used to be. but there was some other newly built house.. I wondered whose that would be..but when I looked at its construction design, it was as per our childhood wish..me, purab and neil's dream house..it was in the exact same way how we dreamt..Surrounded by tress and lawn..and a very big swing in the centre of garden in which 5 people can sit in that... I got excited, the house must be ours..and I felt soo happy and ran into it..

Maa and papa were waiting for me at the doorsteps.. I ran to them and hugged them tightly.. I thanked god for keeping them well and fine...I asked about purab and neil and yaa about my little kitty "shashu" too..it(he) was walking towards me with his usual prince walk and with same "aww u came again" look..haha I must say this..he will overact..he knew that I love him very much... he walked around and rubbed my legs asking me to take him in my hands... I took him and kept in my hands like a child... he started his fav job of biting my fingers then..

"maa.. where are purab and neil??" I asked maa... "they both are not home beta.. before 3 days only they left to their respective places.. yaa I need to remember u again as u lost the intermediate memory :p... purab has been selected in Indian army..finally he got his dream service last year..and he is in Dehradun for training...and Neil.. he is in his final year of medical.. he and his friends selected 10 most rural villages in india and kept a 30 days medical camp in each village.. now they are at some village in bihar..." she explained me in detail.. I really felt soo happyyy and proud...actually I couldn't express myself in words..finally my two cute little heroes are doing what they always dreamt of.. what else one sister need other than hearing this most prestigious news... nothing more I want now...everything is more than perfect...I have love which I never dreamt of having, I have my parents ..i have my brothers who succeeded in their dream...I prayed god that it should sustain with me forever.. and I thanked god for treating me so special..

I was playing with my shashu..by then maa had prepared our fav coffee. We foursome enjoyed a coffee break with lots of chit chats..."thank god...u got ur memory back.. so no need of taking videos hereafter..u wont torture us anymore.. finally we all escaped" papa teased me.."papa...that much I tortured u all???" I asked him making my puppy face... "ohh when I said u tortured us?? Did I say soo??..hmmm no..no... that must be my tongue slip...u are our cute angel" he pampered me.. the day went very well being with my parents..they feed me food...all the time abhi was smiling at me...he looked soo cute I must say...he was very close to my parents like how I was.. I wondered how and when he became such close to them...obviously such a good and lovely man I ever know... how anyone will stay away from him..i adored him...

Finally we left my home after saying bye to all..again I sank in gallery watching all the videos..in one of them, I found me playing guitar.. I loved guitar but as far as I remember I didn't know to play it... but in the video I had to accept I played really well..a romantic tune..."suniyee...this guitar...how!!!..i?" I asked him,... "I told u na that we have some common things..and this guitar is one among them...lucky me... u didn't know to play it..so I had to teach u" he winked at me,... I felt shyy..again I lost in my thoughts thinking all the miracles happened in my life... I never thought I ll fall in love..i never thought at least I will feel love..and I never imagined a life like this...but now I feel like within a day my life has changed in a way that I never imagined in my dream also.. and guess what I finally fell in love with some one... not someone.. with him...my ABHI.. the most adorable person I ever know...this feel seems me very new... I might gone through these feelings in those two years..but technically this is the first time I am feeling this after I got back my memory...

"Suniyee... I wanted to tell u something.." I called him silently... "haan bolo..by the way I know what u r going to tell me... who knows u better than me?" he teased me... "ahhh then u knew what I m going to tell u..then y do I need to tell u.. no need of it" I explored in anger and turned my face to window side... "but I wanted to hear that from your own mouth.. after very longgg 3 days...such a long break u know... I'm excitedly waiting for those words to hear" I could feel his eager.. the first ever time I'm going to confess my love..i took a long breathe..." I love u..i love u..i lovee u...and I know u love me too exactly how much I do" saying this I held my hand around his hands and rest my head on his shoulder... I felt very shy and embarrassed ... finally I confessed my love..ehhh... the very rare thing in the world...my heart is beating dhak dhak dhak dak..yaa its audible outside.and I guess he also would have heard it . I can feel that still he s looking at me..and I can feel my face turned red in shy.."Abhii.. drive the road looking at the road" I told him not meeting his eyes... "oieee my shy wali tommy...when u became this much shy" he laughed out loud...

"hmmm.. I wanted to ask u one more thing...can i?" I requested him... "u r requesting me..oh god...I need to note this day in my diary for sure..such a rare thing happened today" he laughed again... I got angry and gone silent.. "oohh ok ok.. I wont taunt u now... go on.. what u wanted to ask me?" he asked me politely... "i wanted to ask u that...i want to relive all those days again" making my puppy face I asked him.. "waahhh..thats soo cool...by the day it was ur plan list already.. u already had a list what and all we need to do when u get back ur memory..such a smarty girl u r :p... okie then from where will we start.. shall we start from the origin..moving to office? :p or from the shaadi??" saying this he suddenly stopped car and made me to get down...I thought he remembered something... I didn't know what he was upto in the middle of the road standing in front of me.. he quickly leaned down in his knees and took off ring from his little finger " will u marry me once again?" he proposed me to marry him again... I had tears in my eyes.. I ran into his arms and hugged him tightly... "between u didn't answer me yet" he made a puppy face... "u know what my answer will be...and if u want to hear from me..yaaa...its big yesss" saying this I again hugged him..

Finally yess.. I fell in love... I fell in love soo hard that I cant get back ... fell so hard that I don't even want to get back... I can't express myself in words how I'm feeling now... actually there are no words in the world will suit to explain my happiness.. I'm just overwhelmed ... I don't know how to explain my overflowing love...I love him in all possible crazy ways till my life ends.. even in my all upcoming births...I can bet that I must be the happiest person on this whole universe...and yeahh.. I'm all ready to start my Love story again as a fresh one...

and yaa ppl.. don't forget to attend my re-marriage... bye for now as I'm busy with my jerry :p

--------------------------------------------Happy End----------------------------------


so guys.. here my story had ended,.. how do like it? 😳 and a biggg sorry to all the people who were expecting some abhigya moments 😕... i also doent know how to describe love like how our abhigya in this story.. its mystery feel for me too 😆

Edited by sdurgasakthi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Its So beautiful durga :)
Do write more 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice story
no need to be sorry as short stories has their own charm
loved it thanks for the pm...
waiting for new one :D :p

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