~Paris Holds the Key (AbhiGya OS by mina)~

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@putturani

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Minaji wrote something! Minaji wrote something! Have to break my IF hiatus to see this! Eee I love this Mina!! Your descriptions of Paris were intoxicating but more than that you managed to describe Pragya's character through her interactions with Paris, which was very cool. That whole dialogue about the kiss and what it meant was excellent - had me swooning and cringing with delicious excitement the whole time.Thank you!

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Tilashini

@Tilashini

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: I-Told-U-So
😲

Tilu i was thinking about that same pic ...i just could not find it ...

Got it from sriti's twitter acc 😉

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anamika.viji

@anamika.viji

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Tilashini

Just read it !! Omg thank you so much Mina !! 🤗 Is there a part 2 of this story ?? This time a real french kiss maybe?? 😛

Loved it !! I'm so gonna read it again ! Love the way she surprises abhi ! 😳 pragya's makeover was fab..the way you described na..i could only think of this pic...Haha ☺️

Je T'aime !! ...pic ABHI baki hai na ?? If you get what i mean...☺️😆

R they posing standing on bed?! 😆 ..these two na 😆😆

Edited by anamika.vg - 10 years ago

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rutu83

@rutu83

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

awesome os!

though how can you actually stick to one morning in louvre?! wished this was much longer so we can see paris through abhigya's eyes. even more so the surrounding little french villages that are just so picturesque. what are the chances of this os turning ts 😃?

btw- the song is aji aisa mauka not aaj aisa mauka 😳

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Mina

@-mina-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: NasreenAyesha
minu dear how can u hang me like this, pls 2nd part loved this type pragya awsm and she is too romantic love it

Ayeshu I love you and your comments so much 🤗 ❤️

I don't know about a second part. Maybe after I finish other things...😳

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Mina

@-mina-

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: anamika.vg

i saw the -fin- later 😊

its ok...but hoping tht u will write more along this line one day ...so .dont cheat us 😆😉

I added later, because I forgot it at first 😆😳

Thank you...I'll hope so too 😛

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Mina

@-mina-

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: larimel22
Wow! That was so beautiful! Both of them were perfectly in character. I want to see their love story unfold as delicately as this in the show! :)

Thank you SO much for this thoughtful comment!! It really means a lot to hear that they felt in character. And the word delicately, thank you for specifying. Hugs to you!! 😊

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Mina

@-mina-

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Tilashini

Just read it !! Omg thank you so much Mina !! 🤗 Is there a part 2 of this story ?? This time a real french kiss maybe?? 😛

Loved it !! I'm so gonna read it again ! Love the way she surprises abhi ! 😳 pragya's makeover was fab..the way you described na..i could only think of this pic...Haha ☺️

Je T'aime !! ...pic ABHI baki hai na ?? If you get what i mean...☺️😆

🤣

Glad you enjoyed. The real french kiss I'm sure you can imagine...!

Pic abhi baki hai...honeymoon full pic you mean? Ummm...I don't know if I can pick up on this story but someday surely I'll write some version of the pic you might mean...😆

And yes, that was exactly the inspiration picture!! 😃

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Mina

@-mina-

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Tilashini

Part 2 is censored ..?? ..😆 what happens after abhigya have thier dinner mina ? Sorry i dont know 😛😆

🤣

Oh dear, do you not know? Maybe I will have to write it after all. 😆

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Mina

@-mina-

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: I-Told-U-So

no pressure ,no promise no nothing ...🤗
part two..
fancy dress competition ..pragya wears sexy nurse costume abhi refuses to wear anything.. he is better then anyone or anything in this planet 😆 ...
i dont know tumi vlo jano ame bolle ''pragya tree'' story hoye jabe 😆

"tree" ki bujlam na?? 😆

you are always skipping them ahead...here they've barely started kissing and you're getting them to role play 🤣

i don't know if i'll write more of this one, but stay tuned. you'll see such ideas in my work eventually 😉