||SS : Soulmate|| Chapter 22 Page 79 :)

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hailly

@hailly

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#21

wonderful update.loved it .beautifully written .

Continue soon plz.

Thanks for pm .

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_Saavi_

@_Saavi_

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

lovely update...so beautifully written... full of emotions... cant wait for the next part... continue soon 😊

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Diahh

@Diahh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Hey Priya! Loved the first part! Love the way you have written Abhi's back story, his relationship with Tannu etc. so Pragya is just landing! Yay! Excited!

Thanks for the PM! 😃

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-harini-

@-harini-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Wow girl now that was brilliant !! I was all sad to see Abhi so depressed though but yayyy prags' entry in the next and slowly the romance will beginnn! Seriously , awesome command over English you've got! Loved reading this 😃 and i loved the Abhi-purab and Abhi-bulbul dynamic too :-)

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indi

@indi

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Thank you!!! Sounds wonderful!!! Waiting for more!!!

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Ayesha

@NasreenAyesha

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

hi priya, welcome u yaar as new kkb writer, loved ur writing.
awsm story
hope u write next part soon

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Pixiepixel11

@Pixiepixel11

Stunner

+ 31

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Awesome loved it so much...

Continue soon.

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Priya

@BombayPonnu

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: --simmi--
RES! CANNOT WAIT TO READ THIS!
UNRES!

Yay so I was finally able to read and this is a very hooking start! Wow, so much happened to Abhi. You have given a nice insight to him emotions currently and what he feels like. Some very powerful lines used like -

Abhishek Prem Mehra, the once upon a time rockstar, was now nothing more than a bundle of wreck. He was a broken man, The dark shadow of a man, who once upon a time, everyone wanted a piece of.

He was replaced by a man who no longer lived, he only existed.

Tanu, as usual selfish and only cares about herself. I really can't wait for the next update, in which hopefully we see more of Pragya. A very nice start!

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