An Abhigya story : The Siblings - EPILOGUE PG 89||Banner updated|| - Page 10

Originally posted by: Harini7

Hi lovely update. 😊

Thanks for the double update! Loved it, and Abhi MV is awesome!

Originally posted by: simsim25

Thanks for the double update! Loved it, and Abhi MV is awesome!

Hey you're back * doing happy dance *
Loved the update dear
Dadi and bb likes pragya too, I am waiting for them to meet prags personally
I loved the line 'your honewali babhi' and abhi's reaction to that
Waiting for the next

Originally posted by: vlhs12993

Hey you're back * doing happy dance *
Loved the update dear
Dadi and bb likes pragya too, I am waiting for them to meet prags personally
I loved the line 'your honewali babhi' and abhi's reaction to that
Waiting for the next

Aww happy dance eh so cute thankyou so much 😊 you are always there with some nice comment 😊

Originally posted by: BeingIyeristic

Next part! Next part!

Yesterday I was going through the AT and came across this story... for the second time. The first time I read it, as in the 1st chapter I read, I wasn't too intrigued and wasn't to fond of the idea of the switched siblings. But than, yesterday I saw that you have updated so many parts. And I began reading, simply out of curiosity. and OMG! I love this story. Dude I love their email convos😳 and I find the MV so fiesty. I don't know, there are a lot of small little details that you have wrote in this story that caught my attention. For example, the fact that Abhi wrote people instead of employees caught my attention, the fact that Abhi calls Aliya Gudiya (which, in my opinion, is a little villager style... no offense...) despite living in the UK! Idk, just small small things made this story so special.

Originally posted by: shivanimehta

Yesterday I was going through the AT and came across this story... for the second time. The first time I read it, as in the 1st chapter I read, I wasn't too intrigued and wasn't to fond of the idea of the switched siblings. But than, yesterday I saw that you have updated so many parts. And I began reading, simply out of curiosity. and OMG! I love this story. Dude I love their email convos😳 and I find the MV so fiesty. I don't know, there are a lot of small little details that you have wrote in this story that caught my attention. For example, the fact that Abhi wrote people instead of employees caught my attention, the fact that Abhi calls Aliya Gudiya (which, in my opinion, is a little villager style... no offense...) despite living in the UK! Idk, just small small things made this story so special.

I love the little hints and clues you gave, sort of like foreshadowing their future together! I can't wait till they meet. Really do keep up the good work and I really wish you didn't set up this whole upto pg. 18 thing because I am dying to read what happens next!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Really keep up the great work...👏👏

Oh I don't think I ever commented on your other stories but I love those too 😃

Originally posted by: anilu

OMG !! First of all thanks a lot for such a BIG comment 😃 Thanks for noticing all the minute details too 😊 and I guess you still cant get the thought of Abhi and Bulbul being siblings, so there is a mention of Aliya in place of bb 😆 Just thought it l be different this way thats why didnt include Aliya in this .. and the Gudiya.. just to show how BB will stay more a kid to Abhi than his sis.. 😊 Thanks for the comment .. okay will continue soon 😆 . Checkout this OS , Just uploaded..https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kumkum-bhagya/4380977/abhigya-os-your-wish-is-my-command

Originally posted by: shivanimehta

Hey hahah no problem, you wrote a longer story than my comment so its all good! I just read the OS and it was different, a good different! Just 2 things... since Abhigya are in love, you could have added a bit more romance although I found the whole adventure talking thing in the balcony cute and also... if you think about it, how can they talk so much about the drunk night when they are literally in the air with so much noise?! I know this is nitpicking but overall, was a good story, although I like this one a lot more!

Good observation. I did give a thought to both the aspects that u mentioned.. The Romance part, I wasn't sure what angle to bring in cos I have never tried writing romantic scenes till date,so should improve on that :D and the second one , yes that's why atleast thought of mentioning that they were shouting to keep the conversation going because of the noise.. I somehow got reminded of that bulbul scene when I was about to conclude it with just the part where they are happily floating in the air, so wanted to include it :)