Kumkum Bhagya FF: An Alternative story - CH12 Updated on Page 33 05/08 - Page 22

Thanks 4 the pm Ri!
Such a nice update.. Expressed pragyas inner turmoil to the point.
Now I am waiting for the next update :)

Originally posted by: sudanindia2014

Res
Hiii I get your PM and felt so happy ..it's Ramadan for me these days so it was time for Sohor meal ( Sehri in Hindi I think) and then night prayers so I just RES I thought about waiting till after Iftar to read without the distraction of hunger and thirst but I couldn't so I read it during the day but I felt that I need to re read it with a full stomach again 😆 and here I am read it loved it enjoyed every word in it
it was so long and that make me even happier ..you said it's a filler but I loved it ... I appreciate Drama free events so much they make me feel so serene so I do not mind this sweet type of filling 😊
when they are heading back I was asking my self are they going to just say good nightie and separate just like that and I felt heavy hearted wanted them to spend the night together and you did it .wanted them to share the bed wanted him to console her after the dream wanted the phone call at the end so much .everything you wrote was so good ,,I loved every moment they spent with each other ..the dinner scene was so sweet ,,their noke joke in the car ,,before deciding to share the bed all that was so sweet

The dream scene was amazing the way you described what she was seeing and her panic and how she behaved when he woke her up I imagined how frantically she was pushing his shirt to check his wound that was so emotional and he was so understanding ,,
loved how he felt disgusted about Tanu hugging him and that he do not want to even talk to her

loved Bulbul and Purap ..you know.. a lot of people was so against Bulble meddling in her sister's life but not me I love her planning and how she pulling Purap in 😆
Dadi is Abhi's rock as usual loved her so much
Aliya and Neel these two deserve each other will wait to see what are you going to do with them

I loved this update so much and it absolutely worth the wait ..hope we will have the next update soon

Oh!!! Sooo happy you liked it! And Ramadam karim
To you! I hold great respect for all my Muslim friends who fast in this time. It's very admirable especially if you live in a blazing hot country!

I managed to get this part posted thought I felt the ending was a bit rushed. I'll tell you why... I wish I could just write about Abhigya and create cute scenes but I want this story to be an alternative to the show and that means incorporating different storylines! I am excited about the other parts of the plot ie Aaliyah & Neil! And hopefully in the coming chapters you will see how it comes together. I wanted Bulbul and Purab to compliment Abhi and Pragya without stealing their limelight so you will see they will have a mission of their own! I have started to write the next part but I can't promise when I'll post it ! Hopefully though I won't keep you waiting too long!

Love Rix xx

Originally posted by: Asma-

Welcome back ! It was fabulous

Thank you my dear! I'm soo chuffed you enjoyed it xxx

Originally posted by: hailly

Amazing update do continue soon.
Loved it.

Thank you @hailly I'm honoured and thoroughly chuffed you've enjoyed it :-) I will update as soon as the next part is done. Thank you for taking the time to read an comment it means a lot :-)

Love Rix xxx

Originally posted by: geetgs

Awesomeness... Love your long updates and all the details you put in into your words... was waiting patiently for your updates after coming across your story and started reading them in one go... makes me wish it never ends... keep up the wonderful writings and do update the next part soon

Awww you're soo kind and sweet!! Thankyou thank you! For taking the time to read all of it In one go!!! It's so long lol so I know that was an amazing effort. I'm
Even more happy that you've enjoyed it so much!! Your kind comments and words mean a
Lot so thank you!!! I will post the next part as soon as I can!

Love Rix xxx

Originally posted by: --simmi--

RES! Yay!

UNRES! Wow! Thanks for this long update, I love long updates! Abhigya having dinner was cute and I was so happy the Arora's allowed him to stay there!

Felt so bad for Pragya during and after that dream, I have always wanted CVs to show something like that, you wrote that part so very well Rix! *claps*

Abhi comforting her was so nice, and also a nice way to drop in points about how he used to began and how he did now.

Nice Daadi and Abhi moment there! Really liked it!

I absolutely have fallen in love with this line - So he could get his life back together and bring home the queen of his castle.

I got so carried away with the update I didn't want it to end, please update soon, I can't wait! <3

*hugs to you*

❤️

Hey Simmi!

Thank you soo much for your lovely detailed comment! I really enjoyed writing this part! And I'm
Really glad it has been received so well! I hope you see the story moving forward now and there will be lots of exciting drama! I'm dying to get them
Together now and I have to say I'm
Being really impatient lol. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment - I've seen you have updated yours too! I've not read them
Yet as I want to read them
When I know I have time to
Sit and concentrate and enjoy it!!!! Will update this as soon as I can

Lots of love

Rix xxx

Originally posted by: -Nimmy-

Y.O.U. A.R.E. S.O. A.W.E.S.O.M.E.

RES!

Thank you Nimmy!! Looking forward to your thoughts :-)

Lots of love

Xxx

Originally posted by: NasreenAyesha

out of kkb in these months bcos of fasting.

will comment soon buddy

Hey!!!
Ramadan Karim to you! I hope you're fast goes well and is blessed throughout! I look forward to reading your thoughts and comments!

Lots of love
Xxx

Originally posted by: anamika.vg

Thanks 4 the pm Ri!
Such a nice update.. Expressed pragyas inner turmoil to the point.
Now I am waiting for the next update :)

Hi!

No problem buddy! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment it means a lot! I'll post the next part as soon as I possibly can!

Lots of love

Rix xxx

Wow rix how much time u taken to finish it, it almostly 58,314 words, I took more than 30 min to read it

The sun had begun setting as they were coming back down, washing the ever splendid view in a hue of golden red light., wow indirect romantic candle light dinner, your way of describing it really awesome I really admire by your writing.

(No, if I go in I won't want to leave..) overall update I loved these line.

Really this one line show us how much he changed and started loving her.

Bhai you should stay too)

In these lines really Rabul a good pair of uniting abhigya, and purab so much of understanding I love it.

Overall it was fantastic update for waiting this much.

Love love love u rix

,