Kumkum Bhagya FF: An Alternative story - CH12 Updated on Page 33 05/08

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Posted: 10 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: Asma-
hey first of all thank you so much for your effort this i a long update
and it's fabulous , i loved Abhigya and their day out =)
Abhi really arrogant i like it the rockstar is determined to win Pragya =)
That kiss on Pragya's cheek aww so nice really this must happen in the show ..

Hi!!

Aww thank you so much! I'm really glad you have enjoyed it! I really want to see lots of Abhigya moments now! It's been ages with this track! I basically just write all the scenarios I see in my head :-) the next chapters will be filled with loads more :-) thank you for reading and commenting

Much love xxx

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Posted: 10 years ago

#182

wowww just awesome ❤️ right now i m watching one story in tv and imagining another story here and i'm totally in love with both ❤️ and one extra value to be added here is..i m learning hindi with ur story 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

#183

OMG!!!

This was totally worth the long wait! 👍🏼

Thanks for another AMAZING chapter! LOVE IT!

Can't wait to read more!

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Posted: 10 years ago

#184

Really nice update I like how detailed your story, th colour to the size of the escalators everything it's really good

Abhi trying to protect and be there for Pragya is really good

It's nice how he made sure Pragya knew he was going to pretend to like Tanu

Pragya saying hat did he to do make her family forgive so easy it's cute

I can't wait to read the next update

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Humairaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#185

wow awsm update

loved it

very nicely written

continue soon

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Harshawardhini

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Posted: 10 years ago

#186

Thank you for this wonderful update 😃
Loved it
Waiting for the next

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Posted: 10 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: sdurgasakthi
wowww just awesome ❤️ right now i m watching one story in tv and imagining another story here and i'm totally in love with both ❤️ and one extra value to be added here is..i m learning hindi with ur story 😃

Hey!

Aww I'm soo happy you are enjoying it!! there's a still a bit of a way too go before this is concluded I think but I really appreciate that you've read it and taken the time to leave me a comment :)

Also! You are my second reader who is learning Hindi using this storyline cannot tell you how immensely proud and happy that makes me feel! I always try to post the english translation after the Hindi so that you can have a go at the Hindi first! Good luck with your linguistic journey!!!

Thanks buddy xxx

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Posted: 10 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: MsTiara
OMG!!!
This was totally worth the long wait! 👍🏼

Thanks for another AMAZING chapter! LOVE IT!

Can't wait to read more!

Hey

Thabk you so much!! Well chuffed you're still enjoying this :-) will post as soon as its finished :-)

Lots of love xx

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Posted: 10 years ago

#189

Originally posted by: rbb1
Really nice update I like how detailed your story, th colour to the size of the escalators everything it's really good

Abhi trying to protect and be there for Pragya is really good

It's nice how he made sure Pragya knew he was going to pretend to like Tanu

Pragya saying hat did he to do make her family forgive so easy it's cute

I can't wait to read the next update

Hi ray!!

How's it going?? Thank you so much for your lovely kind comment! It's all about to get interesting here, I always wanted to the CVS to use a story line that had no loop holes and was intelligent (Lolz at least to us anyways) so I want this story to have some of that!! Next part is underway and will be posted as soon as its finished! Thank you for taking the time to read and leave me a comment !

Lots of live xxx