Kumkum Bhagya FF: An Alternative story - CH12 Updated on Page 33 05/08 - Page 18

Hiii you took your time with this update but since I'm sure it will not be a disappoint I didn't mind the wait I was sure that it will be so satisfying length wise and event wise.. and it was

I saw it around 2 am Sudan time and I usually take my time reading I read so slowly and take in every word I some times reread a line or a whole paragraph many times if I couldn't get it or if I liked it so much.. so usually it took me 2 to 3 hours to read your updates ..do you believe that ? when I finished reading it's nearly 5 in the morning so I couldn't write my comment then

I will immediately jump to the escalator scene ..this is like my all time favorite romantic scene...I never get enough of seeing it and I really really wish we will see it in Kumkum Bhagya and I love your version very much ..in all the shows the girl stay passive but not your girl here I love the mutual caring it make it the most romantic version for me

As you Promised 90% of the update is about Abhigaya and I loved it so much ..Pragya's confusion about Abhi and how she feel torn between hoping and not hoping ..Abhi's determination to gain her back and also being torn between showing his feelings and not showing I loved the romantic " Drama " you created between them so interesting to be followed

the way you described the place and the cabin gave me a vivid picture for the scene and for a second I wished if they forget everything and consummate their marriage right there.. I mean the place is so right..the feelings are so beautiful and strong and can get out of control at any minute but I know the time is not right so it was just a wish .. they need to work a lot of things out but I also knew I was going to be sad if they left that place without at least a kiss or a moment of pure love and you gave me both ..loved the hug and the cheek kiss
Telling her that he do not love Tanu and can't stand her is a relief I wish if they did this in the show.

The hand holding in the mall that was so an aww scene for me from the start to the end ..specially their inner thoughts she leaving her hand in his and wondering why he still holding my hand and he keep holding her hand and wondering why she didn't pull her hand away .because you two want to hold hands you idiots 😊

all in all I loved the update so much and I do not mind that you will make your own interpretation from now on ..I would love to see where can you take it from here I'm sure I will like it so I'm in and more than ready to keep reading

PS: the Hindi lines are great ..may be because it become easier for me to understand them and that feels so good
Hope to get the new update soon

Thank You. Thank You for the update. You have no idea how much I waited to read it.
I have only one word to describe it - AMAZING. Take a bow and keep up the good work. Please continue soon. 👏👏👏

Amazing update do continue soon plz.

I was eagerly waiting for an update! Here it is and it is awesome! I loved the beginning scene with Pragya sobbing so much and Abhi comforting her, this line was my favourite "The instant he lost contact with her it was like somebody pulling the blanket away on a cold night."

Originally posted by: simsim25

I was eagerly waiting for an update! Here it is and it is awesome! I loved the beginning scene with Pragya sobbing so much and Abhi comforting her, this line was my favourite "The instant he lost contact with her it was like somebody pulling the blanket away on a cold night."

I love the way you describe every little thought of the characters, you do it beautifully! The end with Pragya advising Abhi to continue his relation with Tanu as an act reminded me of one of my stories Avenging Fate in which she did the same! Awesome story, Keep up the good work! <3

Hi!!

Oh my gosh! It was your story!! You know I remember reading your story ages ago when I first started watching the serial, and I knew for this story I wanted a similar concept of Pragya making Abhi go back to Tanu it was more to give Tanu a taste of her own medicine!! Will you pm me the link
To your story so I can re read it again!!! :-) absolutely loved it the first time. Really happy you enjoyed this update, I feel like the story is hotting up now :-) thank you again for being so
Dedicated and leaving me a lovely comment which I have re read about 100 times :-)

Lots of love xxx

Originally posted by: hailly

Amazing update do continue soon plz.

Thank you my dear!! So happy you are still enjoying it! Will update the next part as soon as I've written it! Lots of love xxx

Originally posted by: adiaru

Thank You. Thank You for the update. You have no idea how much I waited to read it.
I have only one word to describe it - AMAZING. Take a bow and keep up the good work. Please continue soon. 👏👏👏

Thank you! Your words want to make me jump up and down at the office! But I won't as people will think I'm weird! But really happy you are enjoying this :-) I will update as soon as I possibly can xxx

Originally posted by: sudanindia2014

Hiii you took your time with this update but since I'm sure it will not be a disappoint I didn't mind the wait I was sure that it will be so satisfying length wise and event wise.. and it was

I saw it around 2 am Sudan time and I usually take my time reading I read so slowly and take in every word I some times reread a line or a whole paragraph many times if I couldn't get it or if I liked it so much.. so usually it took me 2 to 3 hours to read your updates ..do you believe that ? when I finished reading it's nearly 5 in the morning so I couldn't write my comment then

I will immediately jump to the escalator scene ..this is like my all time favorite romantic scene...I never get enough of seeing it and I really really wish we will see it in Kumkum Bhagya and I love your version very much ..in all the shows the girl stay passive but not your girl here I love the mutual caring it make it the most romantic version for me

As you Promised 90% of the update is about Abhigaya and I loved it so much ..Pragya's confusion about Abhi and how she feel torn between hoping and not hoping ..Abhi's determination to gain her back and also being torn between showing his feelings and not showing I loved the romantic " Drama " you created between them so interesting to be followed

the way you described the place and the cabin gave me a vivid picture for the scene and for a second I wished if they forget everything and consummate their marriage right there.. I mean the place is so right..the feelings are so beautiful and strong and can get out of control at any minute but I know the time is not right so it was just a wish .. they need to work a lot of things out but I also knew I was going to be sad if they left that place without at least a kiss or a moment of pure love and you gave me both ..loved the hug and the cheek kiss
Telling her that he do not love Tanu and can't stand her is a relief I wish if they did this in the show.

The hand holding in the mall that was so an aww scene for me from the start to the end ..specially their inner thoughts she leaving her hand in his and wondering why he still holding my hand and he keep holding her hand and wondering why she didn't pull her hand away .because you two want to hold hands you idiots 😊

all in all I loved the update so much and I do not mind that you will make your own interpretation from now on ..I would love to see where can you take it from here I'm sure I will like it so I'm in and more than ready to keep reading

PS: the Hindi lines are great ..may be because it become easier for me to understand them and that feels so good
Hope to get the new update soon

Hi missy!!!

Always always always look forward to reading your comments :-) you've made my day again!! It makes me so incredibly happy to know that you enjoy my writing as much as you do! So the story is hopefully moving on now, and they are getting to a happy place, but I've got a few more twists and surprised up my sleeve! I always take a bit longer to update now because the hindi is getting harder!?! Arghh !! How are you finding it still?? You know I wanted so
Much for them to consummate at the cabin, but my love you just wait I have an idea for that moment in this story and I know you are going to love it :-) heheee

I think I enjoyed writing the mall scene the most :-) I just wish they would get over this track on the show now and show us some hard core romance! We are all dying for it!!! I promise I will post the next part as soon as it is finished :-)

Thank you again for taking the time to
Leave me such a wonderful
Detailed comment

Lots of love xxx

hey first of all thank you so much for your effort this i a long update
and it's fabulous , i loved Abhigya and their day out =)
Abhi really arrogant i like it the rockstar is determined to win Pragya =)
That kiss on Pragya's cheek aww so nice really this must happen in the show ..

Originally posted by: x-Ri-Ri-x

Hi missy!!!

Always always always look forward to reading your comments :-) you've made my day again!! It makes me so incredibly happy to know that you enjoy my writing as much as you do! So the story is hopefully moving on now, and they are getting to a happy place, but I've got a few more twists and surprised up my sleeve! I always take a bit longer to update now because the hindi is getting harder!?! Arghh !! How are you finding it still?? You know I wanted so
Much for them to consummate at the cabin, but my love you just wait I have an idea for that moment in this story and I know you are going to love it :-) heheee

I think I enjoyed writing the mall scene the most :-) I just wish they would get over this track on the show now and show us some hard core romance! We are all dying for it!!! I promise I will post the next part as soon as it is finished :-)

Thank you again for taking the time to
Leave me such a wonderful
Detailed comment

Lots of love xxx

Hii Thanks for the nice words I really enjoy commenting on the story I love it and commenting is like expressing my love so it's a double joy for me and to read your sweet replies to my comments make me really happy Thank you so much
glad to know that you considered making them consummate in the cabin and changed your mind I think we are in the same wave length when it comes to Romantic thinking that is why I love your writing so much and thank you so much for the tip about their consummation moment I'm 100% sure I will love it so I will wait for it
take your time do not stress your self whenever the update is ready that is the right time and we will be happy to have it
Lots of love from me too ..